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Title: Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients with Pulmonary Hypertension and
Subgroups
Version: 0 Date: 17 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
I read with interest the descriptive study, "Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients
with Pulmonary Hypertension and Subgroups" by Zhang et al. The research team performed
ITS1 sequencing of pharyngeal swab samples from PH Groups 1, 3, and 4 along with a group
with lung disease without PH. They also distinguished patients based on whether they had
recent corticosteroid and/or antibiotic exposure. They identified a distinct mycobiome profile
between control and PH patients (and controlled for corticosteroid/antibiotic exposure) and
between Group 3 PH and lung disease patients. The novelty of the study is that the mycobiome
in understudied in pulmonary hypertension and all disease states. I recommend completion of
the following additional analyses and modifications to improve the impact of the study:
1. The authors should complete ROC analysis to determine whether the pharyngeal mycobiome
can distinguish the PH Group types as the pathophysiology of each of these PH types is different
(Group 1 vs 3, Group 1 vs 4, Group 3 vs 4).
2. Ideally, the authors should have integrated metagenomic/microbiome data with the
mycobiome data as alterations in the microbiome would have changed the entire micro/
mycobiome.
3. Additional transparency regarding the characteristics of the PH patients by PH type should
be included in the characteristics table such has the average hemodynamics (mPAP, PVR, CO/
CI) and all therapies that each of the PH groups were on (pulmonary vasodilators, inhaled
treprostinil, cortisteroid/antibiotics, anticoagulation, etc.) - not just clustering all data within all
of PH.
4. It is unclear to me why any Group 1 or 4 PH patients would have taken corticosteroids and/
or antibiotics (recent infection?). Including the reasons why each of the Group 1 and 4 patients
are on corticosteroids/antibiotics in the supplement would be beneficial.
5. Please discuss in the discussion why Group 2 PH patients were not included in the study as
it is a more prevalent PH type.
6. Why was the mPAP subgroup analysis/breakdown not based on typical cutoffs for mild
(mPAP 20-34), moderate (mPAP 35-44), and severe (mPAP >/= 45 mmHg).
|
Title: Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients with Pulmonary Hypertension and
Subgroups
Version: 0 Date: 17 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
I read with interest the descriptive study, "Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients
with Pulmonary Hypertension and Subgroups" by Zhang et al. The research team performed
ITS1 sequencing of pharyngeal swab samples from PH Groups 1, 3, and 4 along with a group
with lung disease without PH. They also distinguished patients based on whether they had
recent corticosteroid and/or antibiotic exposure. They identified a distinct mycobiome profile
between control and PH patients (and controlled for corticosteroid/antibiotic exposure) and
between Group 3 PH and lung disease patients. The novelty of the study is that the mycobiome
in understudied in pulmonary hypertension and all disease states. I recommend completion of
the following additional analyses and modifications to improve the impact of the study:
1. The authors should complete ROC analysis to determine whether the pharyngeal mycobiome
can distinguish the PH Group types as the pathophysiology of each of these PH types is different
(Group 1 vs 3, Group 1 vs 4, Group 3 vs 4).
2. Ideally, the authors should have integrated metagenomic/microbiome data with the
mycobiome data as alterations in the microbiome would have changed the entire micro/
mycobiome.
3. Additional transparency regarding the characteristics of the PH patients by PH type should
be included in the characteristics table such has the average hemodynamics (mPAP, PVR, CO/
CI) and all therapies that each of the PH groups were on (pulmonary vasodilators, inhaled
treprostinil, cortisteroid/antibiotics, anticoagulation, etc.) - not just clustering all data within all
of PH.
4. It is unclear to me why any Group 1 or 4 PH patients would have taken corticosteroids and/
or antibiotics (recent infection?). Including the reasons why each of the Group 1 and 4 patients
are on corticosteroids/antibiotics in the supplement would be beneficial.
5. Please discuss in the discussion why Group 2 PH patients were not included in the study as
it is a more prevalent PH type.
6. Why was the mPAP subgroup analysis/breakdown not based on typical cutoffs for mild
(mPAP 20-34), moderate (mPAP 35-44), and severe (mPAP >/= 45 mmHg).
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Title: Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients with Pulmonary Hypertension and
Subgroups
Version: 0 Date: 15 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
I am reviewing a manuscript titled "Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients
with Pulmonary Hypertension and Subgroups" submitted for publication by Dr. Zhang and
colleagues. Overall, the manuscript is well written and well described. The authors put in detailed
work in their publication. There are some issues I would like to see addressed:
1. There is a lot of information that is not clearly connected in the manuscript. The message
and hypothesis needs to be tightened up and made more cohesive. As it stands, the manuscript
has interesting conclusions and observations, but perhaps tying it to more cause would actually
help the manuscript give more cohesion. For example, describing or using two different
classifications in the manuscript between clinical groups and WHO classifications is difficult to
understand the choice of authors. I suggest that the authors choose one and then put the other
groups in the supplementary figure.
2. The details surrounding antibiotic use should be better described e.g, what antibiotics were
the participants exposed to. And the authors should consider explaining in detail how the
mycobiome may be affected by antibiotics which should not directly affect this form of -oMics.
3. Finally, One important aspect is that pulmonary hypertension is a symptom of larger
diagnoses, for example, COPD and cor pulmonale - could the authors do subanalyses associated
with diagnoses instead of classes and WHO groups?
I will be using the word document page numbers and leftmost line numbers.
Abstract:
Page 2, Line 61 "Dramatically opposite patterns of the two major fungal phyla, Ascomycota and
Basidiomycota..." I suggest tempering down this statement, which borders on being an over-
statement.
Background:
Page 5, Line 96 "Although PH is mainly a cardiopulmonary disease, recent study has proposed
that it could be considered a systemic disease affecting multiple organs, such as the lungs, heart,
central nervous system, bone marrow, and gut. " I think there's some issues here is pulmonary
hypertension is not a disease in it of itself, it is rather a symptom or a syndrome associated with
multiple other diseased. I would carefully re-write this sentences to reflect this.
Page 7 Line 123 "Extended recruitment procedure and methods are provided in the online
Supplementary Material." In regards to the recruitment, can the authors provide a consort
diagram of people screened for recruitment. I would like to see the number of patients who were
excluded. Moreover, if all patients/participants received a RHC, could the authors also discuss
if the RHC was to make the diagnosis or/and if it includes a table of the results from the RHC.
Supplemental Material Page 2, Line 28 "The PH group was further divided into the subgroups
of non-use of antibiotics and/or corticosteroids (non-ANT/CORT) and use of ANT, CORT, or
ANT+CORT within 1 mont" Can the authors explain why this was done? This is a good category
to analyze, but I would consider the PH WHO categories more clinical relevant.
Supplemental Material Page 2, Line 30 "The patients were diagnosed with chronic obstructive
pulmonary disease, bronchiectasis, interstitial lung disease, and other relevant conditions. All
of the patients experienced dyspnea, but their echocardiographic probability of PH was low. "
I'm surprised that the pH probability was low - can the authors also include the these results in
a table for review?
Supplemental Material Page 2, Line 34 "The healthy-control (CON) group was free of
respiratory diseases and other serious diseases and had no oral and respiratory infections within
1 month. " This wasn't clear, but did these patients/controls also receive RHC? Or was there
just for samples?
Supplemental Material: Can the authors include IRB protocol numbers and Patient assurances
for each of their sites? While the authors include multiple hospitals, they do not include the IRB
protocol approvals - please include these assurances.
Supplemental Material, Page 2, Line 64 "The extracted fungal genome DNA from positively
detected pharyngeal swab sample and pharyngeal swab blank control and buffer blank control
were verified by agarose electrophoresis, as shown in Supplementary Figure S2b." Were any
control samples were obtained?
Supplemental Material, Page 7, Line 137 "Figure S2: Quality control for pharyngeal swab
samples
a: Bar graphs showing the averaged concentration of PCR amplified DNA products and assigned
" For Figure S2, please include all points for Panels A, for Panel C please also include averages
of control and PH - these are difficult to interpret.
Page 8, Line 148 "The #-diversity was performed using mothur (version v. 1.30.2, https://
mothur.org/wiki/calculators/), with the evaluation index applied at a similarity level of 97% for
OTUs (0.97). The #-diversity distance matrix is computed by Qiime (2020.2.0, http://qiime.org/
install/index.html)." I am wondering why the authors decided to use two different pipelines to
calculate alpha and beta diversity. I would suggest using one, rather than another.
Stastical anlaysis Page 7 to 9 I am wondering if this would be better moved into the
supplementary and the discussion about patient recruitment moved to the paper methods.
Results:
Page 10, Line 177 "As shown in Figure 1a, #-diversity indicated no statistical difference in
mycobiome richness (Sobs index and Ace index), while significantly lower diversity (indicated
by decreased Shannon index and increased Simpson index) was observed in patients with PH
than in CON. For #-diversity, both non-metric multidimensional scaling (NMDS) using the
Bray-Curtis distance algorithm (Figure 1b) and Partial Least Squares Discriminant Analysis
(PLS-DA) (Figure 1c)" The p-values should be expressed on each comparison, even if there are
p=ns. The Beta-diversity comparisons in Panel B and Panel C are possibly significant.
Page 10, Line 187 "At the genus level, Candida, Cutaneotrichosporon, Apiotrichum, and
Sarocladium were the most abundant genera with the highest proportion in the PH group, while
Candida, Fusarium, Cutaneotrichosporon, and Cladosporium in the CON group (Figure 1e). "
Can the authors reconcile this with candida found in COVID19 and ILD.
Page 12, Line 222 "As seen in Figure 2b, divergent fungal diversity was found by both #-
diversity (Shannon index) and #-diversity (NMDS) analyses among three subgroups, with
genera Holtermanniella, Trametes, Itersonilia, Psathyrella, and Geotrichum showing dramatic
enrichment in IPAH but not in CHD-PAH or CTD-PAH." In Panels 2a, 2b, and 2c - needs p-
values to be placed on the figure.
Page 13, Line 259 "...PH subgroups based on the mPAP levels. Simultaneously, Candida
increased dramatically in the PH-low and PH-medium groups (Figure 2d)." As it's presented,
the role of candida is very interesting, have the authors considered the role of candida in other
diseases and how it may relate to pulmonary hypertension?
Page 14, Line 265 "ANT/CORT (Supplementary Figure S7b), and ANT (Supplementary Figure
S7c), and CORT (Supplementary Figure S7d), and ANT+CORT groups (Supplementary Figure
S7e), using Random Forest analysis." Can the authors also include the type of antibiotics that
the patients were exposed to? Could you include this as a table?
Page 14 Line 280 "he abundance of Ascomycota exhibited a gradual increase in non-ANT/
CORT, ANT, CORT, and ANT+CORT subgroups, whereas the abundance of Basidiomycota
showed a gradual decline, and only ANT+CORT group and CON group had statistical difference
(Figure 3d). " Is this due to relative abundance diagnosis, can the authors pull out read counts
to see if this pattern is still true?
Page 15, Line 289 ". LEfSe multilevel species difference discriminant analysis also indicated
similar fungal genera between the CON and non-ANT/CORT (Figure 4a), or ANT (Figure
4b), or CORT (Figure 4c), or ANT+CORT (Figure 4d) groups. Moreover, the LEfSe multi-
level species difference discriminant analysis also suggested similar and distinct genera between
the non-ANT/CORT and ANT (Figure 4e), or CORT (Figure 4f), or ANT+CORT (Figure 4g)
groups." Can the authors also use different orthogonal approaches such as DESEq2 or EdgeR
to calculate other differential enrichment.
Page 17, Line 337 "White blood cells and cardiac index were excluded, and the correlation
between the remaining 30 clinical factors and different mycobiome taxa (phyla and genera) was
analyzed" Could the authors explain why this was done? It is not clear that this is actually helpful
or why these were excluded.
Discussion:
Page 20, Line 380 "Blockage of the metabolite, trimethylamine N-oxide, which is derived from
the intestinal microbial flora and has been proven to be enriched in patients with PH..." This
seems as though it's a non-sequitur - is there anything that ties the trimethylamine N-oxide to
the mycobiome? I suggest this introduction is tied closer to the mycobiome.
Page 21, Line 404 "Notably, through multiple comparisons, we identified stable and
consistent mycobiome signatures in PH (and subgroups) compared to CON without being
influenced by ANT, CORT, or both, characterized by specific enrichment of the fungal
genera Purpureocillium, Issatchenkia, and Cyberlindnera and a decrease in the fungal genera
Peroneutypa, Simplicillium, and Metarhizium in PH (and subgroups) compared to CON." I am
not entirely sure that the authors performed multiple comparisons per se, I understand there are
multiple comparisons, but the authors should consider also applying multiple comparisons to
their analysis. LEFSE does not put in adjustment for multiple comparisons, but would be great
if they could do this in EdgeR.
Page 21, Line 411 "Moreover, a specific correlation pattern was observed between the airway
mycobiome signature and clinical parameters of PH, strongly indicating a potential association
between the altered airway mycobiome and disease progression of PH" I would recommend that
while this is the hypothesis that the authors are testing, the presentiation of this is difficult to
understand. I suggest that the authors consider significant re-organization of their work - for
example - the redundancy of clinical groups and WHO groups does not help discern the message
and hypothesis of the patients/particiapnts with PH. Especially, when clinicians tend to think
about pulmonary hypertension as a syndrome or symptom of a larger issue - thus - I suggest to
either discuss among authors which Ph groups you would like to use, but I think the use of both
clinical groups and WHO groups confounds the conclusions. I suggest picking one and moving
the other analysis to the supplementary.
Page 21, Line 418 "Antibiotics modulate host microbiome rapidly and remarkably. 33,34
Ng et al. reported that antibiotics significantly reshape the gut microbiota composition, and
postantibiotic recovery depends on multiple factors, including the host diet, community context,
and environmental reservoirs. 35 Ward et al. showed that antibiotics can alter the #-diversity and
#-diversity of lung mycobiome. 36 Corticosteroids are immunosuppressive agents that affect
host microbiomes. In a meta-analysis of patients with COPD, asthma, and chronic rhinosinusitis,
Hartmann et al. demonstrated that corticosteroids significantly affected the airway microbiome
composition. 37 Our study showed similar results: the #-diversity, #-diversity, and mycobiome
composition were remarkably reduced in the ANT, CORT, or ANT+CORT groups versus the
non-ANT/CORT group. " I think that the authors should consider explaining how antibiotics
which do not affect the mycobiome but the microbiome, how the use of antibiotics may be
associated with mycobiome changes. There is a logical leap between the mycobiome and
microbiome, the authors may consider bridging this gap during the discussion. Corticosteroids
is much more understandable, but needs to be contextualized into the change associated with
possible immune suppression.
Page 23, Line 450 "A recent study reported that P. lilacinum might induce fetal fungal
pneumonia in a green tree Python by excluding other potential pathogens." Not sure if this is
actually helpful.
Minor
Page 18, Line 369 "animal pathogens,s " there is a typo here.
|
Title: Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients with Pulmonary Hypertension and
Subgroups
Version: 0 Date: 15 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
I am reviewing a manuscript titled "Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients
with Pulmonary Hypertension and Subgroups" submitted for publication by Dr. Zhang and
colleagues. Overall, the manuscript is well written and well described. The authors put in detailed
work in their publication. There are some issues I would like to see addressed:
1. There is a lot of information that is not clearly connected in the manuscript. The message
and hypothesis needs to be tightened up and made more cohesive. As it stands, the manuscript
has interesting conclusions and observations, but perhaps tying it to more cause would actually
help the manuscript give more cohesion. For example, describing or using two different
classifications in the manuscript between clinical groups and WHO classifications is difficult to
understand the choice of authors. I suggest that the authors choose one and then put the other
groups in the supplementary figure.
2. The details surrounding antibiotic use should be better described e.g, what antibiotics were
the participants exposed to. And the authors should consider explaining in detail how the
mycobiome may be affected by antibiotics which should not directly affect this form of -oMics.
3. Finally, One important aspect is that pulmonary hypertension is a symptom of larger
diagnoses, for example, COPD and cor pulmonale - could the authors do subanalyses associated
with diagnoses instead of classes and WHO groups?
I will be using the word document page numbers and leftmost line numbers.
Abstract:
Page 2, Line 61 "Dramatically opposite patterns of the two major fungal phyla, Ascomycota and
Basidiomycota..." I suggest tempering down this statement, which borders on being an over-
statement.
Background:
Page 5, Line 96 "Although PH is mainly a cardiopulmonary disease, recent study has proposed
that it could be considered a systemic disease affecting multiple organs, such as the lungs, heart,
central nervous system, bone marrow, and gut. " I think there's some issues here is pulmonary
hypertension is not a disease in it of itself, it is rather a symptom or a syndrome associated with
multiple other diseased. I would carefully re-write this sentences to reflect this.
Page 7 Line 123 "Extended recruitment procedure and methods are provided in the online
Supplementary Material." In regards to the recruitment, can the authors provide a consort
diagram of people screened for recruitment. I would like to see the number of patients who were
excluded. Moreover, if all patients/participants received a RHC, could the authors also discuss
if the RHC was to make the diagnosis or/and if it includes a table of the results from the RHC.
Supplemental Material Page 2, Line 28 "The PH group was further divided into the subgroups
of non-use of antibiotics and/or corticosteroids (non-ANT/CORT) and use of ANT, CORT, or
ANT+CORT within 1 mont" Can the authors explain why this was done? This is a good category
to analyze, but I would consider the PH WHO categories more clinical relevant.
Supplemental Material Page 2, Line 30 "The patients were diagnosed with chronic obstructive
pulmonary disease, bronchiectasis, interstitial lung disease, and other relevant conditions. All
of the patients experienced dyspnea, but their echocardiographic probability of PH was low. "
I'm surprised that the pH probability was low - can the authors also include the these results in
a table for review?
Supplemental Material Page 2, Line 34 "The healthy-control (CON) group was free of
respiratory diseases and other serious diseases and had no oral and respiratory infections within
1 month. " This wasn't clear, but did these patients/controls also receive RHC? Or was there
just for samples?
Supplemental Material: Can the authors include IRB protocol numbers and Patient assurances
for each of their sites? While the authors include multiple hospitals, they do not include the IRB
protocol approvals - please include these assurances.
Supplemental Material, Page 2, Line 64 "The extracted fungal genome DNA from positively
detected pharyngeal swab sample and pharyngeal swab blank control and buffer blank control
were verified by agarose electrophoresis, as shown in Supplementary Figure S2b." Were any
control samples were obtained?
Supplemental Material, Page 7, Line 137 "Figure S2: Quality control for pharyngeal swab
samples
a: Bar graphs showing the averaged concentration of PCR amplified DNA products and assigned
" For Figure S2, please include all points for Panels A, for Panel C please also include averages
of control and PH - these are difficult to interpret.
Page 8, Line 148 "The #-diversity was performed using mothur (version v. 1.30.2, https://
mothur.org/wiki/calculators/), with the evaluation index applied at a similarity level of 97% for
OTUs (0.97). The #-diversity distance matrix is computed by Qiime (2020.2.0, http://qiime.org/
install/index.html)." I am wondering why the authors decided to use two different pipelines to
calculate alpha and beta diversity. I would suggest using one, rather than another.
Stastical anlaysis Page 7 to 9 I am wondering if this would be better moved into the
supplementary and the discussion about patient recruitment moved to the paper methods.
Results:
Page 10, Line 177 "As shown in Figure 1a, #-diversity indicated no statistical difference in
mycobiome richness (Sobs index and Ace index), while significantly lower diversity (indicated
by decreased Shannon index and increased Simpson index) was observed in patients with PH
than in CON. For #-diversity, both non-metric multidimensional scaling (NMDS) using the
Bray-Curtis distance algorithm (Figure 1b) and Partial Least Squares Discriminant Analysis
(PLS-DA) (Figure 1c)" The p-values should be expressed on each comparison, even if there are
p=ns. The Beta-diversity comparisons in Panel B and Panel C are possibly significant.
Page 10, Line 187 "At the genus level, Candida, Cutaneotrichosporon, Apiotrichum, and
Sarocladium were the most abundant genera with the highest proportion in the PH group, while
Candida, Fusarium, Cutaneotrichosporon, and Cladosporium in the CON group (Figure 1e). "
Can the authors reconcile this with candida found in COVID19 and ILD.
Page 12, Line 222 "As seen in Figure 2b, divergent fungal diversity was found by both #-
diversity (Shannon index) and #-diversity (NMDS) analyses among three subgroups, with
genera Holtermanniella, Trametes, Itersonilia, Psathyrella, and Geotrichum showing dramatic
enrichment in IPAH but not in CHD-PAH or CTD-PAH." In Panels 2a, 2b, and 2c - needs p-
values to be placed on the figure.
Page 13, Line 259 "...PH subgroups based on the mPAP levels. Simultaneously, Candida
increased dramatically in the PH-low and PH-medium groups (Figure 2d)." As it's presented,
the role of candida is very interesting, have the authors considered the role of candida in other
diseases and how it may relate to pulmonary hypertension?
Page 14, Line 265 "ANT/CORT (Supplementary Figure S7b), and ANT (Supplementary Figure
S7c), and CORT (Supplementary Figure S7d), and ANT+CORT groups (Supplementary Figure
S7e), using Random Forest analysis." Can the authors also include the type of antibiotics that
the patients were exposed to? Could you include this as a table?
Page 14 Line 280 "he abundance of Ascomycota exhibited a gradual increase in non-ANT/
CORT, ANT, CORT, and ANT+CORT subgroups, whereas the abundance of Basidiomycota
showed a gradual decline, and only ANT+CORT group and CON group had statistical difference
(Figure 3d). " Is this due to relative abundance diagnosis, can the authors pull out read counts
to see if this pattern is still true?
Page 15, Line 289 ". LEfSe multilevel species difference discriminant analysis also indicated
similar fungal genera between the CON and non-ANT/CORT (Figure 4a), or ANT (Figure
4b), or CORT (Figure 4c), or ANT+CORT (Figure 4d) groups. Moreover, the LEfSe multi-
level species difference discriminant analysis also suggested similar and distinct genera between
the non-ANT/CORT and ANT (Figure 4e), or CORT (Figure 4f), or ANT+CORT (Figure 4g)
groups." Can the authors also use different orthogonal approaches such as DESEq2 or EdgeR
to calculate other differential enrichment.
Page 17, Line 337 "White blood cells and cardiac index were excluded, and the correlation
between the remaining 30 clinical factors and different mycobiome taxa (phyla and genera) was
analyzed" Could the authors explain why this was done? It is not clear that this is actually helpful
or why these were excluded.
Discussion:
Page 20, Line 380 "Blockage of the metabolite, trimethylamine N-oxide, which is derived from
the intestinal microbial flora and has been proven to be enriched in patients with PH..." This
seems as though it's a non-sequitur - is there anything that ties the trimethylamine N-oxide to
the mycobiome? I suggest this introduction is tied closer to the mycobiome.
Page 21, Line 404 "Notably, through multiple comparisons, we identified stable and
consistent mycobiome signatures in PH (and subgroups) compared to CON without being
influenced by ANT, CORT, or both, characterized by specific enrichment of the fungal
genera Purpureocillium, Issatchenkia, and Cyberlindnera and a decrease in the fungal genera
Peroneutypa, Simplicillium, and Metarhizium in PH (and subgroups) compared to CON." I am
not entirely sure that the authors performed multiple comparisons per se, I understand there are
multiple comparisons, but the authors should consider also applying multiple comparisons to
their analysis. LEFSE does not put in adjustment for multiple comparisons, but would be great
if they could do this in EdgeR.
Page 21, Line 411 "Moreover, a specific correlation pattern was observed between the airway
mycobiome signature and clinical parameters of PH, strongly indicating a potential association
between the altered airway mycobiome and disease progression of PH" I would recommend that
while this is the hypothesis that the authors are testing, the presentiation of this is difficult to
understand. I suggest that the authors consider significant re-organization of their work - for
example - the redundancy of clinical groups and WHO groups does not help discern the message
and hypothesis of the patients/particiapnts with PH. Especially, when clinicians tend to think
about pulmonary hypertension as a syndrome or symptom of a larger issue - thus - I suggest to
either discuss among authors which Ph groups you would like to use, but I think the use of both
clinical groups and WHO groups confounds the conclusions. I suggest picking one and moving
the other analysis to the supplementary.
Page 21, Line 418 "Antibiotics modulate host microbiome rapidly and remarkably. 33,34
Ng et al. reported that antibiotics significantly reshape the gut microbiota composition, and
postantibiotic recovery depends on multiple factors, including the host diet, community context,
and environmental reservoirs. 35 Ward et al. showed that antibiotics can alter the #-diversity and
#-diversity of lung mycobiome. 36 Corticosteroids are immunosuppressive agents that affect
host microbiomes. In a meta-analysis of patients with COPD, asthma, and chronic rhinosinusitis,
Hartmann et al. demonstrated that corticosteroids significantly affected the airway microbiome
composition. 37 Our study showed similar results: the #-diversity, #-diversity, and mycobiome
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non-ANT/CORT group. " I think that the authors should consider explaining how antibiotics
which do not affect the mycobiome but the microbiome, how the use of antibiotics may be
associated with mycobiome changes. There is a logical leap between the mycobiome and
microbiome, the authors may consider bridging this gap during the discussion. Corticosteroids
is much more understandable, but needs to be contextualized into the change associated with
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"content": "Title: Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients with Pulmonary Hypertension and\nSubgroups\nVersion: 0 Date: 15 Nov 2024\nReviewer's report:\nI am reviewing a manuscript titled \"Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients\nwith Pulmonary Hypertension and Subgroups\" submitted for publication by Dr. Zhang and\ncolleagues. Overall, the manuscript is well written and well described. The authors put in detailed\nwork in their publication. There are some issues I would like to see addressed:\n1. There is a lot of information that is not clearly connected in the manuscript. The message\nand hypothesis needs to be tightened up and made more cohesive. As it stands, the manuscript\nhas interesting conclusions and observations, but perhaps tying it to more cause would actually\nhelp the manuscript give more cohesion. For example, describing or using two different\nclassifications in the manuscript between clinical groups and WHO classifications is difficult to\nunderstand the choice of authors. I suggest that the authors choose one and then put the other\ngroups in the supplementary figure.\n2. The details surrounding antibiotic use should be better described e.g, what antibiotics were\nthe participants exposed to. And the authors should consider explaining in detail how the\nmycobiome may be affected by antibiotics which should not directly affect this form of -oMics.\n3. Finally, One important aspect is that pulmonary hypertension is a symptom of larger\ndiagnoses, for example, COPD and cor pulmonale - could the authors do subanalyses associated\nwith diagnoses instead of classes and WHO groups?\nI will be using the word document page numbers and leftmost line numbers.\nAbstract:\nPage 2, Line 61 \"Dramatically opposite patterns of the two major fungal phyla, Ascomycota and\nBasidiomycota...\" I suggest tempering down this statement, which borders on being an over-\nstatement.\nBackground:\nPage 5, Line 96 \"Although PH is mainly a cardiopulmonary disease, recent study has proposed\nthat it could be considered a systemic disease affecting multiple organs, such as the lungs, heart,\ncentral nervous system, bone marrow, and gut. \" I think there's some issues here is pulmonary\nhypertension is not a disease in it of itself, it is rather a symptom or a syndrome associated with\nmultiple other diseased. I would carefully re-write this sentences to reflect this.\nPage 7 Line 123 \"Extended recruitment procedure and methods are provided in the online\nSupplementary Material.\" In regards to the recruitment, can the authors provide a consort\ndiagram of people screened for recruitment. I would like to see the number of patients who were\nexcluded. Moreover, if all patients/participants received a RHC, could the authors also discuss\nif the RHC was to make the diagnosis or/and if it includes a table of the results from the RHC.\nSupplemental Material Page 2, Line 28 \"The PH group was further divided into the subgroups\nof non-use of antibiotics and/or corticosteroids (non-ANT/CORT) and use of ANT, CORT, or\nANT+CORT within 1 mont\" Can the authors explain why this was done? This is a good category\nto analyze, but I would consider the PH WHO categories more clinical relevant.\nSupplemental Material Page 2, Line 30 \"The patients were diagnosed with chronic obstructive\npulmonary disease, bronchiectasis, interstitial lung disease, and other relevant conditions. All\nof the patients experienced dyspnea, but their echocardiographic probability of PH was low. \"\nI'm surprised that the pH probability was low - can the authors also include the these results in\na table for review?\nSupplemental Material Page 2, Line 34 \"The healthy-control (CON) group was free of\nrespiratory diseases and other serious diseases and had no oral and respiratory infections within\n1 month. \" This wasn't clear, but did these patients/controls also receive RHC? Or was there\njust for samples?\nSupplemental Material: Can the authors include IRB protocol numbers and Patient assurances\nfor each of their sites? While the authors include multiple hospitals, they do not include the IRB\nprotocol approvals - please include these assurances.\nSupplemental Material, Page 2, Line 64 \"The extracted fungal genome DNA from positively\ndetected pharyngeal swab sample and pharyngeal swab blank control and buffer blank control\nwere verified by agarose electrophoresis, as shown in Supplementary Figure S2b.\" Were any\ncontrol samples were obtained?\nSupplemental Material, Page 7, Line 137 \"Figure S2: Quality control for pharyngeal swab\nsamples\na: Bar graphs showing the averaged concentration of PCR amplified DNA products and assigned\n\" For Figure S2, please include all points for Panels A, for Panel C please also include averages\nof control and PH - these are difficult to interpret.\nPage 8, Line 148 \"The #-diversity was performed using mothur (version v. 1.30.2, https://\nmothur.org/wiki/calculators/), with the evaluation index applied at a similarity level of 97% for\nOTUs (0.97). The #-diversity distance matrix is computed by Qiime (2020.2.0, http://qiime.org/\ninstall/index.html).\" I am wondering why the authors decided to use two different pipelines to\ncalculate alpha and beta diversity. I would suggest using one, rather than another.\nStastical anlaysis Page 7 to 9 I am wondering if this would be better moved into the\nsupplementary and the discussion about patient recruitment moved to the paper methods.\nResults:\nPage 10, Line 177 \"As shown in Figure 1a, #-diversity indicated no statistical difference in\nmycobiome richness (Sobs index and Ace index), while significantly lower diversity (indicated\nby decreased Shannon index and increased Simpson index) was observed in patients with PH\nthan in CON. For #-diversity, both non-metric multidimensional scaling (NMDS) using the\nBray-Curtis distance algorithm (Figure 1b) and Partial Least Squares Discriminant Analysis\n(PLS-DA) (Figure 1c)\" The p-values should be expressed on each comparison, even if there are\np=ns. The Beta-diversity comparisons in Panel B and Panel C are possibly significant.\nPage 10, Line 187 \"At the genus level, Candida, Cutaneotrichosporon, Apiotrichum, and\nSarocladium were the most abundant genera with the highest proportion in the PH group, while\nCandida, Fusarium, Cutaneotrichosporon, and Cladosporium in the CON group (Figure 1e). \"\nCan the authors reconcile this with candida found in COVID19 and ILD.\nPage 12, Line 222 \"As seen in Figure 2b, divergent fungal diversity was found by both #-\ndiversity (Shannon index) and #-diversity (NMDS) analyses among three subgroups, with\ngenera Holtermanniella, Trametes, Itersonilia, Psathyrella, and Geotrichum showing dramatic\nenrichment in IPAH but not in CHD-PAH or CTD-PAH.\" In Panels 2a, 2b, and 2c - needs p-\nvalues to be placed on the figure.\nPage 13, Line 259 \"...PH subgroups based on the mPAP levels. Simultaneously, Candida\nincreased dramatically in the PH-low and PH-medium groups (Figure 2d).\" As it's presented,\nthe role of candida is very interesting, have the authors considered the role of candida in other\ndiseases and how it may relate to pulmonary hypertension?\nPage 14, Line 265 \"ANT/CORT (Supplementary Figure S7b), and ANT (Supplementary Figure\nS7c), and CORT (Supplementary Figure S7d), and ANT+CORT groups (Supplementary Figure\nS7e), using Random Forest analysis.\" Can the authors also include the type of antibiotics that\nthe patients were exposed to? Could you include this as a table?\nPage 14 Line 280 \"he abundance of Ascomycota exhibited a gradual increase in non-ANT/\nCORT, ANT, CORT, and ANT+CORT subgroups, whereas the abundance of Basidiomycota\nshowed a gradual decline, and only ANT+CORT group and CON group had statistical difference\n(Figure 3d). \" Is this due to relative abundance diagnosis, can the authors pull out read counts\nto see if this pattern is still true?\nPage 15, Line 289 \". LEfSe multilevel species difference discriminant analysis also indicated\nsimilar fungal genera between the CON and non-ANT/CORT (Figure 4a), or ANT (Figure\n4b), or CORT (Figure 4c), or ANT+CORT (Figure 4d) groups. Moreover, the LEfSe multi-\nlevel species difference discriminant analysis also suggested similar and distinct genera between\nthe non-ANT/CORT and ANT (Figure 4e), or CORT (Figure 4f), or ANT+CORT (Figure 4g)\ngroups.\" Can the authors also use different orthogonal approaches such as DESEq2 or EdgeR\nto calculate other differential enrichment.\nPage 17, Line 337 \"White blood cells and cardiac index were excluded, and the correlation\nbetween the remaining 30 clinical factors and different mycobiome taxa (phyla and genera) was\nanalyzed\" Could the authors explain why this was done? It is not clear that this is actually helpful\nor why these were excluded.\nDiscussion:\nPage 20, Line 380 \"Blockage of the metabolite, trimethylamine N-oxide, which is derived from\nthe intestinal microbial flora and has been proven to be enriched in patients with PH...\" This\nseems as though it's a non-sequitur - is there anything that ties the trimethylamine N-oxide to\nthe mycobiome? I suggest this introduction is tied closer to the mycobiome.\nPage 21, Line 404 \"Notably, through multiple comparisons, we identified stable and\nconsistent mycobiome signatures in PH (and subgroups) compared to CON without being\ninfluenced by ANT, CORT, or both, characterized by specific enrichment of the fungal\ngenera Purpureocillium, Issatchenkia, and Cyberlindnera and a decrease in the fungal genera\nPeroneutypa, Simplicillium, and Metarhizium in PH (and subgroups) compared to CON.\" I am\nnot entirely sure that the authors performed multiple comparisons per se, I understand there are\nmultiple comparisons, but the authors should consider also applying multiple comparisons to\ntheir analysis. LEFSE does not put in adjustment for multiple comparisons, but would be great\nif they could do this in EdgeR.\nPage 21, Line 411 \"Moreover, a specific correlation pattern was observed between the airway\nmycobiome signature and clinical parameters of PH, strongly indicating a potential association\nbetween the altered airway mycobiome and disease progression of PH\" I would recommend that\nwhile this is the hypothesis that the authors are testing, the presentiation of this is difficult to\nunderstand. I suggest that the authors consider significant re-organization of their work - for\nexample - the redundancy of clinical groups and WHO groups does not help discern the message\nand hypothesis of the patients/particiapnts with PH. Especially, when clinicians tend to think\nabout pulmonary hypertension as a syndrome or symptom of a larger issue - thus - I suggest to\neither discuss among authors which Ph groups you would like to use, but I think the use of both\nclinical groups and WHO groups confounds the conclusions. I suggest picking one and moving\nthe other analysis to the supplementary.\nPage 21, Line 418 \"Antibiotics modulate host microbiome rapidly and remarkably. 33,34\nNg et al. reported that antibiotics significantly reshape the gut microbiota composition, and\npostantibiotic recovery depends on multiple factors, including the host diet, community context,\nand environmental reservoirs. 35 Ward et al. showed that antibiotics can alter the #-diversity and\n#-diversity of lung mycobiome. 36 Corticosteroids are immunosuppressive agents that affect\nhost microbiomes. In a meta-analysis of patients with COPD, asthma, and chronic rhinosinusitis,\nHartmann et al. demonstrated that corticosteroids significantly affected the airway microbiome\ncomposition. 37 Our study showed similar results: the #-diversity, #-diversity, and mycobiome\ncomposition were remarkably reduced in the ANT, CORT, or ANT+CORT groups versus the\nnon-ANT/CORT group. \" I think that the authors should consider explaining how antibiotics\nwhich do not affect the mycobiome but the microbiome, how the use of antibiotics may be\nassociated with mycobiome changes. There is a logical leap between the mycobiome and\nmicrobiome, the authors may consider bridging this gap during the discussion. Corticosteroids\nis much more understandable, but needs to be contextualized into the change associated with\npossible immune suppression.\nPage 23, Line 450 \"A recent study reported that P. lilacinum might induce fetal fungal\npneumonia in a green tree Python by excluding other potential pathogens.\" Not sure if this is\nactually helpful.\nMinor\nPage 18, Line 369 \"animal pathogens,s \" there is a typo here.",
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Version: 1 Date: 17 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
On review, the authors have addressed my major concerns and criticism. There are couple of
small corrections to the discussion I would recommend:
Page 21, Line 403 "don’t directly " please avoid conjunctions change to "do not ..."
Page 22, Line 435 "Antibiotics modulate ..." I am not sure if "modulation" is the correct way
we would use or describe the actions of antibiotics. I recommend a better word choice here.
Page 24, Line 469 "Purpureocillium (specifically, P. lilacinum) causes several human diseases."
This is an overstatement and needs to either include the human diseases or include citations.
Page 25, Line 507 "Salivarius" should be not capitalized "salivarius."
Page 25, Line 508 "strongly indicating a causal link between lung/airway bacteria and disease
progression of PH." I think this is a slight overstatement and needs to be softened a bit. There is
not necessarily a causal link as it may be inflammation from the xposure driving PH? The authors
should consider slightly reducing the causal aspect of this sentence and say the association with
microbiota exposure may correlate with PH progression.
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Title: Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients with Pulmonary Hypertension and
Subgroups
Version: 1 Date: 17 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
On review, the authors have addressed my major concerns and criticism. There are couple of
small corrections to the discussion I would recommend:
Page 21, Line 403 "don’t directly " please avoid conjunctions change to "do not ..."
Page 22, Line 435 "Antibiotics modulate ..." I am not sure if "modulation" is the correct way
we would use or describe the actions of antibiotics. I recommend a better word choice here.
Page 24, Line 469 "Purpureocillium (specifically, P. lilacinum) causes several human diseases."
This is an overstatement and needs to either include the human diseases or include citations.
Page 25, Line 507 "Salivarius" should be not capitalized "salivarius."
Page 25, Line 508 "strongly indicating a causal link between lung/airway bacteria and disease
progression of PH." I think this is a slight overstatement and needs to be softened a bit. There is
not necessarily a causal link as it may be inflammation from the xposure driving PH? The authors
should consider slightly reducing the causal aspect of this sentence and say the association with
microbiota exposure may correlate with PH progression.
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Title: Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature in Patients with Pulmonary Hypertension and
Subgroups
Version: 1 Date: 29 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
I am pleased to review the revised manuscript “Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature
in Patients with Pulmonary Hypertension Subgroups.” As I have mentioned previously,
investigating the mycobiome is novel in pulmonary hypertension. The authors have made some
improvements to enhance the presentation of the data since the initial submission
May I please get further clarification on the following:
1. During my initial review, I requested for analyses to be performed to determine whether the
pharyngeal mycobiome can distinguish PH Group types (e.g. WHO Group 1 vs 3, Group 1 vs
4, Group 3 vs 4). Although the analyses were shown in the response letter, I believe that they
should also be shown in the manuscript (in the supplement) for transparency to the readers. Both
ROC curves and random forest analyses should be included because the potential advantage of
evaluating the mycobiome is not just that there is a difference between control vs PH (which
could be due to medication effects) but that the mycobiome may be distinct between these PH
groups.
2. Were there any differences in diversity indices (Shannon, Bray-Curtis) when distinguishing
by PVR instead of mPAP (the low, medium, and high group)? It appears from Figure 6, which
looks at the correlation between phylum level (Ascomycota and Basidiomycota) and clinical
factors of PH, PVR has strong correlations.
Minor comments:
1. In figure 1G, no p-value was shown for Basidiomycota plot.
2. Figure legend for Figure 2 is incorrect. What is described for (B) in the legend is (C).
3. The figure 4 legend is incorrect here: “e-f: LEfSe analysis showing the most discriminant
fungal genera between non-ANT/CORT and ANT (a), CORT (b) or ANT+CORT (c),
respectively. Only taxa with LDA scores > 3 was presented.”
4. Table S2 should have row for PVR.
5. For Figure S4, S5, and S6, please include p values for the boxplots. Additionally, as the graphs
are so similar, please change nomenclature of the graphs so it is clear whether it is with ANT/
CORT just by looking at the figure without referencing the figure legend.
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Version: 1 Date: 29 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
I am pleased to review the revised manuscript “Distinct Airway Mycobiome Signature
in Patients with Pulmonary Hypertension Subgroups.” As I have mentioned previously,
investigating the mycobiome is novel in pulmonary hypertension. The authors have made some
improvements to enhance the presentation of the data since the initial submission
May I please get further clarification on the following:
1. During my initial review, I requested for analyses to be performed to determine whether the
pharyngeal mycobiome can distinguish PH Group types (e.g. WHO Group 1 vs 3, Group 1 vs
4, Group 3 vs 4). Although the analyses were shown in the response letter, I believe that they
should also be shown in the manuscript (in the supplement) for transparency to the readers. Both
ROC curves and random forest analyses should be included because the potential advantage of
evaluating the mycobiome is not just that there is a difference between control vs PH (which
could be due to medication effects) but that the mycobiome may be distinct between these PH
groups.
2. Were there any differences in diversity indices (Shannon, Bray-Curtis) when distinguishing
by PVR instead of mPAP (the low, medium, and high group)? It appears from Figure 6, which
looks at the correlation between phylum level (Ascomycota and Basidiomycota) and clinical
factors of PH, PVR has strong correlations.
Minor comments:
1. In figure 1G, no p-value was shown for Basidiomycota plot.
2. Figure legend for Figure 2 is incorrect. What is described for (B) in the legend is (C).
3. The figure 4 legend is incorrect here: “e-f: LEfSe analysis showing the most discriminant
fungal genera between non-ANT/CORT and ANT (a), CORT (b) or ANT+CORT (c),
respectively. Only taxa with LDA scores > 3 was presented.”
4. Table S2 should have row for PVR.
5. For Figure S4, S5, and S6, please include p values for the boxplots. Additionally, as the graphs
are so similar, please change nomenclature of the graphs so it is clear whether it is with ANT/
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On re-review, the authors have addressed my major concerns and criticism. The issues with
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Version: 0 Date: 08 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
In their manuscript, Sun and colleagues estimate the fraction of stroke (overall, ischemic,
hemorrhagic, and subarachnoid hemorrhagic attributable to six reproductive factors (age at
menarche, age at menopause, high parity, history of stillbirth, history of miscarriage, history
of termination, history of lactation). Data on reproductive factors and covariates were collected
from postmenopausal women in China via baseline survey and stroke was ascertained from
hospital, disease registry, and insurance claims. Additionally, they conducted analyses stratified
by socioeconomic status. They report generally modest population attributable fractions for
reproductive factors in the overall population (the highest proportion being 8.1% of all strokes
attributed to high parity, ~14% attributable to all factors combined). However, PAFs for
investigated factors tended to be much higher among low-SES women compared to high-SES
women.
These results are generally in line with prior studies that have found higher risk of cardiovascular
and cerebrovascular disease among women with early age at menarche, early age at menopause,
high parity, and history of adverse pregnancy outcomes. The study benefits from a large sample,
and the calculation of PAFs is an interesting one. It is typically interpreted as the fraction of
cases of the outcome in a population that could be eliminated if a risk factor could be eliminated.
For the risk factors in question in this study, it is unclear the extent to which they may be causal
versus markers for other causal factors for stroke, such as cardiometabolic disease. Also, some
of these factors are not readily modifiable, and, for those that are, such decisions may not be
likely to be made with future stroke risk in mind. However, I feel that it can still be used to
identify women at elevated risk of stroke based on reproductive history, as the authors discuss.
The results could also, e.g., be used to help highlight risks and challenges faced by low-SES
women in their childbearing years.
Specific comments are listed below:
• Lines 65-67: To what extent do the authors believe these factors are markers for other risk
factors versus causal factors in stroke?
• Lines 117-19: Dichotomizing early age at menarche at #15 versus >15 seems to be a little
high to me. In US studies, early menarche may be defined as <10 or <12 years. Might the
association be diluted by using this cutoff? Further, late age at menarche may also be associated
with chronic disease. Was this explored at all? Factors such as history of stillbirth, miscarriage,
termination, or lactation would more appropriately be restricted to parous women to avoid
mixing of the potential impact of infertility and its associated causes and the reproductive risk
factor in question. Was this done?
• Lines 185-189: Were the population prevalence estimates derived from the survey data or other
sources? If from the data, was the uncertainty in these estimates included in the calculation of the
confidence intervals for the PAFs? Admittedly, this may not add much given the sample size.
• Line 193: it is unclear whether the estimates of the combined PAFs assumed that each of the
reproductive factors had an independent association with stroke
• Overall Results: differences in PAFs among low and high SES women was striking. However,
some estimate of the baseline stroke risk amongst women in these two groups would really help
to further emphasize this contrast
• Overall Discussion: I felt that a bit more discussion of whether or not the factors investigated
were causal or markers for other risk factors, and the potential impact on the interpretation of
results would strengthen this section. In addition, how might potential changes in employment
over time impact the generalizability of the results?
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Title: Socioeconomic variations in the proportions of stroke attributable to reproductive profiles
among postmenopausal women in China
Version: 0 Date: 08 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
In their manuscript, Sun and colleagues estimate the fraction of stroke (overall, ischemic,
hemorrhagic, and subarachnoid hemorrhagic attributable to six reproductive factors (age at
menarche, age at menopause, high parity, history of stillbirth, history of miscarriage, history
of termination, history of lactation). Data on reproductive factors and covariates were collected
from postmenopausal women in China via baseline survey and stroke was ascertained from
hospital, disease registry, and insurance claims. Additionally, they conducted analyses stratified
by socioeconomic status. They report generally modest population attributable fractions for
reproductive factors in the overall population (the highest proportion being 8.1% of all strokes
attributed to high parity, ~14% attributable to all factors combined). However, PAFs for
investigated factors tended to be much higher among low-SES women compared to high-SES
women.
These results are generally in line with prior studies that have found higher risk of cardiovascular
and cerebrovascular disease among women with early age at menarche, early age at menopause,
high parity, and history of adverse pregnancy outcomes. The study benefits from a large sample,
and the calculation of PAFs is an interesting one. It is typically interpreted as the fraction of
cases of the outcome in a population that could be eliminated if a risk factor could be eliminated.
For the risk factors in question in this study, it is unclear the extent to which they may be causal
versus markers for other causal factors for stroke, such as cardiometabolic disease. Also, some
of these factors are not readily modifiable, and, for those that are, such decisions may not be
likely to be made with future stroke risk in mind. However, I feel that it can still be used to
identify women at elevated risk of stroke based on reproductive history, as the authors discuss.
The results could also, e.g., be used to help highlight risks and challenges faced by low-SES
women in their childbearing years.
Specific comments are listed below:
• Lines 65-67: To what extent do the authors believe these factors are markers for other risk
factors versus causal factors in stroke?
• Lines 117-19: Dichotomizing early age at menarche at #15 versus >15 seems to be a little
high to me. In US studies, early menarche may be defined as <10 or <12 years. Might the
association be diluted by using this cutoff? Further, late age at menarche may also be associated
with chronic disease. Was this explored at all? Factors such as history of stillbirth, miscarriage,
termination, or lactation would more appropriately be restricted to parous women to avoid
mixing of the potential impact of infertility and its associated causes and the reproductive risk
factor in question. Was this done?
• Lines 185-189: Were the population prevalence estimates derived from the survey data or other
sources? If from the data, was the uncertainty in these estimates included in the calculation of the
confidence intervals for the PAFs? Admittedly, this may not add much given the sample size.
• Line 193: it is unclear whether the estimates of the combined PAFs assumed that each of the
reproductive factors had an independent association with stroke
• Overall Results: differences in PAFs among low and high SES women was striking. However,
some estimate of the baseline stroke risk amongst women in these two groups would really help
to further emphasize this contrast
• Overall Discussion: I felt that a bit more discussion of whether or not the factors investigated
were causal or markers for other risk factors, and the potential impact on the interpretation of
results would strengthen this section. In addition, how might potential changes in employment
over time impact the generalizability of the results?
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Title: Socioeconomic variations in the proportions of stroke attributable to reproductive profiles
among postmenopausal women in China
Version: 0 Date: 16 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for reviewing this manuscript! The authors examined population-attributable
fractions of stroke and its subtypes associated with reproductive factors among Chinese
postmenopausal women.
There are the following comments:
1. Figure 1: Regarding gynecological operations, it’s suggested that a specific definition be
given. It is inappropriate to exclude participants who underwent surgical menopause or surgical
delivery.
2. Figure 1: Excluding missing data on covariates, it is better to use the multiple imputations
and then do the sensitivity analysis.
3. Figure 1: Follow-up: It’s suggested that more details be added, such as the initial time and
number of visits.
4. Table 1: Why is BMI described as both a continuous and categorical variable? It is fine
to select continuous BMI. The same comments are for the age of menarche and the age of
menopause.
5. Age of menarche: <15 is defined as early menarche. Please provide the references. I didn’t
agree with it at all. The early menarche generally refers to #10 years, and the late menarche
refers to #15 years.
6. High parity: #3# Please provide the references for the definition.
7. Why not include age at childbirth? It’s a critical factor.
8. It should be multilinear for BMI and Waist circumference. Please choose one of the two
variables.
9. For economic status, if the raw data is continuous. It’s unnecessary to categorize them
intentionally. It would be better to include continuous income.
10. Table 1 is too lengthy. The rows of “0” and “No” should be removed.
11. Table 3: The association is insignificant with 0.1(-1.6-1.9). However, the prevalence (%) is
37.2%. It doesn’t make sense.
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Title: Socioeconomic variations in the proportions of stroke attributable to reproductive profiles
among postmenopausal women in China
Version: 0 Date: 16 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for reviewing this manuscript! The authors examined population-attributable
fractions of stroke and its subtypes associated with reproductive factors among Chinese
postmenopausal women.
There are the following comments:
1. Figure 1: Regarding gynecological operations, it’s suggested that a specific definition be
given. It is inappropriate to exclude participants who underwent surgical menopause or surgical
delivery.
2. Figure 1: Excluding missing data on covariates, it is better to use the multiple imputations
and then do the sensitivity analysis.
3. Figure 1: Follow-up: It’s suggested that more details be added, such as the initial time and
number of visits.
4. Table 1: Why is BMI described as both a continuous and categorical variable? It is fine
to select continuous BMI. The same comments are for the age of menarche and the age of
menopause.
5. Age of menarche: <15 is defined as early menarche. Please provide the references. I didn’t
agree with it at all. The early menarche generally refers to #10 years, and the late menarche
refers to #15 years.
6. High parity: #3# Please provide the references for the definition.
7. Why not include age at childbirth? It’s a critical factor.
8. It should be multilinear for BMI and Waist circumference. Please choose one of the two
variables.
9. For economic status, if the raw data is continuous. It’s unnecessary to categorize them
intentionally. It would be better to include continuous income.
10. Table 1 is too lengthy. The rows of “0” and “No” should be removed.
11. Table 3: The association is insignificant with 0.1(-1.6-1.9). However, the prevalence (%) is
37.2%. It doesn’t make sense.
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Title: Socioeconomic variations in the proportions of stroke attributable to reproductive profiles
among postmenopausal women in China
Version: 1 Date: 18 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I appreciate the efforts of Sun et al. to address my comments on their manuscript calculating
the of risk of stroke (overall and by subtype) attributable to reproductive factors among Chinese
women of differing socioeconomic status. Those efforts have added much to what was already
a very interesting manuscript. I have only a couple of additional comments
1. The numbers of the individual stroke subtypes in Figure 1 and the text are slightly higher than
the total number of strokes. Did some cases fall under more than one subtype? If so, it would be
helpful to note this in the footnote and in the text. Or is there some other explanation?
Minor comments
2. Line 112: I suggest replacing “abnormal age” with “implausible age”. “Abnormal age” may
be interpreted as “unusually early or late age at menopause”.
2. Line 372: I recommend replacing “while” with “however”. I believe this better conveys the
authors’ intent.
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Title: Socioeconomic variations in the proportions of stroke attributable to reproductive profiles
among postmenopausal women in China
Version: 1 Date: 18 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I appreciate the efforts of Sun et al. to address my comments on their manuscript calculating
the of risk of stroke (overall and by subtype) attributable to reproductive factors among Chinese
women of differing socioeconomic status. Those efforts have added much to what was already
a very interesting manuscript. I have only a couple of additional comments
1. The numbers of the individual stroke subtypes in Figure 1 and the text are slightly higher than
the total number of strokes. Did some cases fall under more than one subtype? If so, it would be
helpful to note this in the footnote and in the text. Or is there some other explanation?
Minor comments
2. Line 112: I suggest replacing “abnormal age” with “implausible age”. “Abnormal age” may
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2. Line 372: I recommend replacing “while” with “however”. I believe this better conveys the
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Title: Research prioritisation in preparedness for and response to outbreaks of high-consequence
pathogens: a scoping review
Version: 0 Date: 09 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Amesh A. Adalja
Reviewer's report:
I think this paper is interesting and straight forward providing good information on how this
process occurs. One thing that I might suggest considering (optionally) is to add a line or two
about how the pathogens are selected. In my experience, many extraneous considerations factor
into decisions for which pathogens are considered “high consequence” and many are not truly
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Title: Research prioritisation in preparedness for and response to outbreaks of high-consequence
pathogens: a scoping review
Version: 0 Date: 09 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Amesh A. Adalja
Reviewer's report:
I think this paper is interesting and straight forward providing good information on how this
process occurs. One thing that I might suggest considering (optionally) is to add a line or two
about how the pathogens are selected. In my experience, many extraneous considerations factor
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Title: Research prioritisation in preparedness for and response to outbreaks of high-consequence
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Version: 0 Date: 20 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Studies such as this are important and add pieces to the puzzle to ultimately help us prepare for
the next inevitable public health threat. The paper is generally well-written, flows well, and is
easy to read while being engaging. The article does a great job of sharing the most important
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
diseases: results from two cohorts with sibling comparison analyses
Version: 0 Date: 19 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Duan et al examined the association between smoking-related gut microbiota alteration
(represented by smoking-related microbiota index) and obesity, obesity-related disorders, and
obesity-related outcomes. The manuscript is well-written, and data analysis seems ok. The major
concern is the concept of “smoking-related microbiota index”.
1. What’s the necessity of using UKB, NHANES, CHNS, and CHARLS? It only shows the
associations between smoking status (current vs never) and BMI, which has been admitted in
your introduction. Could you explain the adding value of Figure 1 for this study?
2. In WELL-China cohort, 50 microbial genera displayed an association with current smoking
while in the Lanxi cohort, only 19 microbial genera, and only 9 overlapped. The two populations
were of similar age and geographical area. What caused the difference between these two
cohorts? If the association between smoking and gut microbiota varied across populations, how
to justify the validity and reliability of this smoking-related microbiota index?
3. The authors should use one cohort as a replicate cohort for the index.
4. Is it possible to quantify smoking exposure? According to authors, the index was similar
between former smokers and current smokers. Does it suggest cumulative effects of smoking?
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
diseases: results from two cohorts with sibling comparison analyses
Version: 0 Date: 19 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Duan et al examined the association between smoking-related gut microbiota alteration
(represented by smoking-related microbiota index) and obesity, obesity-related disorders, and
obesity-related outcomes. The manuscript is well-written, and data analysis seems ok. The major
concern is the concept of “smoking-related microbiota index”.
1. What’s the necessity of using UKB, NHANES, CHNS, and CHARLS? It only shows the
associations between smoking status (current vs never) and BMI, which has been admitted in
your introduction. Could you explain the adding value of Figure 1 for this study?
2. In WELL-China cohort, 50 microbial genera displayed an association with current smoking
while in the Lanxi cohort, only 19 microbial genera, and only 9 overlapped. The two populations
were of similar age and geographical area. What caused the difference between these two
cohorts? If the association between smoking and gut microbiota varied across populations, how
to justify the validity and reliability of this smoking-related microbiota index?
3. The authors should use one cohort as a replicate cohort for the index.
4. Is it possible to quantify smoking exposure? According to authors, the index was similar
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
diseases: results from two cohorts with sibling comparison analyses
Version: 0 Date: 24 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The study design is unclear. The authors initially describe the work as a systematic review.
However, they perform association analyses by mixing cohort data with national survey data.
Additionally, they include a meta-analysis section.
If this is intended as a systematic review (SR) with a meta-analysis (MA), the protocol must be
registered. The authors do not provide any details on the protocol registration.
Systematic reviews and meta-analyses should be reported in accordance with the most recent
update of the PRISMA statement (2020).
The authors fail to include key sections from the PRISMA checklist, including, most notably,
risk of bias and publication bias.
The authors do not provide forest plots typically associated with meta-analyses.
The authors do not present funnel plots that are standard for meta-analyses.
Finally, the summary measure of association specific to the meta-analysis is not presented.
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Version: 0 Date: 24 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The study design is unclear. The authors initially describe the work as a systematic review.
However, they perform association analyses by mixing cohort data with national survey data.
Additionally, they include a meta-analysis section.
If this is intended as a systematic review (SR) with a meta-analysis (MA), the protocol must be
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The authors do not provide forest plots typically associated with meta-analyses.
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
diseases: results from two cohorts with sibling comparison analyses
Version: 0 Date: 29 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Shankuan Zhu's team utilised population databases to deeply investigate the relationship
between smoking and body weight, revealing a downward trend in BMI among smokers.
In subsequent research, through microbiome data analyses of the WELL-China cohort and
the Lanxi cohort, it was found that the Smoking-Associated Microbiome Index (SMI) was
significantly positively correlated with BMI and other obesity indicators. Further analyses
indicated that SMI was also closely associated with obesity-related diseases. Moreover, the study
effectively addressed potential familial confounding factors through sibling cohort analyses.
Based on these findings, the authors attempted to provide a plausible explanation for the
smoking-obesity paradox. This study's topic is novel and its content highly compelling, offering
a fresh perspective on the complex relationship between smoking and obesity while carrying
significant public health implications and practical value. However, I still have some questions
that require clarification from the authors.
(1)Given that the authors have chosen both population-based studies and microbiome research
to address this issue, it would be beneficial to reflect this dual research perspective clearly from
the title. However, based on the current study content, the focus seems primarily on microbiome-
related analyses. To more comprehensively explore the relationship between smoking and
obesity, the inclusion of additional indicators beyond BMI could be considered. For instance,
datasets like the UK Biobank or NHANES could provide a broader perspective and enrich the
study with supplementary data. Most importantly, it is crucial to incorporate a more objective
measure of smoking exposure, such as nicotine levels. Compared to self-reported questionnaires,
nicotine exposure provides a more accurate reflection of smoking status, significantly enhancing
the scientific robustness and credibility of the study's conclusions. I recommend structuring
the study into two main sections: one focusing on population databases to systematically
explore the association between smoking and obesity, and another delving into microbiome
research to uncover potential biological mechanisms. If it is not feasible to address both aspects
comprehensively, I suggest omitting the population database analysis and concentrating on the
microbiome study to ensure a clearer and more focused research narrative.
(2)The conclusions drawn by the author from the population database are not necessarily specific
to the male population. Currently, the # values from the CHNS and CHARLS databases, which
are also based on Chinese populations, are relatively large, whereas the # values from the WELL-
China cohort and the Lanxi cohort are relatively smaller. How should the author explain this
discrepancy? Are there feasible methods to address or adjust this issue?
(3)Former smokers should not be overlooked. Existing research evidence indicates that
individuals who quit smoking may experience phenomena such as weight gain; however,
quitting smoking can also significantly reduce the risk of adverse health outcomes caused by
smoking. This is a highly valuable and very interesting topic for research.
(4)It is recommended to provide references for certain definitions described in the methodology
section, such as the definition of obesity-related cancers and the reasons for choosing a fixed-
effects model. Additionally, the author is advised to examine and explain relevant factors one
by one to enhance the rigor and scientific validity of the study.
(5)The greatest limitation of this study lies in the excessive complexity of the research content,
while the description of each part is not detailed or rigorous enough, with some content missing.
For example, in the cohort analysis of disease occurrence, the baseline characteristics of the
study population (such as comorbidities) were not sufficiently elaborated. These issues are, in
my opinion, the key areas that require revision. It is recommended that the author thoroughly
refine the structure of the article to ensure clear logic and provide more detailed and scientifically
robust descriptions of each section.
(6)It is recommended to comprehensively polish the language of the article to ensure clear
and fluent expression, as well as to standardize the use of capitalization. Additionally, the
supplementary materials should be carefully reviewed and their order adjusted as necessary.
(7)Considering the highly complex factors influencing gut microbiota and obesity, it is
recommended to provide broader explanations from multiple perspectives regarding the
contradictions between population studies and microbiome research. Furthermore, it is
suggested to enhance the literature review in the introduction and discussion sections.
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
diseases: results from two cohorts with sibling comparison analyses
Version: 0 Date: 29 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Shankuan Zhu's team utilised population databases to deeply investigate the relationship
between smoking and body weight, revealing a downward trend in BMI among smokers.
In subsequent research, through microbiome data analyses of the WELL-China cohort and
the Lanxi cohort, it was found that the Smoking-Associated Microbiome Index (SMI) was
significantly positively correlated with BMI and other obesity indicators. Further analyses
indicated that SMI was also closely associated with obesity-related diseases. Moreover, the study
effectively addressed potential familial confounding factors through sibling cohort analyses.
Based on these findings, the authors attempted to provide a plausible explanation for the
smoking-obesity paradox. This study's topic is novel and its content highly compelling, offering
a fresh perspective on the complex relationship between smoking and obesity while carrying
significant public health implications and practical value. However, I still have some questions
that require clarification from the authors.
(1)Given that the authors have chosen both population-based studies and microbiome research
to address this issue, it would be beneficial to reflect this dual research perspective clearly from
the title. However, based on the current study content, the focus seems primarily on microbiome-
related analyses. To more comprehensively explore the relationship between smoking and
obesity, the inclusion of additional indicators beyond BMI could be considered. For instance,
datasets like the UK Biobank or NHANES could provide a broader perspective and enrich the
study with supplementary data. Most importantly, it is crucial to incorporate a more objective
measure of smoking exposure, such as nicotine levels. Compared to self-reported questionnaires,
nicotine exposure provides a more accurate reflection of smoking status, significantly enhancing
the scientific robustness and credibility of the study's conclusions. I recommend structuring
the study into two main sections: one focusing on population databases to systematically
explore the association between smoking and obesity, and another delving into microbiome
research to uncover potential biological mechanisms. If it is not feasible to address both aspects
comprehensively, I suggest omitting the population database analysis and concentrating on the
microbiome study to ensure a clearer and more focused research narrative.
(2)The conclusions drawn by the author from the population database are not necessarily specific
to the male population. Currently, the # values from the CHNS and CHARLS databases, which
are also based on Chinese populations, are relatively large, whereas the # values from the WELL-
China cohort and the Lanxi cohort are relatively smaller. How should the author explain this
discrepancy? Are there feasible methods to address or adjust this issue?
(3)Former smokers should not be overlooked. Existing research evidence indicates that
individuals who quit smoking may experience phenomena such as weight gain; however,
quitting smoking can also significantly reduce the risk of adverse health outcomes caused by
smoking. This is a highly valuable and very interesting topic for research.
(4)It is recommended to provide references for certain definitions described in the methodology
section, such as the definition of obesity-related cancers and the reasons for choosing a fixed-
effects model. Additionally, the author is advised to examine and explain relevant factors one
by one to enhance the rigor and scientific validity of the study.
(5)The greatest limitation of this study lies in the excessive complexity of the research content,
while the description of each part is not detailed or rigorous enough, with some content missing.
For example, in the cohort analysis of disease occurrence, the baseline characteristics of the
study population (such as comorbidities) were not sufficiently elaborated. These issues are, in
my opinion, the key areas that require revision. It is recommended that the author thoroughly
refine the structure of the article to ensure clear logic and provide more detailed and scientifically
robust descriptions of each section.
(6)It is recommended to comprehensively polish the language of the article to ensure clear
and fluent expression, as well as to standardize the use of capitalization. Additionally, the
supplementary materials should be carefully reviewed and their order adjusted as necessary.
(7)Considering the highly complex factors influencing gut microbiota and obesity, it is
recommended to provide broader explanations from multiple perspectives regarding the
contradictions between population studies and microbiome research. Furthermore, it is
suggested to enhance the literature review in the introduction and discussion sections.
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
diseases: results from two cohorts with sibling comparison analyses
Version: 0 Date: 04 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I enjoy reading this manuscript. I have the following comments for consideration.
1. Could the authors justify the exclusion of participants with BMI <18.5?
2. Why did the authors use a lenient threshold of 0.25 for the Q value (FDR-adjusted p-value)?
3. Why did the authors analyze SMI in tertiles rather than as a continuous variable?
4. Could the authors include overall cancer as an outcome to increase the power?
5. Figure 1 - What are the differences in BMI between never smokers and former smokers and
between current smokers and former smokers?
6. Figure 3 - I recommend the use of log-scale x-axis for odds ratio.
7. Line 376 - What are the potential mechanisms of smoking decreasing obesity?
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
diseases: results from two cohorts with sibling comparison analyses
Version: 0 Date: 04 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I enjoy reading this manuscript. I have the following comments for consideration.
1. Could the authors justify the exclusion of participants with BMI <18.5?
2. Why did the authors use a lenient threshold of 0.25 for the Q value (FDR-adjusted p-value)?
3. Why did the authors analyze SMI in tertiles rather than as a continuous variable?
4. Could the authors include overall cancer as an outcome to increase the power?
5. Figure 1 - What are the differences in BMI between never smokers and former smokers and
between current smokers and former smokers?
6. Figure 3 - I recommend the use of log-scale x-axis for odds ratio.
7. Line 376 - What are the potential mechanisms of smoking decreasing obesity?
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
diseases: results from two cohorts with sibling comparison analyses
Version: 1 Date: 07 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The author has addressed all my concerns. However, there are still minor details that require
revision.
1.The author needs to recheck the citations of figures and tables in the manuscript, as I noticed
that Figure 1 seems to have not been uploaded.
2.Both BMI and smoking are associated with the recently proposed Life’s Essential 8 by
the American Heart Association, and both are closely linked to vascular inflammation.
Moreover, existing studies have supported the role of the gut microbiota as a key mediator of
vascular wall inflammation. Additional discussion on this topic is warranted to expand on the
public health significance of this study.(DOI: 10.3390/microorganisms12112341;DOI: 10.1016/
j.micinf.2024.105406)
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
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Version: 1 Date: 07 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The author has addressed all my concerns. However, there are still minor details that require
revision.
1.The author needs to recheck the citations of figures and tables in the manuscript, as I noticed
that Figure 1 seems to have not been uploaded.
2.Both BMI and smoking are associated with the recently proposed Life’s Essential 8 by
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public health significance of this study.(DOI: 10.3390/microorganisms12112341;DOI: 10.1016/
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Version: 1 Date: 11 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors' responses to my questions are reasonable.
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The authors' responses to my questions are reasonable.
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Title: Smoking-related gut microbiota alteration is associated with obesity and obesity-related
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Version: 1 Date: 22 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors have addressed all my concerns. I do not have further comments.
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Title: A Decision-Analytical Perspective on Incorporating Multiple Outcomes in the Production
of Clinical Prediction Models: defining a taxonomy of risk estimands
Version: 0 Date: 15 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The current work is to raise awareness of multiple outcome event prediction, and present clinical
examples where such prediction is essential to help inform individual decision-making. I have
several comments:
1. This is not a original type article, it may be suitable as a technical note or statistical methods
introduction.
2. in the example of CVD, this can be a composite outcome that include multiple events such
as myocardial infarction, coronary disease and so on.
3. more explanations for the ISARIC 4C model in the main text is needed to facilitate the
reading.
4. It is important to decide whether these outcome events are mutually exclusive; for example,
bleeding and clotting can occur simutaneously in one patient. this can cause the situation
different. The probability of events can sum to > 100%.
5. Machine learning/deep learning models can have multiple classification in the output; This is
an important technical tool with the development of AI, they have special Taxonomy in machine
learning context for the classification purpose. For example, in ensemble modeling ( https://
doi.org/10.1016/j.lers.2021.12.003), many models can handle regression and classification
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Title: A Decision-Analytical Perspective on Incorporating Multiple Outcomes in the Production
of Clinical Prediction Models: defining a taxonomy of risk estimands
Version: 0 Date: 15 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The current work is to raise awareness of multiple outcome event prediction, and present clinical
examples where such prediction is essential to help inform individual decision-making. I have
several comments:
1. This is not a original type article, it may be suitable as a technical note or statistical methods
introduction.
2. in the example of CVD, this can be a composite outcome that include multiple events such
as myocardial infarction, coronary disease and so on.
3. more explanations for the ISARIC 4C model in the main text is needed to facilitate the
reading.
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bleeding and clotting can occur simutaneously in one patient. this can cause the situation
different. The probability of events can sum to > 100%.
5. Machine learning/deep learning models can have multiple classification in the output; This is
an important technical tool with the development of AI, they have special Taxonomy in machine
learning context for the classification purpose. For example, in ensemble modeling ( https://
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Title: A Decision-Analytical Perspective on Incorporating Multiple Outcomes in the Production
of Clinical Prediction Models: defining a taxonomy of risk estimands
Version: 0 Date: 09 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Ulrich Mansmann
Reviewer's report:
I do congratulate the authors for this comprehensive and needed paper.
There are many medical contexts where healthcare decision-making needs to consider risks of
multiple outcome events. Thus, CPMs need to estimate the probability of multiple outcome
events co-occurring. Understanding when, and how, to incorporate multiple outcomes into CPM
is challenging Relevant are intended estimand (the type of predicted risks that we wish the
CPM to estimate). The submitted paper plans to give direction on how to manoeuvre through
this difficult landscape. It raises awareness of multiple outcome event prediction, and presents
clinical examples where such prediction is essential to help inform individual decision-making.
It presents an important contribution to reflect on the ongoing algorithmizing of clinical decision
making.
The authors introduce four taxonomic levels:
Level 1: Estimand is the Predicted Risk of a Single Outcome
Level 2: Estimand is the Predicted Risk of Multiple Competing Outcome Events
Level 3: Estimand is the Predicted Risk of a Composite of Multiple Outcomes
Level 4: Estimand is the Predicted Risk of Different Combinations of Multiple Outcomes
Here my comments:
1. General comment (1): The paper only looks on estimands for the risk estimation. It ignores
that more complicated estimands are needed for the estimation of the patients’ advantage. The
need to combine risk estimates with utilities or other values of patient preferences is ignores.
2. General comment (2): The paper ignores situations when the decision has to be performed
regarding the choice on an optimal treatment out of a large set of options. For example a diabetic
patient has to switch to a new therapy.
3. The introduction identifies two problems: 1.) Unappropriated use of the term multivariate
analysis and 2.) Unprecise definitions of relevant estimands. It would be helpful to give a short
example of an unprecise estimand (after line 20).
4. In 4.1. the prediction horizon is not clear.
5. Regarding box 1, it may helpful to describe risk estimands and risk estimates. The need
to define timeframes and events (Outcome and prediction horizon) as well as the predictors
used. The measurement(s) used for prediction that characterize the individual, that is, that
individualize the predictions. The measurement(s) must be available at the moment(s) of
intended use and measurement procedures must correspond to those in the setting of intended
use. Especially the history of the patient or a clinical status at time of the prediction.
6. Chapter 2 uses the concept of utilities which is not mentioned in the introduction. There should
be a short sentence preparing the use of utilities in chapter 2.
7. The paper does not touch the problem how to quantify the utilities. They may differ from
patient to patient and may underly a multi-criteria problem (his own health, family aspects,
professional aspects…).
8. Especially, each taxonomic level of the risk estimand needs a different concept to quantify
utilities. We also use estimands for the utilities to get correct estimates of the utilities.
9. How helpful is the section between lines 99 and 109? The authors discuss very complex
models which a non-trivial and in general unfamiliar background. Would it be possible to
exemplify this in more detail? Maybe in an electronic methodological supplement?
10. Decision-making is more than risk estimation. Why is the estimand of interest in this paper
not the final risk/utility combination. The title should take care about this by stating that the
authors study risk estimands.
11. The examples given in lines 160 – 162 may also be seen as ordinal: Benign / borderline /
metastatic.
12. It would be good to extend Box 1 from the estimand to the estimator and the estimate.
13. At the end of the paper, I was a bit confused. What is the purpose of the paper? Who is the
addressed reader? Is it the clinician who wants to apply CPMs? Is it the clinician who evaluates
the CPM? Is it the biostatistician starting the journey of CPM development? It would be good to
give to a clinician an example how to apply the taxonomy and how to gain advantage out of it.
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Title: A Decision-Analytical Perspective on Incorporating Multiple Outcomes in the Production
of Clinical Prediction Models: defining a taxonomy of risk estimands
Version: 0 Date: 09 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Ulrich Mansmann
Reviewer's report:
I do congratulate the authors for this comprehensive and needed paper.
There are many medical contexts where healthcare decision-making needs to consider risks of
multiple outcome events. Thus, CPMs need to estimate the probability of multiple outcome
events co-occurring. Understanding when, and how, to incorporate multiple outcomes into CPM
is challenging Relevant are intended estimand (the type of predicted risks that we wish the
CPM to estimate). The submitted paper plans to give direction on how to manoeuvre through
this difficult landscape. It raises awareness of multiple outcome event prediction, and presents
clinical examples where such prediction is essential to help inform individual decision-making.
It presents an important contribution to reflect on the ongoing algorithmizing of clinical decision
making.
The authors introduce four taxonomic levels:
Level 1: Estimand is the Predicted Risk of a Single Outcome
Level 2: Estimand is the Predicted Risk of Multiple Competing Outcome Events
Level 3: Estimand is the Predicted Risk of a Composite of Multiple Outcomes
Level 4: Estimand is the Predicted Risk of Different Combinations of Multiple Outcomes
Here my comments:
1. General comment (1): The paper only looks on estimands for the risk estimation. It ignores
that more complicated estimands are needed for the estimation of the patients’ advantage. The
need to combine risk estimates with utilities or other values of patient preferences is ignores.
2. General comment (2): The paper ignores situations when the decision has to be performed
regarding the choice on an optimal treatment out of a large set of options. For example a diabetic
patient has to switch to a new therapy.
3. The introduction identifies two problems: 1.) Unappropriated use of the term multivariate
analysis and 2.) Unprecise definitions of relevant estimands. It would be helpful to give a short
example of an unprecise estimand (after line 20).
4. In 4.1. the prediction horizon is not clear.
5. Regarding box 1, it may helpful to describe risk estimands and risk estimates. The need
to define timeframes and events (Outcome and prediction horizon) as well as the predictors
used. The measurement(s) used for prediction that characterize the individual, that is, that
individualize the predictions. The measurement(s) must be available at the moment(s) of
intended use and measurement procedures must correspond to those in the setting of intended
use. Especially the history of the patient or a clinical status at time of the prediction.
6. Chapter 2 uses the concept of utilities which is not mentioned in the introduction. There should
be a short sentence preparing the use of utilities in chapter 2.
7. The paper does not touch the problem how to quantify the utilities. They may differ from
patient to patient and may underly a multi-criteria problem (his own health, family aspects,
professional aspects…).
8. Especially, each taxonomic level of the risk estimand needs a different concept to quantify
utilities. We also use estimands for the utilities to get correct estimates of the utilities.
9. How helpful is the section between lines 99 and 109? The authors discuss very complex
models which a non-trivial and in general unfamiliar background. Would it be possible to
exemplify this in more detail? Maybe in an electronic methodological supplement?
10. Decision-making is more than risk estimation. Why is the estimand of interest in this paper
not the final risk/utility combination. The title should take care about this by stating that the
authors study risk estimands.
11. The examples given in lines 160 – 162 may also be seen as ordinal: Benign / borderline /
metastatic.
12. It would be good to extend Box 1 from the estimand to the estimator and the estimate.
13. At the end of the paper, I was a bit confused. What is the purpose of the paper? Who is the
addressed reader? Is it the clinician who wants to apply CPMs? Is it the clinician who evaluates
the CPM? Is it the biostatistician starting the journey of CPM development? It would be good to
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Title: A Decision-Analytical Perspective on Incorporating Multiple Outcomes in the Production
of Clinical Prediction Models: defining a taxonomy of risk estimands
Version: 1 Date: 27 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
my comments are well addressed.
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Title: A Decision-Analytical Perspective on Incorporating Multiple Outcomes in the Production
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Version: 1 Date: 27 Jan 2025
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Title: A Decision-Analytical Perspective on Incorporating Multiple Outcomes in the Production
of Clinical Prediction Models: defining a taxonomy of risk estimands
Version: 1 Date: 02 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Ulrich Mansmann
Reviewer's report:
Many thanks for this important and timely paper. The use of prediction models to improve
clinical decision making is growing and getting more complex. The provided manuscript
provides guidance to structrure this growing field of research activities.
I miss a few aspects in the paper and it would be great if you could incorporate them:
1.) Please mention, that one problem of multi-outcome prediction is also the availability of
appropriate data on the multiple outcomes under study of high quality. Clinical trial data may
be helpfull. It is not clear how data based of electronisc patients recourds may help
2.) A central concept in your manuscript are utilities. From where do you get the utilities? In
your paper they are simply given. No reference for realistic utilities can be found. Or is each
patient defining her/his own utilities? What are tools to elucidate utilities?
3.) At the end you mention dynamic simulation models to derive for a patient a decision between
different options. Multi-state models may be useful but there are may other
simulation techniques for patient histories which could help to settle complex scenarios. There
is a causal issue if you compare different scenarios for a specific patient. An interesting tool to
derive such dynamic models from observational data are model around the g-formula.
4.) You should also mention the large body of literature on multi-criteria decision making.
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Title: A Decision-Analytical Perspective on Incorporating Multiple Outcomes in the Production
of Clinical Prediction Models: defining a taxonomy of risk estimands
Version: 1 Date: 02 Feb 2025
Reviewer: Ulrich Mansmann
Reviewer's report:
Many thanks for this important and timely paper. The use of prediction models to improve
clinical decision making is growing and getting more complex. The provided manuscript
provides guidance to structrure this growing field of research activities.
I miss a few aspects in the paper and it would be great if you could incorporate them:
1.) Please mention, that one problem of multi-outcome prediction is also the availability of
appropriate data on the multiple outcomes under study of high quality. Clinical trial data may
be helpfull. It is not clear how data based of electronisc patients recourds may help
2.) A central concept in your manuscript are utilities. From where do you get the utilities? In
your paper they are simply given. No reference for realistic utilities can be found. Or is each
patient defining her/his own utilities? What are tools to elucidate utilities?
3.) At the end you mention dynamic simulation models to derive for a patient a decision between
different options. Multi-state models may be useful but there are may other
simulation techniques for patient histories which could help to settle complex scenarios. There
is a causal issue if you compare different scenarios for a specific patient. An interesting tool to
derive such dynamic models from observational data are model around the g-formula.
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 08 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
This is a large scale multinational study of psychiatric sequelae of COVID-19. The paper is
clearly written, the methods are reasonable and thoroughly described. A main strength of the
authors’ analytical approach is to examine time-dependence of the effect of COVID-19 on
mental health, something that has not often been done. The authors acknowledge some important
limitations, in my opinion lack of info on acute illness severity is a major one. My main
comments regard the interpretation of the findings.
Comment #1
Lines 309-312: “Biologically, the SARS-CoV-2 virus can invade the central nervous system,
leading to neuroinflammation and potential neural damage, facilitated by the virus’s interaction
with angiotensin-converting enzyme 2 (ACE2) receptors on neurons and glial cells, disrupting
normal brain function and possibly resulting in psychiatric symptoms.35-37”
In my opinion, the references provided by the authors do not give any empirical support
for CNS invasion in humans. They are from 2020-2021 and only include conjectures
and the theoretical possibility of this happening. In fact, recent reviews (eg. https://
doi.org/10.1016/j.mib.2024.102474) state that the mechanisms behind neurological and
psychiatric manifestations connected to SARS-CoV-2 are not understood. Invasion of the CNS
by SARS-CoV-2 has poor empirical support in humans. It is not resolved if invasion occurs, let
alone the mechanism of entry (through PNS or hematogenically). Well conducted clinical studies
that I am aware of (eg. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/35604688/, there may be several
others) do not find credible evidence of viral CNS invasion as a direct cause of neurological
manifestation in acute COVID-19. It then seems far-fetched that they should play a role in long-
term sequelae. Systemic inflammation not directly related to viral invasion of CNS seems to
me an important mechanism of neurological manifestations in acute COVID-19, potentially
resulting in long-term sequelae. The level of systemic inflammation is obviously related to acute
illness severity and can be seen as especially relevant in primary infections in unvaccinated
individuals, which the current study mainly examines.
If the authors wish to stand by the statement above, that invasion of the CNS may be a driver of
neuroinflammation, the authors have to provide references that clearly support this mechanism.
Otherwise I suggest that they revise this.
Comment #2
The authors discuss (page 16, first paragraph) several explanations to the short-lived elevation
of risk for mental disorders. The authors rightly acknowledge the possibility of detection bias (p.
18, line 377 and onwards). I think the authors may consider to even bring up detection bias as a
reasonable explanation to their findings alongside the others, rather than a limitation. The authors
have made reasonable efforts to correct for detection bias by excluding prevalent cases. Still,
mental disorders are severely underdiagnosed or are associated with considerable diagnostic
delay. Arguments for this interpretation: 1. It is difficult to understand how COVID-19 could
double the incidence of chronic health conditions such as neurodevelopmental disorders (how
can ADHD or autism be of new onset in adults, for example) and dementia (an in most cases
slowly progressive disorder with relatively well defined pathophysiology). 2. Considerable
heterogeneity between countries in relative risks are difficult to explain by any SARS-CoV-2 /
COVID-19 related mechanism. 3. There is no established knowledge about such a mechanism
(see previous comment). 4. The short-lived effect is at least compatible with detection bias,
the longer effect on dementia in the UK can simply reflect longer waiting times for dementia
work-up. Bringing up the possibility that authors simply find ongoing but undiagnosed disorders
has important implications for further research. If findings are to some extent driven by
detection bias, we should not put large effort into finding putative biological mechanisms linking
COVID-19 with neurodevelopmental disorders or dementia in adults.
Comment #3
Conclusions: “This phenomenon may be attributed to the redirection of healthcare resources,
diverse pandemic management strategies, and differing rates of socioeconomic recovery rather
than the direct impact of COVID-19 itself.”
Comment #4
Is it not a limitation that the authors study sequelae after COVID-19 in 2020-2021, i.e. mostly
primary infections in unvaccinated people? Such infections are now a small proportion of all
cases of COVID-19. It is known that re-infection or breakthrough infection is associated with
lower risk of adverse outcomes in general. Thus findings cannot be generalized to current
situation as authors are not able to take illness severity, vaccination or previous infection into
account.
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 08 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
This is a large scale multinational study of psychiatric sequelae of COVID-19. The paper is
clearly written, the methods are reasonable and thoroughly described. A main strength of the
authors’ analytical approach is to examine time-dependence of the effect of COVID-19 on
mental health, something that has not often been done. The authors acknowledge some important
limitations, in my opinion lack of info on acute illness severity is a major one. My main
comments regard the interpretation of the findings.
Comment #1
Lines 309-312: “Biologically, the SARS-CoV-2 virus can invade the central nervous system,
leading to neuroinflammation and potential neural damage, facilitated by the virus’s interaction
with angiotensin-converting enzyme 2 (ACE2) receptors on neurons and glial cells, disrupting
normal brain function and possibly resulting in psychiatric symptoms.35-37”
In my opinion, the references provided by the authors do not give any empirical support
for CNS invasion in humans. They are from 2020-2021 and only include conjectures
and the theoretical possibility of this happening. In fact, recent reviews (eg. https://
doi.org/10.1016/j.mib.2024.102474) state that the mechanisms behind neurological and
psychiatric manifestations connected to SARS-CoV-2 are not understood. Invasion of the CNS
by SARS-CoV-2 has poor empirical support in humans. It is not resolved if invasion occurs, let
alone the mechanism of entry (through PNS or hematogenically). Well conducted clinical studies
that I am aware of (eg. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/35604688/, there may be several
others) do not find credible evidence of viral CNS invasion as a direct cause of neurological
manifestation in acute COVID-19. It then seems far-fetched that they should play a role in long-
term sequelae. Systemic inflammation not directly related to viral invasion of CNS seems to
me an important mechanism of neurological manifestations in acute COVID-19, potentially
resulting in long-term sequelae. The level of systemic inflammation is obviously related to acute
illness severity and can be seen as especially relevant in primary infections in unvaccinated
individuals, which the current study mainly examines.
If the authors wish to stand by the statement above, that invasion of the CNS may be a driver of
neuroinflammation, the authors have to provide references that clearly support this mechanism.
Otherwise I suggest that they revise this.
Comment #2
The authors discuss (page 16, first paragraph) several explanations to the short-lived elevation
of risk for mental disorders. The authors rightly acknowledge the possibility of detection bias (p.
18, line 377 and onwards). I think the authors may consider to even bring up detection bias as a
reasonable explanation to their findings alongside the others, rather than a limitation. The authors
have made reasonable efforts to correct for detection bias by excluding prevalent cases. Still,
mental disorders are severely underdiagnosed or are associated with considerable diagnostic
delay. Arguments for this interpretation: 1. It is difficult to understand how COVID-19 could
double the incidence of chronic health conditions such as neurodevelopmental disorders (how
can ADHD or autism be of new onset in adults, for example) and dementia (an in most cases
slowly progressive disorder with relatively well defined pathophysiology). 2. Considerable
heterogeneity between countries in relative risks are difficult to explain by any SARS-CoV-2 /
COVID-19 related mechanism. 3. There is no established knowledge about such a mechanism
(see previous comment). 4. The short-lived effect is at least compatible with detection bias,
the longer effect on dementia in the UK can simply reflect longer waiting times for dementia
work-up. Bringing up the possibility that authors simply find ongoing but undiagnosed disorders
has important implications for further research. If findings are to some extent driven by
detection bias, we should not put large effort into finding putative biological mechanisms linking
COVID-19 with neurodevelopmental disorders or dementia in adults.
Comment #3
Conclusions: “This phenomenon may be attributed to the redirection of healthcare resources,
diverse pandemic management strategies, and differing rates of socioeconomic recovery rather
than the direct impact of COVID-19 itself.”
Comment #4
Is it not a limitation that the authors study sequelae after COVID-19 in 2020-2021, i.e. mostly
primary infections in unvaccinated people? Such infections are now a small proportion of all
cases of COVID-19. It is known that re-infection or breakthrough infection is associated with
lower risk of adverse outcomes in general. Thus findings cannot be generalized to current
situation as authors are not able to take illness severity, vaccination or previous infection into
account.
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 21 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study used data from five countries and investigated the short-, medium, and long-term
risks of psychiatric and neuropsychiatric disorders following COVID-19 infection. The study
is well-written, clear in introduction, results and discussions. I have some questions regarding
the methods.
1. Line 189, “Only the first diagnosis of each outcome following the index date was used.” We
know that psychiatric disorders are highly corelated with each other. Is it enough to only exclude
those with targeted outcome?
2. Line 195, “. For the analysis of each outcome, individuals were excluded if they had
the outcome of interest within 365 days prior to the start of the short- (the index date),
medium-, and long-term observation to ensure the identification of incident cases.” Authors
exclude individuals if they had the outcome of interest within one year prior to the start of the
observations. But some psychiatric disorders can be exit for a longer period and are frequently
relapsed. E.g., After having depression once, people may experience a relapse, either before
recovery is complete or as a later, separate episode. How to address this issue?
3. Another question regarding comparators: How about if they had a diagnosis of COVID-19
during follow-up? When excluding individuals having the outcome of interest before
observation, did the balances after propensity score matching remain?
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 21 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study used data from five countries and investigated the short-, medium, and long-term
risks of psychiatric and neuropsychiatric disorders following COVID-19 infection. The study
is well-written, clear in introduction, results and discussions. I have some questions regarding
the methods.
1. Line 189, “Only the first diagnosis of each outcome following the index date was used.” We
know that psychiatric disorders are highly corelated with each other. Is it enough to only exclude
those with targeted outcome?
2. Line 195, “. For the analysis of each outcome, individuals were excluded if they had
the outcome of interest within 365 days prior to the start of the short- (the index date),
medium-, and long-term observation to ensure the identification of incident cases.” Authors
exclude individuals if they had the outcome of interest within one year prior to the start of the
observations. But some psychiatric disorders can be exit for a longer period and are frequently
relapsed. E.g., After having depression once, people may experience a relapse, either before
recovery is complete or as a later, separate episode. How to address this issue?
3. Another question regarding comparators: How about if they had a diagnosis of COVID-19
during follow-up? When excluding individuals having the outcome of interest before
observation, did the balances after propensity score matching remain?
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 31 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
Authors should provide an abbreviated description of the databases they accessed across
countries and are they comparable (e.g., do they represent diverse patients of socioeconomic
backgrounds).
- The authors noted that elevated risk for a psychiatric diagnosis the first 6 months following
the infection. How do they know if the diagnosis is new versus continued? And those who had
a diagnosis before and suddenly had exacerbation of symptoms?
- The authors should consider completing separate analyses for those who had the infection
during the peak of the pandemic (i.e., during social distancing and quarantine practices) as
compared to towards the end or post-pandemic. I question if the initial elevated risk for
psychiatric disorders are compounded by pandemic-related stressors such as reduced social
supports, anxiety about pandemic-related disruptions to school/work/social life, etc.
- What was the rational for the age cohorts (e.g. 18-24 years, 25-44 years, 45-64 years)?
- Are sleep disorders defined as behavioral sleep disruptions (e.g. insomnia, hypersomnia, etc.)
or sleep breathing disorders?
- Neurodevelopmental disorders is a very broad group and is not very meaningful when authors
collapse this all into one (Intellectual disability/IDD, autism and ADHD are all considered a
developmental disorder but have different implications on functioning). Authors should strongly
consider separating this into more common developmental disorders e.g., ADHD, IDD, Specific
Learning Disability as it is much more likely some disorders are more evident with worsened
symptoms (e.g., ADHD) whereas others neuropsychologist would not expect significant change
following COVID (e.g. IDD).
-Authors should include information on the cohort’s preexisting diagnoses (i.e., diagnoses pre-
COVID infection) if they have the data, and if not, provide more in depth discussion about this.
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 31 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
Authors should provide an abbreviated description of the databases they accessed across
countries and are they comparable (e.g., do they represent diverse patients of socioeconomic
backgrounds).
- The authors noted that elevated risk for a psychiatric diagnosis the first 6 months following
the infection. How do they know if the diagnosis is new versus continued? And those who had
a diagnosis before and suddenly had exacerbation of symptoms?
- The authors should consider completing separate analyses for those who had the infection
during the peak of the pandemic (i.e., during social distancing and quarantine practices) as
compared to towards the end or post-pandemic. I question if the initial elevated risk for
psychiatric disorders are compounded by pandemic-related stressors such as reduced social
supports, anxiety about pandemic-related disruptions to school/work/social life, etc.
- What was the rational for the age cohorts (e.g. 18-24 years, 25-44 years, 45-64 years)?
- Are sleep disorders defined as behavioral sleep disruptions (e.g. insomnia, hypersomnia, etc.)
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- Neurodevelopmental disorders is a very broad group and is not very meaningful when authors
collapse this all into one (Intellectual disability/IDD, autism and ADHD are all considered a
developmental disorder but have different implications on functioning). Authors should strongly
consider separating this into more common developmental disorders e.g., ADHD, IDD, Specific
Learning Disability as it is much more likely some disorders are more evident with worsened
symptoms (e.g., ADHD) whereas others neuropsychologist would not expect significant change
following COVID (e.g. IDD).
-Authors should include information on the cohort’s preexisting diagnoses (i.e., diagnoses pre-
COVID infection) if they have the data, and if not, provide more in depth discussion about this.
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 11 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I thank the authors for thoroughly addressing my comments. I am satisfied with their answers
and revisions.
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 11 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I thank the authors for thoroughly addressing my comments. I am satisfied with their answers
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
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Version: 1 Date: 13 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 08 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript “Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
multinational cohort study” outlines a study that includes data from electronic medical records
across countries to examine risk of psychiatric diagnoses including depression, anxiety disorder,
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Title: Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
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Version: 1 Date: 08 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript “Psychiatric and neuropsychiatric sequelae of COVID-19 within two years: A
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Title: Effect of a Single-dose Denosumab on Mineral Homeostasis in Infertile Men: Insights
from a Pilot Intervention Study and a Randomized Controlled Trial
Version: 0 Date: 08 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Jan Št#pán
Reviewer's report:
Previously, the authors reported that a single injection of denosumab may be used to improve
male fertility potential in a sub-population of infertile men. This study provides evidence that
a single injection of denosumab in infertile men has no major persistent impact on bone or
mineral homeostasis. The hypothesis to be tested is well defined. The methods, data and analysis
are described in sufficient detail to be reproduced, ant they adequately test the hypothesis and
support the conclusions. Appropriate figures have been provided. The information provided by
the paper is clinically relevant.
Minor comment
Please, consider mentioning absence of other biomarkers in the limitations of the study. A more
reliable marker of osteoblast activity, such as PINP was not provided. Total serum alkaline
phosphatase was measured, but is it known whether there any effects of denosumab on the liver
isoform? Were the extended effects of denosumab on PTH accompanied by changes in FGF23
and 1,25(OH)2D3? Serum betaCTX could provide evidence on suppression of osteoclastic bone
resorption.
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Title: Effect of a Single-dose Denosumab on Mineral Homeostasis in Infertile Men: Insights
from a Pilot Intervention Study and a Randomized Controlled Trial
Version: 0 Date: 08 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Jan Št#pán
Reviewer's report:
Previously, the authors reported that a single injection of denosumab may be used to improve
male fertility potential in a sub-population of infertile men. This study provides evidence that
a single injection of denosumab in infertile men has no major persistent impact on bone or
mineral homeostasis. The hypothesis to be tested is well defined. The methods, data and analysis
are described in sufficient detail to be reproduced, ant they adequately test the hypothesis and
support the conclusions. Appropriate figures have been provided. The information provided by
the paper is clinically relevant.
Minor comment
Please, consider mentioning absence of other biomarkers in the limitations of the study. A more
reliable marker of osteoblast activity, such as PINP was not provided. Total serum alkaline
phosphatase was measured, but is it known whether there any effects of denosumab on the liver
isoform? Were the extended effects of denosumab on PTH accompanied by changes in FGF23
and 1,25(OH)2D3? Serum betaCTX could provide evidence on suppression of osteoclastic bone
resorption.
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12916_2025_3958_ReviewerReport_V0_R1.pdf
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BMC Medicine Peer Reviews
This dataset contains peer reviews from BMC, standardized to match the format of the pawin205/PeerRT dataset.
Dataset Structure
Each record contains the following attributes:
relative_rank: Default value (0).win_prob: Default value (0.0).title: Title of the paper.abstract: Abstract of the paper.full_text: Full text of the paper (or review text if unavailable).review: The peer review text.source: Source of the data ('BMC').review_src: Original filename of the review.criteria_count: Dictionary containing counts of specific criteria in the review (e.g., criticism, praise).dimension_scores: Dictionary containing scores for various dimensions.overall_score: Computed overall score (reward value).thinking_trace: Placeholder (empty).prompt: Placeholder (empty).prompt_length: Placeholder (0).conversations: List of dictionaries representing the conversation (User/Assistant format).year: Year of publication (if available).
Usage
from datasets import load_dataset
dataset = load_dataset("JerMa88/BMC_Medicine_Peer_Reviews")
print(dataset['train'][0])
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