FOSS expansion/reiteration may strengthen understanding of it's importance
For layman like myself, a deaper explanation of FOSS and why it is so valuable to Monero could help strengthen the reader's comprehension and understanding. A few additional sentences or paragraphs would probably do the trick.

Perhaps add something after here in "What is Monero" section:
> Monero is based on the CryptoNote protocol and it uses the most powerful cryptographic techniques in order to hide the sender, the receiver, and the amounts transacted. Monero is not a corporation; rather it is an open source project. **_Being open source allows Monero to....fill in the blank...._**

In "Why Open Source" section, maybe consider expanding or reiterating the importance:

> The benefits of open-source software, namely trust and security, align well with the goals of cryptocurrency, which is why the code to The Monero Project is completely open-source. **_This sets Monero apart from other major cryptocurrency projects and allows it to...fill in the blank...._**

Also, under the "Why Monero" section, perhaps add something along the lines of: 

> Decentralisation: **_Due its open-source nature,_** Monero cannot be centralized, meaning no one can block you from sending and receiving coins;