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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
a Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 1 Date: 01 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
In this manuscript entitled “Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver
Cirrhosis: Results from a Retrospective Cohort Study”, the authors examined the association
between levocarnitine supplementation and muscle cramps in patients with cirrhosis. While this
is an interesting study, there are some concerns which should be clarified.
Major comments
1. Malnutrition is important in the pathogenesis of muscle cramps in patients with liver cirrhosis
(PMID: 35861232). The authors should make an introduction regarding this point.
2. In the result section, the authors should demonstrate the baseline characteristics of the included
patients such as Child-Pugh score, MELD score, other medications, and laboratory data.
3. The molecular mechanism of levocarnitine on muscle cramps needs to be explained in the
discussion session (PMID: 31864971).
4. Levocarnitine also improves mortality in patients with cirrhosis. The authors should add a
discussion in this point (PMID: 35511698).
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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
a Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 1 Date: 01 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
In this manuscript entitled “Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver
Cirrhosis: Results from a Retrospective Cohort Study”, the authors examined the association
between levocarnitine supplementation and muscle cramps in patients with cirrhosis. While this
is an interesting study, there are some concerns which should be clarified.
Major comments
1. Malnutrition is important in the pathogenesis of muscle cramps in patients with liver cirrhosis
(PMID: 35861232). The authors should make an introduction regarding this point.
2. In the result section, the authors should demonstrate the baseline characteristics of the included
patients such as Child-Pugh score, MELD score, other medications, and laboratory data.
3. The molecular mechanism of levocarnitine on muscle cramps needs to be explained in the
discussion session (PMID: 31864971).
4. Levocarnitine also improves mortality in patients with cirrhosis. The authors should add a
discussion in this point (PMID: 35511698).
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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
a Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 1 Date: 07 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I would like to thank the journal for considering me as a reviewer for this manuscript. After a
thorough review, I have identified several areas where the manuscript could be improved.
Abstract
The abstract does not sufficiently detail the study's quantitative findings, particularly in the
conclusion. Including specific data points, such as the percentage reduction in cramp severity
or duration, would make the findings more impactful and informative for potential readers.
Study Design and Cohort Description
While the retrospective cohort design is acknowledged as a limitation in the discussion, it
should be justified earlier in the methodology section. The rationale for choosing a retrospective
approach over a randomized or prospective design is unclear and could raise questions about
the robustness of the findings. Additionally, the manuscript does not address the potential for
selection bias due to the retrospective nature of the study. For instance, it is not clear if patients
with incomplete records were systematically different from those included in the analysis.
Novelty and Clinical Implications
The manuscript mentions the need for further research but does not adequately position this
study in the context of existing literature. While prior studies on L-carnitine are referenced, the
specific novelty or unique contributions of these findings are not well-highlighted. For example,
the manuscript could discuss in more depth how demographic or response trends in this cohort
contribute to the existing body of knowledge. Additionally, the practical application of the
findings, such as their potential influence on treatment guidelines or clinical practice, is not
sufficiently explored.
Statistical Reporting
Although the statistical analysis is generally robust, key findings would benefit from the
inclusion of confidence intervals alongside p-values to provide a fuller context for the results.
The study also lacks a discussion on its statistical power, which is particularly important given
the relatively small final sample size.
Tables and Figures
The tables, while informative, could be improved for readability and presentation. For example,
tables summarizing cramp indices before and after treatment could combine summary statistics
with graphical elements, such as bar or line charts, to visually demonstrate the changes. Including
a flowchart to clarify the patient selection process would also enhance transparency in the
methodology.
Results Presentation
The results section is clear but could better integrate findings across tables to provide a cohesive
narrative. For instance, the significant correlations between BMI and cramp indices could be
discussed more comprehensively, linking them directly to potential clinical implications.
Language and Clarity
The manuscript is generally well-written but could benefit from simplification of overly complex
sentences, particularly in the discussion of BMI and treatment response. Some technical terms,
such as "relative change in cramp indices," should be explicitly defined to improve accessibility
for readers.
Limitations
The limitations section is too brief and could benefit from further critical reflection. The absence
of a control group is a major limitation that requires a more thorough discussion, particularly
regarding its potential impact on the observed results. Additionally, confounding factors such as
diet, physical activity, or concurrent medications are not addressed and should be considered.
Ethical and Practical Considerations
Although ethical approval and informed consent are mentioned, the manuscript does not
elaborate on how retrospective data collection adhered to ethical guidelines. Clarifying how
patient confidentiality and data security were maintained would strengthen the study's ethical
rigor.
Future Research Directions
The manuscript concludes by mentioning the need for further studies but does not provide
specific recommendations. Suggestions could include conducting randomized controlled trials,
exploring higher doses of L-carnitine, or investigating subgroups with specific characteristics,
such as high BMI or severe cirrhosis, who might benefit differently from supplementation.
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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
a Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 1 Date: 07 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I would like to thank the journal for considering me as a reviewer for this manuscript. After a
thorough review, I have identified several areas where the manuscript could be improved.
Abstract
The abstract does not sufficiently detail the study's quantitative findings, particularly in the
conclusion. Including specific data points, such as the percentage reduction in cramp severity
or duration, would make the findings more impactful and informative for potential readers.
Study Design and Cohort Description
While the retrospective cohort design is acknowledged as a limitation in the discussion, it
should be justified earlier in the methodology section. The rationale for choosing a retrospective
approach over a randomized or prospective design is unclear and could raise questions about
the robustness of the findings. Additionally, the manuscript does not address the potential for
selection bias due to the retrospective nature of the study. For instance, it is not clear if patients
with incomplete records were systematically different from those included in the analysis.
Novelty and Clinical Implications
The manuscript mentions the need for further research but does not adequately position this
study in the context of existing literature. While prior studies on L-carnitine are referenced, the
specific novelty or unique contributions of these findings are not well-highlighted. For example,
the manuscript could discuss in more depth how demographic or response trends in this cohort
contribute to the existing body of knowledge. Additionally, the practical application of the
findings, such as their potential influence on treatment guidelines or clinical practice, is not
sufficiently explored.
Statistical Reporting
Although the statistical analysis is generally robust, key findings would benefit from the
inclusion of confidence intervals alongside p-values to provide a fuller context for the results.
The study also lacks a discussion on its statistical power, which is particularly important given
the relatively small final sample size.
Tables and Figures
The tables, while informative, could be improved for readability and presentation. For example,
tables summarizing cramp indices before and after treatment could combine summary statistics
with graphical elements, such as bar or line charts, to visually demonstrate the changes. Including
a flowchart to clarify the patient selection process would also enhance transparency in the
methodology.
Results Presentation
The results section is clear but could better integrate findings across tables to provide a cohesive
narrative. For instance, the significant correlations between BMI and cramp indices could be
discussed more comprehensively, linking them directly to potential clinical implications.
Language and Clarity
The manuscript is generally well-written but could benefit from simplification of overly complex
sentences, particularly in the discussion of BMI and treatment response. Some technical terms,
such as "relative change in cramp indices," should be explicitly defined to improve accessibility
for readers.
Limitations
The limitations section is too brief and could benefit from further critical reflection. The absence
of a control group is a major limitation that requires a more thorough discussion, particularly
regarding its potential impact on the observed results. Additionally, confounding factors such as
diet, physical activity, or concurrent medications are not addressed and should be considered.
Ethical and Practical Considerations
Although ethical approval and informed consent are mentioned, the manuscript does not
elaborate on how retrospective data collection adhered to ethical guidelines. Clarifying how
patient confidentiality and data security were maintained would strengthen the study's ethical
rigor.
Future Research Directions
The manuscript concludes by mentioning the need for further studies but does not provide
specific recommendations. Suggestions could include conducting randomized controlled trials,
exploring higher doses of L-carnitine, or investigating subgroups with specific characteristics,
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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
a Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 1 Date: 08 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Line 98: Exclusion criteria were other secondary caused of cramps. By authors own submission
causes of cramps in cirrhosis can be AKI, dehydration, dyselectrolytemia. There is no mention
of these confounding factors in the manuscript. Authors should have mentioned in the methods
and methodology the prevalence of such predisposing factors in the study population. Ideally
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A multivariate analysis to take care of confounding factors would have given a more accurate
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the factors as to why these patients had cramps while the remaining 71% screened patients did
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Table 3: Does not explain clearly the correlation of BMI and severity of cramps. It is not clear
from the table if high BMI is protective, or low BMI is protective against cramps
Line 182, 183: There is mention of complete resolution of cramps in certain percentage of
patients. However, there is no table in the manuscript to substantiate this conclusion.
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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
a Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 1 Date: 08 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Line 98: Exclusion criteria were other secondary caused of cramps. By authors own submission
causes of cramps in cirrhosis can be AKI, dehydration, dyselectrolytemia. There is no mention
of these confounding factors in the manuscript. Authors should have mentioned in the methods
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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
a Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 2 Date: 29 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors have appropriately revised the paper. I have no further comments.
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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
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Version: 2 Date: 29 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors have appropriately revised the paper. I have no further comments.
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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
a Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 2 Date: 11 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for your response to the comments.
Absence of baseline data like 1.disease severity (CTP/ MELD scores) 2. Nutritional status 3.
severity of sarcopenia makes it difficult to conclude if these are potential confounding factors
for response to L carnitine supplementation.
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Title: Effect of L-carnitine Supplementation on Muscle Cramps in Liver Cirrhosis: Results from
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Version: 2 Date: 11 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for your response to the comments.
Absence of baseline data like 1.disease severity (CTP/ MELD scores) 2. Nutritional status 3.
severity of sarcopenia makes it difficult to conclude if these are potential confounding factors
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Title: Association between single nucleotide polymorphisms in PNPLA3, TM6SF2 and
MBOAT7 genes and markers of cancer aggressiveness in a Sri Lankan NASH-related HCC
cohort
Version: 2 Date: 25 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Hawal Lateef Fateh
Reviewer's report:
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Title: Association between single nucleotide polymorphisms in PNPLA3, TM6SF2 and
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Version: 2 Date: 25 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Hawal Lateef Fateh
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Title: Association between single nucleotide polymorphisms in PNPLA3, TM6SF2 and
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Version: 2 Date: 12 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Zhaohui Tang
Reviewer's report:
This paper explores the genetic predisposition of NASH-related HCC in Sri Lanka, focusing
on five known variants in PNPLA3, TM6SF2, and MBOAT7 genes. The study analyzes
tumor characteristics (tumor nodularity, size, AFP levels) and potential biomarkers (leukocyte
telomere length, miR-122 expression) in 48 NASH-HCC patients. Notably, particular PNPLA3
variants (rs2281135, rs2294918) are shown to correlate with tumor nodularity, higher miR-122
expression, and distinct demographic/anthropometric features (e.g., age, BMI). Overall, the
work highlights the importance of specific genetic variants in tumor aggressiveness, contributing
to ongoing discussions on precision screening for HCC in NASH patients.
However#there are still some issues to be addressed before it’s suitable for publication:
1.Could you provide additional details on the power calculation used to determine that 48
patients would be sufficient to detect significant genetic associations?
2.Could you elaborate on whether these strong associations (especially PNPLA3 rs2281135)
persist in other ethnic groups or in a larger, more diverse study cohort?
3.Although the work is significant for Sri Lankan populations, additional insight or discussion
on how these findings might translate to broader or multi-ethnic contexts could strengthen the
paper’s global relevance.
4.Besides age and BMI, are there plans to investigate the impact of other lifestyle and metabolic
risk factors on the identified SNPs and their association with NASH-HCC?
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Title: Association between single nucleotide polymorphisms in PNPLA3, TM6SF2 and
MBOAT7 genes and markers of cancer aggressiveness in a Sri Lankan NASH-related HCC
cohort
Version: 2 Date: 12 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Zhaohui Tang
Reviewer's report:
This paper explores the genetic predisposition of NASH-related HCC in Sri Lanka, focusing
on five known variants in PNPLA3, TM6SF2, and MBOAT7 genes. The study analyzes
tumor characteristics (tumor nodularity, size, AFP levels) and potential biomarkers (leukocyte
telomere length, miR-122 expression) in 48 NASH-HCC patients. Notably, particular PNPLA3
variants (rs2281135, rs2294918) are shown to correlate with tumor nodularity, higher miR-122
expression, and distinct demographic/anthropometric features (e.g., age, BMI). Overall, the
work highlights the importance of specific genetic variants in tumor aggressiveness, contributing
to ongoing discussions on precision screening for HCC in NASH patients.
However#there are still some issues to be addressed before it’s suitable for publication:
1.Could you provide additional details on the power calculation used to determine that 48
patients would be sufficient to detect significant genetic associations?
2.Could you elaborate on whether these strong associations (especially PNPLA3 rs2281135)
persist in other ethnic groups or in a larger, more diverse study cohort?
3.Although the work is significant for Sri Lankan populations, additional insight or discussion
on how these findings might translate to broader or multi-ethnic contexts could strengthen the
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4.Besides age and BMI, are there plans to investigate the impact of other lifestyle and metabolic
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Title: Association between single nucleotide polymorphisms in PNPLA3, TM6SF2 and
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cohort
Version: 3 Date: 28 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Hawal Lateef Fateh
Reviewer's report:
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Version: 3 Date: 28 Jan 2025
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Title: Association between single nucleotide polymorphisms in PNPLA3, TM6SF2 and
MBOAT7 genes and markers of cancer aggressiveness in a Sri Lankan NASH-related HCC
cohort
Version: 3 Date: 04 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Zhaohui Tang
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the author's patient and meticulous answers. However, I still have some doubts
that need to be clarified:
1. How was the study powered to detect associations for “TM6SF2” and “MBOAT7” SNPs,
given their lack of significance?
2. Were multiple testing corrections applied? If not, how might uncorrected p-values impact the
interpretation of “PNPLA3” associations?
3. Can the authors elaborate on the biological mechanisms linking “PNPLA3” rs2281135 to
miR-122 elevation and tumor nodularity?
4. Why were cirrhotic and non-cirrhotic HCC patients not stratified in analyses, given prior
evidence of SNP associations with cirrhosis?
5. Could the observed age/BMI associations with “PNPLA3” rs2281135 reflect survivorship
bias or confounding factors (e.g., comorbidities)?
6. Overrepresentation of Sinhalese individuals (47/48) limits generalizability to other ethnic
groups in Sri Lanka or globally.
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Title: Association between single nucleotide polymorphisms in PNPLA3, TM6SF2 and
MBOAT7 genes and markers of cancer aggressiveness in a Sri Lankan NASH-related HCC
cohort
Version: 3 Date: 04 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Zhaohui Tang
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the author's patient and meticulous answers. However, I still have some doubts
that need to be clarified:
1. How was the study powered to detect associations for “TM6SF2” and “MBOAT7” SNPs,
given their lack of significance?
2. Were multiple testing corrections applied? If not, how might uncorrected p-values impact the
interpretation of “PNPLA3” associations?
3. Can the authors elaborate on the biological mechanisms linking “PNPLA3” rs2281135 to
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evidence of SNP associations with cirrhosis?
5. Could the observed age/BMI associations with “PNPLA3” rs2281135 reflect survivorship
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Title: Quality of life, functional impairment and healthcare experiences of patients with irritable
bowel syndrome in Norway: An online survey
Version: 4 Date: 20 Aug 2024
Reviewer: Ewa Ma#ecka-Panas
Reviewer's report:
This is the very comprehensive report with the rarely large number of patients evaluated.The
study aim was to determine the impact of IBS on the quality of life, functional impairment and
healthcare experiences of patients in Norway.The problem is widely known, but surprisingly
not that widely addressed.Some parts of the data provided are widely known, as low HRDL,
delay in medical help seeking, however economic burden of IBS was more rarely studied.My
main problem here is the IBS diagnosic criteria and the medical data of the studied group. The
statement that the patients were diagned by medical doctor in not informative enough.It should
be specified, if this were general practicioners or gastroenterologists or other specialist.Did they
use Rome IV IBS diagnosis criteria or other diagnostics? Were there associated diseases, which
could alter the results? The Rome IV criteria are mentioned in the discussion, but this is not clear
that that was the main diagnostic criteria, which should be stated in the material section.The
statement that IBS patients are not satisfied with the medical treatment is very familiar to all
gastroenterologists, since it takes time to gain the indispensable patients confidence on one
hand , but on the other hand the MD's time is scarce everywhere.Therefore, the authors should
underline, which obtained data represent the true novelty
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Title: Quality of life, functional impairment and healthcare experiences of patients with irritable
bowel syndrome in Norway: An online survey
Version: 4 Date: 20 Aug 2024
Reviewer: Ewa Ma#ecka-Panas
Reviewer's report:
This is the very comprehensive report with the rarely large number of patients evaluated.The
study aim was to determine the impact of IBS on the quality of life, functional impairment and
healthcare experiences of patients in Norway.The problem is widely known, but surprisingly
not that widely addressed.Some parts of the data provided are widely known, as low HRDL,
delay in medical help seeking, however economic burden of IBS was more rarely studied.My
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statement that the patients were diagned by medical doctor in not informative enough.It should
be specified, if this were general practicioners or gastroenterologists or other specialist.Did they
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hand , but on the other hand the MD's time is scarce everywhere.Therefore, the authors should
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Title: Quality of life, functional impairment and healthcare experiences of patients with irritable
bowel syndrome in Norway: An online survey
Version: 4 Date: 31 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for this survey, which adds to our knowledge of IBS in Norway with real-life data.
I have just a few comments:
1- I'm not convinced by the relevance of the responses from people under the age of 18, i.e.
25 persons (according to question 2) and 38 persons according to the ‘school pupil’ category
(question 4). We are not sure that they are capable of understanding and answering the questions.
If it wasn't the parents who answered for them, I suggest that these questionnaires should not
be included in the analysis.
2- You rightly excluded 327 questionnaires from the analysis because the diagnosis had not been
made by a doctor. I am surprised to find results for n= 2727 (in figure 5 ). These questionnaires
should be excluded from the analysis.
I would go further and also exclude the 158 questionnaires where people answered question
7: "Yes, it was diagnosed by another doctor (not a GP or gastrointestinal specialist)". In my
opinion, only a GP or gastroenterologist can correctly diagnose IBS.
It would also have been better to cross this with the response ‘I haven't been diagnosed by a
doctor 249’ in question 10.
3- There seems to be a percentage error in figure 4a. In fact, there are 158 people who were not
seen either by a GP or by the gastroenterologist according to question 7.
4- In Table 1, you were able to classify people according to their type of IBS, i.e. IBS-C, IBS-
D or IBS-M. Did you get this information directly from the people or did you deduce it? In my
opinion, question 8 doesn't allow you to classify patients with any certainty because it doesn't
meet the definition. For example, an IBS patient with constipation predominance must have hard
stools > 25% of the time and soft stools < 25% of the time.
To be correct, these should be indicated in the same way as the other symptoms (as for headache
and fatigue) in the table.
5- We do not understand how the ‘unemployed’ category is calculated.
Table 1 shows 1035 (38%) “unemployed”. In the discussion section, it says: ‘The present survey
revealed that the unemployment rate among IBS patients was 29%, which is therefore more than
8-fold that of the general population.’
I think there may be some confusion about the term “unemployed”. At times in your article it
refers to all the categories in question 4 without the ‘employed’ category, and at other times it
refers to ‘people of working age who are looking for work’.
Please clarify these points.
6- It would have been interesting to have information on income brackets or socio-professional
categories.
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Title: Quality of life, functional impairment and healthcare experiences of patients with irritable
bowel syndrome in Norway: An online survey
Version: 4 Date: 31 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for this survey, which adds to our knowledge of IBS in Norway with real-life data.
I have just a few comments:
1- I'm not convinced by the relevance of the responses from people under the age of 18, i.e.
25 persons (according to question 2) and 38 persons according to the ‘school pupil’ category
(question 4). We are not sure that they are capable of understanding and answering the questions.
If it wasn't the parents who answered for them, I suggest that these questionnaires should not
be included in the analysis.
2- You rightly excluded 327 questionnaires from the analysis because the diagnosis had not been
made by a doctor. I am surprised to find results for n= 2727 (in figure 5 ). These questionnaires
should be excluded from the analysis.
I would go further and also exclude the 158 questionnaires where people answered question
7: "Yes, it was diagnosed by another doctor (not a GP or gastrointestinal specialist)". In my
opinion, only a GP or gastroenterologist can correctly diagnose IBS.
It would also have been better to cross this with the response ‘I haven't been diagnosed by a
doctor 249’ in question 10.
3- There seems to be a percentage error in figure 4a. In fact, there are 158 people who were not
seen either by a GP or by the gastroenterologist according to question 7.
4- In Table 1, you were able to classify people according to their type of IBS, i.e. IBS-C, IBS-
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To be correct, these should be indicated in the same way as the other symptoms (as for headache
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5- We do not understand how the ‘unemployed’ category is calculated.
Table 1 shows 1035 (38%) “unemployed”. In the discussion section, it says: ‘The present survey
revealed that the unemployment rate among IBS patients was 29%, which is therefore more than
8-fold that of the general population.’
I think there may be some confusion about the term “unemployed”. At times in your article it
refers to all the categories in question 4 without the ‘employed’ category, and at other times it
refers to ‘people of working age who are looking for work’.
Please clarify these points.
6- It would have been interesting to have information on income brackets or socio-professional
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Title: Quality of life, functional impairment and healthcare experiences of patients with irritable
bowel syndrome in Norway: An online survey
Version: 5 Date: 03 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
Reviewer 2
Thank you for your comments, which we believe has improved the manuscript considerably.
1-I'm not convinced by the relevance of the responses from people under the age of 18, i.e.
25 persons (according to question 2) and 38 persons according to the ‘school pupil’ category
(question 4). We are not sure that they are capable of understanding and answering the questions.
If it wasn't the parents who answered for them, I suggest that these questionnaires should not
be included in the analysis.
Response: We agree completely with the reviewer. People under 18 years of age were among
the 327 persons answered the survey were excluded. This was clarified in page 4, line and table
1 (marked yellow).
Reviewer’s response : Ok
2-You rightly excluded 327 questionnaires from the analysis because the diagnosis had not
been made by a doctor. I am surprised to find results for n= 2727 (in figure 5 ). These
questionnaires should be excluded from the analysis. I would go further and also exclude the
158 questionnaires where people answered question 7: "Yes, it was diagnosed by another doctor
(not a GP or gastrointestinal specialist)". In my opinion, only a GP or gastroenterologist can
correctly diagnose IBS. It would also have been better to cross this with the response ‘I haven't
been diagnosed by a doctor 249’ in question 10.
Response: This was corrected in the figures.
Reviewer’s response : Ok
3-There seems to be a percentage error in figure 4a. In fact, there are 158 people who were not
seen either by a GP or by the gastroenterologist according to question 7.
Response: The was corrected in the figures.
Reviewer’s response : Figure 3a remains unchanged.
Either the 3rd category is taken into account, i.e. n=2400 (i.e. 805 +1473+158), in which case
the percentages must be modified and the 3rd category included in the graph.
Or you do not want to take into account the 3rd category n=158, then the total number of
employees is equal to 2242.
Please make one of the 2 choices.
4- In Table 1, you were able to classify people according to their type of IBS, i.e. IBS-C, IBS
D or IBS-M. Did you get this information directly from the people or did you deduce it? In my
opinion, question 8 doesn't allow you to classify patients with any certainty because it doesn't
meet the definition. For example, an IBS patient with constipation predominance must have
hard stools > 25% of the time and soft stools < 25% of the time. To be correct, these should be
indicated in the same way as the other symptoms (as for headache and fatigue) in the table.
Response: We agree with the reviewer. This was corrected in Table 1 (marked yellow)
Reviewer’s response : Forgive me, but it seems to me that the data on the table has not been
changed. You can still read:
Table 1. Demographic and clinical characteristics of the irritable bowel syndrome (IBS) patients
who participated in the survey.
.....
IBS-D 1024 (37%)
IBS-C 728 (27%)
IBS-M 975 (36%)
.......
Data are n, n (%), or median [range] values.
IBS-D, diarrhoea-predominant IBS; IBS-C, constipation-predominant IBS;
IBS-M, mixed-diarrhoea-and-constipation IBS
5-We do not understand how the ‘unemployed’ category is calculated. Table 1 shows 1035
(38%) “unemployed”. In the discussion section, it says: ‘The present survey revealed that the
unemployment rate among IBS patients was 29%, which is therefore more than 8-fold that of
the general population.’ I think there may be some confusion about the term “unemployed”. At
times in your article it refers to all the categories in question 4 without the ‘employed’ category,
and at other times it refers to ‘people of working age who are looking for work’. Please clarify
these points.
Response: You are quite right. We clarified this in page 7, lines 6-8 (marked yellow).
Reviewer’s response: Forgive me, but the only element in yellow on page 7 is the following
sentence: “It noteworthy that it takes time to gain the indispensable patients confidence where
MD's time for each patient is limited.” I don't see your clarification.
6- It would have been interesting to have information on income brackets or socio professional
categories.
Response: We agree with the reviewer, but we do not have this information
Reviewer’s response: Ok
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Title: Quality of life, functional impairment and healthcare experiences of patients with irritable
bowel syndrome in Norway: An online survey
Version: 5 Date: 03 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
Reviewer 2
Thank you for your comments, which we believe has improved the manuscript considerably.
1-I'm not convinced by the relevance of the responses from people under the age of 18, i.e.
25 persons (according to question 2) and 38 persons according to the ‘school pupil’ category
(question 4). We are not sure that they are capable of understanding and answering the questions.
If it wasn't the parents who answered for them, I suggest that these questionnaires should not
be included in the analysis.
Response: We agree completely with the reviewer. People under 18 years of age were among
the 327 persons answered the survey were excluded. This was clarified in page 4, line and table
1 (marked yellow).
Reviewer’s response : Ok
2-You rightly excluded 327 questionnaires from the analysis because the diagnosis had not
been made by a doctor. I am surprised to find results for n= 2727 (in figure 5 ). These
questionnaires should be excluded from the analysis. I would go further and also exclude the
158 questionnaires where people answered question 7: "Yes, it was diagnosed by another doctor
(not a GP or gastrointestinal specialist)". In my opinion, only a GP or gastroenterologist can
correctly diagnose IBS. It would also have been better to cross this with the response ‘I haven't
been diagnosed by a doctor 249’ in question 10.
Response: This was corrected in the figures.
Reviewer’s response : Ok
3-There seems to be a percentage error in figure 4a. In fact, there are 158 people who were not
seen either by a GP or by the gastroenterologist according to question 7.
Response: The was corrected in the figures.
Reviewer’s response : Figure 3a remains unchanged.
Either the 3rd category is taken into account, i.e. n=2400 (i.e. 805 +1473+158), in which case
the percentages must be modified and the 3rd category included in the graph.
Or you do not want to take into account the 3rd category n=158, then the total number of
employees is equal to 2242.
Please make one of the 2 choices.
4- In Table 1, you were able to classify people according to their type of IBS, i.e. IBS-C, IBS
D or IBS-M. Did you get this information directly from the people or did you deduce it? In my
opinion, question 8 doesn't allow you to classify patients with any certainty because it doesn't
meet the definition. For example, an IBS patient with constipation predominance must have
hard stools > 25% of the time and soft stools < 25% of the time. To be correct, these should be
indicated in the same way as the other symptoms (as for headache and fatigue) in the table.
Response: We agree with the reviewer. This was corrected in Table 1 (marked yellow)
Reviewer’s response : Forgive me, but it seems to me that the data on the table has not been
changed. You can still read:
Table 1. Demographic and clinical characteristics of the irritable bowel syndrome (IBS) patients
who participated in the survey.
.....
IBS-D 1024 (37%)
IBS-C 728 (27%)
IBS-M 975 (36%)
.......
Data are n, n (%), or median [range] values.
IBS-D, diarrhoea-predominant IBS; IBS-C, constipation-predominant IBS;
IBS-M, mixed-diarrhoea-and-constipation IBS
5-We do not understand how the ‘unemployed’ category is calculated. Table 1 shows 1035
(38%) “unemployed”. In the discussion section, it says: ‘The present survey revealed that the
unemployment rate among IBS patients was 29%, which is therefore more than 8-fold that of
the general population.’ I think there may be some confusion about the term “unemployed”. At
times in your article it refers to all the categories in question 4 without the ‘employed’ category,
and at other times it refers to ‘people of working age who are looking for work’. Please clarify
these points.
Response: You are quite right. We clarified this in page 7, lines 6-8 (marked yellow).
Reviewer’s response: Forgive me, but the only element in yellow on page 7 is the following
sentence: “It noteworthy that it takes time to gain the indispensable patients confidence where
MD's time for each patient is limited.” I don't see your clarification.
6- It would have been interesting to have information on income brackets or socio professional
categories.
Response: We agree with the reviewer, but we do not have this information
Reviewer’s response: Ok
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Version: 7 Date: 12 Feb 2025
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I have no more new comments. The authors took into account all the previous comments. I
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Version: 1 Date: 25 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
It is a worthwhile job#however there are some issues that need to be addressed.
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
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Version: 1 Date: 25 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
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Version: 1 Date: 26 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors collected baseline information and clinical data for 291 patients with cirrhosis,
aimed to identify risk factors for upper gastrointestinal bleeding (UGIB), and developed a
predictive model. However, the study's description is unclear, making it difficult to understand
the entire research process. One key question is whether the patients had UGIB at baseline. If
UGIB was present, the study appears to compare baseline differences between UGIB and non-
UGIB patients to develop a nomogram (as inferred from the authors’ results). However, the
mention of follow-up is confusing. Were all patients free of UGIB at baseline, and did the authors
follow them for six months to observe UGIB occurrence before developing the nomogram? If
so, why was Cox regression not used?
The following suggestions may improve the completeness of the manuscript:
1.The variable selection method based on simple logistic regression, which could lead to
significant multicollinearity among included variables. The authors should conduct collinearity
analysis or generate a correlation heatmap.
2.“Studies have shown that certain laboratory markers, such as total bilirubin (TBIL), serum
creatinine (Scr), and total cholesterol (TC), along with clinical assessments like liver stiffness
(LS), spleen stiffness (SS), and the presence of abdominal fluid, are associated with the
occurrence of UGIB in cirrhotic patients. Although some clinical studies support these findings,
their sample sizes are small, and the critical values vary.” This section lacks references.
3.Please confirm whether this is a prospective or retrospective study. If prospective,why data
collection performed using electronic health records? But, the abstract describes the study as
“retrospectively enrolled.”
4..A detailed description of the patient enrollment process is needed. For retrospective studies,
the diagnostic codes(ICD-codes#used to identify patients should be included.
5.The sentence “Patients in the cirrhosis group must meet the diagnostic criteria for upper
gastrointestinal bleeding” appears to contain an error. Were all cirrhotic patients required to
meet UGIB diagnostic criteria? Please clarify.
6.The phrase “patients can cooperate with long-term follow-up” is unclear. Was a follow-up
period defined? Does whether patients completed follow-up affect the results?
7.How were patients with a history of UGIB managed? Such patients have a significantly higher
risk of UGIB recurrence, which may impact results.
8.The term “cirrhotic UGIB group” is uncommon. Did this refer to esophagogastric variceal
hemorrhage (EGVH)? If a cirrhotic patient has UGIB caused by peptic ulcer bleeding, does this
also qualify as “cirrhotic UGIB”? Please clarify.
9.Were patients receiving antiviral therapy or nonselective beta-blockers (NSBBs) included?
These treatments significantly influence UGIB risk.
10.How was missing data handled? Were patients with missing data excluded?
11.The variable selection process (univariate followed by multivariate analysis) is overly
simplistic. At least stepwise regression should be used.
12.Figure 1 duplicates the information already presented in Table 1. It would be more appropriate
to replace Figure 1 with a flowchart illustrating the patient inclusion process.
13.The reported UGIB rate of 48.1% (140/291) is unusually high and inconsistent with
epidemiological data. Please confirm whether all eligible cases from the study period were
included.
14.Age and sex were not included in univariate or multivariate analyses, but previous studies
suggest that age is a risk factor for UGIB and should be analyzed.
15.The discussion mentions several models (e.g., Child-Pugh score, MELD, ALBI, Yang LB
et al.). Why were ROC and DCA comparisons not performed between the proposed model and
these established models?
16.The predictive model was not validated. Cross-validation or bootstrap validation is essential,
especially given the limited sample size.
17.The manuscript states that the follow-up period was six months. Were only patients without
UGIB at baseline followed to observe UGIB occurrence? Clarification is required.
18.Reporting guidelines (e.g., TRIPOD) should be included.
19.The authors are advised to avoid using the term “early” in the title, as clinical guidelines
provide a specific definition for “early”EGVH in cirrhotic patients. This study is a case-control
design comparing UGIB and non-UGIB groups and does not define “early.”
20.Professional English editing is recommended, as the manuscript contains multiple
grammatical and stylistic errors.
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 1 Date: 26 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors collected baseline information and clinical data for 291 patients with cirrhosis,
aimed to identify risk factors for upper gastrointestinal bleeding (UGIB), and developed a
predictive model. However, the study's description is unclear, making it difficult to understand
the entire research process. One key question is whether the patients had UGIB at baseline. If
UGIB was present, the study appears to compare baseline differences between UGIB and non-
UGIB patients to develop a nomogram (as inferred from the authors’ results). However, the
mention of follow-up is confusing. Were all patients free of UGIB at baseline, and did the authors
follow them for six months to observe UGIB occurrence before developing the nomogram? If
so, why was Cox regression not used?
The following suggestions may improve the completeness of the manuscript:
1.The variable selection method based on simple logistic regression, which could lead to
significant multicollinearity among included variables. The authors should conduct collinearity
analysis or generate a correlation heatmap.
2.“Studies have shown that certain laboratory markers, such as total bilirubin (TBIL), serum
creatinine (Scr), and total cholesterol (TC), along with clinical assessments like liver stiffness
(LS), spleen stiffness (SS), and the presence of abdominal fluid, are associated with the
occurrence of UGIB in cirrhotic patients. Although some clinical studies support these findings,
their sample sizes are small, and the critical values vary.” This section lacks references.
3.Please confirm whether this is a prospective or retrospective study. If prospective,why data
collection performed using electronic health records? But, the abstract describes the study as
“retrospectively enrolled.”
4..A detailed description of the patient enrollment process is needed. For retrospective studies,
the diagnostic codes(ICD-codes#used to identify patients should be included.
5.The sentence “Patients in the cirrhosis group must meet the diagnostic criteria for upper
gastrointestinal bleeding” appears to contain an error. Were all cirrhotic patients required to
meet UGIB diagnostic criteria? Please clarify.
6.The phrase “patients can cooperate with long-term follow-up” is unclear. Was a follow-up
period defined? Does whether patients completed follow-up affect the results?
7.How were patients with a history of UGIB managed? Such patients have a significantly higher
risk of UGIB recurrence, which may impact results.
8.The term “cirrhotic UGIB group” is uncommon. Did this refer to esophagogastric variceal
hemorrhage (EGVH)? If a cirrhotic patient has UGIB caused by peptic ulcer bleeding, does this
also qualify as “cirrhotic UGIB”? Please clarify.
9.Were patients receiving antiviral therapy or nonselective beta-blockers (NSBBs) included?
These treatments significantly influence UGIB risk.
10.How was missing data handled? Were patients with missing data excluded?
11.The variable selection process (univariate followed by multivariate analysis) is overly
simplistic. At least stepwise regression should be used.
12.Figure 1 duplicates the information already presented in Table 1. It would be more appropriate
to replace Figure 1 with a flowchart illustrating the patient inclusion process.
13.The reported UGIB rate of 48.1% (140/291) is unusually high and inconsistent with
epidemiological data. Please confirm whether all eligible cases from the study period were
included.
14.Age and sex were not included in univariate or multivariate analyses, but previous studies
suggest that age is a risk factor for UGIB and should be analyzed.
15.The discussion mentions several models (e.g., Child-Pugh score, MELD, ALBI, Yang LB
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16.The predictive model was not validated. Cross-validation or bootstrap validation is essential,
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17.The manuscript states that the follow-up period was six months. Were only patients without
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18.Reporting guidelines (e.g., TRIPOD) should be included.
19.The authors are advised to avoid using the term “early” in the title, as clinical guidelines
provide a specific definition for “early”EGVH in cirrhotic patients. This study is a case-control
design comparing UGIB and non-UGIB groups and does not define “early.”
20.Professional English editing is recommended, as the manuscript contains multiple
grammatical and stylistic errors.
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"content": "Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in\nliver cirrhosis\nVersion: 1 Date: 26 Nov 2024\nReviewer's report:\nThe authors collected baseline information and clinical data for 291 patients with cirrhosis,\naimed to identify risk factors for upper gastrointestinal bleeding (UGIB), and developed a\npredictive model. However, the study's description is unclear, making it difficult to understand\nthe entire research process. One key question is whether the patients had UGIB at baseline. If\nUGIB was present, the study appears to compare baseline differences between UGIB and non-\nUGIB patients to develop a nomogram (as inferred from the authors’ results). However, the\nmention of follow-up is confusing. Were all patients free of UGIB at baseline, and did the authors\nfollow them for six months to observe UGIB occurrence before developing the nomogram? If\nso, why was Cox regression not used?\nThe following suggestions may improve the completeness of the manuscript:\n1.The variable selection method based on simple logistic regression, which could lead to\nsignificant multicollinearity among included variables. The authors should conduct collinearity\nanalysis or generate a correlation heatmap.\n2.“Studies have shown that certain laboratory markers, such as total bilirubin (TBIL), serum\ncreatinine (Scr), and total cholesterol (TC), along with clinical assessments like liver stiffness\n(LS), spleen stiffness (SS), and the presence of abdominal fluid, are associated with the\noccurrence of UGIB in cirrhotic patients. Although some clinical studies support these findings,\ntheir sample sizes are small, and the critical values vary.” This section lacks references.\n3.Please confirm whether this is a prospective or retrospective study. If prospective,why data\ncollection performed using electronic health records? But, the abstract describes the study as\n“retrospectively enrolled.”\n4..A detailed description of the patient enrollment process is needed. For retrospective studies,\nthe diagnostic codes(ICD-codes#used to identify patients should be included.\n5.The sentence “Patients in the cirrhosis group must meet the diagnostic criteria for upper\ngastrointestinal bleeding” appears to contain an error. Were all cirrhotic patients required to\nmeet UGIB diagnostic criteria? Please clarify.\n6.The phrase “patients can cooperate with long-term follow-up” is unclear. Was a follow-up\nperiod defined? Does whether patients completed follow-up affect the results?\n7.How were patients with a history of UGIB managed? Such patients have a significantly higher\nrisk of UGIB recurrence, which may impact results.\n8.The term “cirrhotic UGIB group” is uncommon. Did this refer to esophagogastric variceal\nhemorrhage (EGVH)? If a cirrhotic patient has UGIB caused by peptic ulcer bleeding, does this\nalso qualify as “cirrhotic UGIB”? Please clarify.\n9.Were patients receiving antiviral therapy or nonselective beta-blockers (NSBBs) included?\nThese treatments significantly influence UGIB risk.\n10.How was missing data handled? Were patients with missing data excluded?\n11.The variable selection process (univariate followed by multivariate analysis) is overly\nsimplistic. At least stepwise regression should be used.\n12.Figure 1 duplicates the information already presented in Table 1. It would be more appropriate\nto replace Figure 1 with a flowchart illustrating the patient inclusion process.\n13.The reported UGIB rate of 48.1% (140/291) is unusually high and inconsistent with\nepidemiological data. Please confirm whether all eligible cases from the study period were\nincluded.\n14.Age and sex were not included in univariate or multivariate analyses, but previous studies\nsuggest that age is a risk factor for UGIB and should be analyzed.\n15.The discussion mentions several models (e.g., Child-Pugh score, MELD, ALBI, Yang LB\net al.). Why were ROC and DCA comparisons not performed between the proposed model and\nthese established models?\n16.The predictive model was not validated. Cross-validation or bootstrap validation is essential,\nespecially given the limited sample size.\n17.The manuscript states that the follow-up period was six months. Were only patients without\nUGIB at baseline followed to observe UGIB occurrence? Clarification is required.\n18.Reporting guidelines (e.g., TRIPOD) should be included.\n19.The authors are advised to avoid using the term “early” in the title, as clinical guidelines\nprovide a specific definition for “early”EGVH in cirrhotic patients. This study is a case-control\ndesign comparing UGIB and non-UGIB groups and does not define “early.”\n20.Professional English editing is recommended, as the manuscript contains multiple\ngrammatical and stylistic errors.",
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 2 Date: 22 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Billy Siahaan
Reviewer's report:
Comment from reviewer :
1.Congratulation for your work , but I still confused about the method of collecting data and
method you use in this study. Could you describe more detail about “who experienced UGIB
within six months of discharge, were included in the study” , is the laboratory , fibroscan and
endoscopy were conducted at the same time of hospitalisation ? or all the variable were
collecting before any important treatment that may altered the result ?
2.I recommend you get additional exclusion regarding portal vein thrombosis or any non
cirrhotic condition that may have a different value from the spleen stiffness measurement and
the prognostic
3.“Of these, 99 patients had hepatitis B “ , what about the other etiology ? could you describe
and include in your baseline characteristic ? Its also important to difference between the use of
antiviral treatment because it has difference result in my opinion
4.If you had etiologies from MAFLD , I am not sure if the cholesterol level maybe altered and
could be a big bias for this research.
5. Could you describe what fibroscan type do you used especially for measurement of spleen
stiffness? Because the accuracy is different between 50 hz and 100hz ( spleen dedicated
fibroscan)
6.In this research you compare the model with other models like child pugh score. Could you
describe more detail about the method you used for get AUC from child pugh score model in
correlation with the upper gastrointestinal bleeding event
7.Did you had any record regarding the use of albumin transfusion during treatment at the
hospital? Please describe more detail especially in the variable that related to the study
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 2 Date: 22 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Billy Siahaan
Reviewer's report:
Comment from reviewer :
1.Congratulation for your work , but I still confused about the method of collecting data and
method you use in this study. Could you describe more detail about “who experienced UGIB
within six months of discharge, were included in the study” , is the laboratory , fibroscan and
endoscopy were conducted at the same time of hospitalisation ? or all the variable were
collecting before any important treatment that may altered the result ?
2.I recommend you get additional exclusion regarding portal vein thrombosis or any non
cirrhotic condition that may have a different value from the spleen stiffness measurement and
the prognostic
3.“Of these, 99 patients had hepatitis B “ , what about the other etiology ? could you describe
and include in your baseline characteristic ? Its also important to difference between the use of
antiviral treatment because it has difference result in my opinion
4.If you had etiologies from MAFLD , I am not sure if the cholesterol level maybe altered and
could be a big bias for this research.
5. Could you describe what fibroscan type do you used especially for measurement of spleen
stiffness? Because the accuracy is different between 50 hz and 100hz ( spleen dedicated
fibroscan)
6.In this research you compare the model with other models like child pugh score. Could you
describe more detail about the method you used for get AUC from child pugh score model in
correlation with the upper gastrointestinal bleeding event
7.Did you had any record regarding the use of albumin transfusion during treatment at the
hospital? Please describe more detail especially in the variable that related to the study
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 2 Date: 24 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors have provided a thorough explanation and revisions. It is now clear that this is a
retrospective case-control study, and all patients had no history of UGIB at baseline. This is a
critical point, as patients with a history of UGIB are at higher risk for rebleeding.
I suggest minor revision:
First, change "no previous history of gastrointestinal bleeding" to the exclusion criteria (i.e.,
"patients with a history of gastrointestinal bleeding were excluded").
Second, expand the limitations section to address the absence of data on patients’ use of non-
selective beta-blockers (NSBBs) and antiviral therapies, as these factors could influence the
outcomes.
Finally, avoid using the term “matched,” as it may raise concerns about the randomization
process and the lack of a clear 1:1 or 1:2 matching ratio. Instead, revise this description to:
"These patients were compared with 151 patients with cirrhosis hospitalized during the same
period at the same hospital, who were discharged within six months without developing UGIB."
This revised phrasing indicates that all non-UGIB patients during this period were included.
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 2 Date: 24 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors have provided a thorough explanation and revisions. It is now clear that this is a
retrospective case-control study, and all patients had no history of UGIB at baseline. This is a
critical point, as patients with a history of UGIB are at higher risk for rebleeding.
I suggest minor revision:
First, change "no previous history of gastrointestinal bleeding" to the exclusion criteria (i.e.,
"patients with a history of gastrointestinal bleeding were excluded").
Second, expand the limitations section to address the absence of data on patients’ use of non-
selective beta-blockers (NSBBs) and antiviral therapies, as these factors could influence the
outcomes.
Finally, avoid using the term “matched,” as it may raise concerns about the randomization
process and the lack of a clear 1:1 or 1:2 matching ratio. Instead, revise this description to:
"These patients were compared with 151 patients with cirrhosis hospitalized during the same
period at the same hospital, who were discharged within six months without developing UGIB."
This revised phrasing indicates that all non-UGIB patients during this period were included.
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 2 Date: 01 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Univariate analysis showed significant differences in ascites, hepatic encephalogy, LS, SS, PLT,
AST, APRI, FIB-4, ALB, TBIL, Scr, FIB, TC, and PT, all above statistically significant factors
should be included in the multivariate analysis, and then the model should be constructed.
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 2 Date: 01 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Univariate analysis showed significant differences in ascites, hepatic encephalogy, LS, SS, PLT,
AST, APRI, FIB-4, ALB, TBIL, Scr, FIB, TC, and PT, all above statistically significant factors
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 3 Date: 21 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The author has addressed my comments well, and I believe this study is now ready for
acceptance.
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 3 Date: 21 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The author has addressed my comments well, and I believe this study is now ready for
acceptance.
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 3 Date: 29 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Billy Siahaan
Reviewer's report:
thank you for your response and revised
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Title: Development and evaluation of a predictive model of upper gastrointestinal bleeding in
liver cirrhosis
Version: 3 Date: 29 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Billy Siahaan
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thank you for your response and revised
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Title: Phosphatidylserine induce thrombotic tendency and liver damage in obstructive jaundice
Version: 1 Date: 27 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
This is a well-executed study demonstrating that platelets, neutrophils, and endothelial cells
from patients with obstructive jaundice (OJ) exhibit increased phosphatidylserine (PS) exposure
and shed PS+ microparticles (MPs). The authors further show that these prothrombotic surfaces
contribute to increased thrombotic activity and that blocking these surfaces with lactadherin
reduces liver damage in a bile duct ligation (BDL) mouse model. The study provides valuable
insight into the prothrombotic tendencies of OJ patients and offers a potential therapeutic avenue
for mitigating liver damage.
While the experimental design and results are robust, some conclusions drawn from the data are
not fully substantiated and require additional evidence or clarification. Below, I outline major
and minor concerns that should be addressed to strengthen the manuscript.
Major Concerns:
The authors used unconjugated bilirubin to demonstrate PS induction in blood cells and
HUVECs. However, in OJ patients, the majority of circulating bilirubin is conjugated, raising
concerns about the relevance of the experimental model. Conjugated bilirubin may not induce PS
exposure in the same way as unconjugated bilirubin. Moreover, bilirubin may be a confounder,
as its elevation in plasma is accompanied by increases in other components that could induce
PS exposure.
For instance, rising bile acids in OJ have been shown to promote prothrombotic tendencies
(Baker et al., Arteriosclerosis, Thrombosis, and Vascular Biology, 2019) and can directly induce
PS+ platelets (Unsworth et al., Arteriosclerosis, Thrombosis, and Vascular Biology, 2017). To
definitively determine bilirubin’s role as the deleterious effector, the authors should consider
depleting bilirubin from patient plasma and repeating the incubation experiments with blood
cells and HUVECs.
While decreased fibrin deposition in the livers of BDL mice after lactadherin treatment supports
the protective role of blocking PS+, the data do not conclusively link this effect to PS+ platelets,
neutrophils, or MPs identified in vitro. As the authors acknowledge in the discussion, PS
+ exposure in the liver may arise from hepatocytes or liver-resident cells secondary to bile
accumulation.
This limitation does not undermine the therapeutic relevance of targeting liver-specific PS+, but
it does raise questions about whether the PS+ cells evaluated in vitro (blood cells and HUVECs)
directly contribute to the observed in vivo effects. Further clarification or additional experiments
would strengthen this link.
Minor Concerns:
The abstract should be revised to provide a clearer explanation of the experimental settings in
which the respective results were obtained. This would help readers understand the study design
and its implications more effectively.
The sentence, "We found that OJ patients exhibited elevated levels of PS+ BCs, sera-cultured
ECs and associated MPs compared to the controls, which partly due to elevated unconjugated
bilirubin," is difficult to understand and should be rephrased for clarity.
The authors state that OJ patients exhibited lower platelet counts, but Table 1 shows no
significant difference. This discrepancy should be addressed, either by revising the statement or
explaining why the reported difference is relevant despite the lack of statistical significance.
Figure 2C: The observed reduction in extrinsic Xa after incubation with anti-TF raises questions,
as platelets do not express tissue factor. The authors should provide a plausible explanation for
this result or consider revising their interpretation.
"Davide Povero et al. observed a rise in the number of extracellular vesicles derived from
hepatocytes and cholangiocytes in the sera of cholestatic liver disease patients, however, these
results unable to reflect alterations in circulation cells." This sentence is missing a verb.
"However, whether PS exposure on hepatocyte in OJ still unclear." This sentence is also missing
a verb.
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Title: Phosphatidylserine induce thrombotic tendency and liver damage in obstructive jaundice
Version: 1 Date: 27 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
This is a well-executed study demonstrating that platelets, neutrophils, and endothelial cells
from patients with obstructive jaundice (OJ) exhibit increased phosphatidylserine (PS) exposure
and shed PS+ microparticles (MPs). The authors further show that these prothrombotic surfaces
contribute to increased thrombotic activity and that blocking these surfaces with lactadherin
reduces liver damage in a bile duct ligation (BDL) mouse model. The study provides valuable
insight into the prothrombotic tendencies of OJ patients and offers a potential therapeutic avenue
for mitigating liver damage.
While the experimental design and results are robust, some conclusions drawn from the data are
not fully substantiated and require additional evidence or clarification. Below, I outline major
and minor concerns that should be addressed to strengthen the manuscript.
Major Concerns:
The authors used unconjugated bilirubin to demonstrate PS induction in blood cells and
HUVECs. However, in OJ patients, the majority of circulating bilirubin is conjugated, raising
concerns about the relevance of the experimental model. Conjugated bilirubin may not induce PS
exposure in the same way as unconjugated bilirubin. Moreover, bilirubin may be a confounder,
as its elevation in plasma is accompanied by increases in other components that could induce
PS exposure.
For instance, rising bile acids in OJ have been shown to promote prothrombotic tendencies
(Baker et al., Arteriosclerosis, Thrombosis, and Vascular Biology, 2019) and can directly induce
PS+ platelets (Unsworth et al., Arteriosclerosis, Thrombosis, and Vascular Biology, 2017). To
definitively determine bilirubin’s role as the deleterious effector, the authors should consider
depleting bilirubin from patient plasma and repeating the incubation experiments with blood
cells and HUVECs.
While decreased fibrin deposition in the livers of BDL mice after lactadherin treatment supports
the protective role of blocking PS+, the data do not conclusively link this effect to PS+ platelets,
neutrophils, or MPs identified in vitro. As the authors acknowledge in the discussion, PS
+ exposure in the liver may arise from hepatocytes or liver-resident cells secondary to bile
accumulation.
This limitation does not undermine the therapeutic relevance of targeting liver-specific PS+, but
it does raise questions about whether the PS+ cells evaluated in vitro (blood cells and HUVECs)
directly contribute to the observed in vivo effects. Further clarification or additional experiments
would strengthen this link.
Minor Concerns:
The abstract should be revised to provide a clearer explanation of the experimental settings in
which the respective results were obtained. This would help readers understand the study design
and its implications more effectively.
The sentence, "We found that OJ patients exhibited elevated levels of PS+ BCs, sera-cultured
ECs and associated MPs compared to the controls, which partly due to elevated unconjugated
bilirubin," is difficult to understand and should be rephrased for clarity.
The authors state that OJ patients exhibited lower platelet counts, but Table 1 shows no
significant difference. This discrepancy should be addressed, either by revising the statement or
explaining why the reported difference is relevant despite the lack of statistical significance.
Figure 2C: The observed reduction in extrinsic Xa after incubation with anti-TF raises questions,
as platelets do not express tissue factor. The authors should provide a plausible explanation for
this result or consider revising their interpretation.
"Davide Povero et al. observed a rise in the number of extracellular vesicles derived from
hepatocytes and cholangiocytes in the sera of cholestatic liver disease patients, however, these
results unable to reflect alterations in circulation cells." This sentence is missing a verb.
"However, whether PS exposure on hepatocyte in OJ still unclear." This sentence is also missing
a verb.
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"content": "Title: Phosphatidylserine induce thrombotic tendency and liver damage in obstructive jaundice\nVersion: 1 Date: 27 Jan 2025\nReviewer's report:\nThis is a well-executed study demonstrating that platelets, neutrophils, and endothelial cells\nfrom patients with obstructive jaundice (OJ) exhibit increased phosphatidylserine (PS) exposure\nand shed PS+ microparticles (MPs). The authors further show that these prothrombotic surfaces\ncontribute to increased thrombotic activity and that blocking these surfaces with lactadherin\nreduces liver damage in a bile duct ligation (BDL) mouse model. The study provides valuable\ninsight into the prothrombotic tendencies of OJ patients and offers a potential therapeutic avenue\nfor mitigating liver damage.\nWhile the experimental design and results are robust, some conclusions drawn from the data are\nnot fully substantiated and require additional evidence or clarification. Below, I outline major\nand minor concerns that should be addressed to strengthen the manuscript.\nMajor Concerns:\nThe authors used unconjugated bilirubin to demonstrate PS induction in blood cells and\nHUVECs. However, in OJ patients, the majority of circulating bilirubin is conjugated, raising\nconcerns about the relevance of the experimental model. Conjugated bilirubin may not induce PS\nexposure in the same way as unconjugated bilirubin. Moreover, bilirubin may be a confounder,\nas its elevation in plasma is accompanied by increases in other components that could induce\nPS exposure.\nFor instance, rising bile acids in OJ have been shown to promote prothrombotic tendencies\n(Baker et al., Arteriosclerosis, Thrombosis, and Vascular Biology, 2019) and can directly induce\nPS+ platelets (Unsworth et al., Arteriosclerosis, Thrombosis, and Vascular Biology, 2017). To\ndefinitively determine bilirubin’s role as the deleterious effector, the authors should consider\ndepleting bilirubin from patient plasma and repeating the incubation experiments with blood\ncells and HUVECs.\nWhile decreased fibrin deposition in the livers of BDL mice after lactadherin treatment supports\nthe protective role of blocking PS+, the data do not conclusively link this effect to PS+ platelets,\nneutrophils, or MPs identified in vitro. As the authors acknowledge in the discussion, PS\n+ exposure in the liver may arise from hepatocytes or liver-resident cells secondary to bile\naccumulation.\nThis limitation does not undermine the therapeutic relevance of targeting liver-specific PS+, but\nit does raise questions about whether the PS+ cells evaluated in vitro (blood cells and HUVECs)\ndirectly contribute to the observed in vivo effects. Further clarification or additional experiments\nwould strengthen this link.\nMinor Concerns:\nThe abstract should be revised to provide a clearer explanation of the experimental settings in\nwhich the respective results were obtained. This would help readers understand the study design\nand its implications more effectively.\nThe sentence, \"We found that OJ patients exhibited elevated levels of PS+ BCs, sera-cultured\nECs and associated MPs compared to the controls, which partly due to elevated unconjugated\nbilirubin,\" is difficult to understand and should be rephrased for clarity.\nThe authors state that OJ patients exhibited lower platelet counts, but Table 1 shows no\nsignificant difference. This discrepancy should be addressed, either by revising the statement or\nexplaining why the reported difference is relevant despite the lack of statistical significance.\nFigure 2C: The observed reduction in extrinsic Xa after incubation with anti-TF raises questions,\nas platelets do not express tissue factor. The authors should provide a plausible explanation for\nthis result or consider revising their interpretation.\n\"Davide Povero et al. observed a rise in the number of extracellular vesicles derived from\nhepatocytes and cholangiocytes in the sera of cholestatic liver disease patients, however, these\nresults unable to reflect alterations in circulation cells.\" This sentence is missing a verb.\n\"However, whether PS exposure on hepatocyte in OJ still unclear.\" This sentence is also missing\na verb.",
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Title: Phosphatidylserine induce thrombotic tendency and liver damage in obstructive jaundice
Version: 1 Date: 28 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While tissue factor (TF) is briefly mentioned as playing a role in cholestasis-related
coagulopathy, it could be clearer whether TF expression is being directly studied in this research
or if it is being used as background information. If TF's role is not a focus of the current study,
it might be worth clarifying this point to avoid confusion.
-The introduction discusses the association of PS exposure with coagulation activation but
does not go into much detail regarding the molecular mechanisms involved. A more in-depth
explanation of how PS exposure leads to activation of the coagulation pathways (e.g., the
intrinsic/extrinsic pathways, prothrombinase complex formation) would strengthen the rationale
for studying PS in this context.
-It might be helpful to mention other possible contributors to coagulopathy in OJ, such as
elevated bilirubin, liver dysfunction, or inflammatory markers. This would further emphasize
the novelty of focusing on PS and its potential to serve as a central mechanistic link.
-The preparation of unconjugated bilirubin (UCB) is described in detail, but it would be helpful
to clarify the rationale behind the chosen concentrations (25, 50, 100 µM) and the significance
of the molar ratios of bilirubin to albumin. What is the expected physiological relevance of these
concentrations in the context of OJ? Adding this rationale would strengthen the experimental
design.
-The procedure for isolating microparticles (MPs) is clear, but the subsequent flow cytometry
analysis could be expanded. Specifically, it would be helpful to include more details on how the
MPs are quantified, particularly since MPs are being compared across different groups. A brief
explanation of how the MPs are counted (e.g., flow cytometric thresholding for MPs vs. larger
cells) would enhance reproducibility.
-The methods mention the use of lactadherin to inhibit PS-mediated procoagulant activity. It
might be useful to explain the expected outcome of lactadherin inhibition more clearly. For
example, will lactadherin reduce thrombin generation, and by what mechanism? This detail
could help readers understand the therapeutic potential of lactadherin more fully.
-The mouse BDL model is well-described, but it would be helpful to provide more context on
the expected outcomes of lactadherin treatment in the animal model. Is there a hypothesis about
how lactadherin might impact liver injury or coagulopathy in the BDL mice, and what specific
markers will be used to evaluate the effects?
-While the authors present a compelling narrative connecting PS exposure to hypercoagulability,
some aspects of the mechanistic pathways could be further clarified. For instance, the exact
molecular processes by which PS exposure on MPs and BCs leads to enhanced thrombin
generation could be more explicitly described. A deeper exploration into how PS facilitates the
prothrombinase complex assembly would enhance the biological relevance of the study.
-The study highlights a key finding that platelets in OJ patients exhibit PS exposure despite a
lower overall platelet count. The discussion briefly touches on enhanced splenic sequestration
and platelet accumulation in the hepatic sinusoidal space but could delve deeper into the
functional implications of this platelet dysfunction. Do these platelets become hyperreactive? Is
their altered behavior linked to increased thrombotic risk, or does this dysfunction represent an
earlier stage of platelet activation? Further discussion of the functional consequences of platelet
dysfunction in OJ could help strengthen the argument for targeting platelets in therapeutic
interventions.
-The role of hepatocytes in PS exposure is mentioned briefly but left unaddressed in terms
of mechanistic details. Given that hepatocyte apoptosis is a proposed feature of procoagulant
responses in liver disease, this should be more thoroughly integrated into the discussion. Are
hepatocyte-derived MPs contributing to the observed procoagulant state in OJ, or are they simply
a downstream effect? A more focused discussion on hepatocytes and their interaction with MPs,
especially in the context of cholestasis and hyperbilirubinemia, would further strengthen the
study’s conclusions.
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Title: Phosphatidylserine induce thrombotic tendency and liver damage in obstructive jaundice
Version: 1 Date: 28 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While tissue factor (TF) is briefly mentioned as playing a role in cholestasis-related
coagulopathy, it could be clearer whether TF expression is being directly studied in this research
or if it is being used as background information. If TF's role is not a focus of the current study,
it might be worth clarifying this point to avoid confusion.
-The introduction discusses the association of PS exposure with coagulation activation but
does not go into much detail regarding the molecular mechanisms involved. A more in-depth
explanation of how PS exposure leads to activation of the coagulation pathways (e.g., the
intrinsic/extrinsic pathways, prothrombinase complex formation) would strengthen the rationale
for studying PS in this context.
-It might be helpful to mention other possible contributors to coagulopathy in OJ, such as
elevated bilirubin, liver dysfunction, or inflammatory markers. This would further emphasize
the novelty of focusing on PS and its potential to serve as a central mechanistic link.
-The preparation of unconjugated bilirubin (UCB) is described in detail, but it would be helpful
to clarify the rationale behind the chosen concentrations (25, 50, 100 µM) and the significance
of the molar ratios of bilirubin to albumin. What is the expected physiological relevance of these
concentrations in the context of OJ? Adding this rationale would strengthen the experimental
design.
-The procedure for isolating microparticles (MPs) is clear, but the subsequent flow cytometry
analysis could be expanded. Specifically, it would be helpful to include more details on how the
MPs are quantified, particularly since MPs are being compared across different groups. A brief
explanation of how the MPs are counted (e.g., flow cytometric thresholding for MPs vs. larger
cells) would enhance reproducibility.
-The methods mention the use of lactadherin to inhibit PS-mediated procoagulant activity. It
might be useful to explain the expected outcome of lactadherin inhibition more clearly. For
example, will lactadherin reduce thrombin generation, and by what mechanism? This detail
could help readers understand the therapeutic potential of lactadherin more fully.
-The mouse BDL model is well-described, but it would be helpful to provide more context on
the expected outcomes of lactadherin treatment in the animal model. Is there a hypothesis about
how lactadherin might impact liver injury or coagulopathy in the BDL mice, and what specific
markers will be used to evaluate the effects?
-While the authors present a compelling narrative connecting PS exposure to hypercoagulability,
some aspects of the mechanistic pathways could be further clarified. For instance, the exact
molecular processes by which PS exposure on MPs and BCs leads to enhanced thrombin
generation could be more explicitly described. A deeper exploration into how PS facilitates the
prothrombinase complex assembly would enhance the biological relevance of the study.
-The study highlights a key finding that platelets in OJ patients exhibit PS exposure despite a
lower overall platelet count. The discussion briefly touches on enhanced splenic sequestration
and platelet accumulation in the hepatic sinusoidal space but could delve deeper into the
functional implications of this platelet dysfunction. Do these platelets become hyperreactive? Is
their altered behavior linked to increased thrombotic risk, or does this dysfunction represent an
earlier stage of platelet activation? Further discussion of the functional consequences of platelet
dysfunction in OJ could help strengthen the argument for targeting platelets in therapeutic
interventions.
-The role of hepatocytes in PS exposure is mentioned briefly but left unaddressed in terms
of mechanistic details. Given that hepatocyte apoptosis is a proposed feature of procoagulant
responses in liver disease, this should be more thoroughly integrated into the discussion. Are
hepatocyte-derived MPs contributing to the observed procoagulant state in OJ, or are they simply
a downstream effect? A more focused discussion on hepatocytes and their interaction with MPs,
especially in the context of cholestasis and hyperbilirubinemia, would further strengthen the
study’s conclusions.
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Title: Phosphatidylserine induce thrombotic tendency and liver damage in obstructive jaundice
Version: 2 Date: 14 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
The responses are satisfactory.
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Title: Phosphatidylserine induce thrombotic tendency and liver damage in obstructive jaundice
Version: 2 Date: 14 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
The responses are satisfactory.
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Title: Phosphatidylserine induce thrombotic tendency and liver damage in obstructive jaundice
Version: 2 Date: 24 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
All my concerns have been thoroughly addressed. The readability has significantly improved,
making it easier to interpret the findings in this revision. I recommend acceptance.
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Title: Phosphatidylserine induce thrombotic tendency and liver damage in obstructive jaundice
Version: 2 Date: 24 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
All my concerns have been thoroughly addressed. The readability has significantly improved,
making it easier to interpret the findings in this revision. I recommend acceptance.
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Title: Analyzing NAFLD Interventional Clinical Trial Registration Based on the
ClinicalTrials.gov Database
Version: 2 Date: 23 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Joost Boeckmans
Reviewer's report:
Hui Du and colleagues provide an overview of clinical trials in MASLD registered on
ClinicalTrials.gov. The manuscript is descriptive but gives a practical overview. Certain
concepts could add innovative aspects, in which I hope my input can be useful:
Major
- Introduction: in my opinion, the introduction would benefit from discussing the potential drug
targets in MASLD in the context of the pathophysiology, instead of a lengthy discussion on
prevalence. In that view, the part on the pathogenesis could use an update as well, with the ‘two-
hit’ hypothesis being outdated and perhaps less relevant to describe seen the scope of the paper.
- The authors describe hepatic fat content as a frequent endpoint. What about the technique to
quantify this? Was this always MRI-PDFF? + what is usually considered as a relevant lipid
reduction? Same for histology, are there already some using AI?
- Based on the search, what are the advantages of current ‘most popular’ drugs under
development over the failed compounds? Eg. Elafibranor.
- What about personalized treatment developments? Eg. Regarding PNPLA3? When did these
kinds of approaches emerge?
All in all, I think it would be good to describe such temporal changes (i.e. last 3 points) in more
detail, since this informs about new developments
Minor
- Introduction: The global prevalence is around 38%, please see Riazi K, Azhari H, Charette
JH, Underwood FE, King JA, Afshar EE, Swain MG, Congly SE, Kaplan GG, Shaheen AA.
The prevalence and incidence of NAFLD worldwide: a systematic review and meta-analysis.
Lancet Gastroenterol Hepatol. 2022 Sep;7(9):851-861. doi: 10.1016/S2468-1253(22)00165-0.
Epub 2022 Jul 5. PMID: 35798021.
- Would be good to use the MASLD terminology (or MAFLD if regionally preferred) to create
some uniformity.
- Fig 3: Might be good to also have a grey box with ‘no trials’ registered or similar
- Abstract: “140 drug interventional trials primarily aimed to improve NAFLD through
mechanisms such as metabolic and energy balance”; would be informative to add a percentage
to this number. How did the targets change throughout the time?
- Better not to use adjectives as ‘meticulous’, or ‘rigorous’ when describing relatively simple
concepts (cfr methods section).
- Was gender (vs sex) adequately used?
- This quite recent article reported on the same topic: PMID:38327733. What is the added value
of this paper?
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Title: Analyzing NAFLD Interventional Clinical Trial Registration Based on the
ClinicalTrials.gov Database
Version: 2 Date: 23 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Joost Boeckmans
Reviewer's report:
Hui Du and colleagues provide an overview of clinical trials in MASLD registered on
ClinicalTrials.gov. The manuscript is descriptive but gives a practical overview. Certain
concepts could add innovative aspects, in which I hope my input can be useful:
Major
- Introduction: in my opinion, the introduction would benefit from discussing the potential drug
targets in MASLD in the context of the pathophysiology, instead of a lengthy discussion on
prevalence. In that view, the part on the pathogenesis could use an update as well, with the ‘two-
hit’ hypothesis being outdated and perhaps less relevant to describe seen the scope of the paper.
- The authors describe hepatic fat content as a frequent endpoint. What about the technique to
quantify this? Was this always MRI-PDFF? + what is usually considered as a relevant lipid
reduction? Same for histology, are there already some using AI?
- Based on the search, what are the advantages of current ‘most popular’ drugs under
development over the failed compounds? Eg. Elafibranor.
- What about personalized treatment developments? Eg. Regarding PNPLA3? When did these
kinds of approaches emerge?
All in all, I think it would be good to describe such temporal changes (i.e. last 3 points) in more
detail, since this informs about new developments
Minor
- Introduction: The global prevalence is around 38%, please see Riazi K, Azhari H, Charette
JH, Underwood FE, King JA, Afshar EE, Swain MG, Congly SE, Kaplan GG, Shaheen AA.
The prevalence and incidence of NAFLD worldwide: a systematic review and meta-analysis.
Lancet Gastroenterol Hepatol. 2022 Sep;7(9):851-861. doi: 10.1016/S2468-1253(22)00165-0.
Epub 2022 Jul 5. PMID: 35798021.
- Would be good to use the MASLD terminology (or MAFLD if regionally preferred) to create
some uniformity.
- Fig 3: Might be good to also have a grey box with ‘no trials’ registered or similar
- Abstract: “140 drug interventional trials primarily aimed to improve NAFLD through
mechanisms such as metabolic and energy balance”; would be informative to add a percentage
to this number. How did the targets change throughout the time?
- Better not to use adjectives as ‘meticulous’, or ‘rigorous’ when describing relatively simple
concepts (cfr methods section).
- Was gender (vs sex) adequately used?
- This quite recent article reported on the same topic: PMID:38327733. What is the added value
of this paper?
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Title: Analyzing NAFLD Interventional Clinical Trial Registration Based on the
ClinicalTrials.gov Database
Version: 2 Date: 26 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
This study provides an overview of the MASLD/NAFLD interventional clinical trials. However,
I have concerns about the conduct and decisions that need further clarification:
Key points:
1. Please use current terminology (i.e., MASLD) consistently throughout the manuscript.
2. Provide more detailed information on the methodology, including the full search strategy,
data handling (how? who? what was done?), and statistical analysis.
3. The authors show the global distribution of MASLD clinical trials. However, it is unclear
whether this distribution includes multinational trials, leading to uncertainty as to whether
this information is accurate. For example, there are MASH trials with sites in Argentina
(NCT03053050, NCT03205150, NCT02855164, NCT03517540), which is shown as having
0 trials. Please investigate the multinational trials further or clearly state that the countries
considered are only those registered in the CT.gov database and acknowledge this as a limitation.
In addition, a table showing the number of trials for each country and their further stratification
by income level (according to the World Bank country classification) would be welcome.
4. Please clarify why phases of studies were classified as 'NA' (not applicable).
Minor points:
1. Introduction: Please provide information on the prevalence of MASLD with updated data
(PMID: 36626630).
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Title: Analyzing NAFLD Interventional Clinical Trial Registration Based on the
ClinicalTrials.gov Database
Version: 2 Date: 26 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
This study provides an overview of the MASLD/NAFLD interventional clinical trials. However,
I have concerns about the conduct and decisions that need further clarification:
Key points:
1. Please use current terminology (i.e., MASLD) consistently throughout the manuscript.
2. Provide more detailed information on the methodology, including the full search strategy,
data handling (how? who? what was done?), and statistical analysis.
3. The authors show the global distribution of MASLD clinical trials. However, it is unclear
whether this distribution includes multinational trials, leading to uncertainty as to whether
this information is accurate. For example, there are MASH trials with sites in Argentina
(NCT03053050, NCT03205150, NCT02855164, NCT03517540), which is shown as having
0 trials. Please investigate the multinational trials further or clearly state that the countries
considered are only those registered in the CT.gov database and acknowledge this as a limitation.
In addition, a table showing the number of trials for each country and their further stratification
by income level (according to the World Bank country classification) would be welcome.
4. Please clarify why phases of studies were classified as 'NA' (not applicable).
Minor points:
1. Introduction: Please provide information on the prevalence of MASLD with updated data
(PMID: 36626630).
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"content": "Title: Analyzing NAFLD Interventional Clinical Trial Registration Based on the\nClinicalTrials.gov Database\nVersion: 2 Date: 26 Jan 2025\nReviewer's report:\nThis study provides an overview of the MASLD/NAFLD interventional clinical trials. However,\nI have concerns about the conduct and decisions that need further clarification:\nKey points:\n1. Please use current terminology (i.e., MASLD) consistently throughout the manuscript.\n2. Provide more detailed information on the methodology, including the full search strategy,\ndata handling (how? who? what was done?), and statistical analysis.\n3. The authors show the global distribution of MASLD clinical trials. However, it is unclear\nwhether this distribution includes multinational trials, leading to uncertainty as to whether\nthis information is accurate. For example, there are MASH trials with sites in Argentina\n(NCT03053050, NCT03205150, NCT02855164, NCT03517540), which is shown as having\n0 trials. Please investigate the multinational trials further or clearly state that the countries\nconsidered are only those registered in the CT.gov database and acknowledge this as a limitation.\nIn addition, a table showing the number of trials for each country and their further stratification\nby income level (according to the World Bank country classification) would be welcome.\n4. Please clarify why phases of studies were classified as 'NA' (not applicable).\nMinor points:\n1. Introduction: Please provide information on the prevalence of MASLD with updated data\n(PMID: 36626630).",
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Title: Analyzing NAFLD Interventional Clinical Trial Registration Based on the
ClinicalTrials.gov Database
Version: 2 Date: 26 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While the multiple-strike theory is introduced, a bit more explanation of how these factors
interrelate (e.g., liver-gut axis, intestinal microbiota) could enhance clarity. For instance, a
brief mention of how gut microbiota alterations may influence liver inflammation and fat
accumulation could be helpful for a more comprehensive understanding.
-The statistics from China are crucial, but it would be valuable to include more global context
to highlight how the prevalence and burden of NAFLD in other regions compare. For instance,
the prevalence of NAFLD in the U.S. or Europe could give a broader perspective on the global
burden.
-The study mentions using ClinicalTrials.gov but does not specify if there were any additional
databases or sources considered for a more robust search. While ClinicalTrials.gov is a primary
source, acknowledging if other databases were consulted (e.g., PubMed, WHO International
Clinical Trials Registry Platform) could improve the comprehensiveness of the data.
-The statistical analysis section mentions the use of SAS software for frequency and percentage
calculations, but it would be helpful to elaborate on why this method was chosen. Was any
advanced analysis, such as regression modeling or time series analysis, used to explore trends
over the years?
-While the list of drug targets is useful, it could be even more valuable to discuss the efficacy
or challenges associated with these drug classes. For example, how effective are PPAR agonists
or GLP-1 analogs in treating NAFLD, and what are the hurdles they face in clinical trials?
-The mention of herbal medicines (silymarin and Korean red ginseng) stands out. It would be
helpful to briefly explore why these specific herbs were chosen and what results (if any) have
been observed. Is there any data on their effectiveness, or are these trials still in the early stages?
-While the inclusion of percentages (e.g., 8.77% of trials focused on behavioral interventions,
13.73% on dietary supplements) adds useful context, some readers may benefit from additional
explanation regarding how these figures relate to the broader dataset. For instance, a brief
comparison of the prevalence of lifestyle-focused trials versus pharmacological ones might help
highlight trends more clearly.
-The discussion delves into some detailed mechanistic pathways, such as the roles of FXR,
PPARs, and FGF21. While these points are insightful, the explanations could be more concise
and more clearly tied to the clinical implications. The mechanisms of action for certain drugs
(e.g., FXR agonists) could be summarized in simpler terms to improve accessibility for a wider
audience. Providing more tangible examples of how these mechanisms translate into clinical
outcomes might also strengthen the argument.
-The section mentions that there is a higher prevalence of NAFLD in men, and suggests a
potential hormonal influence in postmenopausal women, yet the discussion on gender is brief.
Expanding on gender-based differences in NAFLD progression and response to treatment would
add depth, especially given that gender-specific therapies might become an important area for
future trials.
-While the discussion briefly mentions the increasing prevalence of NAFLD in children, this
could be expanded. Specific trends, challenges, or findings related to pediatric clinical trials
would be valuable. Since NAFLD in children is an emerging concern, a deeper focus on how
clinical trials are addressing pediatric populations would strengthen this section.
-The study touches on the growing trend toward using non-invasive methods for assessing liver
fibrosis and NASH improvement. Expanding on which specific technologies or biomarkers are
being explored in clinical trials would be helpful. This section feels somewhat underdeveloped,
given the increasing relevance of non-invasive diagnostics in clinical practice.
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Title: Analyzing NAFLD Interventional Clinical Trial Registration Based on the
ClinicalTrials.gov Database
Version: 2 Date: 26 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While the multiple-strike theory is introduced, a bit more explanation of how these factors
interrelate (e.g., liver-gut axis, intestinal microbiota) could enhance clarity. For instance, a
brief mention of how gut microbiota alterations may influence liver inflammation and fat
accumulation could be helpful for a more comprehensive understanding.
-The statistics from China are crucial, but it would be valuable to include more global context
to highlight how the prevalence and burden of NAFLD in other regions compare. For instance,
the prevalence of NAFLD in the U.S. or Europe could give a broader perspective on the global
burden.
-The study mentions using ClinicalTrials.gov but does not specify if there were any additional
databases or sources considered for a more robust search. While ClinicalTrials.gov is a primary
source, acknowledging if other databases were consulted (e.g., PubMed, WHO International
Clinical Trials Registry Platform) could improve the comprehensiveness of the data.
-The statistical analysis section mentions the use of SAS software for frequency and percentage
calculations, but it would be helpful to elaborate on why this method was chosen. Was any
advanced analysis, such as regression modeling or time series analysis, used to explore trends
over the years?
-While the list of drug targets is useful, it could be even more valuable to discuss the efficacy
or challenges associated with these drug classes. For example, how effective are PPAR agonists
or GLP-1 analogs in treating NAFLD, and what are the hurdles they face in clinical trials?
-The mention of herbal medicines (silymarin and Korean red ginseng) stands out. It would be
helpful to briefly explore why these specific herbs were chosen and what results (if any) have
been observed. Is there any data on their effectiveness, or are these trials still in the early stages?
-While the inclusion of percentages (e.g., 8.77% of trials focused on behavioral interventions,
13.73% on dietary supplements) adds useful context, some readers may benefit from additional
explanation regarding how these figures relate to the broader dataset. For instance, a brief
comparison of the prevalence of lifestyle-focused trials versus pharmacological ones might help
highlight trends more clearly.
-The discussion delves into some detailed mechanistic pathways, such as the roles of FXR,
PPARs, and FGF21. While these points are insightful, the explanations could be more concise
and more clearly tied to the clinical implications. The mechanisms of action for certain drugs
(e.g., FXR agonists) could be summarized in simpler terms to improve accessibility for a wider
audience. Providing more tangible examples of how these mechanisms translate into clinical
outcomes might also strengthen the argument.
-The section mentions that there is a higher prevalence of NAFLD in men, and suggests a
potential hormonal influence in postmenopausal women, yet the discussion on gender is brief.
Expanding on gender-based differences in NAFLD progression and response to treatment would
add depth, especially given that gender-specific therapies might become an important area for
future trials.
-While the discussion briefly mentions the increasing prevalence of NAFLD in children, this
could be expanded. Specific trends, challenges, or findings related to pediatric clinical trials
would be valuable. Since NAFLD in children is an emerging concern, a deeper focus on how
clinical trials are addressing pediatric populations would strengthen this section.
-The study touches on the growing trend toward using non-invasive methods for assessing liver
fibrosis and NASH improvement. Expanding on which specific technologies or biomarkers are
being explored in clinical trials would be helpful. This section feels somewhat underdeveloped,
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Title: Analyzing NAFLD Interventional Clinical Trial Registration Based on the
ClinicalTrials.gov Database
Version: 4 Date: 13 Feb 2025
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Title: Analyzing NAFLD Interventional Clinical Trial Registration Based on the
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Version: 4 Date: 13 Feb 2025
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The responses are satisfactory.
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Title: Weight-adjusted waist circumference index with hepatic steatosis and fibrosis in adult
females: a cross-sectional, nationally representative study (NHANES 2017–2020)
Version: 2 Date: 31 Jul 2024
Reviewer's report:
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Title: Weight-adjusted waist circumference index with hepatic steatosis and fibrosis in adult
females: a cross-sectional, nationally representative study (NHANES 2017–2020)
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Title: Weight-adjusted waist circumference index with hepatic steatosis and fibrosis in adult
females: a cross-sectional, nationally representative study (NHANES 2017–2020)
Version: 2 Date: 08 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
We had the honor to review the manuscript on weight-adjusted waist circumference index and its
associations with liver disease (steatosis and fibrosis based on FibroScan) amongst females from
the NHANES 2017-2020 database. Although the findings are interesting and the topic deserves
further investigation the enthusiasm is limited due to the complexity of the study and lack of a
single strong story aiding the reader through this information.
Major
1. Although some other markers were investigated, it remains unclear to me if the WWI is better
in assessing the risk of steatosis and fibrosis compared to the other tests mentioned in this study.
2. Although one should always consider impact of sex on body composition and the associated
risks, I miss the comparison to the male counterpart. Is the WWI also better in males? Are there
different associations? Or can we use WWI in both female and males?
3. I am intrigued by the U shaped correlation for WWI and LSM. This seems to be in
contradiction with Table 1, where the lowers LSM was reported for Q1 and highest for Q4.
Might this due to (over)adjusting? Among the Q1, were there also more patients with clinically
relevant increased LSM?
4. Although the data is interesting, I have difficulties extracting useful conclusions for further
research and/or clinical practice. I recommend the authors to assess carefully what the main
messages would be of this paper and how the tables and figures could contribute to this message.
Minor
1. Please check for style and grammar. Some sentences are duplicate or in contradiction. For
example, the first sentence is duplicated in the data analysis section and the table legends are
sometime duplicated, especially the models, however, they are not the same models which is
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Title: Weight-adjusted waist circumference index with hepatic steatosis and fibrosis in adult
females: a cross-sectional, nationally representative study (NHANES 2017–2020)
Version: 2 Date: 08 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
We had the honor to review the manuscript on weight-adjusted waist circumference index and its
associations with liver disease (steatosis and fibrosis based on FibroScan) amongst females from
the NHANES 2017-2020 database. Although the findings are interesting and the topic deserves
further investigation the enthusiasm is limited due to the complexity of the study and lack of a
single strong story aiding the reader through this information.
Major
1. Although some other markers were investigated, it remains unclear to me if the WWI is better
in assessing the risk of steatosis and fibrosis compared to the other tests mentioned in this study.
2. Although one should always consider impact of sex on body composition and the associated
risks, I miss the comparison to the male counterpart. Is the WWI also better in males? Are there
different associations? Or can we use WWI in both female and males?
3. I am intrigued by the U shaped correlation for WWI and LSM. This seems to be in
contradiction with Table 1, where the lowers LSM was reported for Q1 and highest for Q4.
Might this due to (over)adjusting? Among the Q1, were there also more patients with clinically
relevant increased LSM?
4. Although the data is interesting, I have difficulties extracting useful conclusions for further
research and/or clinical practice. I recommend the authors to assess carefully what the main
messages would be of this paper and how the tables and figures could contribute to this message.
Minor
1. Please check for style and grammar. Some sentences are duplicate or in contradiction. For
example, the first sentence is duplicated in the data analysis section and the table legends are
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Title: Weight-adjusted waist circumference index with hepatic steatosis and fibrosis in adult
females: a cross-sectional, nationally representative study (NHANES 2017–2020)
Version: 6 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
I endorse the changes made by the authors. They address the previously mentioned issues.
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Title: Weight-adjusted waist circumference index with hepatic steatosis and fibrosis in adult
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Version: 6 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
I endorse the changes made by the authors. They address the previously mentioned issues.
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Title: Association between avoidant/restrictive food intake disorder risk, dietary attitudes and
behaviors among Chinese patients with inflammatory bowel disease: A cross-sectional study
Version: 1 Date: 23 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors confirmed the association between IBD and ARFID and examined the prevalence
of ARFID and its associated factors in a sample of around 500 individuals. They reported that
factors such as having Crohn's disease, having an active disease, having an attitude to managing
symptoms, and having a specific dietary history were associated with ARFID.
Many of the points are similar to those previously reported and there is considered to be little
new evidence. In addition, the low generalisability of the study needs to be discussed in several
respects, including the following.
First, the likelihood that participants in the study would be committed to the diet in the first place
needs to be discussed, and how patients who would not wish to participate in the study would
be treated needs to be fully discussed.
Secondly, the participants were, on average, 37.2 years old (28-46), and it should be mentioned
that most were this young. In other words, it is important to note that the elderly, who are more
prone to nutritional disorders, etc., were not considered.
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education or higher. This is because interest in dietetics may be influenced by the presence of
education.
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should be added to the Method statistics, and it should also be stated in Table 4 that it is a
multivariate analysis.
If a multivariate analysis has not been performed, this should be clearly stated and the Discussion
should state that the risk factors obtained in this study were univariate and independent.
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Version: 1 Date: 23 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors confirmed the association between IBD and ARFID and examined the prevalence
of ARFID and its associated factors in a sample of around 500 individuals. They reported that
factors such as having Crohn's disease, having an active disease, having an attitude to managing
symptoms, and having a specific dietary history were associated with ARFID.
Many of the points are similar to those previously reported and there is considered to be little
new evidence. In addition, the low generalisability of the study needs to be discussed in several
respects, including the following.
First, the likelihood that participants in the study would be committed to the diet in the first place
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Title: Association between avoidant/restrictive food intake disorder risk, dietary attitudes and
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Version: 1 Date: 29 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
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Version: 3 Date: 11 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The response letter to the review was confirmed.
Unfortunately, the response letter contained only the revised sections and not the author's
opinion. However, they will not significantly affect the decision.
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Reviewer's report:
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Title: Association between avoidant/restrictive food intake disorder risk, dietary attitudes and
behaviors among Chinese patients with inflammatory bowel disease: A cross-sectional study
Version: 3 Date: 19 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
All of my comments/suggestions have been addressed adequately
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Title: Treatment Outcomes of Chronic Liver Disease and Associated Factors among patients
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Version: 3 Date: 15 Dec 2024
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this is not Nobel
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Title: Treatment Outcomes of Chronic Liver Disease and Associated Factors among patients
treated at hospitals in Bahir Dar city, North-west Ethiopia
Version: 3 Date: 27 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors the title you are studying is crucial but I have concerns and comments for
corrections.
1. Between line numbers 4-9, please add your affiliations, emails and telephone number, p.o.
box and fax number.
2. In line 36, please give the title, which is introduction before you write the sub heading which
is background.
3. In line 106, “Materials and Methods” correct to Methods and materials.
4. In lines 107-116, merge the two subheadings and make then as study area and period and then
make the study design a separate sub heading. When writing about the study area, first write
about Bahardar city, the population and then the health service institutions.
5. In lines, 117-121, summarize in to one sentence, which is only about the study design.
6. From lines, 122-139, of the data collection procedure is not clear. It needs a through revision
and correction. Since the data collected were chart review, why COVID-19 prevention measures
were a concern and is it now a public health concern?
7. There are a lot of missing sections in the methodology such as, populations, eligibility,
sampling technique, sample size calculations, study variables, operational definitions etc.
8. I have not seen the treatment outcome.
9. In table 2, there is no need of writing the keys since there is an abbreviation sections.
10. In the associated factors table at line number 193-196, you should add the cross tabulation
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Title: Treatment Outcomes of Chronic Liver Disease and Associated Factors among patients
treated at hospitals in Bahir Dar city, North-west Ethiopia
Version: 3 Date: 27 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors the title you are studying is crucial but I have concerns and comments for
corrections.
1. Between line numbers 4-9, please add your affiliations, emails and telephone number, p.o.
box and fax number.
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sampling technique, sample size calculations, study variables, operational definitions etc.
8. I have not seen the treatment outcome.
9. In table 2, there is no need of writing the keys since there is an abbreviation sections.
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Title: Treatment Outcomes of Chronic Liver Disease and Associated Factors among patients
treated at hospitals in Bahir Dar city, North-west Ethiopia
Version: 3 Date: 29 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Tirsit Ketsela Zeleke
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. This study focuses on the assessment of
treatment outcomes and associated factors among patients with chronic liver disease. While the
topic is quite interesting, there are several issues that require extensive revision. I have included
my comments and questions in the attached commented manuscript.
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Version: 3 Date: 29 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Tirsit Ketsela Zeleke
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. This study focuses on the assessment of
treatment outcomes and associated factors among patients with chronic liver disease. While the
topic is quite interesting, there are several issues that require extensive revision. I have included
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Title: Treatment Outcomes of Chronic Liver Disease and Associated Factors among patients
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Version: 3 Date: 30 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While the background offers a broad overview of CLD, there are some sections where
definitions and descriptions could be made more concise. For example, the definition of
chronic liver disease could be rephrased for greater clarity and to avoid repetition. The
phrase "persistent decline of liver functions" is vague—consider specifying the exact functions
(e.g., detoxification, protein synthesis, etc.) and emphasizing the clinical significance of these
declines.
-The manuscript mentions various complications of cirrhosis (e.g., hepatic encephalopathy,
ascites, and variceal bleeding), but the terminology could be more consistent. For instance,
"hepatocellular carcinoma" (HCC) is introduced in the middle of a list without a clear transition.
A clearer structure that first defines cirrhosis-related complications and then transitions into
HCC would improve readability.
-The statistics presented on CLD mortality could be more precise by citing specific sources,
such as the World Health Organization (WHO) or other reputable studies. The claim that "CLD
is the eleventh leading cause of death worldwide" would be more robust with a citation to a
specific source.
-In the bivariate and multivariate analyses, the results could benefit from clearer reporting.
Specifically, the interpretation of the odds ratios (AORs) could be expanded to clarify their
clinical significance. For instance, the finding that decompensated cirrhosis increases the risk
of poor treatment outcomes by 2.7-fold is clear, but providing a brief explanation of how this
translates into clinical practice (e.g., impact on prognosis, need for more intensive treatment)
would be helpful.
-The study uses tables to present data (Tables 1, 2, and 3), but it would be helpful to ensure that
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and easy to interpret. For example, in Table 3, the association between treatment duration and
poor treatment outcomes could be more clearly summarized, with the odds ratios and their
significance highlighted.
-While the study mentions that male gender and rural residence were associated with a higher
prevalence of CLD, the discussion could expand on the implications of these findings. For
example, is there a higher incidence of viral hepatitis or parasitic infections in rural areas? What
role might socioeconomic status, healthcare access, and health education play in the disparity
between urban and rural populations?
-The discussion compares the mortality rate in this study with those in other studies from
Eritrea and Ethiopia. This is useful, but the discussion would benefit from further analysis of the
reasons for the differences in mortality rates. For instance, do the differing mortality rates reflect
differences in disease severity, healthcare access, or therapeutic interventions? Could the lower
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Version: 3 Date: 30 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While the background offers a broad overview of CLD, there are some sections where
definitions and descriptions could be made more concise. For example, the definition of
chronic liver disease could be rephrased for greater clarity and to avoid repetition. The
phrase "persistent decline of liver functions" is vague—consider specifying the exact functions
(e.g., detoxification, protein synthesis, etc.) and emphasizing the clinical significance of these
declines.
-The manuscript mentions various complications of cirrhosis (e.g., hepatic encephalopathy,
ascites, and variceal bleeding), but the terminology could be more consistent. For instance,
"hepatocellular carcinoma" (HCC) is introduced in the middle of a list without a clear transition.
A clearer structure that first defines cirrhosis-related complications and then transitions into
HCC would improve readability.
-The statistics presented on CLD mortality could be more precise by citing specific sources,
such as the World Health Organization (WHO) or other reputable studies. The claim that "CLD
is the eleventh leading cause of death worldwide" would be more robust with a citation to a
specific source.
-In the bivariate and multivariate analyses, the results could benefit from clearer reporting.
Specifically, the interpretation of the odds ratios (AORs) could be expanded to clarify their
clinical significance. For instance, the finding that decompensated cirrhosis increases the risk
of poor treatment outcomes by 2.7-fold is clear, but providing a brief explanation of how this
translates into clinical practice (e.g., impact on prognosis, need for more intensive treatment)
would be helpful.
-The study uses tables to present data (Tables 1, 2, and 3), but it would be helpful to ensure that
all results from statistical tests (e.g., p-values, AORs, confidence intervals) are clearly labeled
and easy to interpret. For example, in Table 3, the association between treatment duration and
poor treatment outcomes could be more clearly summarized, with the odds ratios and their
significance highlighted.
-While the study mentions that male gender and rural residence were associated with a higher
prevalence of CLD, the discussion could expand on the implications of these findings. For
example, is there a higher incidence of viral hepatitis or parasitic infections in rural areas? What
role might socioeconomic status, healthcare access, and health education play in the disparity
between urban and rural populations?
-The discussion compares the mortality rate in this study with those in other studies from
Eritrea and Ethiopia. This is useful, but the discussion would benefit from further analysis of the
reasons for the differences in mortality rates. For instance, do the differing mortality rates reflect
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Title: Treatment Outcomes of Chronic Liver Disease and Associated Factors among patients
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Version: 4 Date: 21 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
The responses are satisfactory.
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Version: 4 Date: 03 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors,
Thank uou very much for adressing the comments and the improvement you made
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Version: 4 Date: 03 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors,
Thank uou very much for adressing the comments and the improvement you made
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Version: 2 Date: 19 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Panagiotis Tsibouris
Reviewer's report:
Unfortunately endoscopical and histological pictures were unavailable Abstract Background
length could be reduced Covariates evaluated should be described Statistics Power of the study
should be calculated FCP has different special gravity for UC and CD Thus sub-analysis might
be worthwhile
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Version: 2 Date: 19 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Panagiotis Tsibouris
Reviewer's report:
Unfortunately endoscopical and histological pictures were unavailable Abstract Background
length could be reduced Covariates evaluated should be described Statistics Power of the study
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Version: 2 Date: 20 Nov 2024
Reviewer: A. Barney Hawthorne
Reviewer's report:
This is a useful, well-written study, with adequate sample size and good methodology.
1) The main limitations are covered in the Discussion, but it would be helpful to spell out clearly,
what I consider to be the major limitation: which is that patients recruited to boost had to be
symptomatic individuals in clinical remission. This has selected a group more likely to have
functional symptoms.
2) the subset with calpro >200 (presumably about 120 pts could be assessed as a subgroup to
see if the associations/lack of associations remained
3)does the use of significant fatigue as an additional factor in the analysis make any difference?
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Reviewer's report:
This is a useful, well-written study, with adequate sample size and good methodology.
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Title: The relationships between depression, inflammation and self-reported disease activity in
IBD and their impact on healthcare usage.
Version: 2 Date: 01 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Yüksel Do#an
Reviewer's report:
What is the article about, what is new?
This article examines the association between depression, self-reported disease activity (SRDA)
and objective measures of inflammation (faecal calprotectin) in people with IBD. It assesses
whether these factors predict healthcare utilisation and economic indicators. The study
highlights the interaction between psychological factors and IBD management using data from
a randomised controlled trial.
As SRDA emerged as a stronger predictor of depression and functional outcomes than FCP, it
suggests that addressing patients' perceptions of disease control may be critical.
Being unemployed appears to play an important role in predicting increased depression. Specific
interventions to support work engagement or vocational rehabilitation may reduce this burden.
Collaborative care models, particularly for younger people and those with high SRDA scores,
combining psychological and medical management may improve outcomes.
1. Missing parts of the article
The introduction could further describe the implications of the gut-brain axis for therapeutic
strategies.
Mechanisms behind the lack of correlation between faecal calprotectin (FCP) and depression
are poorly discussed.
2.. Gaps in grammar
Inconsistent use of tenses (e.g. 'is' and 'was').
Strange phrasing in some sentences such as "Depression and inflammation may be causally
linked in IBD through the gut-brain axis..." could be made more precise.
Minor grammatical errors such as using unnecessary commas and misusing articles (e.g.
"Depression was also associated with..." instead of "Depression was also associated with...").
The data show complex associations between depression, disease activity and inflammation in
IBD. Highlights include the associations between depression and socio-demographic variables
and the predictors of disease activity and inflammation.
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Version: 2 Date: 01 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Yüksel Do#an
Reviewer's report:
What is the article about, what is new?
This article examines the association between depression, self-reported disease activity (SRDA)
and objective measures of inflammation (faecal calprotectin) in people with IBD. It assesses
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highlights the interaction between psychological factors and IBD management using data from
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Minor grammatical errors such as using unnecessary commas and misusing articles (e.g.
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The data show complex associations between depression, disease activity and inflammation in
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Version: 3 Date: 30 Dec 2024
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Version: 3 Date: 30 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
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Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While the introduction mentions that depression may be an "extraintestinal manifestation of
IBD," this point could be better explained. The authors refer to cytokines, microbiota dysbiosis,
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-The introduction mentions limited evidence on the contemporaneous relationships between
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-The discussion contrasts the findings with the conceptual framework of the gut-brain axis,
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the gut-brain axis entirely or suggesting that its effects might be less pronounced in this specific
cohort of IBD patients.
-The authors mention that there were no significant findings when splitting the data by disease
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-The weak negative correlation between SRDA and FCP is discussed, but it could benefit from
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objective marker like FCP? The authors could consider psychological factors, cognitive biases,
or even medication use that may influence patients' perceptions of disease activity independent
of inflammation. This point could be strengthened by referencing literature on the cognitive and
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IBD and their impact on healthcare usage.
Version: 3 Date: 30 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While the introduction mentions that depression may be an "extraintestinal manifestation of
IBD," this point could be better explained. The authors refer to cytokines, microbiota dysbiosis,
and other factors as mechanisms, but the reader may benefit from more explicit clarification on
why depression is thought to be tied to inflammation in the context of IBD specifically (e.g.,
through cytokine release or HPA axis activation).
-A more concise explanation of how FCP specifically relates to both depression and disease
activity (beyond just being an inflammatory marker) could strengthen the argument for why it
is the focal biomarker in this study.
-The introduction mentions limited evidence on the contemporaneous relationships between
depression, disease activity, and SRDA, but the discussion could be expanded to explain some
of the contradictory findings in prior research. For example, how studies have shown both weak
and strong associations between depression and FCP, and why such discrepancies might exist
(e.g., variations in study populations, methodologies, or measurement tools). This could add
nuance to the presentation of prior literature.
-The discussion contrasts the findings with the conceptual framework of the gut-brain axis,
which suggests that depression might lead to inflammation and vice versa. However, the
relationship between these two variables (depression and inflammation) is described as weak or
nonsignificant, which could be confusing. The authors could clarify whether they are rejecting
the gut-brain axis entirely or suggesting that its effects might be less pronounced in this specific
cohort of IBD patients.
-The authors mention that there were no significant findings when splitting the data by disease
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why the relationship between depression and inflammation might differ (or not) between these
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Version: 4 Date: 10 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
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The responses are satisfactory.
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Title: Development and validation of computer-aided detection for colorectal neoplasms using
deep learning incorporated with computed tomography colonography
Version: 2 Date: 09 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Commments 1: I believe it is essential to verify whether there is any overlap of patients across
the test, validation, and training datasets.
Commments 2: Sensitivity, as a true positive measure, does not account for instances where a
lesion is completely missed. Since ensuring no lesion is overlooked is critical for developing a
model fit for the intended purpose, model performance evaluation should also include metrics
such as NPV (Negative Predictive Value) to present the model's effective detection probability.
Commments 3: It would be helpful to provide justification for setting the IoU threshold at 0.125.
Commments 4: Comparing the classification performance with other state-of-the-art (SOTA)
models would strengthen the study. Alternatively, presenting metrics that align with and validate
the reported performance indicators would be valuable. The sensitivity values provided—0.815,
0.738, and 0.883 for lesions # 6 mm, 6 to 10 mm, and # 10 mm, respectively—are difficult to
interpret in isolation. Further context or explanation regarding these metrics is needed.
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Title: Development and validation of computer-aided detection for colorectal neoplasms using
deep learning incorporated with computed tomography colonography
Version: 2 Date: 09 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Commments 1: I believe it is essential to verify whether there is any overlap of patients across
the test, validation, and training datasets.
Commments 2: Sensitivity, as a true positive measure, does not account for instances where a
lesion is completely missed. Since ensuring no lesion is overlooked is critical for developing a
model fit for the intended purpose, model performance evaluation should also include metrics
such as NPV (Negative Predictive Value) to present the model's effective detection probability.
Commments 3: It would be helpful to provide justification for setting the IoU threshold at 0.125.
Commments 4: Comparing the classification performance with other state-of-the-art (SOTA)
models would strengthen the study. Alternatively, presenting metrics that align with and validate
the reported performance indicators would be valuable. The sensitivity values provided—0.815,
0.738, and 0.883 for lesions # 6 mm, 6 to 10 mm, and # 10 mm, respectively—are difficult to
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Title: Development and validation of computer-aided detection for colorectal neoplasms using
deep learning incorporated with computed tomography colonography
Version: 2 Date: 21 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While the abstract and methods mention that lesions # 6 mm were the target for this study,
it would be useful to clarify how lesion annotations were made in more detail. For instance,
how was the agreement between the radiologists who annotated the lesions ensured? Was
there a consensus process or inter-rater reliability testing for annotation? Greater clarity on the
annotation process would help assess the reliability and accuracy of the training data.
-The study defines lesions in three categories: # 6 mm, 6 to 10 mm, and # 10 mm. However,
the rationale for this specific categorization could be further justified. For example, why were
lesions > 10 mm not grouped with those # 6 mm, and how were lesions between 6-10 mm
considered clinically relevant? Some brief justification for these categories would be helpful in
understanding the impact on detection accuracy and sensitivity.
-The study explores the use of CT colonography in two positions (supine and prone) to improve
lesion detection. While the authors mention that merging two positions improved sensitivity,
more information on the statistical analysis and the impact of different positions on lesion
detection would strengthen the interpretation of these results. For instance, what was the average
improvement in sensitivity when using both positions compared to a single position? Were
certain types or sizes of lesions more effectively detected in one position versus the other?
-A major limitation of this study is the absence of an image interpretation experiment in which
a physician independently validates the lesions identified by the AI algorithm. While the AI
algorithm shows promise, comparing the AI’s performance with expert radiologists' assessments
would provide further validation and demonstrate the clinical utility of the AI system in real-
world decision-making.
-The study could also explore the cost-effectiveness and logistical feasibility of implementing
dual-position imaging and AI in a real-world clinical setting, particularly in low-resource
environments where there may be a shortage of radiologists. Economic analyses would be useful
for assessing the value of such technologies in colorectal cancer screening programs.
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Title: Development and validation of computer-aided detection for colorectal neoplasms using
deep learning incorporated with computed tomography colonography
Version: 2 Date: 21 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While the abstract and methods mention that lesions # 6 mm were the target for this study,
it would be useful to clarify how lesion annotations were made in more detail. For instance,
how was the agreement between the radiologists who annotated the lesions ensured? Was
there a consensus process or inter-rater reliability testing for annotation? Greater clarity on the
annotation process would help assess the reliability and accuracy of the training data.
-The study defines lesions in three categories: # 6 mm, 6 to 10 mm, and # 10 mm. However,
the rationale for this specific categorization could be further justified. For example, why were
lesions > 10 mm not grouped with those # 6 mm, and how were lesions between 6-10 mm
considered clinically relevant? Some brief justification for these categories would be helpful in
understanding the impact on detection accuracy and sensitivity.
-The study explores the use of CT colonography in two positions (supine and prone) to improve
lesion detection. While the authors mention that merging two positions improved sensitivity,
more information on the statistical analysis and the impact of different positions on lesion
detection would strengthen the interpretation of these results. For instance, what was the average
improvement in sensitivity when using both positions compared to a single position? Were
certain types or sizes of lesions more effectively detected in one position versus the other?
-A major limitation of this study is the absence of an image interpretation experiment in which
a physician independently validates the lesions identified by the AI algorithm. While the AI
algorithm shows promise, comparing the AI’s performance with expert radiologists' assessments
would provide further validation and demonstrate the clinical utility of the AI system in real-
world decision-making.
-The study could also explore the cost-effectiveness and logistical feasibility of implementing
dual-position imaging and AI in a real-world clinical setting, particularly in low-resource
environments where there may be a shortage of radiologists. Economic analyses would be useful
for assessing the value of such technologies in colorectal cancer screening programs.
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Title: Development and validation of computer-aided detection for colorectal neoplasms using
deep learning incorporated with computed tomography colonography
Version: 2 Date: 22 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for your invitation to review the article titled: “Development and validation
of computer-aided detection using deep learning incorporated with computed tomography
colonography.” Here are my suggestions to improve the article.
While the authors aimed to develop deep learning algorithms using CT colonography, the goal
isn't clearly stated in the title and the beginning of the manuscript. They mention “neoplastic
lesions in CT colonography images,” but it's not clear if this includes all types of metastatic
lesions as well. Given that the data for training comes from colorectal cancer patients, it would
be helpful if the title and manuscript clearly indicated this focus.
Additionally, the manuscript lacks clear inclusion and exclusion criteria, along with information
about the tumor stages, CT properties, and the study duration. The details about the annotation
process, training, and how the data was divided into training and validation sets are also too
vague and general.
Overall, the manuscript suffers from some redundancy and vague language, making it difficult
to extract the necessary details. I recommend rewriting the methodology section to be clearer
and more concise.
At this stage, I believe the manuscript isn’t quite ready for publication and would benefit from
significant revisions before moving forward.
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Title: Development and validation of computer-aided detection for colorectal neoplasms using
deep learning incorporated with computed tomography colonography
Version: 2 Date: 22 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for your invitation to review the article titled: “Development and validation
of computer-aided detection using deep learning incorporated with computed tomography
colonography.” Here are my suggestions to improve the article.
While the authors aimed to develop deep learning algorithms using CT colonography, the goal
isn't clearly stated in the title and the beginning of the manuscript. They mention “neoplastic
lesions in CT colonography images,” but it's not clear if this includes all types of metastatic
lesions as well. Given that the data for training comes from colorectal cancer patients, it would
be helpful if the title and manuscript clearly indicated this focus.
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and more concise.
At this stage, I believe the manuscript isn’t quite ready for publication and would benefit from
significant revisions before moving forward.
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Title: Development and validation of computer-aided detection for colorectal neoplasms using
deep learning incorporated with computed tomography colonography
Version: 5 Date: 10 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
The responses are satisfactory.
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Title: Development and validation of computer-aided detection for colorectal neoplasms using
deep learning incorporated with computed tomography colonography
Version: 5 Date: 10 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
The responses are satisfactory.
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Title: Development and validation of computer-aided detection for colorectal neoplasms using
deep learning incorporated with computed tomography colonography
Version: 6 Date: 26 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
The responses are satisfactory
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 3 Date: 10 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Luis del Carpio-Orantes
Reviewer's report:
After reviewing the modified version of the document, which complies with the reviewers'
observations, I consider it ready to be published.
I consider it to be an interesting exploratory study, supported by tables and appropriate statistics,
so I have no problem with its publication.
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 3 Date: 10 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Luis del Carpio-Orantes
Reviewer's report:
After reviewing the modified version of the document, which complies with the reviewers'
observations, I consider it ready to be published.
I consider it to be an interesting exploratory study, supported by tables and appropriate statistics,
so I have no problem with its publication.
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 3 Date: 10 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The title says "optimization of diagnosis" and therefore implies the assumption that with the
application of a gastrointestinal panel the diagnosis is better, therefore, in this order of ideas,
the methodology would be expected to deal with a study comparing conventional diagnostic
methods (fecal cultures) vs. molecular tests (gastrointestinal panel). However, the words of
the title are not consistent with the methodology. In the methodology section, it is explicitly
mentioned to compare immunocompetent vs. immunocompromised patients. But in the text, a
general description of many other variables and statistical associations is made.
Regarding the meaning of the title, the manuscript only mentions that the differences in
test positivity were seen only by gender, but there were no differences in the chronological
classification of diarrhea, nor differences related to the patients' diseases or immunosuppression
status.
It is well known in the literature that molecular panels favor etiological diagnosis in terms of
sensitivity, specificity and diagnostic accuracy in different clinical scenarios, including patients
with acute diarrhea. We know that molecular panels help in optimizing antibiotic prescription.
Following these ideas, one could then imagine that what is wanted to be explored in this
research with the methodology is whether gastrointestinal panels favor etiological diagnosis in
immunosuppressed patients with diarrhea. In this regard, what is mentioned in the manuscript
is that enterotoxigenic E. coli (ETEC) was more prevalent in immunosuppressed patients (4.7%
vs. 1.4%; P=0.097). But, this does not justify the publication of the manuscript.
Also, it must be said that many ideas and results are explored in the manuscript, but it does not
focus on a single research objective.
After reading it, it is clear that this is a descriptive study. However, in the wording of the
results, they report that only 53% of the patients had a positive molecular GI panel. So, one
wonders, what exactly is being investigated? Based on this result, one would now think that
they are comparing patients with a positive test vs. patients with a negative test, to evaluate
the factors associated with a positive test vs. the factors associated with a negative test. Or
they want to compare the benefits of having a positive test (accurate etiologic diagnosis) vs. a
conventional diagnostic method ("optimization of diagnosis"), in which case, clinical outcomes
(days of hospital stay, mortality, etc.) should be reported.
Again, it is not clear from reading the manuscript what the objective of the research is. This is
evidenced above all by the lack of coherence between the title, the methodology proposed and
developed, and the results reported and discussed.
The results report "Inflammatory diarrhea was present in 60.1%", so one may wonder what other
pathophysiological types of diarrhea did the remaining 39.1% of patients have? If they did not
have inflammatory diarrhea, why were they tested with a gastrointestinal molecular panel? Why
were they doing an exhaustive microbiological etiological search? The question also arises about
what was the clinical selection criteria at the study center to establish which patients are tested
with a gastrointestinal molecular panel. This is important because the title highlights that the
study is being conducted in Colombia, a country with a high level of inequality and in which most
study centers do not have diagnostic molecular gastrointestinal panels available. It is mentioned
that a certain percentage of patients were from the outpatient setting, therefore, one imagines
that the population is quite heterogeneous, decreasing external validity.
The clinical indication for a GI panel is most evident in patients with some form of
immunosuppression (who were 39.1% of the patients) and in patients with sepsis, in whom the
use of antibiotics may be accelerated and in whom obtaining an accurate diagnosis may be crucial
for the outcomes. Despite this, the prevalence of sepsis is not reported in the study. Infectious
etiologies are more common in acute diarrhea. In chronic diarrhea (14% of the patients in the
study) the diarrhea may be watery, fatty (malabsorption), or infectious.
The segment that discusses the impact of the diagnostic test is very interesting. The diagnostic
test only had an impact on 56.7% of the population and in these patients, the impact consisted
in that 45.6% remained WITHOUT antibiotics, therefore, in the Colombian context of limited
economic resources, an expensive test was done to confirm that clinically the patient did not have
an infection and did not need antibiotics (this is important from the point of view of antimicrobial
resistance). If one analyzes this information contrasted with the fact that 41% of the population
only received empirical antimicrobial treatment, the first thing that comes to mind is that the
gastrointestinal panel test was possibly overused. The question remains again as to what are the
clinical criteria for performing this diagnostic test in the study center. If one wants to analyze
the Colombian context, this becomes very relevant. The manuscript says "It was found that the
initiation of initial treatment was more frequent in immunosuppressed patients" but the reported
P value is greater than 0.05 (p=0.082). This should be corrected.
The article contains very interesting data and addresses a clinically relevant topic. I recommend
that the authors reorganize the ideas and the wording of the title and methodology, because from
my point of view, it seems to be a purely descriptive study, but throughout the writing of the
manuscript ideas are expressed that are not related to the methodology or the title. This has to do
precisely with the fact of clearly expressing a specific objective, a clear question to be answered
with the research.
It is mentioned in the title that the study locates patients from the "Colombian context" but the
study is carried out in a highly complex center with many resources, and nothing special is
discussed in the manuscript about the social or economic implications of the study being from
Colombia. This expression "Colombian context" could be omitted.
Was the gastrointestinal panel FilmArray? I think this should be specified in the methodology.
As a suggestion, the authors could focus only on one aspect, for example: 1) on the clinical
impact of the gastrointestinal panel in terms of the prescription of antimicrobials; 2) factors
associated with a positive test vs. factors associated with a negative test (gastrointestinal panel);
3) impact of the gastrointestinal panel on acute diarrhea, or on persistent or chronic diarrhea, or
on immunosuppressed patients with diarrhea, on a specific outcome, etc.
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 3 Date: 10 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The title says "optimization of diagnosis" and therefore implies the assumption that with the
application of a gastrointestinal panel the diagnosis is better, therefore, in this order of ideas,
the methodology would be expected to deal with a study comparing conventional diagnostic
methods (fecal cultures) vs. molecular tests (gastrointestinal panel). However, the words of
the title are not consistent with the methodology. In the methodology section, it is explicitly
mentioned to compare immunocompetent vs. immunocompromised patients. But in the text, a
general description of many other variables and statistical associations is made.
Regarding the meaning of the title, the manuscript only mentions that the differences in
test positivity were seen only by gender, but there were no differences in the chronological
classification of diarrhea, nor differences related to the patients' diseases or immunosuppression
status.
It is well known in the literature that molecular panels favor etiological diagnosis in terms of
sensitivity, specificity and diagnostic accuracy in different clinical scenarios, including patients
with acute diarrhea. We know that molecular panels help in optimizing antibiotic prescription.
Following these ideas, one could then imagine that what is wanted to be explored in this
research with the methodology is whether gastrointestinal panels favor etiological diagnosis in
immunosuppressed patients with diarrhea. In this regard, what is mentioned in the manuscript
is that enterotoxigenic E. coli (ETEC) was more prevalent in immunosuppressed patients (4.7%
vs. 1.4%; P=0.097). But, this does not justify the publication of the manuscript.
Also, it must be said that many ideas and results are explored in the manuscript, but it does not
focus on a single research objective.
After reading it, it is clear that this is a descriptive study. However, in the wording of the
results, they report that only 53% of the patients had a positive molecular GI panel. So, one
wonders, what exactly is being investigated? Based on this result, one would now think that
they are comparing patients with a positive test vs. patients with a negative test, to evaluate
the factors associated with a positive test vs. the factors associated with a negative test. Or
they want to compare the benefits of having a positive test (accurate etiologic diagnosis) vs. a
conventional diagnostic method ("optimization of diagnosis"), in which case, clinical outcomes
(days of hospital stay, mortality, etc.) should be reported.
Again, it is not clear from reading the manuscript what the objective of the research is. This is
evidenced above all by the lack of coherence between the title, the methodology proposed and
developed, and the results reported and discussed.
The results report "Inflammatory diarrhea was present in 60.1%", so one may wonder what other
pathophysiological types of diarrhea did the remaining 39.1% of patients have? If they did not
have inflammatory diarrhea, why were they tested with a gastrointestinal molecular panel? Why
were they doing an exhaustive microbiological etiological search? The question also arises about
what was the clinical selection criteria at the study center to establish which patients are tested
with a gastrointestinal molecular panel. This is important because the title highlights that the
study is being conducted in Colombia, a country with a high level of inequality and in which most
study centers do not have diagnostic molecular gastrointestinal panels available. It is mentioned
that a certain percentage of patients were from the outpatient setting, therefore, one imagines
that the population is quite heterogeneous, decreasing external validity.
The clinical indication for a GI panel is most evident in patients with some form of
immunosuppression (who were 39.1% of the patients) and in patients with sepsis, in whom the
use of antibiotics may be accelerated and in whom obtaining an accurate diagnosis may be crucial
for the outcomes. Despite this, the prevalence of sepsis is not reported in the study. Infectious
etiologies are more common in acute diarrhea. In chronic diarrhea (14% of the patients in the
study) the diarrhea may be watery, fatty (malabsorption), or infectious.
The segment that discusses the impact of the diagnostic test is very interesting. The diagnostic
test only had an impact on 56.7% of the population and in these patients, the impact consisted
in that 45.6% remained WITHOUT antibiotics, therefore, in the Colombian context of limited
economic resources, an expensive test was done to confirm that clinically the patient did not have
an infection and did not need antibiotics (this is important from the point of view of antimicrobial
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only received empirical antimicrobial treatment, the first thing that comes to mind is that the
gastrointestinal panel test was possibly overused. The question remains again as to what are the
clinical criteria for performing this diagnostic test in the study center. If one wants to analyze
the Colombian context, this becomes very relevant. The manuscript says "It was found that the
initiation of initial treatment was more frequent in immunosuppressed patients" but the reported
P value is greater than 0.05 (p=0.082). This should be corrected.
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my point of view, it seems to be a purely descriptive study, but throughout the writing of the
manuscript ideas are expressed that are not related to the methodology or the title. This has to do
precisely with the fact of clearly expressing a specific objective, a clear question to be answered
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discussed in the manuscript about the social or economic implications of the study being from
Colombia. This expression "Colombian context" could be omitted.
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As a suggestion, the authors could focus only on one aspect, for example: 1) on the clinical
impact of the gastrointestinal panel in terms of the prescription of antimicrobials; 2) factors
associated with a positive test vs. factors associated with a negative test (gastrointestinal panel);
3) impact of the gastrointestinal panel on acute diarrhea, or on persistent or chronic diarrhea, or
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 3 Date: 10 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Panagiotis Tsibouris
Reviewer's report:
Abstract Was response to treatment taken into consideration to evaluate the method ? What
authors mean by inflammatory diarrhea? By which method has it been diagnosed? Why
treatment was given empirically while there was a result from stool?Those questions are valid
for methods section as well Methods Definitions of acute, persistent and chronic diarrhea
should be provided Demographic and clinical parameters recorded should be descibed Were
there any additional exclusion criteria apart from age like clinical condition, inability to
provide medical history, metal illnesses? Statistics Would multivariated analysis be useful ?
Results SD should be provided apart from mean Was population homogenious comparing their
dwelling? In patients with C.Difficile , had authors proceeded to treatment without checking
for toxins in stool? Was there any diffrence between in-patients and out-patients? Was there
any difference between inflammatory and non-inflammatory diarrhea? Was there any diffrence
between immucompetent and immunosuppressed patients in identifing more than one organism?
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Version: 3 Date: 10 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Panagiotis Tsibouris
Reviewer's report:
Abstract Was response to treatment taken into consideration to evaluate the method ? What
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Version: 4 Date: 27 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Panagiotis Tsibouris
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Abstract Instead of the statistical methods used it might be better to describe parameters included
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immunocompetent patients concerning defining risk factors for a positive GIP
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Version: 4 Date: 27 Nov 2024
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Version: 4 Date: 14 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Regarding the study, my observations are:
There is no appropriate definition of the cases for study or analysis. The authors only says that
were patients with diarrhea. It does not clarify whether any of these patients were already being
treated or were undergoing a diagnostic approach for chronic diarrhea or if they were carriers
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It does not adequately define whether there were exclusion criteria.
It does not properly spell the scientific names of microorganisms. A virus name should never
be italicized (norovirus is the correct form), only the virus species is always written in italics.
The words enteroaggregative or enteropathogenic or enterotoxigenic that precedes Escherichia
coli should never be written in italics. This reveals a lack of knowledge of basic microbiological
aspects. Use updated name of bacteria; although the panel still maintains the name Clostridium
difficile, the author must use the current name in his paper of Clostridioides difficile.
There is summation in the tables that do not coincide. There were 350 patients but when
analyzed by place or site the sample was taken, they do so based on 348, that means they lose
that information from two patients. Could it have been better if they excluded those 2 patients
from the beginning?
The tables are confusing. For example, it says: Number of bacteria identified: 350. This aspect
of confusion is repeated in several tables.
The wording of some English expressions needs to be improved. Avoid for example the use of
decimal description in prose "Thirty-nine point one".
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 4 Date: 14 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Regarding the study, my observations are:
There is no appropriate definition of the cases for study or analysis. The authors only says that
were patients with diarrhea. It does not clarify whether any of these patients were already being
treated or were undergoing a diagnostic approach for chronic diarrhea or if they were carriers
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It does not adequately define whether there were exclusion criteria.
It does not properly spell the scientific names of microorganisms. A virus name should never
be italicized (norovirus is the correct form), only the virus species is always written in italics.
The words enteroaggregative or enteropathogenic or enterotoxigenic that precedes Escherichia
coli should never be written in italics. This reveals a lack of knowledge of basic microbiological
aspects. Use updated name of bacteria; although the panel still maintains the name Clostridium
difficile, the author must use the current name in his paper of Clostridioides difficile.
There is summation in the tables that do not coincide. There were 350 patients but when
analyzed by place or site the sample was taken, they do so based on 348, that means they lose
that information from two patients. Could it have been better if they excluded those 2 patients
from the beginning?
The tables are confusing. For example, it says: Number of bacteria identified: 350. This aspect
of confusion is repeated in several tables.
The wording of some English expressions needs to be improved. Avoid for example the use of
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 5 Date: 05 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Luis del Carpio-Orantes
Reviewer's report:
After reviewing the revised document and following the reviewers' recommendations, I consider
that these were carried out, so the document is ready to be considered for publication
Just reviewing the entire document, in some segments words in Spanish appear
At the end of the point by point
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 5 Date: 05 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Luis del Carpio-Orantes
Reviewer's report:
After reviewing the revised document and following the reviewers' recommendations, I consider
that these were carried out, so the document is ready to be considered for publication
Just reviewing the entire document, in some segments words in Spanish appear
At the end of the point by point
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 5 Date: 10 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors. I appreciate the corrections you have made. There are still aspects to correct in
search of the best quality of the article so that it can be published in BMC Gastroenterology.
1. I consider that the tables can still be visually enhanced to make them easy to see, analyze
and understand.
2. There are words that are misspelled such as the word Genre which should be Gender.
3. There are also words written in Spanish such as “Positivo” and “Negativo” (Table 2) when
it should be Positive and Negative.
4. There are words that were included but do not have the meaning that is intended. You are
using the word chronicle instead of chronic.
5. The terms EPEC, EAEC, ETEC and ESTEC should not be written in italics.
6. There are words that are written in italics on the tables and that should not be written that way.
Example (Table 3): Acute, Subacute, Trasplant, Hematologic neoplasia, HIV, Solid neoplasm,
etc.
7. The cells or lines of the tables must be adjusted. The first letter of some sentences should be
capitalized, such as I for Inflammatory bowel disease in Table 3.
8. The correct name and as described in the gastrointestinal panel method is Shiga-like toxin-
producing E. coli (STEC) stx1/stx2 and should be spelled as such.
General tip: details make a difference and are an indicator of quality!
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 5 Date: 10 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors. I appreciate the corrections you have made. There are still aspects to correct in
search of the best quality of the article so that it can be published in BMC Gastroenterology.
1. I consider that the tables can still be visually enhanced to make them easy to see, analyze
and understand.
2. There are words that are misspelled such as the word Genre which should be Gender.
3. There are also words written in Spanish such as “Positivo” and “Negativo” (Table 2) when
it should be Positive and Negative.
4. There are words that were included but do not have the meaning that is intended. You are
using the word chronicle instead of chronic.
5. The terms EPEC, EAEC, ETEC and ESTEC should not be written in italics.
6. There are words that are written in italics on the tables and that should not be written that way.
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 6 Date: 29 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The great effort you have made to correct the points indicated is recognized. It would still be
good if in the preview check that "Typeof" is written separately (Table 3)
Otherwise I think this product would be ready to be released.
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Title: Clinical and Microbiological Profile of Patients with Diarrhea Evaluated Using the
Gastrointestinal Panel in a High-Complexity Center
Version: 6 Date: 29 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The great effort you have made to correct the points indicated is recognized. It would still be
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Title: Effect of montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
Version: 2 Date: 21 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
- “Ulcerative colitis (UC) is an autoimmune disease”
No, it is an immune-mediated disease
- Use lower case for Montelukast, Leukotrienes, Mesalamine
- “acute severe UC based on Truelove and Witt’s criteria [18], and attainment of clinical
remission using 1 mg/kg prednisolone”
ASUC should be treated with intravenous methylprednisolone and not with oral prednisolone
- “The number of patients in each group was calculated using PASS software, considering the
result of the previous study [8], and by the presumption of a type I error of 5%, type II error of
20%, and drop-out rate of 20%. Based on this information, we need 90 patients in each group”
What percentage of primary outcome did you expect in the two groups?
- 42.07, 27.25 95% CI: 26.17-28.32 weeks) and placebo group (mean: 20.88; 95% CI: 19.36,
20.40 weeks
Only 1 decimal digit
- Once you have defined an abbreviation, always us it (for example in ulcerative colitis)
- “The first limitation concerns not assessing the histopathological remission.”
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Title: Effect of montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
Version: 2 Date: 21 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
- “Ulcerative colitis (UC) is an autoimmune disease”
No, it is an immune-mediated disease
- Use lower case for Montelukast, Leukotrienes, Mesalamine
- “acute severe UC based on Truelove and Witt’s criteria [18], and attainment of clinical
remission using 1 mg/kg prednisolone”
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What percentage of primary outcome did you expect in the two groups?
- 42.07, 27.25 95% CI: 26.17-28.32 weeks) and placebo group (mean: 20.88; 95% CI: 19.36,
20.40 weeks
Only 1 decimal digit
- Once you have defined an abbreviation, always us it (for example in ulcerative colitis)
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Title: Effect of montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
Version: 2 Date: 23 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
BMC Gastroenterology
Effect of Montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
Although various drugs have been developed for ulcerative colitis, not all cases are able to induce
and maintain remission. In particular, ulcerative colitis is a disease that relapses repeatedly,
so maintenance therapy is important. This study is significant in considering new maintenance
therapies. However, as the author also points out in the limitations, there is a major problem.
There were significant differences in fecal calprotectin, serum CRP, and ESR between the two
groups before intervention. If there is a significant difference in the baseline between the two
groups, would there be no need to change the study design, such as reporting the effects in one
group?
Please provide a table showing the treatment at the time of induction of remission.
Please describe the concomitant use of maintenance drugs and the side effects of Montelukas.
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Title: Effect of montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
Version: 2 Date: 23 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
BMC Gastroenterology
Effect of Montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
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and maintain remission. In particular, ulcerative colitis is a disease that relapses repeatedly,
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Title: Effect of montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
Version: 2 Date: 24 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While excluding patients on biologics (e.g., anti-TNF-# inhibitors) ensures homogeneity in
the study population, it limits the generalizability of the results to patients receiving biologic
therapies, which are increasingly used in UC management. Including a subgroup of biologic-
treated patients could provide insight into how Montelukast might work in combination with or
as an adjunct to biologics.
-The study focuses on UC patients with pancolitis who have achieved remission with
corticosteroids and Mesalamine. The exclusion of patients with other disease manifestations
(e.g., proctitis or left-sided colitis) may limit the applicability of results to all UC subtypes. A
broader cohort would enhance the external validity of the findings.
The study provides an 8-week follow-up after Montelukast and placebo treatments end.
-While this duration is useful for assessing short-term relapse prevention, it does not capture
longer-term outcomes. UC patients may experience relapses beyond the 8-week mark. A longer
follow-up period (e.g., 6 months or 1 year) would better inform clinicians about the sustainability
of the benefits of Montelukast in maintaining remission and preventing long-term relapse.
-While the sample size was calculated to account for dropouts, the handling of missing data
is not discussed. The review would benefit from an explicit mention of how missing data will
be handled (e.g., intention-to-treat analysis) to mitigate any potential bias due to participant
attrition.
-The background discusses the role of leukotrienes in UC and inflammation but does not delve
deeply into the specific mechanisms through which Montelukast might exert its effects on the
colonic inflammation seen in UC. A better understanding of this would strengthen the rationale
for using Montelukast in UC treatment. Additionally, biomarker measurements (e.g., changes in
cytokine levels) could offer more mechanistic insight into Montelukast’s effect on the immune
system.
-The authors mention the lack of histopathological remission as a limitation but fail to fully
address how this could impact the study’s conclusions. While fecal calprotectin is a good
surrogate marker, the absence of histopathological evidence (i.e., endoscopic or biopsy data
showing mucosal healing) is a significant limitation. The authors should further discuss
the potential implications of relying solely on non-invasive markers and acknowledge that
histopathological remission is the gold standard for assessing mucosal healing in UC.
-While the statistical corrections for baseline differences are valid, the authors should provide a
more in-depth discussion of how these initial differences might influence the study outcomes.
Were these adjustments sufficient, or could the differences have confounded the results,
particularly in terms of relapse-free period and biomarker levels?
-The authors discuss anti-inflammatory mechanisms such as the reduction of pro-inflammatory
cytokines and the inhibition of COX-2, but the connection between these mechanisms and the
observed clinical outcomes is not fully explored. While it’s plausible that Montelukast’s anti-
leukotriene effects contributed to the observed clinical benefits, further biomarker analyses or
mechanistic data would have strengthened the argument.
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Title: Effect of montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
Version: 2 Date: 24 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-While excluding patients on biologics (e.g., anti-TNF-# inhibitors) ensures homogeneity in
the study population, it limits the generalizability of the results to patients receiving biologic
therapies, which are increasingly used in UC management. Including a subgroup of biologic-
treated patients could provide insight into how Montelukast might work in combination with or
as an adjunct to biologics.
-The study focuses on UC patients with pancolitis who have achieved remission with
corticosteroids and Mesalamine. The exclusion of patients with other disease manifestations
(e.g., proctitis or left-sided colitis) may limit the applicability of results to all UC subtypes. A
broader cohort would enhance the external validity of the findings.
The study provides an 8-week follow-up after Montelukast and placebo treatments end.
-While this duration is useful for assessing short-term relapse prevention, it does not capture
longer-term outcomes. UC patients may experience relapses beyond the 8-week mark. A longer
follow-up period (e.g., 6 months or 1 year) would better inform clinicians about the sustainability
of the benefits of Montelukast in maintaining remission and preventing long-term relapse.
-While the sample size was calculated to account for dropouts, the handling of missing data
is not discussed. The review would benefit from an explicit mention of how missing data will
be handled (e.g., intention-to-treat analysis) to mitigate any potential bias due to participant
attrition.
-The background discusses the role of leukotrienes in UC and inflammation but does not delve
deeply into the specific mechanisms through which Montelukast might exert its effects on the
colonic inflammation seen in UC. A better understanding of this would strengthen the rationale
for using Montelukast in UC treatment. Additionally, biomarker measurements (e.g., changes in
cytokine levels) could offer more mechanistic insight into Montelukast’s effect on the immune
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-The authors mention the lack of histopathological remission as a limitation but fail to fully
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surrogate marker, the absence of histopathological evidence (i.e., endoscopic or biopsy data
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the potential implications of relying solely on non-invasive markers and acknowledge that
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-While the statistical corrections for baseline differences are valid, the authors should provide a
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-The authors discuss anti-inflammatory mechanisms such as the reduction of pro-inflammatory
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Title: Effect of montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
Version: 3 Date: 17 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for you corrections.
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Title: Effect of montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
Randomized, double-blind controlled clinical trial
Version: 3 Date: 17 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for you corrections.
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Title: Effect of montelukast on remission maintenance in patients with ulcerative colitis: A
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Version: 3 Date: 17 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
The responses are satisfactory.
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Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
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Title: Prognostic and Therapeutic Potential of CXCR6 Expression on CD8+ T Cells in Gastric
Cancer: A Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 0 Date: 23 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
By bioinformatics analysis, the authors uncovered the clinical significance of CD8+ T
cell infiltration in GC patients, as well as found that CXCR6 was mostly expressed in
CD8+ T cells and was clinically significant for GC patients as well as related to an
immunoreactive microenvironment. Finally, CXCR6 expression in immune cells was verified
by immunohistochemistry, and this expression is related to prognosis in GC patients. The
following are specific comments.
1. In the Results section, the authors demonstrated that “Particularly, the grey module showed
a high correlation with the CD8H group (r = 0.65, P < 0.001), and 42 hub genes were identified
within this module.” It is suggested that the 42 hub genes be listed in a table.
2. In the Results section, the authors demonstrated that “Using univariate Cox regression
analysis, we identified CXCR6 as a prognostic gene for GC (P < 0.05) (Supplementary Fig.
2).” What about the association between the remaining 41 hub genes and the prognosis of GC
patients? The authors should clarify why they chose CXCR6 for subsequent study.
3. Figure 6, the conclusion would be more solid if the authors could confirm that CXCR6 is
predominantly expressed in CD8+ T cells in the local patient samples.
4. The authors mentioned Supplementary Table 1 and Supplementary Table 2 in the manuscript,
however they are not available. Please check and provide.
5. According to the manuscript description, Figs. 5b and 5c appear to be in reverse. Please check
and correct.
6. Figures 2 and 6, it is suggested that the survival types be indicated in the images.
7. Some method descriptions in “Analysis of single-cell RNA sequencing data for CXCR6
expression” and “Immunotherapy response” are repeated.
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Title: Prognostic and Therapeutic Potential of CXCR6 Expression on CD8+ T Cells in Gastric
Cancer: A Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 0 Date: 23 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
By bioinformatics analysis, the authors uncovered the clinical significance of CD8+ T
cell infiltration in GC patients, as well as found that CXCR6 was mostly expressed in
CD8+ T cells and was clinically significant for GC patients as well as related to an
immunoreactive microenvironment. Finally, CXCR6 expression in immune cells was verified
by immunohistochemistry, and this expression is related to prognosis in GC patients. The
following are specific comments.
1. In the Results section, the authors demonstrated that “Particularly, the grey module showed
a high correlation with the CD8H group (r = 0.65, P < 0.001), and 42 hub genes were identified
within this module.” It is suggested that the 42 hub genes be listed in a table.
2. In the Results section, the authors demonstrated that “Using univariate Cox regression
analysis, we identified CXCR6 as a prognostic gene for GC (P < 0.05) (Supplementary Fig.
2).” What about the association between the remaining 41 hub genes and the prognosis of GC
patients? The authors should clarify why they chose CXCR6 for subsequent study.
3. Figure 6, the conclusion would be more solid if the authors could confirm that CXCR6 is
predominantly expressed in CD8+ T cells in the local patient samples.
4. The authors mentioned Supplementary Table 1 and Supplementary Table 2 in the manuscript,
however they are not available. Please check and provide.
5. According to the manuscript description, Figs. 5b and 5c appear to be in reverse. Please check
and correct.
6. Figures 2 and 6, it is suggested that the survival types be indicated in the images.
7. Some method descriptions in “Analysis of single-cell RNA sequencing data for CXCR6
expression” and “Immunotherapy response” are repeated.
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Title: Prognostic and Therapeutic Potential of CXCR6 Expression on CD8+ T Cells in Gastric
Cancer: A Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 0 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The topic of the paper is original and statements is fluent and well-written. However, the
manuscript does not sufficiently address the limitations of the study. As this is a retrospective
cohort study, it would be beneficial for the authors to discuss potential sources of bias, such as
selection bias, and the impact of data being collected from a single institution.
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Title: Prognostic and Therapeutic Potential of CXCR6 Expression on CD8+ T Cells in Gastric
Cancer: A Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 0 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The topic of the paper is original and statements is fluent and well-written. However, the
manuscript does not sufficiently address the limitations of the study. As this is a retrospective
cohort study, it would be beneficial for the authors to discuss potential sources of bias, such as
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Title: Prognostic and Therapeutic Potential of CXCR6 Expression on CD8+ T Cells in Gastric
Cancer: A Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 0 Date: 15 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
CXCR6 is chemokine receptor 6, which has an inherent role in the infiltration of immune cells
into the tumor microenvironment. By analyzing the infiltration of immune cells in gastric cancer
tissues, the article discovers the correlation between the infiltration of CD8+ T cells and clinical
characteristics. Furthermore, through the analysis and detection of CXCR6, it is concluded
that CXCR6 could be a potential predictive indicator for the immunotherapy of gastric cancer.
However, most of the data are based on bioinformatics analysis, lacking more robust cell and
animal experiments. The authors have already mentioned this point in the discussion section.
Before the paper can be accepted, I believe the following information is also required:
1. In the univariate analysis, the correlation between CXCR6 and the prognosis of gastric cancer
is mentioned. Could the authors provide the reason for choosing this target? Have they conducted
a multivariate analysis of chemokines? What are the results? These could be elaborated in the
discussion section.
2. Tumor cells can also express chemokine receptors. In the tumor microenvironment, what is
the relationship between the chemokines expressed by gastric cancer cells and those expressed
by CD8+ T cells? Did the authors make corresponding distinctions when conducting the
bioinformatics analysis? Please clarify.
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Title: Prognostic and Therapeutic Potential of CXCR6 Expression on CD8+ T Cells in Gastric
Cancer: A Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 0 Date: 15 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
CXCR6 is chemokine receptor 6, which has an inherent role in the infiltration of immune cells
into the tumor microenvironment. By analyzing the infiltration of immune cells in gastric cancer
tissues, the article discovers the correlation between the infiltration of CD8+ T cells and clinical
characteristics. Furthermore, through the analysis and detection of CXCR6, it is concluded
that CXCR6 could be a potential predictive indicator for the immunotherapy of gastric cancer.
However, most of the data are based on bioinformatics analysis, lacking more robust cell and
animal experiments. The authors have already mentioned this point in the discussion section.
Before the paper can be accepted, I believe the following information is also required:
1. In the univariate analysis, the correlation between CXCR6 and the prognosis of gastric cancer
is mentioned. Could the authors provide the reason for choosing this target? Have they conducted
a multivariate analysis of chemokines? What are the results? These could be elaborated in the
discussion section.
2. Tumor cells can also express chemokine receptors. In the tumor microenvironment, what is
the relationship between the chemokines expressed by gastric cancer cells and those expressed
by CD8+ T cells? Did the authors make corresponding distinctions when conducting the
bioinformatics analysis? Please clarify.
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Title: Prognostic and Therapeutic Potential of CXCR6 Expression on CD8+ T Cells in Gastric
Cancer: A Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 2 Date: 06 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The Authors have addressed the concerns.
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Version: 2 Date: 06 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
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Title: Prognostic and Therapeutic Potential of CXCR6 Expression on CD8+ T Cells in Gastric
Cancer: A Retrospective Cohort Study
Version: 2 Date: 16 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The author has carefully responded to my comments.
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Title: Diagnostic value of peripheral blood inflammatory indices for clinicopathological profile
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Version: 1 Date: 07 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Kang Hu
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Title: Diagnostic value of peripheral blood inflammatory indices for clinicopathological profile
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Title: Diagnostic value of peripheral blood inflammatory indices for clinicopathological profile
of colorectal cancer: A retrospective observational study
Version: 1 Date: 09 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Yinghao Cao
Reviewer's report:
This is an intriguing piece of work in which the authors employed a combination of indicators
from simple, non-invasive and low-cost routine haematological tests to reflect the severity
of systemic inflammation. This was then used to diagnose the clinicopathological features of
colorectal cancer. However, some key issues still need to be clarified.
1. The primary conclusion of the present study was that SIRI possesses considerable diagnostic
value in the identification of metastasis and tumour staging in patients with colorectal cancer.
However, this assertion is not substantiated by the findings of the study. The diagnostic
performance in predicting CRC metastasis was reported to be 61.5% for AUC, 47.4% for
sensitivity, and 33.9% for specificity, indicating that SIRI exhibits a comparatively weak
diagnostic capacity in this domain. The reduced sensitivity of the index may result in the failure
to diagnose metastases in half of patients, while the diminished specificity may lead to an
inaccurate diagnosis in a significant number of non-metastatic patients, consequently increasing
the number of unnecessary follow-up tests and treatments. Due to its intermediate area under the
curve (AUC) value (AUC 0.6-0.7 is often considered to be of intermediate diagnostic value) and
low sensitivity and specificity, SIRI has insufficient diagnostic accuracy if it is used for early
screening or as a metastatic diagnostic tool, and may result in a high false-negative rate, failing
to identify patients at risk of metastasis effectively.
2. In the section dedicated to the methods, the authors incorporated variables with P-values less
than 0.3 in univariate analyses into the multivariate model, a practice that is not commonly
observed. It is recommended that variables with a p-value of less than 0.05 be selected in
multivariate regression analyses rather than 0.3. The rationale for this is that a p-value of less
than 0.05 typically signifies a strong statistical significance, which is in accordance with standard
statistical practice and ensures that the selected variables exhibit a more substantial association
with the outcome. The employment of the more lenient criterion of P < 0.3 as a candidate variable
may result in the introduction of a multitude of variables that are either irrelevant or only weakly
related to the outcomes, thereby diminishing the predictive and explanatory capabilities of the
model. Should there be a desire to explore the impact of the less stringent criteria, the relevant
statistical analyses can be conducted in the paper to compare the differences in the results after
variables with P < 0.05 and P < 0.3 were entered into the model. This would allow for the
validation of the impact of different variable screening strategies on the conclusions.
3. Despite the study's efforts to control for the impact of underlying diseases such as diabetes
and hypertension, there was an omission of consideration of other potential confounders. These
include body mass index (BMI) and lifestyle factors, such as smoking and alcohol consumption.
These factors may influence changes in inflammatory markers in the blood by affecting systemic
levels of inflammation and, in turn, inflammatory markers in the blood. Failure to control for
these variables may result in changes in inflammation indices that do not accurately reflect
the actual state of the tumour. This may lead to increased confounding effects and reduced
independence and clinical accuracy of inflammation indices. Furthermore, the failure to consider
these factors may result in poor reproducibility and generalisation of study results, thereby
limiting their application to different populations.
4. The clinical significance and practical applications of the study were inadequately discussed.
While the study yielded preliminary clinical data, the clinical significance of these findings
remains to be fully explored. Further research is required to elucidate the role of inflammatory
markers such as SIRI and CIPI in clinical decision-making, particularly in the context of early
screening, metastasis prediction and personalised treatment.
5. Despite the study adhering to the STROBE guidelines, the description of the details in terms
of sample selection and case exclusion remains insufficiently clear. It is recommended that the
authors further supplement the study flow chart.
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Version: 1 Date: 09 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Yinghao Cao
Reviewer's report:
This is an intriguing piece of work in which the authors employed a combination of indicators
from simple, non-invasive and low-cost routine haematological tests to reflect the severity
of systemic inflammation. This was then used to diagnose the clinicopathological features of
colorectal cancer. However, some key issues still need to be clarified.
1. The primary conclusion of the present study was that SIRI possesses considerable diagnostic
value in the identification of metastasis and tumour staging in patients with colorectal cancer.
However, this assertion is not substantiated by the findings of the study. The diagnostic
performance in predicting CRC metastasis was reported to be 61.5% for AUC, 47.4% for
sensitivity, and 33.9% for specificity, indicating that SIRI exhibits a comparatively weak
diagnostic capacity in this domain. The reduced sensitivity of the index may result in the failure
to diagnose metastases in half of patients, while the diminished specificity may lead to an
inaccurate diagnosis in a significant number of non-metastatic patients, consequently increasing
the number of unnecessary follow-up tests and treatments. Due to its intermediate area under the
curve (AUC) value (AUC 0.6-0.7 is often considered to be of intermediate diagnostic value) and
low sensitivity and specificity, SIRI has insufficient diagnostic accuracy if it is used for early
screening or as a metastatic diagnostic tool, and may result in a high false-negative rate, failing
to identify patients at risk of metastasis effectively.
2. In the section dedicated to the methods, the authors incorporated variables with P-values less
than 0.3 in univariate analyses into the multivariate model, a practice that is not commonly
observed. It is recommended that variables with a p-value of less than 0.05 be selected in
multivariate regression analyses rather than 0.3. The rationale for this is that a p-value of less
than 0.05 typically signifies a strong statistical significance, which is in accordance with standard
statistical practice and ensures that the selected variables exhibit a more substantial association
with the outcome. The employment of the more lenient criterion of P < 0.3 as a candidate variable
may result in the introduction of a multitude of variables that are either irrelevant or only weakly
related to the outcomes, thereby diminishing the predictive and explanatory capabilities of the
model. Should there be a desire to explore the impact of the less stringent criteria, the relevant
statistical analyses can be conducted in the paper to compare the differences in the results after
variables with P < 0.05 and P < 0.3 were entered into the model. This would allow for the
validation of the impact of different variable screening strategies on the conclusions.
3. Despite the study's efforts to control for the impact of underlying diseases such as diabetes
and hypertension, there was an omission of consideration of other potential confounders. These
include body mass index (BMI) and lifestyle factors, such as smoking and alcohol consumption.
These factors may influence changes in inflammatory markers in the blood by affecting systemic
levels of inflammation and, in turn, inflammatory markers in the blood. Failure to control for
these variables may result in changes in inflammation indices that do not accurately reflect
the actual state of the tumour. This may lead to increased confounding effects and reduced
independence and clinical accuracy of inflammation indices. Furthermore, the failure to consider
these factors may result in poor reproducibility and generalisation of study results, thereby
limiting their application to different populations.
4. The clinical significance and practical applications of the study were inadequately discussed.
While the study yielded preliminary clinical data, the clinical significance of these findings
remains to be fully explored. Further research is required to elucidate the role of inflammatory
markers such as SIRI and CIPI in clinical decision-making, particularly in the context of early
screening, metastasis prediction and personalised treatment.
5. Despite the study adhering to the STROBE guidelines, the description of the details in terms
of sample selection and case exclusion remains insufficiently clear. It is recommended that the
authors further supplement the study flow chart.
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Title: Diagnostic value of peripheral blood inflammatory indices for clinicopathological profile
of colorectal cancer: A retrospective observational study
Version: 1 Date: 14 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Jian Chen
Reviewer's report:
This retrospective study explored the diagnostic value of peripheral blood inflammatory indices
like CIPI and SIRI in CRC. Analyzing 224 patients showed SIRI's link with metastasis and CIPI's
with stage, offering potential for early diagnosis and treatment. The study analyzed correlations
of inflammatory indices with CRC. However, there are some issues that need to be explained
and added by the author, as follows:
1.The basis for determining the sample size is not mentioned, and whether the sample size is
sufficient to fully reflect the overall characteristics is doubtful.
2.In this paper, due to the lack of confirmative cutoff values reported in the literature and the
unsatisfactory ROC curve AUC of most indicators, the median indicator of peripheral blood
inflammation was adopted as the cutoff value of the grouping. Although this approach solved the
grouping problem to a certain extent, it lacked sufficient theoretical and practical basis, which
may lead to inaccurate grouping and further affect the reliability of the results. At the same time,
the correlation between various inflammatory indicators has not been deeply analyzed, and the
independent or synergistic relationship between them in reflecting the pathological process of
CRC cannot be clarified.
3.The study was only based on the detection of inflammatory indicators in a single blood
sample before surgery, and the dynamic changes of inflammatory indicators during treatment
and follow-up were not monitored and analyzed, so its role in disease progression and treatment
response evaluation could not be understood. In addition, no external validation was performed
and the validity of the findings in other independent cohorts was not tested.
4.Further detailed subgroup analysis of patients, in addition to the existing basic factors such
as age and gender, can also consider the molecular subtypes of tumors (such as microsatellite
unstable type, chromosome unstable type, etc.), KRAS, BRAF and other gene mutation status.
The study of the differences in the distribution of inflammatory indicators in different subgroups
of patients and their relationship with clinicopathological features will help to accurately identify
the subgroups of CRC patients who are more sensitive to inflammatory indicators or have unique
response patterns, so as to provide more targeted guidance for personalized medicine.
5.It is recommended to construct a nomogram model to predict the therapeutic response of
CRC patients combined with clinicopathological features, inflammatory indicators and different
treatment modalities (surgery, chemotherapy, radiotherapy, targeted therapy, etc.).
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Title: Diagnostic value of peripheral blood inflammatory indices for clinicopathological profile
of colorectal cancer: A retrospective observational study
Version: 1 Date: 14 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Jian Chen
Reviewer's report:
This retrospective study explored the diagnostic value of peripheral blood inflammatory indices
like CIPI and SIRI in CRC. Analyzing 224 patients showed SIRI's link with metastasis and CIPI's
with stage, offering potential for early diagnosis and treatment. The study analyzed correlations
of inflammatory indices with CRC. However, there are some issues that need to be explained
and added by the author, as follows:
1.The basis for determining the sample size is not mentioned, and whether the sample size is
sufficient to fully reflect the overall characteristics is doubtful.
2.In this paper, due to the lack of confirmative cutoff values reported in the literature and the
unsatisfactory ROC curve AUC of most indicators, the median indicator of peripheral blood
inflammation was adopted as the cutoff value of the grouping. Although this approach solved the
grouping problem to a certain extent, it lacked sufficient theoretical and practical basis, which
may lead to inaccurate grouping and further affect the reliability of the results. At the same time,
the correlation between various inflammatory indicators has not been deeply analyzed, and the
independent or synergistic relationship between them in reflecting the pathological process of
CRC cannot be clarified.
3.The study was only based on the detection of inflammatory indicators in a single blood
sample before surgery, and the dynamic changes of inflammatory indicators during treatment
and follow-up were not monitored and analyzed, so its role in disease progression and treatment
response evaluation could not be understood. In addition, no external validation was performed
and the validity of the findings in other independent cohorts was not tested.
4.Further detailed subgroup analysis of patients, in addition to the existing basic factors such
as age and gender, can also consider the molecular subtypes of tumors (such as microsatellite
unstable type, chromosome unstable type, etc.), KRAS, BRAF and other gene mutation status.
The study of the differences in the distribution of inflammatory indicators in different subgroups
of patients and their relationship with clinicopathological features will help to accurately identify
the subgroups of CRC patients who are more sensitive to inflammatory indicators or have unique
response patterns, so as to provide more targeted guidance for personalized medicine.
5.It is recommended to construct a nomogram model to predict the therapeutic response of
CRC patients combined with clinicopathological features, inflammatory indicators and different
treatment modalities (surgery, chemotherapy, radiotherapy, targeted therapy, etc.).
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Title: Diagnostic value of peripheral blood inflammatory indices for clinicopathological profile
of colorectal cancer: A retrospective observational study
Version: 2 Date: 26 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Yinghao Cao
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript was revised as suggested and recommended to be accepted.
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of colorectal cancer: A retrospective observational study
Version: 2 Date: 26 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Yinghao Cao
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript was revised as suggested and recommended to be accepted.
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Title: Diagnostic value of peripheral blood inflammatory indices for clinicopathological profile
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Version: 2 Date: 26 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Kang Hu
Reviewer's report:
The authors of this paper have addressed some of the questions I raised and have adopted the
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Version: 2 Date: 26 Jan 2025
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Reviewer's report:
The authors of this paper have addressed some of the questions I raised and have adopted the
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 16 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study investigates the association between choledocholithiasis (common bile duct stones)
and cholangiocarcinoma (CCA) using a nationwide cohort from South Korea. Over a 10-
year follow-up of 20,808 patients, the authors observed significantly elevated standardized
incidence ratios (SIRs) for both intrahepatic and extrahepatic CCA among patients with
choledocholithiasis compared to the general population. The results emphasize the increased
risk in specific age groups, notably in individuals aged 60–79.
This is an interesting and potentially impactful study, as it explores the long-debated link
between choledocholithiasis and cholangiocarcinoma. However, as a retrospective cohort study,
its design cannot infer causation, which is crucial to acknowledge in both the abstract and
discussion. The descriptive findings are compelling, but the authors should ensure they do not
overstate the implications of the results without further experimental or mechanistic evidence.
Tumor-Induced Cholestasis: It is unclear how the authors accounted for the possibility that
some cases of choledocholithiasis might have been secondary to tumor-induced cholestasis. Was
imaging reviewed systematically to exclude underlying malignancy at the time of diagnosis?
Addressing this limitation in the discussion would strengthen the study's credibility.
Choledochal Cysts: The analysis does not appear to include an assessment of choledochal cysts,
which are a known risk factor for CCA. Were such cases excluded or accounted for? If not, their
potential contribution to the observed association should be discussed.
Clarity in Methods: While the study design is robust, more detail on the methodology is
necessary. For instance, the rationale for excluding cases diagnosed within two years of
choledocholithiasis is sound but needs additional justification and elaboration in the methods
section.
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 16 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study investigates the association between choledocholithiasis (common bile duct stones)
and cholangiocarcinoma (CCA) using a nationwide cohort from South Korea. Over a 10-
year follow-up of 20,808 patients, the authors observed significantly elevated standardized
incidence ratios (SIRs) for both intrahepatic and extrahepatic CCA among patients with
choledocholithiasis compared to the general population. The results emphasize the increased
risk in specific age groups, notably in individuals aged 60–79.
This is an interesting and potentially impactful study, as it explores the long-debated link
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its design cannot infer causation, which is crucial to acknowledge in both the abstract and
discussion. The descriptive findings are compelling, but the authors should ensure they do not
overstate the implications of the results without further experimental or mechanistic evidence.
Tumor-Induced Cholestasis: It is unclear how the authors accounted for the possibility that
some cases of choledocholithiasis might have been secondary to tumor-induced cholestasis. Was
imaging reviewed systematically to exclude underlying malignancy at the time of diagnosis?
Addressing this limitation in the discussion would strengthen the study's credibility.
Choledochal Cysts: The analysis does not appear to include an assessment of choledochal cysts,
which are a known risk factor for CCA. Were such cases excluded or accounted for? If not, their
potential contribution to the observed association should be discussed.
Clarity in Methods: While the study design is robust, more detail on the methodology is
necessary. For instance, the rationale for excluding cases diagnosed within two years of
choledocholithiasis is sound but needs additional justification and elaboration in the methods
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 19 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
-How do we know in the study that increased association between cholangiocarcinoma and
choledocholithiasis is a true association and not confounded by the age. as the association is
noted higher with older population.?
- Do we have information about what was done in the patient with choledocholithiasis or if they
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acutal long term inflammation actually has an association with the cholangiocarcinoma
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 19 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
-How do we know in the study that increased association between cholangiocarcinoma and
choledocholithiasis is a true association and not confounded by the age. as the association is
noted higher with older population.?
- Do we have information about what was done in the patient with choledocholithiasis or if they
were symptomatic. Any intervention was done for the diagnosis. It might be meaningful if an
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 20 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The article is a interesting work, which a very high number of patients enrolled in this original
papers. There are some data in the literature, which find out that chronic inflammation produce
the transformation of malignant disease in this case cholangiocarcinoma. I think the author's,
must describe if it is a difference between people treated with ERCP and they treated surgically
of appearances of cholangiocarcinoma.
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 20 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The article is a interesting work, which a very high number of patients enrolled in this original
papers. There are some data in the literature, which find out that chronic inflammation produce
the transformation of malignant disease in this case cholangiocarcinoma. I think the author's,
must describe if it is a difference between people treated with ERCP and they treated surgically
of appearances of cholangiocarcinoma.
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 21 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I thank the authors for undertaking this research and for providing valuable evidence from a
nationwide cohort.
I have one major comment regarding the manuscript, which pertains to revising the methodology
section for greater clarity and coherence. There is potential for confusion among readers, as
some content that should belong in the methodology is currently included in the introduction.
Additionally, some results are reported that are not explicitly described in the methodology.
Additionally, the terminology should be sufficiently clear to accommodate researchers
unfamiliar with the databases used in South Korea. For example, the phrase "another for specific
information on provided services" on lines 95–96 could benefit from additional explanation.
Overall, the methodology should be both comprehensive to present all the work that has been
done and clear so all readers could benefit and understand the research.
Specific suggestions are as follows:
1. On page 4, the databases are explained in two sections: introduction and methods. I suggest
a clearer and more coherent section only in the methodology.
2. On page 4, the ethical approvals are discussed in the database section which seems a bit out
of order. I recommend a separate section for ethical considerations.
3. On page 6, lines 149–150, please consider adding the raw numbers alongside the percentages
in parentheses for clarity.
4. Results are reported for the first two years and the subsequent years, but this distinction is
not specified in the methods section. I suggest ensuring consistency between the methods and
results in terms of describing the analyses and findings.
5. Similarly, an analysis excluding cases from the first two years is presented without prior
mention in the methods section. I recommend adding all analyses in the methods section.
6. On page 17, Table 2's title reads "before" diagnosis, but the table states "within 0-2 years." I
suggest consistent terminology to avoid confusion.
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 21 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I thank the authors for undertaking this research and for providing valuable evidence from a
nationwide cohort.
I have one major comment regarding the manuscript, which pertains to revising the methodology
section for greater clarity and coherence. There is potential for confusion among readers, as
some content that should belong in the methodology is currently included in the introduction.
Additionally, some results are reported that are not explicitly described in the methodology.
Additionally, the terminology should be sufficiently clear to accommodate researchers
unfamiliar with the databases used in South Korea. For example, the phrase "another for specific
information on provided services" on lines 95–96 could benefit from additional explanation.
Overall, the methodology should be both comprehensive to present all the work that has been
done and clear so all readers could benefit and understand the research.
Specific suggestions are as follows:
1. On page 4, the databases are explained in two sections: introduction and methods. I suggest
a clearer and more coherent section only in the methodology.
2. On page 4, the ethical approvals are discussed in the database section which seems a bit out
of order. I recommend a separate section for ethical considerations.
3. On page 6, lines 149–150, please consider adding the raw numbers alongside the percentages
in parentheses for clarity.
4. Results are reported for the first two years and the subsequent years, but this distinction is
not specified in the methods section. I suggest ensuring consistency between the methods and
results in terms of describing the analyses and findings.
5. Similarly, an analysis excluding cases from the first two years is presented without prior
mention in the methods section. I recommend adding all analyses in the methods section.
6. On page 17, Table 2's title reads "before" diagnosis, but the table states "within 0-2 years." I
suggest consistent terminology to avoid confusion.
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 2 Date: 31 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
My concerns have been addressed.
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Reviewer's report:
My concerns have been addressed.
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 2 Date: 31 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The article it is well improved after the revision and can be accepted in the current form.
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The article it is well improved after the revision and can be accepted in the current form.
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 2 Date: 08 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
I thank the authors for addressing all the comments provided.
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 2 Date: 08 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
I thank the authors for addressing all the comments provided.
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 2 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Cecilia Stromberg
Reviewer's report:
This is a well performed study and a well written manuscript well in agreement with previous
findings.
1. How accurate is the diagnosis of bile duct stones in the databases you have used? Has the
databases been validated ?
2. How were the stones treated? Did all patients have an ERCP ? How many had
sphincterotomy? Open surgery? Do these groups differ regarding risk of ECC or ICC?
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 2 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Cecilia Stromberg
Reviewer's report:
This is a well performed study and a well written manuscript well in agreement with previous
findings.
1. How accurate is the diagnosis of bile duct stones in the databases you have used? Has the
databases been validated ?
2. How were the stones treated? Did all patients have an ERCP ? How many had
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 2 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors have performed a retrospective cohort study of cholangiocarcinoma risk in
individuals diagnosed with choledocholithiasis to assess whether choledocholithiasis is an
independent risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma. This was done in a large administrative
database in South Korea (the NHIS). I have received this manuscript for review after an
initial review by two other reviewers and after the authors have responded to the original
reviewers' comments. They separately assessed incidence of cholangiocarcinoma in the first 2
years after choledocholithiasis diagnosis and after the first 2 years. The authors have responded
to the main concerns expressed by the original reviewers and appropriately contextualized
the associations measured as being inadequate to demonstrate causality. I have the following
additional comments:
In the introduction, the authors state that prior studies demonstrating an association between
choledocholithiasis and cholangiocarcinoma require further validation because of their case-
control design. However, both cohort and case control studies are at risk of bias introduced
by investigators; a well-designed case control study with appropriate control selection is not
inherently less valid than a cohort design. I suggest altering the language or being more specific
if the source case-control studies had significant flaws in control selection or other key design
features.
In the results section, the outcomes of cholangiocarcinoma should be reported as "diagnosed"
not "developed"; for example, in line 179, I suggest the following wording: "In almost half of
the patients diagnosed with ECA, almost half received this diagnosis within the first 2 years
after choledocholithiasis diagnosis." It is not known from the administrative dataset when in
each patient's history they developed the cancer, only when it was diagnosed.
There are frequently short delays in the capture of diagnoses in administrative databases that do
not reflect clinically meaningful sequence of events. For example, a patient is diagnosed with
one condition and within a few weeks the second condition is discovered in further work up,
but they were both truly present at the time of the first diagnosis. I suggest adding a period in
which the diagnoses are considered contemporaneous (something like 90 days) to distinguish
between cholangiocarcinoma that is diagnosed as part of the same "illness episode" as the
choledocholithiasis and cholangiocarcinoma that is diagnosed separately in the future.
The possibility that choledocholithiasis is a presenting symptom of existing cholangiocarcinoma
is supported by the stronger association between choledocholithiasis and extrahepatic
cholangiocarcinoma with a steeper slope in the earliest period of the cumulative incidence
curve. This is addressed by the authors in the discussion, but a brief exclusion period (described
above) could also address this methodologically. (The authors performed a sensitivity analysis
in which they excluded all cholangiocarcinoma that develops within the first 2 years of
choledocholithiasis diagnosis in their analyses.)
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Title: Choledocholithiasis as a risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma: a nationwide retrospective
cohort study
Version: 2 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors have performed a retrospective cohort study of cholangiocarcinoma risk in
individuals diagnosed with choledocholithiasis to assess whether choledocholithiasis is an
independent risk factor for cholangiocarcinoma. This was done in a large administrative
database in South Korea (the NHIS). I have received this manuscript for review after an
initial review by two other reviewers and after the authors have responded to the original
reviewers' comments. They separately assessed incidence of cholangiocarcinoma in the first 2
years after choledocholithiasis diagnosis and after the first 2 years. The authors have responded
to the main concerns expressed by the original reviewers and appropriately contextualized
the associations measured as being inadequate to demonstrate causality. I have the following
additional comments:
In the introduction, the authors state that prior studies demonstrating an association between
choledocholithiasis and cholangiocarcinoma require further validation because of their case-
control design. However, both cohort and case control studies are at risk of bias introduced
by investigators; a well-designed case control study with appropriate control selection is not
inherently less valid than a cohort design. I suggest altering the language or being more specific
if the source case-control studies had significant flaws in control selection or other key design
features.
In the results section, the outcomes of cholangiocarcinoma should be reported as "diagnosed"
not "developed"; for example, in line 179, I suggest the following wording: "In almost half of
the patients diagnosed with ECA, almost half received this diagnosis within the first 2 years
after choledocholithiasis diagnosis." It is not known from the administrative dataset when in
each patient's history they developed the cancer, only when it was diagnosed.
There are frequently short delays in the capture of diagnoses in administrative databases that do
not reflect clinically meaningful sequence of events. For example, a patient is diagnosed with
one condition and within a few weeks the second condition is discovered in further work up,
but they were both truly present at the time of the first diagnosis. I suggest adding a period in
which the diagnoses are considered contemporaneous (something like 90 days) to distinguish
between cholangiocarcinoma that is diagnosed as part of the same "illness episode" as the
choledocholithiasis and cholangiocarcinoma that is diagnosed separately in the future.
The possibility that choledocholithiasis is a presenting symptom of existing cholangiocarcinoma
is supported by the stronger association between choledocholithiasis and extrahepatic
cholangiocarcinoma with a steeper slope in the earliest period of the cumulative incidence
curve. This is addressed by the authors in the discussion, but a brief exclusion period (described
above) could also address this methodologically. (The authors performed a sensitivity analysis
in which they excluded all cholangiocarcinoma that develops within the first 2 years of
choledocholithiasis diagnosis in their analyses.)
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Title: Safety and efficacy of ciprofol versus propofol for gastrointestinal endoscopy: a meta-
analysis
Version: 0 Date: 29 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Amira A A Othman
Reviewer's report:
Abstract:
1. Emphasize statistical tests used to support conclusions, particularly for crucial metrics like
sedation success rate and adverse reaction outcomes.
2. Emphasize the study's novelty and contribution to current research in the abstract's final
sentence.
Introduction:
3. Include new advancements or studies on ciprofol's use outside of gastrointestinal procedures
to enhance the case for its assessment.
4. Clearly explain the gap in the literature that your meta-analysis addresses, such as the need
for age-specific safety and efficacy data on ciprofol.
Methods:
5. Describe the inclusion/exclusion criteria, including how language barriers (if any) were
addressed.
6. Explain how the 17 studies were selected after assessing 1032 publications for repeatability.
7. Explain in greater detail how heterogeneity was addressed (for example, thresholds for
switching between fixed and random effects models).
8. Indicate whether publication bias (more than just a funnel plot) was statistically evaluated,
e.g., Egger's test.
9. Describe how potential biases (such as funding sources and study quality) were handled in
individual studies.
Results:
10. The findings section is detailed but overcrowded. Use bullet points or a summary table to
emphasize significant outcomes such as sedative efficacy, induction time, and adverse events.
11. Explain why younger patients may have different outcomes (such as longer induction
durations) than older people.
12. Figures (e.g., bias assessment, forest plots) might use more explicit legends to help readers
new to meta-analysis norms.
Discussion:
13. Discuss the clinical implications of ciprofol's decreased adverse event rates, particularly the
possible impact on elderly patients and those with comorbidities.
14. Discuss how your findings compare to those of other studies evaluating anesthetic
alternatives to propofol.
15. Strengthen the constraints by addressing study design variability and the insufficient
geographical diversity of the included studies.
Conclusion:
15. Add specific recommendations for clinicians considering ciprofol, e.g., its suitability for
elderly patients or specific procedural contexts.
General Notes:
16. The manuscript needs review for minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.
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Title: Safety and efficacy of ciprofol versus propofol for gastrointestinal endoscopy: a meta-
analysis
Version: 0 Date: 29 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Amira A A Othman
Reviewer's report:
Abstract:
1. Emphasize statistical tests used to support conclusions, particularly for crucial metrics like
sedation success rate and adverse reaction outcomes.
2. Emphasize the study's novelty and contribution to current research in the abstract's final
sentence.
Introduction:
3. Include new advancements or studies on ciprofol's use outside of gastrointestinal procedures
to enhance the case for its assessment.
4. Clearly explain the gap in the literature that your meta-analysis addresses, such as the need
for age-specific safety and efficacy data on ciprofol.
Methods:
5. Describe the inclusion/exclusion criteria, including how language barriers (if any) were
addressed.
6. Explain how the 17 studies were selected after assessing 1032 publications for repeatability.
7. Explain in greater detail how heterogeneity was addressed (for example, thresholds for
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8. Indicate whether publication bias (more than just a funnel plot) was statistically evaluated,
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9. Describe how potential biases (such as funding sources and study quality) were handled in
individual studies.
Results:
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emphasize significant outcomes such as sedative efficacy, induction time, and adverse events.
11. Explain why younger patients may have different outcomes (such as longer induction
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12. Figures (e.g., bias assessment, forest plots) might use more explicit legends to help readers
new to meta-analysis norms.
Discussion:
13. Discuss the clinical implications of ciprofol's decreased adverse event rates, particularly the
possible impact on elderly patients and those with comorbidities.
14. Discuss how your findings compare to those of other studies evaluating anesthetic
alternatives to propofol.
15. Strengthen the constraints by addressing study design variability and the insufficient
geographical diversity of the included studies.
Conclusion:
15. Add specific recommendations for clinicians considering ciprofol, e.g., its suitability for
elderly patients or specific procedural contexts.
General Notes:
16. The manuscript needs review for minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.
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Title: Safety and efficacy of ciprofol versus propofol for gastrointestinal endoscopy: a meta-
analysis
Version: 0 Date: 04 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors,
Overall, this manuscript presents a well-conducted meta-analysis that provides valuable insights
into the use of ciprofol versus propofol for painless gastrointestinal endoscopy. The findings
are clinically relevant, particularly regarding the safety profile of ciprofol, which could improve
patient experience and reduce adverse effects during gastrointestinal procedures. The paper
is well-written and informative, though some minor improvements in clarity and detail could
enhance the manuscript further.
Strengths:
The manuscript provides a thorough and systematic analysis of randomized controlled trials,
ensuring a high level of evidence for the comparisons drawn.
The choice of outcome measures is appropriate for assessing both the clinical efficacy and safety
of the anesthetic agents.
The statistical analyses are robust, and the reporting of results is clear and comprehensive,
including subgroup analyses.
Suggestions for Improvement:
The introduction could benefit from a brief discussion on the mechanism of action of both drugs
(ciprofol and propofol), providing a deeper understanding of how ciprofol might reduce side
effects compared to propofol.
The manuscript could delve a bit more into the clinical implications of the findings. For example,
how would the lower incidence of adverse events (injection pain, respiratory depression) affect
clinical practice, especially in high-risk populations?
While the study considers various adverse events, the authors could briefly discuss any potential
benefits or trade-offs of ciprofol, particularly its higher potency. This could raise awareness
about how this may influence dosing protocols and patient safety.
The limitations section could be expanded to address potential publication bias, heterogeneity
among studies, and the lack of data on long-term outcomes.
Minor Concerns:
Typographical errors such as "cipepofol" should be corrected for consistency in terminology
(e.g., "ciprofol").
The clarity of certain sentences can be improved for ease of reading. For instance, some complex
sentence structures could be simplified.
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Title: Safety and efficacy of ciprofol versus propofol for gastrointestinal endoscopy: a meta-
analysis
Version: 0 Date: 04 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors,
Overall, this manuscript presents a well-conducted meta-analysis that provides valuable insights
into the use of ciprofol versus propofol for painless gastrointestinal endoscopy. The findings
are clinically relevant, particularly regarding the safety profile of ciprofol, which could improve
patient experience and reduce adverse effects during gastrointestinal procedures. The paper
is well-written and informative, though some minor improvements in clarity and detail could
enhance the manuscript further.
Strengths:
The manuscript provides a thorough and systematic analysis of randomized controlled trials,
ensuring a high level of evidence for the comparisons drawn.
The choice of outcome measures is appropriate for assessing both the clinical efficacy and safety
of the anesthetic agents.
The statistical analyses are robust, and the reporting of results is clear and comprehensive,
including subgroup analyses.
Suggestions for Improvement:
The introduction could benefit from a brief discussion on the mechanism of action of both drugs
(ciprofol and propofol), providing a deeper understanding of how ciprofol might reduce side
effects compared to propofol.
The manuscript could delve a bit more into the clinical implications of the findings. For example,
how would the lower incidence of adverse events (injection pain, respiratory depression) affect
clinical practice, especially in high-risk populations?
While the study considers various adverse events, the authors could briefly discuss any potential
benefits or trade-offs of ciprofol, particularly its higher potency. This could raise awareness
about how this may influence dosing protocols and patient safety.
The limitations section could be expanded to address potential publication bias, heterogeneity
among studies, and the lack of data on long-term outcomes.
Minor Concerns:
Typographical errors such as "cipepofol" should be corrected for consistency in terminology
(e.g., "ciprofol").
The clarity of certain sentences can be improved for ease of reading. For instance, some complex
sentence structures could be simplified.
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Version: 0 Date: 05 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Ronald Mbiine
Reviewer's report:
This is a very informative manuscript.
It has been extensively and exhaustively research and the methods including the analyis is
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The grammar is good and the manuscript has good coherent flow with appropriate cross-
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Title: Safety and efficacy of ciprofol versus propofol for gastrointestinal endoscopy: a meta-
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Version: 0 Date: 05 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Ronald Mbiine
Reviewer's report:
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Title: Safety and efficacy of ciprofol versus propofol for gastrointestinal endoscopy: a meta-
analysis
Version: 1 Date: 03 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Amira A A Othman
Reviewer's report:
I want to extend my congratulations to all those involved in this work. All the required
amendments have already been made carefully and satisfactorily. I hope that the research will
be presented to science.
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Version: 1 Date: 03 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Amira A A Othman
Reviewer's report:
I want to extend my congratulations to all those involved in this work. All the required
amendments have already been made carefully and satisfactorily. I hope that the research will
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Title: Safety and efficacy of ciprofol versus propofol for gastrointestinal endoscopy: a meta-
analysis
Version: 1 Date: 05 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript presents a well-structured methodology for conducting a systematic review
and meta-analysis to compare ciprofol and propofol in the context of painless gastrointestinal
endoscopy. Below is a detailed commentary on various aspects of the manuscript:
Strengths:
Comprehensive Search Strategy:
The inclusion of multiple reputable databases (PubMed, Embase, Cochrane, CNKI, WanFang,
VIP) is a significant strength. This wide coverage ensures that relevant studies from different
regions and disciplines are considered, minimizing publication bias.
The search terms are appropriately selected, covering both drugs (ciprofol and propofol) and
the procedures (gastrointestinal endoscopy, colonoscopy, and gastroscopy), making the search
exhaustive.
Clear Inclusion and Exclusion Criteria:
The inclusion criteria are well-defined, ensuring the selection of RCTs with valid data.
Specifically, the requirement that the test and control groups use only ciprofol and propofol
ensures a focused comparison.
The exclusion criteria are thorough, addressing various study types and methodological flaws
(e.g., non-RCTs, unpublished studies), which helps ensure the reliability of the results.
Objective Outcome Measures:
The focus on sedation effectiveness, major ADRs, and anesthesia-related time indicators is
appropriate for this type of comparison. These are clinically relevant and will provide valuable
information on both drugs' safety and efficacy.
The sedation effectiveness definition is practical, emphasizing the success of the procedure
and the requirement for minimal additional sedation, which is a useful measure of clinical
effectiveness.
Bias Risk Assessment:
The use of a risk of bias assessment tool (with categories like random sequence generation,
allocation concealment, blinding, etc.) ensures that the included studies are of high
methodological quality.
By categorizing studies based on their risk of bias (low, unclear, or high), the manuscript
acknowledges potential study weaknesses, which adds transparency and rigor to the analysis.
Robust Statistical Analysis:
The detailed statistical methods, including the use of fixed or random effects models depending
on heterogeneity, are well-considered and follow accepted guidelines for meta-analysis.
The inclusion of publication bias assessment through funnel plots and Egger’s test is crucial in
ensuring that the results are not influenced by small-study effects.
The significance level of P < 0.05 and the use of sensitivity analysis further ensure the reliability
of the findings.
Transparent and Reproducible Process:
The method of independent literature screening and data extraction by two researchers adds
rigor and reduces the potential for bias. The cross-checking process between researchers ensures
consistency and accuracy.
Areas for Improvement:
Clarity on the Definition of "Sedation Effectiveness":
While sedation effectiveness is clearly defined, it may be useful to expand on the exact
criteria for defining "successful completion" of the gastrointestinal endoscopy. Are there any
specific measures of procedure success beyond the need for additional sedation (e.g., procedural
complications or patient comfort)? This could help clarify the outcome measure further.
Consideration of Adverse Drug Reactions (ADRs):
The manuscript mentions major ADRs such as hypotension, bradycardia, injection pain, and
respiratory depression but does not detail the method for categorizing the severity or incidence
of these ADRs. Providing more specific criteria or guidance on how ADRs will be assessed and
reported would be helpful for readers.
It would be beneficial to specify whether the ADRs are to be classified as minor or major, and
how these would be weighted in the analysis.
Language Considerations:
The inclusion of literature published in languages other than Chinese and English is excluded.
While this decision helps maintain a manageable scope, it may introduce bias by excluding
studies published in other languages (e.g., European languages). Expanding the language
inclusion criteria or discussing the potential impact of this limitation on generalizability would
be useful.
External Validity of Results:
While the inclusion criteria are comprehensive, the lack of any specific mention of underlying
patient characteristics (e.g., age-related comorbidities or previous sedation history) may affect
the generalizability of the results to specific subpopulations. Including or discussing these
potential factors might provide a more nuanced understanding of the drugs' effectiveness in
varied patient groups.
Potential Limitations in Handling Heterogeneity:
The manuscript appropriately plans to use a random-effects model in cases of high heterogeneity,
but further discussion of potential causes for heterogeneity would be valuable. For example,
differences in study populations, dosages, or the type of gastrointestinal procedure could
introduce variability. A sensitivity analysis that investigates these factors might provide more
clarity.
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Title: Safety and efficacy of ciprofol versus propofol for gastrointestinal endoscopy: a meta-
analysis
Version: 1 Date: 05 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript presents a well-structured methodology for conducting a systematic review
and meta-analysis to compare ciprofol and propofol in the context of painless gastrointestinal
endoscopy. Below is a detailed commentary on various aspects of the manuscript:
Strengths:
Comprehensive Search Strategy:
The inclusion of multiple reputable databases (PubMed, Embase, Cochrane, CNKI, WanFang,
VIP) is a significant strength. This wide coverage ensures that relevant studies from different
regions and disciplines are considered, minimizing publication bias.
The search terms are appropriately selected, covering both drugs (ciprofol and propofol) and
the procedures (gastrointestinal endoscopy, colonoscopy, and gastroscopy), making the search
exhaustive.
Clear Inclusion and Exclusion Criteria:
The inclusion criteria are well-defined, ensuring the selection of RCTs with valid data.
Specifically, the requirement that the test and control groups use only ciprofol and propofol
ensures a focused comparison.
The exclusion criteria are thorough, addressing various study types and methodological flaws
(e.g., non-RCTs, unpublished studies), which helps ensure the reliability of the results.
Objective Outcome Measures:
The focus on sedation effectiveness, major ADRs, and anesthesia-related time indicators is
appropriate for this type of comparison. These are clinically relevant and will provide valuable
information on both drugs' safety and efficacy.
The sedation effectiveness definition is practical, emphasizing the success of the procedure
and the requirement for minimal additional sedation, which is a useful measure of clinical
effectiveness.
Bias Risk Assessment:
The use of a risk of bias assessment tool (with categories like random sequence generation,
allocation concealment, blinding, etc.) ensures that the included studies are of high
methodological quality.
By categorizing studies based on their risk of bias (low, unclear, or high), the manuscript
acknowledges potential study weaknesses, which adds transparency and rigor to the analysis.
Robust Statistical Analysis:
The detailed statistical methods, including the use of fixed or random effects models depending
on heterogeneity, are well-considered and follow accepted guidelines for meta-analysis.
The inclusion of publication bias assessment through funnel plots and Egger’s test is crucial in
ensuring that the results are not influenced by small-study effects.
The significance level of P < 0.05 and the use of sensitivity analysis further ensure the reliability
of the findings.
Transparent and Reproducible Process:
The method of independent literature screening and data extraction by two researchers adds
rigor and reduces the potential for bias. The cross-checking process between researchers ensures
consistency and accuracy.
Areas for Improvement:
Clarity on the Definition of "Sedation Effectiveness":
While sedation effectiveness is clearly defined, it may be useful to expand on the exact
criteria for defining "successful completion" of the gastrointestinal endoscopy. Are there any
specific measures of procedure success beyond the need for additional sedation (e.g., procedural
complications or patient comfort)? This could help clarify the outcome measure further.
Consideration of Adverse Drug Reactions (ADRs):
The manuscript mentions major ADRs such as hypotension, bradycardia, injection pain, and
respiratory depression but does not detail the method for categorizing the severity or incidence
of these ADRs. Providing more specific criteria or guidance on how ADRs will be assessed and
reported would be helpful for readers.
It would be beneficial to specify whether the ADRs are to be classified as minor or major, and
how these would be weighted in the analysis.
Language Considerations:
The inclusion of literature published in languages other than Chinese and English is excluded.
While this decision helps maintain a manageable scope, it may introduce bias by excluding
studies published in other languages (e.g., European languages). Expanding the language
inclusion criteria or discussing the potential impact of this limitation on generalizability would
be useful.
External Validity of Results:
While the inclusion criteria are comprehensive, the lack of any specific mention of underlying
patient characteristics (e.g., age-related comorbidities or previous sedation history) may affect
the generalizability of the results to specific subpopulations. Including or discussing these
potential factors might provide a more nuanced understanding of the drugs' effectiveness in
varied patient groups.
Potential Limitations in Handling Heterogeneity:
The manuscript appropriately plans to use a random-effects model in cases of high heterogeneity,
but further discussion of potential causes for heterogeneity would be valuable. For example,
differences in study populations, dosages, or the type of gastrointestinal procedure could
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 2 Date: 02 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
In this manuscript entitled “Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of
gallstones in US adults”, the authors examined the association between relative fat mass (RFM)
and gallstone. Although this is an interesting topic, there are several points which should be
clarified in the current paper.
1. The RFM is not a simple score to calculate. The authors should explain the clinical rationale
of this study.
2. Although the RFM was superior to BMI, the AUC was not strong enough as a marker (<0.7)
3. The authors should explain the reference article of RFM in the method section.
4. This study shows better ability to identify gallstone than the present work (PMID: 39881275).
The authors should compare and make a discussion.
5. Body fat accumulation is also associated with steatotic liver disease. The authors should
compare and make a discussion (PMID: 37143429).
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 2 Date: 02 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
In this manuscript entitled “Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of
gallstones in US adults”, the authors examined the association between relative fat mass (RFM)
and gallstone. Although this is an interesting topic, there are several points which should be
clarified in the current paper.
1. The RFM is not a simple score to calculate. The authors should explain the clinical rationale
of this study.
2. Although the RFM was superior to BMI, the AUC was not strong enough as a marker (<0.7)
3. The authors should explain the reference article of RFM in the method section.
4. This study shows better ability to identify gallstone than the present work (PMID: 39881275).
The authors should compare and make a discussion.
5. Body fat accumulation is also associated with steatotic liver disease. The authors should
compare and make a discussion (PMID: 37143429).
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 2 Date: 04 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-The introduction is strong but could benefit from a more explicit definition of relative fat
mass (RFM) in the context of this study. You mention that it is a measure of obesity but could
emphasize more why RFM is a better predictor compared to BMI, especially for understanding
fat distribution, which may be more relevant to gallstone formation.
-The discussion of gallstone risk factors could be expanded slightly. While you list common risk
factors (e.g., obesity, metabolic syndrome, etc.), it would be helpful to include a brief overview
of the pathophysiology behind gallstone formation to provide more context as to why RFM
might be linked to the disease.
-The exclusion criteria are mentioned but not explained in detail in the text. You refer to "Fig.
1," but ensure that this figure is properly described in the text or supplemented with more
information in the methods section.
-While the measurement of RFM is described, it might help to provide more context about the
formula’s validity or its adoption in previous research, especially when introducing it as a more
accurate measure than BMI. A brief comparison of RFM’s reliability in other studies would add
credibility to its use here.
-While you mention that this is the first thorough examination of the relationship between
RFM and gallstones, it might be helpful to briefly reintroduce RFM’s definition in this section,
especially for readers who may not be familiar with the term. You described its role in predicting
obesity-related health outcomes earlier, but reiterating why RFM is a better measure than BMI
in this context would help reinforce the novelty and importance of your findings.
-The explanation of how obesity contributes to gallstone formation is strong but could benefit
from additional references or a deeper dive into the molecular mechanisms. For example, you
mention the increased activity of 3-hydroxy-3-methylglutaryl coenzyme A reductase and its
role in cholesterol production. Expanding on how this ties directly to the supersaturation of bile
or other biochemical processes leading to stone formation would strengthen the mechanistic
argument.
-When discussing the stronger association between RFM and gallstones in younger adults and
females, consider adding a bit more explanation as to why this might be the case. For example,
you could explore the hormonal factors or differences in fat distribution between males and
females that may make women more susceptible to gallstones at certain stages of life.
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 2 Date: 04 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, please address the following points below
-The introduction is strong but could benefit from a more explicit definition of relative fat
mass (RFM) in the context of this study. You mention that it is a measure of obesity but could
emphasize more why RFM is a better predictor compared to BMI, especially for understanding
fat distribution, which may be more relevant to gallstone formation.
-The discussion of gallstone risk factors could be expanded slightly. While you list common risk
factors (e.g., obesity, metabolic syndrome, etc.), it would be helpful to include a brief overview
of the pathophysiology behind gallstone formation to provide more context as to why RFM
might be linked to the disease.
-The exclusion criteria are mentioned but not explained in detail in the text. You refer to "Fig.
1," but ensure that this figure is properly described in the text or supplemented with more
information in the methods section.
-While the measurement of RFM is described, it might help to provide more context about the
formula’s validity or its adoption in previous research, especially when introducing it as a more
accurate measure than BMI. A brief comparison of RFM’s reliability in other studies would add
credibility to its use here.
-While you mention that this is the first thorough examination of the relationship between
RFM and gallstones, it might be helpful to briefly reintroduce RFM’s definition in this section,
especially for readers who may not be familiar with the term. You described its role in predicting
obesity-related health outcomes earlier, but reiterating why RFM is a better measure than BMI
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-The explanation of how obesity contributes to gallstone formation is strong but could benefit
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mention the increased activity of 3-hydroxy-3-methylglutaryl coenzyme A reductase and its
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-When discussing the stronger association between RFM and gallstones in younger adults and
females, consider adding a bit more explanation as to why this might be the case. For example,
you could explore the hormonal factors or differences in fat distribution between males and
females that may make women more susceptible to gallstones at certain stages of life.
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 2 Date: 05 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript under review investigates the association between RFM and gallstones using
NHANES data and compares RFM with BMI for gallstone prediction. However, the study
exhibits significant overlap with the findings of Wu, Xiaodong et al. (2025) published in the
International Journal of Surgery, which also examined the relationship between multiple obesity-
related indices, including RFM, and gallstones using NHANES data.
Both studies aim to evaluate the predictive power of RFM for gallstones and compare it with
other obesity-related indices. And both manuscripts conclude that RFM is a superior predictor of
gallstones compared to BMI, and that the association is particularly strong in specific subgroups
(e.g., younger individuals and females). Given this high degree of similarity in research
question, methodology, and conclusions, the novelty of the current manuscript is questionable.
Without substantial new insights or methodological advancements beyond what has already
been published, the study does not offer a significant contribution to the literature.
If the authors can demonstrate a clear and meaningful distinction from the prior study, they may
consider submitting a revised version to a different venue with a stronger emphasis on novel
aspects.
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 2 Date: 05 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript under review investigates the association between RFM and gallstones using
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been published, the study does not offer a significant contribution to the literature.
If the authors can demonstrate a clear and meaningful distinction from the prior study, they may
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 2 Date: 06 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
Dear Editor,
Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript titled "Higher Relative Fat Mass Was
Associated with a Higher Prevalence of Gallstones in US Adults." This study examines the
relationship between relative fat mass (RFM) and the prevalence of gallstones using data from
the National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey (NHANES). The manuscript is well-
structured and provides compelling evidence suggesting that RFM is a more accurate predictor
of gallstone risk than BMI, particularly in younger adults and females. The findings are novel
and have significant clinical relevance, offering potential avenues for improving early detection
and management of gallstones in high-risk populations.
Statistical Comments:
Clarification of RFM and BMI Comparison: The authors compare the performance of RFM
and BMI in predicting gallstones, with RFM showing a higher AUC value (0.674 vs. 0.634).
While the comparison is valuable, a more detailed explanation of the clinical significance of this
difference would be helpful. What are the implications of the relatively small difference in AUC
for clinical decision-making? Should healthcare providers consider RFM as a routine measure
alongside BMI for more accurate risk assessment of gallstones?
Consideration of Confounding Variables: The manuscript appropriately adjusts for various
covariates in the analysis. However, given the complex nature of gallstone disease and its many
risk factors, the authors should further discuss potential residual confounding. For example,
factors like physical activity level, medication use, and family history of gallstones could
influence the results. How might these unmeasured variables impact the associations between
RFM and gallstone prevalence?
Nonlinear Association and Threshold Effect: The authors identify a nonlinear association
between RFM and gallstone prevalence with a threshold effect at RFM = 19.8. This finding
is intriguing but would benefit from a more in-depth discussion. Could there be a biological
or metabolic explanation for this threshold? Furthermore, how might this threshold be used in
clinical practice to identify individuals at higher risk for gallstones? A discussion of how to
implement this threshold in clinical screening could enhance the manuscript.
Clinical Comments:
Clinical Relevance of RFM for Gallstone Prediction: The study’s results indicate that RFM is
a significant predictor of gallstone prevalence, particularly in younger adults and females. The
clinical implications of this finding should be further explored. Could RFM be incorporated
into routine screening practices for individuals at high risk for gallstones, especially those with
obesity or metabolic syndrome? The authors could provide more guidance on how RFM can be
applied in clinical settings to identify individuals who would benefit from preventative measures,
such as dietary changes or earlier interventions.
Potential Impact of RFM Management on Gallstone Prevention: Given the strong association
between higher RFM and gallstones, the authors should discuss potential preventive strategies
targeting RFM reduction. Could lifestyle interventions aimed at reducing body fat, such as
physical activity or dietary changes, help reduce gallstone risk? Are there any pharmacological
approaches that could be explored to target RFM, especially in high-risk populations?
Gender Differences in RFM and Gallstones: The authors find that the association between
RFM and gallstones is more significant in females. This result is consistent with previous
research on gender differences in gallstone disease, but the authors could further explore the
underlying mechanisms. How does gender influence the way RFM impacts gallstone formation,
and are there hormonal or metabolic differences that might explain this finding? A more detailed
discussion of these factors would strengthen the clinical relevance of the study.
Impact of Gut Microbiota on Gallstone Development: Given the emerging evidence on the
influence of gut microbiota in metabolic diseases and obesity-related conditions, the authors
should consider discussing the potential impact of gut microbiota on the development of
gallstones. Research suggests that alterations in gut microbiota composition may affect lipid
metabolism, inflammation, and bile acid production, all of which could contribute to gallstone
formation. The authors are encouraged to cite and integrate the following studies that explore
the relationship between gut microbiota and gallstone risk:
DOI: 10.1016/j.dsx.2024.103110
DOI: 10.1093/nutrit/nuad086
DOI: 10.1186/s13643-023-02299-x
DOI: 10.1038/s41467-021-27758-8
DOI: 10.3389/fcimb.2023.1253447
DOI: 10.3389/fnut.2023.1089909
These references provide insights into how microbiota dysbiosis may influence obesity, bile acid
metabolism, and the inflammatory processes that underlie gallstone formation. By integrating
these studies, the authors can strengthen the manuscript by providing a more comprehensive
discussion of the role of the gut microbiota in gallstone pathogenesis and explore potential
interventions that target microbiota modulation as a preventive strategy for gallstone disease.
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 2 Date: 06 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
Dear Editor,
Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript titled "Higher Relative Fat Mass Was
Associated with a Higher Prevalence of Gallstones in US Adults." This study examines the
relationship between relative fat mass (RFM) and the prevalence of gallstones using data from
the National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey (NHANES). The manuscript is well-
structured and provides compelling evidence suggesting that RFM is a more accurate predictor
of gallstone risk than BMI, particularly in younger adults and females. The findings are novel
and have significant clinical relevance, offering potential avenues for improving early detection
and management of gallstones in high-risk populations.
Statistical Comments:
Clarification of RFM and BMI Comparison: The authors compare the performance of RFM
and BMI in predicting gallstones, with RFM showing a higher AUC value (0.674 vs. 0.634).
While the comparison is valuable, a more detailed explanation of the clinical significance of this
difference would be helpful. What are the implications of the relatively small difference in AUC
for clinical decision-making? Should healthcare providers consider RFM as a routine measure
alongside BMI for more accurate risk assessment of gallstones?
Consideration of Confounding Variables: The manuscript appropriately adjusts for various
covariates in the analysis. However, given the complex nature of gallstone disease and its many
risk factors, the authors should further discuss potential residual confounding. For example,
factors like physical activity level, medication use, and family history of gallstones could
influence the results. How might these unmeasured variables impact the associations between
RFM and gallstone prevalence?
Nonlinear Association and Threshold Effect: The authors identify a nonlinear association
between RFM and gallstone prevalence with a threshold effect at RFM = 19.8. This finding
is intriguing but would benefit from a more in-depth discussion. Could there be a biological
or metabolic explanation for this threshold? Furthermore, how might this threshold be used in
clinical practice to identify individuals at higher risk for gallstones? A discussion of how to
implement this threshold in clinical screening could enhance the manuscript.
Clinical Comments:
Clinical Relevance of RFM for Gallstone Prediction: The study’s results indicate that RFM is
a significant predictor of gallstone prevalence, particularly in younger adults and females. The
clinical implications of this finding should be further explored. Could RFM be incorporated
into routine screening practices for individuals at high risk for gallstones, especially those with
obesity or metabolic syndrome? The authors could provide more guidance on how RFM can be
applied in clinical settings to identify individuals who would benefit from preventative measures,
such as dietary changes or earlier interventions.
Potential Impact of RFM Management on Gallstone Prevention: Given the strong association
between higher RFM and gallstones, the authors should discuss potential preventive strategies
targeting RFM reduction. Could lifestyle interventions aimed at reducing body fat, such as
physical activity or dietary changes, help reduce gallstone risk? Are there any pharmacological
approaches that could be explored to target RFM, especially in high-risk populations?
Gender Differences in RFM and Gallstones: The authors find that the association between
RFM and gallstones is more significant in females. This result is consistent with previous
research on gender differences in gallstone disease, but the authors could further explore the
underlying mechanisms. How does gender influence the way RFM impacts gallstone formation,
and are there hormonal or metabolic differences that might explain this finding? A more detailed
discussion of these factors would strengthen the clinical relevance of the study.
Impact of Gut Microbiota on Gallstone Development: Given the emerging evidence on the
influence of gut microbiota in metabolic diseases and obesity-related conditions, the authors
should consider discussing the potential impact of gut microbiota on the development of
gallstones. Research suggests that alterations in gut microbiota composition may affect lipid
metabolism, inflammation, and bile acid production, all of which could contribute to gallstone
formation. The authors are encouraged to cite and integrate the following studies that explore
the relationship between gut microbiota and gallstone risk:
DOI: 10.1016/j.dsx.2024.103110
DOI: 10.1093/nutrit/nuad086
DOI: 10.1186/s13643-023-02299-x
DOI: 10.1038/s41467-021-27758-8
DOI: 10.3389/fcimb.2023.1253447
DOI: 10.3389/fnut.2023.1089909
These references provide insights into how microbiota dysbiosis may influence obesity, bile acid
metabolism, and the inflammatory processes that underlie gallstone formation. By integrating
these studies, the authors can strengthen the manuscript by providing a more comprehensive
discussion of the role of the gut microbiota in gallstone pathogenesis and explore potential
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
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Reviewer's report:
The authors have appropriately revised the paper. I have no further comments.
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The authors have appropriately revised the paper. I have no further comments.
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The responses are satisfactory.
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 3 Date: 18 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript under review explores the association between the RFM index and gallstones
using NHANES data. Additionally, it compares the predictive ability of RFM and BMI for
gallstone risk. This study presents novel insights that align well with the scope of this journal.
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Title: Higher relative fat mass was associated with a higher prevalence of gallstones in US adults
Version: 3 Date: 18 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript under review explores the association between the RFM index and gallstones
using NHANES data. Additionally, it compares the predictive ability of RFM and BMI for
gallstone risk. This study presents novel insights that align well with the scope of this journal.
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BMC
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12876_2025_3715_ReviewerReport_V3_R5.pdf
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Title: The Causal Impact of Genetically Predicted Inflammatory Bowel Disease on
Extraintestinal Manifestations: A Mendelian Randomization Study
Version: 3 Date: 18 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors
I can't find the changes in the manuscript, and I can't find the underlined changes as you
mentioned. Please check and submit the revised manuscript along with your responses.
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Title: The Causal Impact of Genetically Predicted Inflammatory Bowel Disease on
Extraintestinal Manifestations: A Mendelian Randomization Study
Version: 3 Date: 18 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Anwar Ashraf Abouelnasr
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors
I can't find the changes in the manuscript, and I can't find the underlined changes as you
mentioned. Please check and submit the revised manuscript along with your responses.
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BMC
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12876_2024_3566_ReviewerReport_V3_R4.pdf
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Reviewed - bmc_gastroenterology
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Title: The Causal Impact of Genetically Predicted Inflammatory Bowel Disease on
Extraintestinal Manifestations: A Mendelian Randomization Study
Version: 3 Date: 19 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Dear colleuge scientist,
Thank you for this study and all the work.
The study strengths is well described with the use of Mendelian Randomization, this MR is a
powerful tool for inferring causal relationships between exposures (e.g., genetically predicted
IBD) and outcomes (e.g., EIMs). This approach is useful in overcoming confounding biases that
typically affect observational studies.
Utilizing GWAS data for both exposure (IBD, UC, and CD) and outcomes (EIMs) strengthens
the study by leveraging large datasets that improve statistical power. The study reports robust
associations with specific EIMs (erythema nodosum, uveitis, PSC, and spondyloarthritis),
providing clear evidence of causality in genetically predicted cases of IBD. Including UC and
CD subgroup analyses is important because it dissects the different impacts these diseases may
have on EIMs.
Attention should be paid to the following points: Did the authors ensure that the selected
SNPs satisfy the key MR assumptions (e.g., independence, exclusivity, relevance)? A lack of
clarity in describing SNP selection criteria or violating these assumptions could weaken the
causal inference. I suggest asking for more details on how they addressed potential pleiotropy
or horizontal pleiotropy, where the selected SNPs influence the outcome via other pathways
unrelated to the exposure.
The study examines a range of EIMs. However, since multiple outcomes were tested, did the
authors adjust for multiple comparisons (e.g., Bonferroni correction or false discovery rate
control)? The p-values in the results are small, but the study would benefit from clarity on
whether such adjustments were made to reduce the risk of Type I errors (false positives).
Even with MR, establishing causality can be complex. Did the study adequately discuss potential
limitations of the MR method, including weak instrument bias, population stratification, or
canalization (changes in the relationship between genotype and phenotype over time)? Any
mention of sensitivity analyses (e.g., MR-Egger regression or heterogeneity tests) would be
valuable to assess the robustness of the findings.
While the associations are statistically significant, it would be important for the authors to offer
insights into possible biological mechanisms linking IBD to these specific EIMs. For example,
why might IBD be causally related to uveitis but not episcleritis or scleritis? Mechanistic
hypotheses could enhance the study's impact.
The study uses data from GWAS, which are often conducted on specific populations (e.g.,
European ancestry). Did the authors address the generalizability of their findings to other
ethnicities or populations? Differences in genetic architectures between populations could limit
the applicability of the results to more diverse groups.
The use of fixed-effects models in combining MR outcomes from different data sources suggests
an assumption that all included studies are estimating the same underlying effect size. However,
if there was heterogeneity between the studies, a random-effects model may have been more
appropriate. Did the authors explore heterogeneity between studies, and how was this handled?
Try to keep the discussion more to the point. With 7 pages it is a bit to long and misses good
take home messaged.
It would be helpful for the authors to conduct or report additional sensitivity analyses, such as
leave-one-out analyses, to ensure that individual SNPs are not driving the associations.
The abstract would benefit from including a conclusion or implications of the findings. What
are the clinical or public health implications of identifying causal relationships between IBD
and these EIMs?
|
Title: The Causal Impact of Genetically Predicted Inflammatory Bowel Disease on
Extraintestinal Manifestations: A Mendelian Randomization Study
Version: 3 Date: 19 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Dear colleuge scientist,
Thank you for this study and all the work.
The study strengths is well described with the use of Mendelian Randomization, this MR is a
powerful tool for inferring causal relationships between exposures (e.g., genetically predicted
IBD) and outcomes (e.g., EIMs). This approach is useful in overcoming confounding biases that
typically affect observational studies.
Utilizing GWAS data for both exposure (IBD, UC, and CD) and outcomes (EIMs) strengthens
the study by leveraging large datasets that improve statistical power. The study reports robust
associations with specific EIMs (erythema nodosum, uveitis, PSC, and spondyloarthritis),
providing clear evidence of causality in genetically predicted cases of IBD. Including UC and
CD subgroup analyses is important because it dissects the different impacts these diseases may
have on EIMs.
Attention should be paid to the following points: Did the authors ensure that the selected
SNPs satisfy the key MR assumptions (e.g., independence, exclusivity, relevance)? A lack of
clarity in describing SNP selection criteria or violating these assumptions could weaken the
causal inference. I suggest asking for more details on how they addressed potential pleiotropy
or horizontal pleiotropy, where the selected SNPs influence the outcome via other pathways
unrelated to the exposure.
The study examines a range of EIMs. However, since multiple outcomes were tested, did the
authors adjust for multiple comparisons (e.g., Bonferroni correction or false discovery rate
control)? The p-values in the results are small, but the study would benefit from clarity on
whether such adjustments were made to reduce the risk of Type I errors (false positives).
Even with MR, establishing causality can be complex. Did the study adequately discuss potential
limitations of the MR method, including weak instrument bias, population stratification, or
canalization (changes in the relationship between genotype and phenotype over time)? Any
mention of sensitivity analyses (e.g., MR-Egger regression or heterogeneity tests) would be
valuable to assess the robustness of the findings.
While the associations are statistically significant, it would be important for the authors to offer
insights into possible biological mechanisms linking IBD to these specific EIMs. For example,
why might IBD be causally related to uveitis but not episcleritis or scleritis? Mechanistic
hypotheses could enhance the study's impact.
The study uses data from GWAS, which are often conducted on specific populations (e.g.,
European ancestry). Did the authors address the generalizability of their findings to other
ethnicities or populations? Differences in genetic architectures between populations could limit
the applicability of the results to more diverse groups.
The use of fixed-effects models in combining MR outcomes from different data sources suggests
an assumption that all included studies are estimating the same underlying effect size. However,
if there was heterogeneity between the studies, a random-effects model may have been more
appropriate. Did the authors explore heterogeneity between studies, and how was this handled?
Try to keep the discussion more to the point. With 7 pages it is a bit to long and misses good
take home messaged.
It would be helpful for the authors to conduct or report additional sensitivity analyses, such as
leave-one-out analyses, to ensure that individual SNPs are not driving the associations.
The abstract would benefit from including a conclusion or implications of the findings. What
are the clinical or public health implications of identifying causal relationships between IBD
and these EIMs?
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BMC
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