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Title: Impact of Coronary Artery Calcium on Progression of Diastolic Dysfunction: A Cohort
Study
Version: 2 Date: 29 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Below is my response and feedback. Please incorporate in your submission website. I appreciate
your help. I am traveling and would not be able to do this in the format your office would have
preferred. I apologize for any inconvenience.
Response: Reviewer 3
I would like to congratulate the authors for the evident hard work in revising the manuscript.
All my concerns were addressed with a very much improved revision.
Thank you very much for the authors’ openness for critic. Most importantly for the
patience and fortitude in accomplishing a meaningful cardiovascular population health study.
Congratulations! I have no further comments and I look forward seeing this manuscript
published
Thank you very much for the opportunity to review this meaningful study.
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Title: Impact of Coronary Artery Calcium on Progression of Diastolic Dysfunction: A Cohort
Study
Version: 2 Date: 29 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Below is my response and feedback. Please incorporate in your submission website. I appreciate
your help. I am traveling and would not be able to do this in the format your office would have
preferred. I apologize for any inconvenience.
Response: Reviewer 3
I would like to congratulate the authors for the evident hard work in revising the manuscript.
All my concerns were addressed with a very much improved revision.
Thank you very much for the authors’ openness for critic. Most importantly for the
patience and fortitude in accomplishing a meaningful cardiovascular population health study.
Congratulations! I have no further comments and I look forward seeing this manuscript
published
Thank you very much for the opportunity to review this meaningful study.
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Title: Development of an Artificial Intelligence-Based Multimodal Diagnostic System for Early
Detection of Biliary Atresia
Version: 0 Date: 03 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Muhammad Owais
Reviewer's report:
*Overall Impression*
This manuscript presents a well-structured and innovative study leveraging multimodal data and
deep learning for the early detection of biliary atresia (BA). The technical approach is sound,
and the results demonstrate promising performance. The study addresses a significant clinical
challenge and highlights the potential of artificial intelligence (AI) in improving diagnostic
accuracy.
*Major Comments*
1. *Literature Review*: While comprehensive, some references are outdated. Include recent
studies on BA diagnosis and AI applications in medical imaging.
2. *Dataset Description*: Provide more details on data quality control, patient demographics,
and lesion characteristics.
3. *Model Interpretability*: Discuss the limitations of using Grad-CAM for visualization and
consider alternative methods for explaining model decisions.
4. *Clinical Relevance*: Expand on the potential clinical impact, including integration into
existing diagnostic workflows and potential cost savings.
5. *Comparison with Existing Studies*: Clarify how the proposed model differs from existing
BA diagnosis models and provide direct performance comparisons.
*Suggestions for Future Work*
1. Investigate transfer learning and domain adaptation techniques to improve model
generalizability.
2. Explore the use of other AI architectures for BA diagnosis.
3. Conduct a cost-effectiveness analysis of the proposed AI system.
*Recommendation*
With revisions addressing the above comments, this manuscript has the potential to make a
valuable contribution to the field of medical imaging and AI.
*Specific Questions*
1. How did you ensure data quality and consistency across different modalities?
2. Were any data augmentation strategies employed to increase dataset size?
3. Can you provide more details on the computational resources used for training and testing?
4. How do you plan to address potential overfitting issues in future studies?
*Rating*
- Originality: 9/10
- Technical Quality: 9/10
- Significance: 9/10
- Presentation: 8.5/10
- Overall: 9/10
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Title: Development of an Artificial Intelligence-Based Multimodal Diagnostic System for Early
Detection of Biliary Atresia
Version: 0 Date: 03 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Muhammad Owais
Reviewer's report:
*Overall Impression*
This manuscript presents a well-structured and innovative study leveraging multimodal data and
deep learning for the early detection of biliary atresia (BA). The technical approach is sound,
and the results demonstrate promising performance. The study addresses a significant clinical
challenge and highlights the potential of artificial intelligence (AI) in improving diagnostic
accuracy.
*Major Comments*
1. *Literature Review*: While comprehensive, some references are outdated. Include recent
studies on BA diagnosis and AI applications in medical imaging.
2. *Dataset Description*: Provide more details on data quality control, patient demographics,
and lesion characteristics.
3. *Model Interpretability*: Discuss the limitations of using Grad-CAM for visualization and
consider alternative methods for explaining model decisions.
4. *Clinical Relevance*: Expand on the potential clinical impact, including integration into
existing diagnostic workflows and potential cost savings.
5. *Comparison with Existing Studies*: Clarify how the proposed model differs from existing
BA diagnosis models and provide direct performance comparisons.
*Suggestions for Future Work*
1. Investigate transfer learning and domain adaptation techniques to improve model
generalizability.
2. Explore the use of other AI architectures for BA diagnosis.
3. Conduct a cost-effectiveness analysis of the proposed AI system.
*Recommendation*
With revisions addressing the above comments, this manuscript has the potential to make a
valuable contribution to the field of medical imaging and AI.
*Specific Questions*
1. How did you ensure data quality and consistency across different modalities?
2. Were any data augmentation strategies employed to increase dataset size?
3. Can you provide more details on the computational resources used for training and testing?
4. How do you plan to address potential overfitting issues in future studies?
*Rating*
- Originality: 9/10
- Technical Quality: 9/10
- Significance: 9/10
- Presentation: 8.5/10
- Overall: 9/10
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Title: Development of an Artificial Intelligence-Based Multimodal Diagnostic System for Early
Detection of Biliary Atresia
Version: 0 Date: 30 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript presents a comprehensive study on developing and validating an artificial
intelligence-based multimodal diagnostic system for early detection of biliary atresia (BA). The
authors constructed a large multimodal BA dataset, comprising ultrasound images, clinical data,
and laboratory results, and developed both comprehensive and simplified deep learning models.
The study demonstrated that their AI system achieved high diagnostic accuracy (AUC 0.9870
on internal test set and 0.9740 on external validation), outperforming or matching experienced
radiologists. Furthermore, the system showed significant potential in improving the diagnostic
accuracy of less experienced radiologists.
Positive aspects:
The study addresses a critical clinical need with a novel approach, utilizing a relatively large
multimodal BA dataset. The comprehensive inclusion of various data types (ultrasound images,
clinical information, and laboratory data) provides a more complete diagnostic picture than
previous single-modality approaches. The methodology is robust and well-designed, including
both retrospective and prospective validation, and the development of simplified models for
practical clinical implementation. The comparison with radiologists of varying experience levels
adds significant clinical relevance to the findings. The technical innovation of the self-masked
attention mechanism for handling multimodal data fusion and missing data is noteworthy. The
model's architecture allows for flexible component switching to accommodate different clinical
scenarios and requirements.
The manuscript also has some weaknesses:
The study shows a notable gap in the comprehensive analysis of misdiagnosed cases. While the
overall performance metrics are impressive, there is insufficient investigation into false positive
and false negative cases, particularly regarding how different modalities contribute to these
misdiagnoses. The study would benefit from a detailed examination of cases where the model
failed, including analysis of specific clinical characteristics (such as age, gender, bilirubin levels)
that might be associated with incorrect predictions. Understanding these patterns could provide
valuable insights for model improvement and help clinicians better understand the system's
limitations in specific clinical scenarios.
Although the study includes prospective external validation, its generalizability remains
questionable due to single-institution validation. Multi-center validation across different
healthcare settings, geographical locations, and resource levels would provide more robust
evidence of the model's real-world applicability. This is particularly important given the
varying prevalence and presentation of biliary atresia across different populations and healthcare
systems. The study would be strengthened by validation data from institutions with different
levels of expertise and technical capabilities. They also inadequately addresses several critical
implementation aspects. The computational requirements for deploying the system in clinical
practice, including hardware specifications, processing time, and integration with existing
healthcare IT infrastructure, are not thoroughly discussed.
The manuscript does not sufficiently explore the impact of technical variations on model
performance. This is particularly relevant for ultrasound-based diagnostics, where image quality
can vary significantly based on operator experience, equipment quality, and patient factors. The
robustness of the model against variations in image acquisition parameters, ultrasound machine
specifications, and operator technique needs more thorough evaluation. The demographic
considerations deserve more attention. The study does not adequately address how ethnic
differences in BA incidence might affect the model's performance, nor does it explore potential
variations in disease presentation across different populations. A more comprehensive analysis
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populations and healthcare settings. Even if such work cannot be completed, the author should
explain it in the discussion section. The author also does not thoroughly investigate the model's
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some insight into the model's decision-making process, there is limited analysis of whether
these highlighted features align with clinically recognized diagnostic markers. The study would
benefit from a more detailed comparison between the features identified as significant by the AI
system and those traditionally used by experienced clinicians. This gap in interpretability could
affect clinicians' trust and acceptance of the system in real-world practice.
The study lacks comprehensive evaluation of the model's performance in challenging clinical
scenarios, including special patient populations and edge cases. The study also does not address
the model's reliability in cases where some input data are missing or of poor quality, which is a
common scenario in clinical practice. Understanding the model's limitations in these challenging
cases is crucial for safe clinical implementation and appropriate use by healthcare providers.
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Title: Development of an Artificial Intelligence-Based Multimodal Diagnostic System for Early
Detection of Biliary Atresia
Version: 0 Date: 30 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript presents a comprehensive study on developing and validating an artificial
intelligence-based multimodal diagnostic system for early detection of biliary atresia (BA). The
authors constructed a large multimodal BA dataset, comprising ultrasound images, clinical data,
and laboratory results, and developed both comprehensive and simplified deep learning models.
The study demonstrated that their AI system achieved high diagnostic accuracy (AUC 0.9870
on internal test set and 0.9740 on external validation), outperforming or matching experienced
radiologists. Furthermore, the system showed significant potential in improving the diagnostic
accuracy of less experienced radiologists.
Positive aspects:
The study addresses a critical clinical need with a novel approach, utilizing a relatively large
multimodal BA dataset. The comprehensive inclusion of various data types (ultrasound images,
clinical information, and laboratory data) provides a more complete diagnostic picture than
previous single-modality approaches. The methodology is robust and well-designed, including
both retrospective and prospective validation, and the development of simplified models for
practical clinical implementation. The comparison with radiologists of varying experience levels
adds significant clinical relevance to the findings. The technical innovation of the self-masked
attention mechanism for handling multimodal data fusion and missing data is noteworthy. The
model's architecture allows for flexible component switching to accommodate different clinical
scenarios and requirements.
The manuscript also has some weaknesses:
The study shows a notable gap in the comprehensive analysis of misdiagnosed cases. While the
overall performance metrics are impressive, there is insufficient investigation into false positive
and false negative cases, particularly regarding how different modalities contribute to these
misdiagnoses. The study would benefit from a detailed examination of cases where the model
failed, including analysis of specific clinical characteristics (such as age, gender, bilirubin levels)
that might be associated with incorrect predictions. Understanding these patterns could provide
valuable insights for model improvement and help clinicians better understand the system's
limitations in specific clinical scenarios.
Although the study includes prospective external validation, its generalizability remains
questionable due to single-institution validation. Multi-center validation across different
healthcare settings, geographical locations, and resource levels would provide more robust
evidence of the model's real-world applicability. This is particularly important given the
varying prevalence and presentation of biliary atresia across different populations and healthcare
systems. The study would be strengthened by validation data from institutions with different
levels of expertise and technical capabilities. They also inadequately addresses several critical
implementation aspects. The computational requirements for deploying the system in clinical
practice, including hardware specifications, processing time, and integration with existing
healthcare IT infrastructure, are not thoroughly discussed.
The manuscript does not sufficiently explore the impact of technical variations on model
performance. This is particularly relevant for ultrasound-based diagnostics, where image quality
can vary significantly based on operator experience, equipment quality, and patient factors. The
robustness of the model against variations in image acquisition parameters, ultrasound machine
specifications, and operator technique needs more thorough evaluation. The demographic
considerations deserve more attention. The study does not adequately address how ethnic
differences in BA incidence might affect the model's performance, nor does it explore potential
variations in disease presentation across different populations. A more comprehensive analysis
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The study lacks comprehensive evaluation of the model's performance in challenging clinical
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the model's reliability in cases where some input data are missing or of poor quality, which is a
common scenario in clinical practice. Understanding the model's limitations in these challenging
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Title: Development of an Artificial Intelligence-Based Multimodal Diagnostic System for Early
Detection of Biliary Atresia
Version: 1 Date: 18 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors’ response to the reviewers' comments is exceptionally detailed and well-organized,
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Title: Development of an Artificial Intelligence-Based Multimodal Diagnostic System for Early
Detection of Biliary Atresia
Version: 1 Date: 18 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors’ response to the reviewers' comments is exceptionally detailed and well-organized,
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Title: Global and Regional Incidence of Intrahepatic Cholestasis of Pregnancy: A Systematic
Review and Meta-Analysis
Version: 0 Date: 05 Jun 2024
Reviewer's report:
This is a systematic review and meta-analysis of ICP incidence to better understand the incidence
of ICP globally. The authors performed a systematic review and did not limit by language
or peer-reviewed journal to include all possible studies. They removed articles that used a
similar, but smaller cohort so the same cohort was not included multiple times. The authors
also performed a risk of bias analysis on all articles. Overall they find that the incidence of ICP
varies by region and report this variable incidence. I have proposed revisions below to make
this paper stronger.
The authors note that studies with larger sample size had lower incidences of ICP, suggesting that
those with smaller sample sizes overestimate incidence. It would benefit this paper to perform
an additional analysis utilizing only the large size studies (greater than their cut off of 2486) per
country/region to get a more accurate estimate of actual incidence globally. The paper would
also benefit from more explanation of the difference in incidence rates between studies deemed
to be lower verse higher risk of bias.
The authors found that lower and middle income countries have a higher incidence rates of
ICP than in developed countries. It would be helpful to know the study designs for these
countries. If in lower and middle income countries many uncomplicated births do not present to
hospitals then this could be a selection bias- women with symptoms coming to seek medical care
when they have pruritus and uncomplicated pregnancies not getting counted in the denominator
because they do not present for hospital care. Please clarify if studies were population based or
accumulated from patients presenting for medical care only.
The authors perform analyses involving the predominant religion from each country and
report that the incidence of ICP correlates with certain religions. However this appears to be
confounded by country since it is not actually analyzing the religions of the people who have
ICP but rather the dominant religion of the country they are in. It would be better to just leave
it out and report only the countries and regions with higher incidence which they also do. If
the authors feel religion needs to be included, then the discussion section needs to indicate why
and what the “cultural conventions” (line 216-217) could be that lead to higher rates of ICP by
country’s religion.
They note that the incidence of ICP did not change over time. It would be interesting to analyze
if reported fetal/birth complications (pre term labor, PPROM, stillbirth) did change over time as
other studies suggest the complications have decreased.
Typo in line 181- says resorptive instead of retrospective.
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Title: Global and Regional Incidence of Intrahepatic Cholestasis of Pregnancy: A Systematic
Review and Meta-Analysis
Version: 0 Date: 05 Jun 2024
Reviewer's report:
This is a systematic review and meta-analysis of ICP incidence to better understand the incidence
of ICP globally. The authors performed a systematic review and did not limit by language
or peer-reviewed journal to include all possible studies. They removed articles that used a
similar, but smaller cohort so the same cohort was not included multiple times. The authors
also performed a risk of bias analysis on all articles. Overall they find that the incidence of ICP
varies by region and report this variable incidence. I have proposed revisions below to make
this paper stronger.
The authors note that studies with larger sample size had lower incidences of ICP, suggesting that
those with smaller sample sizes overestimate incidence. It would benefit this paper to perform
an additional analysis utilizing only the large size studies (greater than their cut off of 2486) per
country/region to get a more accurate estimate of actual incidence globally. The paper would
also benefit from more explanation of the difference in incidence rates between studies deemed
to be lower verse higher risk of bias.
The authors found that lower and middle income countries have a higher incidence rates of
ICP than in developed countries. It would be helpful to know the study designs for these
countries. If in lower and middle income countries many uncomplicated births do not present to
hospitals then this could be a selection bias- women with symptoms coming to seek medical care
when they have pruritus and uncomplicated pregnancies not getting counted in the denominator
because they do not present for hospital care. Please clarify if studies were population based or
accumulated from patients presenting for medical care only.
The authors perform analyses involving the predominant religion from each country and
report that the incidence of ICP correlates with certain religions. However this appears to be
confounded by country since it is not actually analyzing the religions of the people who have
ICP but rather the dominant religion of the country they are in. It would be better to just leave
it out and report only the countries and regions with higher incidence which they also do. If
the authors feel religion needs to be included, then the discussion section needs to indicate why
and what the “cultural conventions” (line 216-217) could be that lead to higher rates of ICP by
country’s religion.
They note that the incidence of ICP did not change over time. It would be interesting to analyze
if reported fetal/birth complications (pre term labor, PPROM, stillbirth) did change over time as
other studies suggest the complications have decreased.
Typo in line 181- says resorptive instead of retrospective.
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"content": "Title: Global and Regional Incidence of Intrahepatic Cholestasis of Pregnancy: A Systematic\nReview and Meta-Analysis\nVersion: 0 Date: 05 Jun 2024\nReviewer's report:\nThis is a systematic review and meta-analysis of ICP incidence to better understand the incidence\nof ICP globally. The authors performed a systematic review and did not limit by language\nor peer-reviewed journal to include all possible studies. They removed articles that used a\nsimilar, but smaller cohort so the same cohort was not included multiple times. The authors\nalso performed a risk of bias analysis on all articles. Overall they find that the incidence of ICP\nvaries by region and report this variable incidence. I have proposed revisions below to make\nthis paper stronger.\nThe authors note that studies with larger sample size had lower incidences of ICP, suggesting that\nthose with smaller sample sizes overestimate incidence. It would benefit this paper to perform\nan additional analysis utilizing only the large size studies (greater than their cut off of 2486) per\ncountry/region to get a more accurate estimate of actual incidence globally. The paper would\nalso benefit from more explanation of the difference in incidence rates between studies deemed\nto be lower verse higher risk of bias.\nThe authors found that lower and middle income countries have a higher incidence rates of\nICP than in developed countries. It would be helpful to know the study designs for these\ncountries. If in lower and middle income countries many uncomplicated births do not present to\nhospitals then this could be a selection bias- women with symptoms coming to seek medical care\nwhen they have pruritus and uncomplicated pregnancies not getting counted in the denominator\nbecause they do not present for hospital care. Please clarify if studies were population based or\naccumulated from patients presenting for medical care only.\nThe authors perform analyses involving the predominant religion from each country and\nreport that the incidence of ICP correlates with certain religions. However this appears to be\nconfounded by country since it is not actually analyzing the religions of the people who have\nICP but rather the dominant religion of the country they are in. It would be better to just leave\nit out and report only the countries and regions with higher incidence which they also do. If\nthe authors feel religion needs to be included, then the discussion section needs to indicate why\nand what the “cultural conventions” (line 216-217) could be that lead to higher rates of ICP by\ncountry’s religion.\nThey note that the incidence of ICP did not change over time. It would be interesting to analyze\nif reported fetal/birth complications (pre term labor, PPROM, stillbirth) did change over time as\nother studies suggest the complications have decreased.\nTypo in line 181- says resorptive instead of retrospective.",
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Title: Global and Regional Incidence of Intrahepatic Cholestasis of Pregnancy: A Systematic
Review and Meta-Analysis
Version: 0 Date: 07 Jun 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for a very thorough review.
Abstract 1.1 line 49: "Account for" would be better than "justify"
Abstract 1:3 line 59 and Results lines 162 and 194: "Gestating individuals" is an awful non-
English phrase! "Pregnant women" (or "Pregnant people", "Pregnant persons", or even
"Gravidas", if you really cannot accept "women"!) would be much better.
Abstract 1:4 line 67: "Variation" would be better than "varieties".
Introduction 2 line 71: too many "commonly"s. Suggest either replace the first with "frequently"
or the second with "usually".
Introduction 2 line 73: Pruritus often disappears within hours or days of birth (Girling. ICP:
Greentop guideline 2022). Biochemical changes may take longer, as there are physiological
postpartum rises in transaminases that may be confusing.
Introduction 2 line 74 and following: Both AFLP and pre-eclampsia can coexist with ICP, so
"Pruritus" is not necessarily a distinguishing feature.
Introduction 2 line 74 and Discussion 5 lines 249, 253, 25: while "levels" are commonly used of
an analyte, it is a loose and inaccurate phrase: it is much better to talk/write of "concentrations"
of analytes in body, or indeed in any, fluids.
Introduction 2 line 76: "Except for maternal discomfort" is confusing and unnecessary in this
context, and could be omitted.
Introduction 2 line 79: "use of oestrogen" - surely not in pregnancy?
Introduction 2 line 80: how about Hepatitis C?
Introduction 2 line 80: Thrombocytopenia is not usually an association of ICP, except in the
context of severe pre-eclampsia/AFLP. While the study of Chen et al identified an increased
frequency of thrombocytopenia, there was no assessment of other potential causes of this. It
was not identified as a risk factor in the second large Chinese population referenced (Gao et al).
The third study referenced (Wu et al ), which appears to be from the same population as that
of the Chen study, also makes no reference to thrombocytopenia. Comparison with some non-
Chinese studies here would be helpful and illuminating to the discussion.
Introduction 2 line 83 et passim: "incidence" appears to be used here and throughout the
manuscript indistinguishably from "prevalence". Which are the authors meaning? Or are they
conflating the two? It is a critical epidemiological difference.
Methods 3.2 lines 109 and following, together with Discussion 5 lines 253-256: No mention has
been made of the diagnostic criteria to establish ICP, in particular, of the bile acid values and
whether these have been from fasting or non-fasting individuals (see Mitchell et al BJOG 2021).
In addition, there are concerns about the harmonisation and commutability of bile acid assays
that call into doubt the idea of comparing bile acid measurements across studies (Markus et al
Clin Chem Lab Med 2023), making all such comparisons extremely difficult!
Methods 3.2 lines 116-117: "studies that exclusively involved individuals with current or history
of pruritus, hepatobiliary disorders, abnormal liver function tests, and dermatosis" - I don't
understand how 'exclusively involved' is being used in this sentence. It needs to be written
more clearly. When I eventually looked at the PRISMA diagram, it did become clearer. So,
perhaps the last sentence needs to be moved forward, e.g., to the beginning of the paragraph.
Methods 3.3 line 138: I am not sure what the contribution of "most widely practiced religion"
is to this discussion.
Methods 3.3 lines 139-40: Similarly, "the absolute value of geographical latitude" is not a
helpful comparator, as countries, such as Chile, Australia, India and the USA, all extend widely
across the latitudes and comparing their midpoints as the "distance from the equator line" (lines
152-153) is likely to be very unhelpful.
Results 4 line 181: I am not aware what "resorptive" studies are in this context.
Results 4 line 182-184: A diagram displaying the sample sizes of the different studies would
perhaps be helpful, so as to assess better the validity of using the median as a cutoff for the
suggested analysis.
Results 4 lines 183, 193, 201: if a p-value is being quoted, it is not (in my view) necessary to
say "significantly" or 'non-significantly". Let the reader understand!
Results 4 line 183: compared "with", not "to".
Results 4 line 184: "smaller", not "lower".
Discussion 5 line 210 and Conclusion 5.2 line 281 : "Hungary" please!
Discussion 5 line 220: Professor Reyes has discussed the reducing prevalence of ICP in Chile
after a change in the local diet .
Discussion 5 line 236: for consistency, better to use ICP rather than "obstetric cholestasis".
Discussion 5 lines 249-251: the paper by Lin et al (which is confusing in describing a
retrospective study with a title suggesting a prospective analysis), is a small study. It would be
better to reference the Ovadia metanalysis (reference 2) in which no difference was identified
in birthweight centiles of babies from ICP pregnancies compared with controls.
Table 2: needs a more extensive key to the abbreviations
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Title: Global and Regional Incidence of Intrahepatic Cholestasis of Pregnancy: A Systematic
Review and Meta-Analysis
Version: 0 Date: 07 Jun 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for a very thorough review.
Abstract 1.1 line 49: "Account for" would be better than "justify"
Abstract 1:3 line 59 and Results lines 162 and 194: "Gestating individuals" is an awful non-
English phrase! "Pregnant women" (or "Pregnant people", "Pregnant persons", or even
"Gravidas", if you really cannot accept "women"!) would be much better.
Abstract 1:4 line 67: "Variation" would be better than "varieties".
Introduction 2 line 71: too many "commonly"s. Suggest either replace the first with "frequently"
or the second with "usually".
Introduction 2 line 73: Pruritus often disappears within hours or days of birth (Girling. ICP:
Greentop guideline 2022). Biochemical changes may take longer, as there are physiological
postpartum rises in transaminases that may be confusing.
Introduction 2 line 74 and following: Both AFLP and pre-eclampsia can coexist with ICP, so
"Pruritus" is not necessarily a distinguishing feature.
Introduction 2 line 74 and Discussion 5 lines 249, 253, 25: while "levels" are commonly used of
an analyte, it is a loose and inaccurate phrase: it is much better to talk/write of "concentrations"
of analytes in body, or indeed in any, fluids.
Introduction 2 line 76: "Except for maternal discomfort" is confusing and unnecessary in this
context, and could be omitted.
Introduction 2 line 79: "use of oestrogen" - surely not in pregnancy?
Introduction 2 line 80: how about Hepatitis C?
Introduction 2 line 80: Thrombocytopenia is not usually an association of ICP, except in the
context of severe pre-eclampsia/AFLP. While the study of Chen et al identified an increased
frequency of thrombocytopenia, there was no assessment of other potential causes of this. It
was not identified as a risk factor in the second large Chinese population referenced (Gao et al).
The third study referenced (Wu et al ), which appears to be from the same population as that
of the Chen study, also makes no reference to thrombocytopenia. Comparison with some non-
Chinese studies here would be helpful and illuminating to the discussion.
Introduction 2 line 83 et passim: "incidence" appears to be used here and throughout the
manuscript indistinguishably from "prevalence". Which are the authors meaning? Or are they
conflating the two? It is a critical epidemiological difference.
Methods 3.2 lines 109 and following, together with Discussion 5 lines 253-256: No mention has
been made of the diagnostic criteria to establish ICP, in particular, of the bile acid values and
whether these have been from fasting or non-fasting individuals (see Mitchell et al BJOG 2021).
In addition, there are concerns about the harmonisation and commutability of bile acid assays
that call into doubt the idea of comparing bile acid measurements across studies (Markus et al
Clin Chem Lab Med 2023), making all such comparisons extremely difficult!
Methods 3.2 lines 116-117: "studies that exclusively involved individuals with current or history
of pruritus, hepatobiliary disorders, abnormal liver function tests, and dermatosis" - I don't
understand how 'exclusively involved' is being used in this sentence. It needs to be written
more clearly. When I eventually looked at the PRISMA diagram, it did become clearer. So,
perhaps the last sentence needs to be moved forward, e.g., to the beginning of the paragraph.
Methods 3.3 line 138: I am not sure what the contribution of "most widely practiced religion"
is to this discussion.
Methods 3.3 lines 139-40: Similarly, "the absolute value of geographical latitude" is not a
helpful comparator, as countries, such as Chile, Australia, India and the USA, all extend widely
across the latitudes and comparing their midpoints as the "distance from the equator line" (lines
152-153) is likely to be very unhelpful.
Results 4 line 181: I am not aware what "resorptive" studies are in this context.
Results 4 line 182-184: A diagram displaying the sample sizes of the different studies would
perhaps be helpful, so as to assess better the validity of using the median as a cutoff for the
suggested analysis.
Results 4 lines 183, 193, 201: if a p-value is being quoted, it is not (in my view) necessary to
say "significantly" or 'non-significantly". Let the reader understand!
Results 4 line 183: compared "with", not "to".
Results 4 line 184: "smaller", not "lower".
Discussion 5 line 210 and Conclusion 5.2 line 281 : "Hungary" please!
Discussion 5 line 220: Professor Reyes has discussed the reducing prevalence of ICP in Chile
after a change in the local diet .
Discussion 5 line 236: for consistency, better to use ICP rather than "obstetric cholestasis".
Discussion 5 lines 249-251: the paper by Lin et al (which is confusing in describing a
retrospective study with a title suggesting a prospective analysis), is a small study. It would be
better to reference the Ovadia metanalysis (reference 2) in which no difference was identified
in birthweight centiles of babies from ICP pregnancies compared with controls.
Table 2: needs a more extensive key to the abbreviations
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Version: 1 Date: 24 Jul 2024
Reviewer's report:
I reviewed the revised manuscript and appreciate the time the authors took to address the issues
brought up on original review. I find the paper to be improved and acceptable for publication.
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Version: 1 Date: 24 Jul 2024
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I reviewed the revised manuscript and appreciate the time the authors took to address the issues
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Title: Global and Regional Incidence of Intrahepatic Cholestasis of Pregnancy: A Systematic
Review and Meta-Analysis
Version: 1 Date: 14 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for your generally excellent responses to the reviewers' comments.
A few things remain:
Line 57 and throughout: I thought you had decided to omit references to religion?
Line 61: suggest square brackets for "(95% confidence interval)", i.e., [95% confidence
interval], so as to correspond with the following values.
Line 79-81: ... pruritus, which occurs due to increased serum concentrations of bile acids, may
not necessarily distinguish ICP ....
The pruritus is NOT due to the increased serum concentrations of BA (see Beuers et al Nat Rev
Gastroenterol Hepatol 2023 Vol. 20 (1): 26-36 DOI: 10.1038/s41575-022-00687-7).
Line 130: "were excluded" is now tautologous, following the earlier correction, and can be
removed.
Line 146: "in" is not necessary.
Line 177-8: The Wikstrom-Shemer study [reference 32] and the Li study [reference 37] are
both population-based cohort studies
Line 180: "were" should be "was".
Line 186: "As our" should read "As in our".
Line 188 et passim: p values only need to be included to a maximum of 2 decimal places, unless
they are =<0.05, when a single number beyond any 0s after the decimal point (e.g., 0.01, 0.002,
0.0005, etc) can be given. They would also be better written "p=0.xx".
Line 191: a comma is required after (Table 3).
Line 199: "each" is not necessary.
Line 200: The "," after "grouping" is not necessary.
Lines 225 and 230: "ROB" should be replaced with "RoB".
Line 236 and line 320: "Hungry" has not yet been altered!
Line 247: "powerful in detecting" should read "powered to detect".
Line 272: You need to discuss, or at least to reference, some of the recent genetic literature,
(e.g, Dixon et al. Nature Communications 2022 DOI: 10.1038/s41467-022-29931-z; Dixon and
Williamson Clin Res Hepatol Gastroenterol 2016 DOI: 10.1016/j.clinre.2015.12.008). There
is clearly a large genetic component to ICP.
Line 292: needs a "," after "criteria".
Line 313: "overtime" needs to be "over time".
Line 314: "time spans" and "time trends" need hyphenation, while "introduce" should be
"introduces".
Line 345-6: "ICP: Intrahepatic Cholestais of Pregnancy" is duplicated.
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Review and Meta-Analysis
Version: 1 Date: 14 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for your generally excellent responses to the reviewers' comments.
A few things remain:
Line 57 and throughout: I thought you had decided to omit references to religion?
Line 61: suggest square brackets for "(95% confidence interval)", i.e., [95% confidence
interval], so as to correspond with the following values.
Line 79-81: ... pruritus, which occurs due to increased serum concentrations of bile acids, may
not necessarily distinguish ICP ....
The pruritus is NOT due to the increased serum concentrations of BA (see Beuers et al Nat Rev
Gastroenterol Hepatol 2023 Vol. 20 (1): 26-36 DOI: 10.1038/s41575-022-00687-7).
Line 130: "were excluded" is now tautologous, following the earlier correction, and can be
removed.
Line 146: "in" is not necessary.
Line 177-8: The Wikstrom-Shemer study [reference 32] and the Li study [reference 37] are
both population-based cohort studies
Line 180: "were" should be "was".
Line 186: "As our" should read "As in our".
Line 188 et passim: p values only need to be included to a maximum of 2 decimal places, unless
they are =<0.05, when a single number beyond any 0s after the decimal point (e.g., 0.01, 0.002,
0.0005, etc) can be given. They would also be better written "p=0.xx".
Line 191: a comma is required after (Table 3).
Line 199: "each" is not necessary.
Line 200: The "," after "grouping" is not necessary.
Lines 225 and 230: "ROB" should be replaced with "RoB".
Line 236 and line 320: "Hungry" has not yet been altered!
Line 247: "powerful in detecting" should read "powered to detect".
Line 272: You need to discuss, or at least to reference, some of the recent genetic literature,
(e.g, Dixon et al. Nature Communications 2022 DOI: 10.1038/s41467-022-29931-z; Dixon and
Williamson Clin Res Hepatol Gastroenterol 2016 DOI: 10.1016/j.clinre.2015.12.008). There
is clearly a large genetic component to ICP.
Line 292: needs a "," after "criteria".
Line 313: "overtime" needs to be "over time".
Line 314: "time spans" and "time trends" need hyphenation, while "introduce" should be
"introduces".
Line 345-6: "ICP: Intrahepatic Cholestais of Pregnancy" is duplicated.
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Title: Global and Regional Incidence of Intrahepatic Cholestasis of Pregnancy: A Systematic
Review and Meta-Analysis
Version: 2 Date: 01 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Generally, this manuscript has been much improved by the recent revision.
I still feel that the opening sentence of both the Abstract and the Background section does
not address the enormous distress that many women with ICP experience: it DOES directly
impact the well-being of the woman (who may not yet be a mother!). Some affected women
become suicidal with the itch, while a stillbirth, especially if it is recurrent, can lead to major
psychopathology (see the ICP support website ).
I also feel that the authors have not taken on board the comments from the Beuers paper (ref
2), where it is clarified that bile acids are MOST UNLIKELY pruritogens, and that, in some
cholestatic diseases, the pruritus actually IMPROVES with the rising bile acid concentrations.
In page 4, line 80 "acid" is missing after ursodeoxycholic acid. Rifampicin is currently the
subject of a RCT in women with severe early onset ICP (Hague et al, BMC Pregnancy and
Childbirth, 2021) and there are potential risks of side effects that should be discussed if it is
mentioned. Perhaps better to leave it out altogether for the purpose of this review?
The genetics section (lines 342 onwards) has focussed on some of the less frequent genotype
variants, and has not mentioned the important previous observations of Dixon et al, mentioned
in passing in the reference quoted, that variants in (italic) ABCB4 and (italic) ABCB11 genes
may be present in 20-25% of women with severe ICP (see more recent discussion in Zollner,
Williamson and Dixon, Obstetric Medicine 2024).
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Review and Meta-Analysis
Version: 2 Date: 01 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Generally, this manuscript has been much improved by the recent revision.
I still feel that the opening sentence of both the Abstract and the Background section does
not address the enormous distress that many women with ICP experience: it DOES directly
impact the well-being of the woman (who may not yet be a mother!). Some affected women
become suicidal with the itch, while a stillbirth, especially if it is recurrent, can lead to major
psychopathology (see the ICP support website ).
I also feel that the authors have not taken on board the comments from the Beuers paper (ref
2), where it is clarified that bile acids are MOST UNLIKELY pruritogens, and that, in some
cholestatic diseases, the pruritus actually IMPROVES with the rising bile acid concentrations.
In page 4, line 80 "acid" is missing after ursodeoxycholic acid. Rifampicin is currently the
subject of a RCT in women with severe early onset ICP (Hague et al, BMC Pregnancy and
Childbirth, 2021) and there are potential risks of side effects that should be discussed if it is
mentioned. Perhaps better to leave it out altogether for the purpose of this review?
The genetics section (lines 342 onwards) has focussed on some of the less frequent genotype
variants, and has not mentioned the important previous observations of Dixon et al, mentioned
in passing in the reference quoted, that variants in (italic) ABCB4 and (italic) ABCB11 genes
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Version: 4 Date: 22 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
You have done a great job with revising this manuscript, in particular, with adding to the search
criteria to include more recent material.
The edits suggested now read very well, and I am happy to accept them as provided.
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Version: 4 Date: 22 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
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Title: A Systematic Analysis of Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of Retracted
Stem Cell Publications
Version: 0 Date: 03 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Upon analysis of the manuscript entitled "Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of
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Stem Cell Publications
Version: 0 Date: 03 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Upon analysis of the manuscript entitled "Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of
Retracted Stem Cell Publications," it is evident that the manuscript follows a well-structured
and coherent logic, drawing on data from three databases and employing descriptive statistics
and statistical tests to identify patterns and discrepancies in the findings. The topic is highly
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Title: A Systematic Analysis of Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of Retracted
Stem Cell Publications
Version: 0 Date: 14 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the author's efforts in exploring the landscape of retracted publications within
stem cell research and examining their continued citation impact. Although the study collected
substantial data and followed rigorous methods, including comparing retracted and non-retracted
papers to assess citation patterns, the research ultimately lacks innovation. The emphasis on
descriptive data, without deeper theoretical insights or mechanisms explaining why retracted
papers continue to be cited, limits the academic contribution of this work. Additionally, the
analysis on the likelihood of retracted papers being cited by subsequently retracted publications
appears to add limited value. While the statistics reveal citation trends, they do not provide
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study's contribution seems minimal.
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Title: A Systematic Analysis of Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of Retracted
Stem Cell Publications
Version: 0 Date: 14 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the author's efforts in exploring the landscape of retracted publications within
stem cell research and examining their continued citation impact. Although the study collected
substantial data and followed rigorous methods, including comparing retracted and non-retracted
papers to assess citation patterns, the research ultimately lacks innovation. The emphasis on
descriptive data, without deeper theoretical insights or mechanisms explaining why retracted
papers continue to be cited, limits the academic contribution of this work. Additionally, the
analysis on the likelihood of retracted papers being cited by subsequently retracted publications
appears to add limited value. While the statistics reveal citation trends, they do not provide
actionable insights or solutions for mitigating the dissemination of flawed research. Overall, the
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Title: A Systematic Analysis of Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of Retracted
Stem Cell Publications
Version: 0 Date: 18 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Strengths:
The manuscript addresses an important issue by exploring the characteristics and impacts of
retracted publications in stem cell research. The study is timely and well-executed, employing
rigorous methods (e.g., PRISMA guidelines and OSF registration) to ensure transparency and
reproducibility. The integration of diverse data sources and statistical techniques is a notable
strength, and the findings on post-retraction citations and citation patterns are both novel and
significant for improving research integrity.
Suggestions for Improvement:
1. Data Presentation:
Tables and figures are informative but could benefit from additional context. For instance:
o In Table 1, “data problems” (with subcategories), “error in data”, and “falsification of data”
seem to be overlapping categories. What is the distinction between these? This should be
clarified if even in a footnote.
2. Discussion Depth:
o The discussion would benefit from expanding on Figure 3 – i.e., clarifying the implications
of decreasing time-to-retraction over time.
o Expand on the implications of the finding that retracted papers continue to be cited without
referencing their retraction notice. Discuss potential interventions (e.g., automated systems to
flag retracted papers in citation databases) to mitigate this issue.
o Provide more discussion on the observed geographic trends in retractions, such as why certain
countries or institutions might have higher rates of retractions and how systemic factors (e.g.,
publication pressure) might contribute.
3. Limitations:
The manuscript does acknowledge limitations, but the discussion could explicitly address
potential biases in citation tracking, especially regarding the exclusion of papers not indexed
by Web of Science. Consider including alternative interpretations of the results to provide a
balanced perspective.
4. Editorial Suggestions:
o In the Abstract, rephrase “scientific misconduct is not uncommon” for precision, as the study
focuses on retracted publications, which may not all be due to misconduct.
o Add ‘systematic survey’ or ‘survey’ into the title to clarify the study design. I’m not sure this
should be considered a “systematic review” as this is not asking a clinical question i.e., what is
the effect of A compared to B in population C?
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Stem Cell Publications
Version: 0 Date: 18 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Strengths:
The manuscript addresses an important issue by exploring the characteristics and impacts of
retracted publications in stem cell research. The study is timely and well-executed, employing
rigorous methods (e.g., PRISMA guidelines and OSF registration) to ensure transparency and
reproducibility. The integration of diverse data sources and statistical techniques is a notable
strength, and the findings on post-retraction citations and citation patterns are both novel and
significant for improving research integrity.
Suggestions for Improvement:
1. Data Presentation:
Tables and figures are informative but could benefit from additional context. For instance:
o In Table 1, “data problems” (with subcategories), “error in data”, and “falsification of data”
seem to be overlapping categories. What is the distinction between these? This should be
clarified if even in a footnote.
2. Discussion Depth:
o The discussion would benefit from expanding on Figure 3 – i.e., clarifying the implications
of decreasing time-to-retraction over time.
o Expand on the implications of the finding that retracted papers continue to be cited without
referencing their retraction notice. Discuss potential interventions (e.g., automated systems to
flag retracted papers in citation databases) to mitigate this issue.
o Provide more discussion on the observed geographic trends in retractions, such as why certain
countries or institutions might have higher rates of retractions and how systemic factors (e.g.,
publication pressure) might contribute.
3. Limitations:
The manuscript does acknowledge limitations, but the discussion could explicitly address
potential biases in citation tracking, especially regarding the exclusion of papers not indexed
by Web of Science. Consider including alternative interpretations of the results to provide a
balanced perspective.
4. Editorial Suggestions:
o In the Abstract, rephrase “scientific misconduct is not uncommon” for precision, as the study
focuses on retracted publications, which may not all be due to misconduct.
o Add ‘systematic survey’ or ‘survey’ into the title to clarify the study design. I’m not sure this
should be considered a “systematic review” as this is not asking a clinical question i.e., what is
the effect of A compared to B in population C?
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Title: A Systematic Analysis of Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of Retracted
Stem Cell Publications
Version: 0 Date: 18 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript dealt with an analysis of retracted publications in stem cell and the topic is of
interest. However, it needs revision before acceptance.
1. Language is very poor. For example, a sentence reads "A total of 1,421 records were
identified, with 517 retracted publications included in the final analysis.", "Data were collected
in 07/25/2024", "The 517 retracted publications involved 83 publishers and 235 journals. Each
retracted article could have multiple reasons for retraction"
2. In table 1, the authors provided percentage value. But it is confusing. For example,
under the hospitals involved, there are two: China and others. For both, they calculated the
percentage from the total number of retractions instead of hospitals involved. It should be
checked throughout the manuscript.
3. Reasons for retractions are not based on the standard classification. For example, investigation
is not a reason. Similarly, there are two different headings for data problem and fabrication of
data and error in data. It is suggested to refer the previous studies like https://doi.org/10.1007/
s11192-021-03895-1.
4. Heading of 3.3 reads "Citations of Retractions" which should be revised as "citations to
retracted publications"
5. Authors stated that "472 retracted publications have valid citations" is not clear.
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Title: A Systematic Analysis of Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of Retracted
Stem Cell Publications
Version: 0 Date: 18 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript dealt with an analysis of retracted publications in stem cell and the topic is of
interest. However, it needs revision before acceptance.
1. Language is very poor. For example, a sentence reads "A total of 1,421 records were
identified, with 517 retracted publications included in the final analysis.", "Data were collected
in 07/25/2024", "The 517 retracted publications involved 83 publishers and 235 journals. Each
retracted article could have multiple reasons for retraction"
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under the hospitals involved, there are two: China and others. For both, they calculated the
percentage from the total number of retractions instead of hospitals involved. It should be
checked throughout the manuscript.
3. Reasons for retractions are not based on the standard classification. For example, investigation
is not a reason. Similarly, there are two different headings for data problem and fabrication of
data and error in data. It is suggested to refer the previous studies like https://doi.org/10.1007/
s11192-021-03895-1.
4. Heading of 3.3 reads "Citations of Retractions" which should be revised as "citations to
retracted publications"
5. Authors stated that "472 retracted publications have valid citations" is not clear.
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Title: A Systematic Analysis of Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of Retracted
Stem Cell Publications
Version: 2 Date: 16 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
I thank the reviewer and the authors for the opportunity to review the manuscript. I believe that
the second version submitted addresses the comments and evaluations provided.
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Title: A Systematic Analysis of Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of Retracted
Stem Cell Publications
Version: 2 Date: 16 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
I thank the reviewer and the authors for the opportunity to review the manuscript. I believe that
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All revisions suggested have been incorporated.
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Title: A Systematic Analysis of Temporal Trends, Characteristics, and Citations of Retracted
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Version: 2 Date: 20 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thanks to the authors for making the changes, I think perhaps the letter format is more
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Stem Cell Publications
Version: 2 Date: 20 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thanks to the authors for making the changes, I think perhaps the letter format is more
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Title: Guidelines for the use of lung ultrasound to optimise the management of neonatal
respiratory distress: international expert consensus
Version: 0 Date: 09 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
This paper is an excellent review of the state of art of LUS. Deserves to be published. Description
of LUS signs are accurate, images of LUS very clear and well done. Potentially a very good
guideline for LUS users.
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Title: Guidelines for the use of lung ultrasound to optimise the management of neonatal
respiratory distress: international expert consensus
Version: 0 Date: 09 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
This paper is an excellent review of the state of art of LUS. Deserves to be published. Description
of LUS signs are accurate, images of LUS very clear and well done. Potentially a very good
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Title: Guidelines for the use of lung ultrasound to optimise the management of neonatal
respiratory distress: international expert consensus
Version: 0 Date: 31 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Kari D. Roberts
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript is very important and contributes to current knowledge gaps as lung ultrasound
becomes more common in clinical practice. I commend you for this Dephi and also for your
willingness to make specific rather than vague recommendations.
Overall, well thought out with good questions to address clinical practice an knowledge gaps.
Recommendations/ concerns:
1) Many grammar, spelling, formatting issues
2) Abbreviations: I believe PTX should be pneumothorax rather than pneumonia
3) Abbreviations: Add EVLWI and PCH
4) This statement is not correct. MV is not indicated for mild RDS. "Simply, the MV treatment
should be provided if the diagnosis was RDS on LUS, whether it is mild, moderate or severe
RDS [61] [Fig.1]. "
5) Places where PTX and BAL are misspelled
6) Unclear that this sentence means "Maintaining normal oxygenation in infants with minimum
ventilator parameters is not appropriate for administering ventilator applications under the
monitoring of LUS, while the fundamental principle of guiding the ventilator parameter
adjustments under ultrasound monitoring is to ensure that the lung can be fully expension under
the parameter settings [Fig.8]."
7) Is this statement true? If so, need to add a citation. "When using under ultrasound guidance,
the dose of PS is usually one-half the dose recommended by the European guidelines for the
management of RDS."
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Title: Guidelines for the use of lung ultrasound to optimise the management of neonatal
respiratory distress: international expert consensus
Version: 0 Date: 31 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Kari D. Roberts
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript is very important and contributes to current knowledge gaps as lung ultrasound
becomes more common in clinical practice. I commend you for this Dephi and also for your
willingness to make specific rather than vague recommendations.
Overall, well thought out with good questions to address clinical practice an knowledge gaps.
Recommendations/ concerns:
1) Many grammar, spelling, formatting issues
2) Abbreviations: I believe PTX should be pneumothorax rather than pneumonia
3) Abbreviations: Add EVLWI and PCH
4) This statement is not correct. MV is not indicated for mild RDS. "Simply, the MV treatment
should be provided if the diagnosis was RDS on LUS, whether it is mild, moderate or severe
RDS [61] [Fig.1]. "
5) Places where PTX and BAL are misspelled
6) Unclear that this sentence means "Maintaining normal oxygenation in infants with minimum
ventilator parameters is not appropriate for administering ventilator applications under the
monitoring of LUS, while the fundamental principle of guiding the ventilator parameter
adjustments under ultrasound monitoring is to ensure that the lung can be fully expension under
the parameter settings [Fig.8]."
7) Is this statement true? If so, need to add a citation. "When using under ultrasound guidance,
the dose of PS is usually one-half the dose recommended by the European guidelines for the
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Title: Guidelines for the use of lung ultrasound to optimise the management of neonatal
respiratory distress: international expert consensus
Version: 0 Date: 01 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Ruixi Zhou
Reviewer's report:
The study examines the application of lung ultrasound (LUS) in neonatal respiratory
management, particularly within the current context where chest X-rays (CXR) remain the
primary diagnostic tool for neonatal lung diseases. For neonates, CXR procedures are complex
and involve radiation exposure, posing potential harm, especially for those requiring repeated
evaluations. This consensus was developed using the Delphi method to gather input from
international experts, ensuring its authority and broad applicability. Contributions from experts
across multiple countries and disciplines enhance the consensus’s global relevance and diversity.
The statements provide valuable guidance for clinical practice, aligning with the trends of
precision medicine and non-invasive diagnostics. However, the study could be improved by
addressing gaps in methodological transparency, limitations, and language clarity.
1. The study provides limited information about the qualifications and distribution of the
expert panel and the data analysis process, such as the specific application of the interquartile
range (IQR). To improve transparency, the authors should include statistical descriptions of the
experts’ credentials (e.g., years of clinical experience, geographic representation) and elaborate
on the methodologies employed in data analysis.
2. While the article emphasizes the advantages of LUS, it insufficiently explores its limitations
and challenges for broader implementation. Key issues include: 1)Comparison with CXR:
What are the specific limitations of LUS compared to CXR, and in which clinical scenarios
should CXR be preferred? 2)Operator Dependency: LUS requires a high level of technical
expertise, introducing subjectivity in its interpretation. This reliance on operator skill should
be further discussed, particularly in resource-limited settings. The study could also address
practical challenges such as the cost of equipment and training requirements for healthcare
providers. 3) Validation of Consensus Statements: The current consensus relies heavily on expert
opinion, emphasizing the need for large-scale prospective studies to validate its effectiveness.
Clearer recommendations for future research, such as specific randomized controlled trials,
would strengthen the manuscript.
3. Although the article provides a comprehensive list of references, some are outdated and fail
to incorporate recent research findings. Additionally, the study lacks a systematic analysis of
critical background issues, such as barriers to adopting LUS and its comparative efficacy against
CXR. Recommendation: Include high-quality randomized controlled trials and meta-analyses
published after 2020, particularly those evaluating the clinical efficacy of LUS in neonatal
intensive care settings.
4. The abstract states that “LUS is more accurate and reliable than the chest X-ray (CXR)
in diagnosis and management of pulmonary disease.” However, this claim requires stronger
evidence. In many regions, CXR remains the predominant diagnostic tool for neonatal lung
diseases. The authors should provide additional data or clarify the basis for this assertion to
ensure the claim is substantiated.
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Title: Guidelines for the use of lung ultrasound to optimise the management of neonatal
respiratory distress: international expert consensus
Version: 0 Date: 01 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Ruixi Zhou
Reviewer's report:
The study examines the application of lung ultrasound (LUS) in neonatal respiratory
management, particularly within the current context where chest X-rays (CXR) remain the
primary diagnostic tool for neonatal lung diseases. For neonates, CXR procedures are complex
and involve radiation exposure, posing potential harm, especially for those requiring repeated
evaluations. This consensus was developed using the Delphi method to gather input from
international experts, ensuring its authority and broad applicability. Contributions from experts
across multiple countries and disciplines enhance the consensus’s global relevance and diversity.
The statements provide valuable guidance for clinical practice, aligning with the trends of
precision medicine and non-invasive diagnostics. However, the study could be improved by
addressing gaps in methodological transparency, limitations, and language clarity.
1. The study provides limited information about the qualifications and distribution of the
expert panel and the data analysis process, such as the specific application of the interquartile
range (IQR). To improve transparency, the authors should include statistical descriptions of the
experts’ credentials (e.g., years of clinical experience, geographic representation) and elaborate
on the methodologies employed in data analysis.
2. While the article emphasizes the advantages of LUS, it insufficiently explores its limitations
and challenges for broader implementation. Key issues include: 1)Comparison with CXR:
What are the specific limitations of LUS compared to CXR, and in which clinical scenarios
should CXR be preferred? 2)Operator Dependency: LUS requires a high level of technical
expertise, introducing subjectivity in its interpretation. This reliance on operator skill should
be further discussed, particularly in resource-limited settings. The study could also address
practical challenges such as the cost of equipment and training requirements for healthcare
providers. 3) Validation of Consensus Statements: The current consensus relies heavily on expert
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critical background issues, such as barriers to adopting LUS and its comparative efficacy against
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intensive care settings.
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evidence. In many regions, CXR remains the predominant diagnostic tool for neonatal lung
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Title: Guidelines for the use of lung ultrasound to optimise the management of neonatal
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Version: 1 Date: 06 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Ruixi Zhou
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Title:
Association between antibiotics and treatment efficacy in metastatic
urothelial carcinoma patients
Version:
0
Date:
24 Mar 2024
Reviewer's report:
Major Comments:
- Supplemental Table 1 should list the antibiotic classes, while it lists the first-
line chemo-immuno treatments. Please add the information about antibiotic
classes to the text.
- While the analysis of the different routes of administration or the preferential
ABT clearance is of some interest, I wonder why there is no analysis of the
impact of the different classes of antibiotics on survival outcomes. It is known
that different classes of antibiotics have a different impact on the gut microbiome
and the duration of the antibiotic-induced dysbiosis before return to the steady-
state (for instance, reviewed in DOI: 10.1016/j.jinf.2019.10.008, or reported
using population-based registries in DOI: 10.1200/JCO.22.00074). Are the
differences found by the Authors regarding route of administration and clearance
independent from the classes of antibiotics or not? Can those differences be
attributed the different antibiotic classes?
Therefore, I recommend the Authors to test 1) the effects of the different classes
of antibiotics on outcomes 2) the potential confounding bias/interaction of the
variable "class of antibiotics" on route of administration/clearance organ.
- Did the Author see differences among patients receiving different ICI
treatments +/- antibiotics? From Supplementary Table 1, it seems there may be
enough patients to perform exploratory subgroup analysis.
Minor comments:
- Funding (on first page): "NCI (funding), this expired recently" seems to be a
typo or misprint, please check
- Please check the correctness of reference #30
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you
recommend an additional statistical review?
If an additional statistical review
is recommended, please specify what aspects require further assessment in your
comments to the editors.
I recommend additional statistical review
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Title:
Association between antibiotics and treatment efficacy in metastatic
urothelial carcinoma patients
Version:
0
Date:
24 Mar 2024
Reviewer's report:
Major Comments:
- Supplemental Table 1 should list the antibiotic classes, while it lists the first-
line chemo-immuno treatments. Please add the information about antibiotic
classes to the text.
- While the analysis of the different routes of administration or the preferential
ABT clearance is of some interest, I wonder why there is no analysis of the
impact of the different classes of antibiotics on survival outcomes. It is known
that different classes of antibiotics have a different impact on the gut microbiome
and the duration of the antibiotic-induced dysbiosis before return to the steady-
state (for instance, reviewed in DOI: 10.1016/j.jinf.2019.10.008, or reported
using population-based registries in DOI: 10.1200/JCO.22.00074). Are the
differences found by the Authors regarding route of administration and clearance
independent from the classes of antibiotics or not? Can those differences be
attributed the different antibiotic classes?
Therefore, I recommend the Authors to test 1) the effects of the different classes
of antibiotics on outcomes 2) the potential confounding bias/interaction of the
variable "class of antibiotics" on route of administration/clearance organ.
- Did the Author see differences among patients receiving different ICI
treatments +/- antibiotics? From Supplementary Table 1, it seems there may be
enough patients to perform exploratory subgroup analysis.
Minor comments:
- Funding (on first page): "NCI (funding), this expired recently" seems to be a
typo or misprint, please check
- Please check the correctness of reference #30
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recommend an additional statistical review?
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Title:
Association between antibiotics and treatment efficacy in metastatic
urothelial carcinoma patients
Version:
0
Date:
29 Mar 2024
Reviewer's report:
This paper further validates the negative impact of ATB in patients treated with
ICI which has now been demonstrated in more than 100 studies including
randomized phase III clinical trials in urothelial cancer. The strength of this
paper comes from the presence of a control chemo only arm whereby ATB don't
influence chemotherapy efficacy but only IO.
However, several major efforts need to be included:
- The paper needs to be improved especially regarding the timing of the ATB. It
is really not clear from the text and main figure how many patients received ATB
before vs after ICI initiation. Most literature including Derosa Cancer Discovey
2022 revealed that it's the ATB window prior to ICI that is the most deleterious
in 23,000 patients. Various ATB window need to be tested and properly
presented.
- For example did the authors observed a difference when they look at ATB
within 1 month prior to ICI initiation.
- The baseline characteristic of ICI is lacking. How many patients received the
EV-Pembro? If the number of patients included on this drug is low the authors
need to soften the language in the discussion.
- Multivariate analysis taking into consideration several biomarkers of response
is also required
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you
recommend an additional statistical review?
If an additional statistical review
is recommended, please specify what aspects require further assessment in your
comments to the editors.
I am able to assess the statistics
Declaration of competing interests
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interests, considering the following questions:
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Reviewer’s report
Title:
Association between antibiotics and treatment efficacy in metastatic
urothelial carcinoma patients
Version:
0
Date:
29 Mar 2024
Reviewer's report:
This paper further validates the negative impact of ATB in patients treated with
ICI which has now been demonstrated in more than 100 studies including
randomized phase III clinical trials in urothelial cancer. The strength of this
paper comes from the presence of a control chemo only arm whereby ATB don't
influence chemotherapy efficacy but only IO.
However, several major efforts need to be included:
- The paper needs to be improved especially regarding the timing of the ATB. It
is really not clear from the text and main figure how many patients received ATB
before vs after ICI initiation. Most literature including Derosa Cancer Discovey
2022 revealed that it's the ATB window prior to ICI that is the most deleterious
in 23,000 patients. Various ATB window need to be tested and properly
presented.
- For example did the authors observed a difference when they look at ATB
within 1 month prior to ICI initiation.
- The baseline characteristic of ICI is lacking. How many patients received the
EV-Pembro? If the number of patients included on this drug is low the authors
need to soften the language in the discussion.
- Multivariate analysis taking into consideration several biomarkers of response
is also required
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you
recommend an additional statistical review?
If an additional statistical review
is recommended, please specify what aspects require further assessment in your
comments to the editors.
I am able to assess the statistics
Declaration of competing interests
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Title:
Association between antibiotics and treatment efficacy in metastatic
urothelial carcinoma patients
Version:
1
Date:
09 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
The Authors addressed the Reviewers' comments.
Minor edits:
- Introduction, third paragraph: Enfortumab Vedotin-ejfv is mispelled in its first
appearance, please correct the typo
- Introduction, third paragraph: "PD1/PDL-1" should be corrected in "PD-1/PD-
L1"
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you
recommend an additional statistical review?
If an additional statistical review
is recommended, please specify what aspects require further assessment in your
comments to the editors.
I am able to assess the statistics
Declaration of competing interests
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be published.
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do not
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of appropriate controls), and are the conclusions supported by the evidence
presented?
Yes
Are the methods sufficiently described to allow the study to be repeated?
Yes
Is the use of statistics and treatment of uncertainties appropriate?
Yes
Is the presentation of the work clear?
Yes
Are the images in this manuscript (including electrophoretic gels and blots) free
from apparent manipulation?
Yes
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Reviewer’s report
Title:
Association between antibiotics and treatment efficacy in metastatic
urothelial carcinoma patients
Version:
1
Date:
09 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
The Authors addressed the Reviewers' comments.
Minor edits:
- Introduction, third paragraph: Enfortumab Vedotin-ejfv is mispelled in its first
appearance, please correct the typo
- Introduction, third paragraph: "PD1/PDL-1" should be corrected in "PD-1/PD-
L1"
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you
recommend an additional statistical review?
If an additional statistical review
is recommended, please specify what aspects require further assessment in your
comments to the editors.
I am able to assess the statistics
Declaration of competing interests
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interests, considering the following questions:
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Title: Increased Risk of Chronic Diseases and Multimorbidity in Middle-Aged and Elderly
Individuals with Early Vision, Hearing, or Dual Sensory Impairments: Insights from Prospective
Cohort Studies and Mendelian Randomization Analysis
Version: 0 Date: 20 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Kyung-Won Hong
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to review this intriguing paper.
I have several suggestions for improvement:
1. The Results section of the abstract is excessively lengthy, making it challenging to quickly
understand the main findings. I recommend removing the OR and CI notations and consolidating
related diseases (e.g., atrial fibrillation, heart failure, hypertension) into a single category, such
as "cardiovascular diseases."
2. Instead of merely stating that HI, VI, and DSI increase the risk of chronic diseases, it would
be beneficial to elaborate on the physiological mechanisms by which these factors impact the
outcome diseases.
3. Throughout the manuscript, there seems to be significant repetition of similar explanations.
The content presented in tables and figures should be summarized more succinctly, focusing on
the key findings that the authors wish to emphasize.
4. It would be helpful to begin the Discussion with a brief summary of the study results, followed
by an analysis that incorporates relevant literature.
5. Many statements in the Discussion lack appropriate citations. For instance, lines 421-424
would benefit from referencing relevant literature. A thorough review of the entire Discussion
for unreferenced claims is necessary.
6. While the detailed discussions provide valuable insights, the parallel explanation of various
disease states makes it challenging to digest quickly. A representative figure or graph
summarizing these discussion points would enhance clarity.
In conclusion, while the research topic and methodology adhere to established protocols related
to MR, the paper attempts to encompass a wide range of exposures and outcomes, resulting
in a lengthy manuscript with repetitive patterns. A more concise presentation focused on core
content, along with rounding numerical data to three decimal places for clarity, would greatly
improve readability.
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Title: Increased Risk of Chronic Diseases and Multimorbidity in Middle-Aged and Elderly
Individuals with Early Vision, Hearing, or Dual Sensory Impairments: Insights from Prospective
Cohort Studies and Mendelian Randomization Analysis
Version: 0 Date: 20 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Kyung-Won Hong
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to review this intriguing paper.
I have several suggestions for improvement:
1. The Results section of the abstract is excessively lengthy, making it challenging to quickly
understand the main findings. I recommend removing the OR and CI notations and consolidating
related diseases (e.g., atrial fibrillation, heart failure, hypertension) into a single category, such
as "cardiovascular diseases."
2. Instead of merely stating that HI, VI, and DSI increase the risk of chronic diseases, it would
be beneficial to elaborate on the physiological mechanisms by which these factors impact the
outcome diseases.
3. Throughout the manuscript, there seems to be significant repetition of similar explanations.
The content presented in tables and figures should be summarized more succinctly, focusing on
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by an analysis that incorporates relevant literature.
5. Many statements in the Discussion lack appropriate citations. For instance, lines 421-424
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for unreferenced claims is necessary.
6. While the detailed discussions provide valuable insights, the parallel explanation of various
disease states makes it challenging to digest quickly. A representative figure or graph
summarizing these discussion points would enhance clarity.
In conclusion, while the research topic and methodology adhere to established protocols related
to MR, the paper attempts to encompass a wide range of exposures and outcomes, resulting
in a lengthy manuscript with repetitive patterns. A more concise presentation focused on core
content, along with rounding numerical data to three decimal places for clarity, would greatly
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Cohort Studies and Mendelian Randomization Analysis
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Title: Increased Risk of Chronic Diseases and Multimorbidity in Middle-Aged and Elderly
Individuals with Early Vision, Hearing, or Dual Sensory Impairments: Insights from Prospective
Cohort Studies and Mendelian Randomization Analysis
Version: 2 Date: 17 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Kyung-Won Hong
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript presents a comprehensive exploration of a vast research topic, and I appreciate
the authors' efforts to condense their findings into a single paper. While the Methods and Results
sections remain lengthy and somewhat repetitive, the authors have effectively addressed the
reviewers' questions, and their responses are well integrated into the revised manuscript.
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Individuals with Early Vision, Hearing, or Dual Sensory Impairments: Insights from Prospective
Cohort Studies and Mendelian Randomization Analysis
Version: 2 Date: 17 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Kyung-Won Hong
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript presents a comprehensive exploration of a vast research topic, and I appreciate
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Cohort Studies and Mendelian Randomization Analysis
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Cohort Studies and Mendelian Randomization Analysis
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Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 04 Jul 2024
Reviewer's report:
This large-scale retrospective cohort study compared the risk of developmental disorders
between general anesthesia and neuraxial anesthesia using a nationwide registry and claim
database. The study has large sample size, valid exposure and outcome information based on
payment code and ICD code, and considers multiple key potential confounders in analysis.
Here are some issues/errors that I hope to point out to help improve quality of this manuscript.
Introduction: The whole section is clear but the authors are expected to emphasize the innovation
of this study, that is, what specific research gaps in the area would be filled in current study?
Methods:
1. The authors should provide references for some guidelines that they mentioned, including the
Helsinki Declaration (line 118) and the two epidemiology guidelines at line 154.
2. There was a typo error for autism at line 137.
3. The age variable in covariates section is not very clear, is it refers to maternal age at delivery?
4. The definition of gestational status variable in models is not clear (line 175). The authors listed
a lot of maternal and fetal conditions in the covariates section but did not explain the relationship
between these conditions and gestational status in the analysis. By the way, there was some
repeated words when authors listed maternal and fetal conditions, which makes readers confused
(line 148).
5. The categories of developmental disorders in Additional File 3 were not consistent with the
list in the outcome section.
6. I feel confused about the statement that " The CIs that overlapped with the value one were
considered statistically significant". I think the value one should not be in the range of CIs when
reporting statistically significant results, like 1.17 (1.07 - 1.28) that the authors mentioned in
the abstract.
7. The subgroup analysis is not enough for the statement of "interaction" (line 190). I think
authors should test the statistical significance of interaction terms. Additionally, why did the
authors not do subgroup analysis for the 1-min Apgar score? Also, I'm curious about the
association between Apgar scores and developmental disorders in this dataset.
Results:
1. It is important to differentiate whether the association decreased (like line 219) or diminished
after adjusting for Apgar scores. "decreased association" sounds like the association is still
significant but has decreased effect size (point estimate). The authors should state conclusion
accurately and consistently in Abstract, Results, Discussion, and Conclusion sections.
2. I feel a little confused about the arrow in Figure 2 and 3. Some lines had arrows showing
direction, while others did not. The criteria should be explained.
3. By the way, Table 2 was missed in the main manuscript.
Discussion
1. The authors reviewed and summarized previous literature about anesthesia and
neurodevelopment, which is good. But I think it would be better to focus more on why the results
contradict the original hypothesis, like what could be the potential explanation.
2. The authors summarized a lot of limitations, which is good. But the third point about accuracy
and validity was not supported by a solid explanation. The authors are expected to explain what
the specific concern is in terms of accuracy and validity.
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Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 04 Jul 2024
Reviewer's report:
This large-scale retrospective cohort study compared the risk of developmental disorders
between general anesthesia and neuraxial anesthesia using a nationwide registry and claim
database. The study has large sample size, valid exposure and outcome information based on
payment code and ICD code, and considers multiple key potential confounders in analysis.
Here are some issues/errors that I hope to point out to help improve quality of this manuscript.
Introduction: The whole section is clear but the authors are expected to emphasize the innovation
of this study, that is, what specific research gaps in the area would be filled in current study?
Methods:
1. The authors should provide references for some guidelines that they mentioned, including the
Helsinki Declaration (line 118) and the two epidemiology guidelines at line 154.
2. There was a typo error for autism at line 137.
3. The age variable in covariates section is not very clear, is it refers to maternal age at delivery?
4. The definition of gestational status variable in models is not clear (line 175). The authors listed
a lot of maternal and fetal conditions in the covariates section but did not explain the relationship
between these conditions and gestational status in the analysis. By the way, there was some
repeated words when authors listed maternal and fetal conditions, which makes readers confused
(line 148).
5. The categories of developmental disorders in Additional File 3 were not consistent with the
list in the outcome section.
6. I feel confused about the statement that " The CIs that overlapped with the value one were
considered statistically significant". I think the value one should not be in the range of CIs when
reporting statistically significant results, like 1.17 (1.07 - 1.28) that the authors mentioned in
the abstract.
7. The subgroup analysis is not enough for the statement of "interaction" (line 190). I think
authors should test the statistical significance of interaction terms. Additionally, why did the
authors not do subgroup analysis for the 1-min Apgar score? Also, I'm curious about the
association between Apgar scores and developmental disorders in this dataset.
Results:
1. It is important to differentiate whether the association decreased (like line 219) or diminished
after adjusting for Apgar scores. "decreased association" sounds like the association is still
significant but has decreased effect size (point estimate). The authors should state conclusion
accurately and consistently in Abstract, Results, Discussion, and Conclusion sections.
2. I feel a little confused about the arrow in Figure 2 and 3. Some lines had arrows showing
direction, while others did not. The criteria should be explained.
3. By the way, Table 2 was missed in the main manuscript.
Discussion
1. The authors reviewed and summarized previous literature about anesthesia and
neurodevelopment, which is good. But I think it would be better to focus more on why the results
contradict the original hypothesis, like what could be the potential explanation.
2. The authors summarized a lot of limitations, which is good. But the third point about accuracy
and validity was not supported by a solid explanation. The authors are expected to explain what
the specific concern is in terms of accuracy and validity.
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"content": "Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent\ndevelopmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study\nVersion: 0 Date: 04 Jul 2024\nReviewer's report:\nThis large-scale retrospective cohort study compared the risk of developmental disorders\nbetween general anesthesia and neuraxial anesthesia using a nationwide registry and claim\ndatabase. The study has large sample size, valid exposure and outcome information based on\npayment code and ICD code, and considers multiple key potential confounders in analysis.\nHere are some issues/errors that I hope to point out to help improve quality of this manuscript.\nIntroduction: The whole section is clear but the authors are expected to emphasize the innovation\nof this study, that is, what specific research gaps in the area would be filled in current study?\nMethods:\n1. The authors should provide references for some guidelines that they mentioned, including the\nHelsinki Declaration (line 118) and the two epidemiology guidelines at line 154.\n2. There was a typo error for autism at line 137.\n3. The age variable in covariates section is not very clear, is it refers to maternal age at delivery?\n4. The definition of gestational status variable in models is not clear (line 175). The authors listed\na lot of maternal and fetal conditions in the covariates section but did not explain the relationship\nbetween these conditions and gestational status in the analysis. By the way, there was some\nrepeated words when authors listed maternal and fetal conditions, which makes readers confused\n(line 148).\n5. The categories of developmental disorders in Additional File 3 were not consistent with the\nlist in the outcome section.\n6. I feel confused about the statement that \" The CIs that overlapped with the value one were\nconsidered statistically significant\". I think the value one should not be in the range of CIs when\nreporting statistically significant results, like 1.17 (1.07 - 1.28) that the authors mentioned in\nthe abstract.\n7. The subgroup analysis is not enough for the statement of \"interaction\" (line 190). I think\nauthors should test the statistical significance of interaction terms. Additionally, why did the\nauthors not do subgroup analysis for the 1-min Apgar score? Also, I'm curious about the\nassociation between Apgar scores and developmental disorders in this dataset.\nResults:\n1. It is important to differentiate whether the association decreased (like line 219) or diminished\nafter adjusting for Apgar scores. \"decreased association\" sounds like the association is still\nsignificant but has decreased effect size (point estimate). The authors should state conclusion\naccurately and consistently in Abstract, Results, Discussion, and Conclusion sections.\n2. I feel a little confused about the arrow in Figure 2 and 3. Some lines had arrows showing\ndirection, while others did not. The criteria should be explained.\n3. By the way, Table 2 was missed in the main manuscript.\nDiscussion\n1. The authors reviewed and summarized previous literature about anesthesia and\nneurodevelopment, which is good. But I think it would be better to focus more on why the results\ncontradict the original hypothesis, like what could be the potential explanation.\n2. The authors summarized a lot of limitations, which is good. But the third point about accuracy\nand validity was not supported by a solid explanation. The authors are expected to explain what\nthe specific concern is in terms of accuracy and validity.",
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Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 10 Jul 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study highlights an increasingly growing area of interest but can be improved in some areas.
1. The authors need to better define the exposures eg neuraxial anesthesia as this can include a
range of anesthetic techniques which may have differing exposures and adverse effects. Do they
have any information on what portion of patients had epidurals placed in labor vs epidural placed
just for cesarean delivery vs CSE vs spinal anesthetics. Similarly general anesthesia is not a
monolithic thing, anesthesia maybe maintained with IV agents (propofol) vs volatile agents with
some preclinical studies suggesting propofol may have less of an effect on neurodevelopmental
pathways.
2. Another major issue with this study which maybe addressed in the limitations is the lack of
data on duration of exposure. In general anesthesia attempts are often made to minimize the
duration of exposure of the fetus to the agent by minimizing the time from induction of anesthesia
to delivery. In neuraxial anesthesia this is less of a concern. I assume the authors are unable to
get data on anesthesia induction (or spinal placement, epidural top up) to delivery time or as a
surrogate marker skin incision to delivery time. Unfortunately the duration of surgery may noy
capture this data point.
3. Interestingly there is no mention of the effect of maternal obesity when this maybe associated
with neurocognitive and neurodevelopmental disoreders
4. Did the authors consider adding the use of reproductive technology (eg IVF ) and Neonatal
ICU admissions as covariates.
5. Some of the terms used as covariates are outdated or unclear eg what is late pregnancy, abrupt
placenta? The hypertensive terms are confusing.
6. What is social deprivation? Socioeconomic factors play a role but these need to be better
defined.
7. Looking at the c-statistics it doesn’t appear that the models developed performed well at
determining the associations between type of anesthesia and neurodevelopmental disorder.
8. The discussion should expand on the attenuation of the effects on anesthesia and
neurodevelopmental disorder by adding in apgar scores. This may reflect the use of GA for
higher risk maternal and fetal conditions eg higher rates of fetal distress preeclampsia and
antepartum hemorrhage in the GA group which could have an effect on childhood outcomes
independent of anethesia.
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Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 10 Jul 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study highlights an increasingly growing area of interest but can be improved in some areas.
1. The authors need to better define the exposures eg neuraxial anesthesia as this can include a
range of anesthetic techniques which may have differing exposures and adverse effects. Do they
have any information on what portion of patients had epidurals placed in labor vs epidural placed
just for cesarean delivery vs CSE vs spinal anesthetics. Similarly general anesthesia is not a
monolithic thing, anesthesia maybe maintained with IV agents (propofol) vs volatile agents with
some preclinical studies suggesting propofol may have less of an effect on neurodevelopmental
pathways.
2. Another major issue with this study which maybe addressed in the limitations is the lack of
data on duration of exposure. In general anesthesia attempts are often made to minimize the
duration of exposure of the fetus to the agent by minimizing the time from induction of anesthesia
to delivery. In neuraxial anesthesia this is less of a concern. I assume the authors are unable to
get data on anesthesia induction (or spinal placement, epidural top up) to delivery time or as a
surrogate marker skin incision to delivery time. Unfortunately the duration of surgery may noy
capture this data point.
3. Interestingly there is no mention of the effect of maternal obesity when this maybe associated
with neurocognitive and neurodevelopmental disoreders
4. Did the authors consider adding the use of reproductive technology (eg IVF ) and Neonatal
ICU admissions as covariates.
5. Some of the terms used as covariates are outdated or unclear eg what is late pregnancy, abrupt
placenta? The hypertensive terms are confusing.
6. What is social deprivation? Socioeconomic factors play a role but these need to be better
defined.
7. Looking at the c-statistics it doesn’t appear that the models developed performed well at
determining the associations between type of anesthesia and neurodevelopmental disorder.
8. The discussion should expand on the attenuation of the effects on anesthesia and
neurodevelopmental disorder by adding in apgar scores. This may reflect the use of GA for
higher risk maternal and fetal conditions eg higher rates of fetal distress preeclampsia and
antepartum hemorrhage in the GA group which could have an effect on childhood outcomes
independent of anethesia.
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Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 10 Jul 2024
Reviewer: John J. Kowalczyk
Reviewer's report:
Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Summary: This is a retrospective cohort study evaluating the association between DD in GA vs
for CD with propensity score matching.
Strengths: Overall, the information is presented well in a well-organized, succinct manner
consistent with the requirements of the journal.
Weaknesses:
General Comments:
Would recommend abbreviate general anesthesia to GA and neuraxial anesthesia to NA
throughout the manuscript.
From Table 1 and Line 178: Does Length of Stay refer to maternal or infant length of stay. It
appears to be maternal length of stay, but should be specified.
Abstract:
Line 36: Would change to something similar to: Exposure to general anesthetics in early
childhood are associated with…
Line 37: Would change to something similar to: few studies have addressed in-utero exposure
to anesthetics during delivery and subsequent
Line 59-60 Would recommend changing: “This association diminished when…” to This
association was no longer present when…”
Background:
Line 75-76: Would change to something similar to: patients with contraindications to neuraxial
anesthesia.
Methods – Statistical Analyses:
Line 184-185: Did you mean to say: CIs that did not overlap with the value one were considered
statistically significant.
Results:
Line 219-221: It is important to be clear that any association was no longer present when
including Apgar scores. I would suggest a change here to: The observed association between GA
for cesarean delivery and subsequent developmental disorders disappeared upon incorporating
Apgar scores as covariates to achieve balance through propensity score weighting
Discussion:
Line 235: Add comma: cause deficits in long-term cognitive function and neuronal cell apoptosis
in animals, including non-human primates
Line 247: Add space: 31 studies…
Line 254: Would change to something similar to: Because most general anesthetics readily cross
the placenta
Line 254: Would change to something similar to: fetuses of pregnant women undergoing
surgery…
Line 294: Would change to psychiatrics to psychiatry
Limitations: Please add discussion related to Apgars related to GA versus underlying fetal
compromise
Conclusion:
The conclusion appears needlessly repetitive and wordy. Furthermore the conclusion should be
clearly supported by the data.
Line 311-314: Would change to something similar to: when controlling for Apgar scores, the
association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent developmental
disorders was no longer present.
Line 313-315: Would recommend changing “Hence, general anesthesia for cesarean delivery
could be associated with a higher risk of developing developmental disorders 2–4 years after
birth because of lower Apgar scores at birth.” To something similar to “It is unclear whether
this represents an effect of GA on neonatal Apgars or, more likely, represents the compromised
in-utero status leading to GA for urgent or emergent CD.”
Would recommend adding your line from the abstract: There is no evidence of a direct
relationship between general anesthesia-related neurotoxicity and subsequent developmental
disorders.
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Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 10 Jul 2024
Reviewer: John J. Kowalczyk
Reviewer's report:
Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Summary: This is a retrospective cohort study evaluating the association between DD in GA vs
for CD with propensity score matching.
Strengths: Overall, the information is presented well in a well-organized, succinct manner
consistent with the requirements of the journal.
Weaknesses:
General Comments:
Would recommend abbreviate general anesthesia to GA and neuraxial anesthesia to NA
throughout the manuscript.
From Table 1 and Line 178: Does Length of Stay refer to maternal or infant length of stay. It
appears to be maternal length of stay, but should be specified.
Abstract:
Line 36: Would change to something similar to: Exposure to general anesthetics in early
childhood are associated with…
Line 37: Would change to something similar to: few studies have addressed in-utero exposure
to anesthetics during delivery and subsequent
Line 59-60 Would recommend changing: “This association diminished when…” to This
association was no longer present when…”
Background:
Line 75-76: Would change to something similar to: patients with contraindications to neuraxial
anesthesia.
Methods – Statistical Analyses:
Line 184-185: Did you mean to say: CIs that did not overlap with the value one were considered
statistically significant.
Results:
Line 219-221: It is important to be clear that any association was no longer present when
including Apgar scores. I would suggest a change here to: The observed association between GA
for cesarean delivery and subsequent developmental disorders disappeared upon incorporating
Apgar scores as covariates to achieve balance through propensity score weighting
Discussion:
Line 235: Add comma: cause deficits in long-term cognitive function and neuronal cell apoptosis
in animals, including non-human primates
Line 247: Add space: 31 studies…
Line 254: Would change to something similar to: Because most general anesthetics readily cross
the placenta
Line 254: Would change to something similar to: fetuses of pregnant women undergoing
surgery…
Line 294: Would change to psychiatrics to psychiatry
Limitations: Please add discussion related to Apgars related to GA versus underlying fetal
compromise
Conclusion:
The conclusion appears needlessly repetitive and wordy. Furthermore the conclusion should be
clearly supported by the data.
Line 311-314: Would change to something similar to: when controlling for Apgar scores, the
association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent developmental
disorders was no longer present.
Line 313-315: Would recommend changing “Hence, general anesthesia for cesarean delivery
could be associated with a higher risk of developing developmental disorders 2–4 years after
birth because of lower Apgar scores at birth.” To something similar to “It is unclear whether
this represents an effect of GA on neonatal Apgars or, more likely, represents the compromised
in-utero status leading to GA for urgent or emergent CD.”
Would recommend adding your line from the abstract: There is no evidence of a direct
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disorders.
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Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 18 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors carefully provided a point-by-point response to the comments and addressed most
of the reviewers' concerns. I still have two remaining concerns about the manuscript.
1) Results: Can the author provide a little more statistical information about the interaction
analysis on the Apgar score? I feel confused about the substantial significance of interaction
terms while "no significant association was found between anesthesia for cesarean delivery and
subsequent developmental disorders in either subgroup." In the additional file 5, the results for
NA, Apgar score <7 and GA, Apgar Score < 7 groups were quite similar, but the interaction
p values were far from 0.05. Can the authors explain more about the Type III test mentioned
in the footnote?
2) Discussion: In the limitation paragraph, the authors mentioned concerns about the accuracy
and validity of data. The authors added more about validation studies in the revision, which is
good. But my original question is, what are specific concerns about the accuracy and validity
of a claim database? For example, misclassification from doctors? As the authors mentioned,
some people unfamiliar with the data might question the accuracy and validity, then what could
be their specific question, and why might these concerns influence the results?
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Title: Association between general anesthesia for cesarean delivery and subsequent
developmental disorders in children: A nationwide retrospective cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 18 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors carefully provided a point-by-point response to the comments and addressed most
of the reviewers' concerns. I still have two remaining concerns about the manuscript.
1) Results: Can the author provide a little more statistical information about the interaction
analysis on the Apgar score? I feel confused about the substantial significance of interaction
terms while "no significant association was found between anesthesia for cesarean delivery and
subsequent developmental disorders in either subgroup." In the additional file 5, the results for
NA, Apgar score <7 and GA, Apgar Score < 7 groups were quite similar, but the interaction
p values were far from 0.05. Can the authors explain more about the Type III test mentioned
in the footnote?
2) Discussion: In the limitation paragraph, the authors mentioned concerns about the accuracy
and validity of data. The authors added more about validation studies in the revision, which is
good. But my original question is, what are specific concerns about the accuracy and validity
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Title: Exploration of the clonal evolution and construction of the tumor clonal evolution rate as
a prognostic indicator in metastatic breast cancer
Version: 0 Date: 13 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Authors in this manuscript investigated clonal evolution in the context of breast cancer and
proposed tumor clonal evolution rate as a prognostic indicator for metastatic breast cancer. In
addition, authors also discussed the limitations of their study. I have the following comments
which should be addressed before the manuscript can be accepted for publication.
1. Line 48- Space should be added after the word progression.
2. The word PFS should be expanded in text as it is being introduced for the first time here.
3. I would request the authors to add a flow chart describing the complete workflow as separate
figure. This will help readers to easily understand process of ample selection and the analysis.
4. Authors mentioned that the study training set included 139 patients. Authors mentioned that
they excluded patients who were currently undergoing neoadjuvant therapy. However, while
selecting this training set did the authors also look if these patients had undergone any treatments
before being enrolling in the study. If yes, how these treatments could affect the overall results?
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a prognostic indicator in metastatic breast cancer
Version: 0 Date: 13 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Authors in this manuscript investigated clonal evolution in the context of breast cancer and
proposed tumor clonal evolution rate as a prognostic indicator for metastatic breast cancer. In
addition, authors also discussed the limitations of their study. I have the following comments
which should be addressed before the manuscript can be accepted for publication.
1. Line 48- Space should be added after the word progression.
2. The word PFS should be expanded in text as it is being introduced for the first time here.
3. I would request the authors to add a flow chart describing the complete workflow as separate
figure. This will help readers to easily understand process of ample selection and the analysis.
4. Authors mentioned that the study training set included 139 patients. Authors mentioned that
they excluded patients who were currently undergoing neoadjuvant therapy. However, while
selecting this training set did the authors also look if these patients had undergone any treatments
before being enrolling in the study. If yes, how these treatments could affect the overall results?
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Title: Exploration of the clonal evolution and construction of the tumor clonal evolution rate as
a prognostic indicator in metastatic breast cancer
Version: 0 Date: 01 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
Lv, Lan and colleagues report on the analysis of breast tumor evolution in ctDNA liquid biopsies
from patients with metastatic disease. The paper is generally well-written and the analyses
appear to be performed with competence. The study included 406 MBC patients, although the
power in survival analyses in the training cohort was limited due to missing followup to 86 or
fewer patients. The results indicate that more rapidly evolving tumors (high tumor evolution
rate), but those with linear evolution pattern (in contrast to branched evolution with many
subclones) have poorer outcomes. While the results are interesting, there are a number of issues
which need to be addressed:
1. These two observations (linear evolution = worse outcome, but high TER = worse outcome)
are somewhat at odds with each other conceptually. Tumors that are able to select for
advantageous mutations under therapeutic pressure (branched evolution and higher evolution
rate) may have greater ability to resist treatment and progress. The authors should discuss this
in greater detail.
2. Do the linear vs branched evolution survival analyses show similar results in the validation
cohort? Only the results for TER are shown.
3. The authors should provide a better description of the number of blood samples collected per
patient and the timing of the samples. This should be provided in both summarized form, such
as in tables and the text, but also may be provided in indivualized form, such as a swimmer
plot. How many patients had 2 timepoints, 3 timepoints, etc? What was the timeframe between
timepoints and their relationship to treatments and progression/death?
4. The type of blood collection tubes and the volumes of blood and plasma should be described
and also provided in summarized form. The yields of ctDNA per mL plasma should be provided.
5. The sentence “The allele frequency of a mutation is defined as the number of variant allele
reads divided by the total number of reads in the sequencing” probably is a misstatement, in that
the denominator is the total number of reads mapping to the variant position?
6. What is the performance characteristics of the ctDNA assay used? Above what MAF is a
mutation reliably called?
7. Given that TER = (AFmax2/U2 - AFmax1/U1)/t, have the authors considered the effect of
increased tumor burden? Conceptually, increased tumor burden will result in higher ctDNA
concentrations in the plasma, which could mean that more genome copies (nanograms) of
cfDNA is input into the sequencing. Depending on the noise-level of the sequencing, greater
cfDNA ng input could simply be increasing the level of noise, which means a greater number of
low allele frequency “mutations” (noise) will be detected. Conceptually, this could artificially
increase the AFmax/U value but simply be a proxy for increased ctDNA and less related to
subclonality. Have the authors considered this possibility?
8. In the 86 patients with PFS data and 2nd ctDNA test, was there any association between
chemo vs no-chemo and linear vs branched evolution?
9. It would be good to if the authors would present information regarding specific mutations and
molecular subtypes and adjuvant treatment and treatments between T1 and T2. For example,
are most ESR1 mutants found in ER+ patients who received prior endocrine therapy? Are
most PIK3CA mutants in ER+ and HER2+ disease? Is there an enrichment of TP53 mutation
amongst HR-/HER2-? Perhaps this information could be illustrated in a patient-sample vs gene
“heatmap” figure?
10. Several relevant prior publications should be cited at the appropriate places in the text:
Dawson et al, N Engl J Med. 2013 Mar 28;368(13):1199-209; Garcia-Murillas et al, Sci Transl
Med. 2015 Aug 26;7(302):302ra133; Olsson et al, EMBO Mol Med. 2015 Aug;7(8):1034-47;
Hu et al, EBioMedicine. 2018 Jun:32:111-118; Liu et al, The Breast. 2022 Oct:65:116-123.
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Title: Exploration of the clonal evolution and construction of the tumor clonal evolution rate as
a prognostic indicator in metastatic breast cancer
Version: 0 Date: 01 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
Lv, Lan and colleagues report on the analysis of breast tumor evolution in ctDNA liquid biopsies
from patients with metastatic disease. The paper is generally well-written and the analyses
appear to be performed with competence. The study included 406 MBC patients, although the
power in survival analyses in the training cohort was limited due to missing followup to 86 or
fewer patients. The results indicate that more rapidly evolving tumors (high tumor evolution
rate), but those with linear evolution pattern (in contrast to branched evolution with many
subclones) have poorer outcomes. While the results are interesting, there are a number of issues
which need to be addressed:
1. These two observations (linear evolution = worse outcome, but high TER = worse outcome)
are somewhat at odds with each other conceptually. Tumors that are able to select for
advantageous mutations under therapeutic pressure (branched evolution and higher evolution
rate) may have greater ability to resist treatment and progress. The authors should discuss this
in greater detail.
2. Do the linear vs branched evolution survival analyses show similar results in the validation
cohort? Only the results for TER are shown.
3. The authors should provide a better description of the number of blood samples collected per
patient and the timing of the samples. This should be provided in both summarized form, such
as in tables and the text, but also may be provided in indivualized form, such as a swimmer
plot. How many patients had 2 timepoints, 3 timepoints, etc? What was the timeframe between
timepoints and their relationship to treatments and progression/death?
4. The type of blood collection tubes and the volumes of blood and plasma should be described
and also provided in summarized form. The yields of ctDNA per mL plasma should be provided.
5. The sentence “The allele frequency of a mutation is defined as the number of variant allele
reads divided by the total number of reads in the sequencing” probably is a misstatement, in that
the denominator is the total number of reads mapping to the variant position?
6. What is the performance characteristics of the ctDNA assay used? Above what MAF is a
mutation reliably called?
7. Given that TER = (AFmax2/U2 - AFmax1/U1)/t, have the authors considered the effect of
increased tumor burden? Conceptually, increased tumor burden will result in higher ctDNA
concentrations in the plasma, which could mean that more genome copies (nanograms) of
cfDNA is input into the sequencing. Depending on the noise-level of the sequencing, greater
cfDNA ng input could simply be increasing the level of noise, which means a greater number of
low allele frequency “mutations” (noise) will be detected. Conceptually, this could artificially
increase the AFmax/U value but simply be a proxy for increased ctDNA and less related to
subclonality. Have the authors considered this possibility?
8. In the 86 patients with PFS data and 2nd ctDNA test, was there any association between
chemo vs no-chemo and linear vs branched evolution?
9. It would be good to if the authors would present information regarding specific mutations and
molecular subtypes and adjuvant treatment and treatments between T1 and T2. For example,
are most ESR1 mutants found in ER+ patients who received prior endocrine therapy? Are
most PIK3CA mutants in ER+ and HER2+ disease? Is there an enrichment of TP53 mutation
amongst HR-/HER2-? Perhaps this information could be illustrated in a patient-sample vs gene
“heatmap” figure?
10. Several relevant prior publications should be cited at the appropriate places in the text:
Dawson et al, N Engl J Med. 2013 Mar 28;368(13):1199-209; Garcia-Murillas et al, Sci Transl
Med. 2015 Aug 26;7(302):302ra133; Olsson et al, EMBO Mol Med. 2015 Aug;7(8):1034-47;
Hu et al, EBioMedicine. 2018 Jun:32:111-118; Liu et al, The Breast. 2022 Oct:65:116-123.
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Title: Exploration of the clonal evolution and construction of the tumor clonal evolution rate as
a prognostic indicator in metastatic breast cancer
Version: 1 Date: 08 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thanks for addressing all my comments.
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Title: Exploration of the clonal evolution and construction of the tumor clonal evolution rate as
a prognostic indicator in metastatic breast cancer
Version: 1 Date: 08 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thanks for addressing all my comments.
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Title: Anti-hypertensive medication adherence, socioeconomic status, and cognitive aging in
the Chinese community-dwelling middle-aged and older adults # 45 years: a population-based
longitudinal study
Version: 0 Date: 14 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study investigates an important topic with a generally sound methodological approach.
However, the potential for reverse causality between anti-hypertensive medication adherence
and cognitive aging raises significant concerns about the interpretation of the findings.
1. The introduction states that "Hypertension is one major risk factor for dementia." While
this is generally accepted, the cited Lancet Commission Report (2020) attributes only 1.9%
of global dementia cases to midlife hypertension. This relatively low population-attributable
fraction (PAF) might not seem like "major" to some readers.
2. Consider developing a more comprehensive SES index that incorporates multiple indicators,
such as income, education, occupation, and potentially wealth indicators if available. This would
provide a more nuanced and robust representation of socioeconomic status than relying on
individual indicators separately. The approach used in the BMJ study (Associations of healthy
lifestyle and socioeconomic status with mortality and incident cardiovascular disease, 2021, doi:
https://doi.org/10.1136/bmj.n604) could serve as a useful reference.
3. To better understand the interplay between medication adherence and SES, I recommend
exploring mediation and moderation effects.
4. On page 13, lines 16-17, the text states, "The proportion of anti-hypertensive medication use
during wave 1 and wave 2 was presented in Figure 1B, showing an elevated proportion of using
medication." However, the figure only seems to indicate a numerical increase in medication use,
without any statistical analysis to support the claim of an actual "elevated proportion." Presenting
this observation without statistical testing is misleading and lacks meaningful interpretation.
Additionally, this sentence should end with a period, not a comma.
5. Figure 2 presents a perplexing finding: individuals with hypertension but high medication
adherence exhibit significantly higher cognitive function than those with normal blood pressure.
This raises concerns about potential reverse causality. Is it possible that individuals with higher
cognitive function are simply more likely to adhere to their medication regimens? This could
create the observed association without a true causal link between adherence and improved
cognition.
6. Are there other variables (e.g., education level, socioeconomic status, access to healthcare)
that could explain both higher adherence and better cognitive outcomes? The authors should
address potential confounders in their analysis.
7. The second paragraph of the discussion feels unfocused and lacks conciseness. It primarily
lists other studies without effectively comparing and contrasting their findings with the results
of the current study. This approach diminishes the impact and clarity of the discussion.
8. The "Strengths" section would be more compelling if it focused on how the study's design and
findings contribute new knowledge or challenge existing understandings. Currently, the listed
strengths, while valid, don't fully highlight the study's unique value.
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Title: Anti-hypertensive medication adherence, socioeconomic status, and cognitive aging in
the Chinese community-dwelling middle-aged and older adults # 45 years: a population-based
longitudinal study
Version: 0 Date: 14 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study investigates an important topic with a generally sound methodological approach.
However, the potential for reverse causality between anti-hypertensive medication adherence
and cognitive aging raises significant concerns about the interpretation of the findings.
1. The introduction states that "Hypertension is one major risk factor for dementia." While
this is generally accepted, the cited Lancet Commission Report (2020) attributes only 1.9%
of global dementia cases to midlife hypertension. This relatively low population-attributable
fraction (PAF) might not seem like "major" to some readers.
2. Consider developing a more comprehensive SES index that incorporates multiple indicators,
such as income, education, occupation, and potentially wealth indicators if available. This would
provide a more nuanced and robust representation of socioeconomic status than relying on
individual indicators separately. The approach used in the BMJ study (Associations of healthy
lifestyle and socioeconomic status with mortality and incident cardiovascular disease, 2021, doi:
https://doi.org/10.1136/bmj.n604) could serve as a useful reference.
3. To better understand the interplay between medication adherence and SES, I recommend
exploring mediation and moderation effects.
4. On page 13, lines 16-17, the text states, "The proportion of anti-hypertensive medication use
during wave 1 and wave 2 was presented in Figure 1B, showing an elevated proportion of using
medication." However, the figure only seems to indicate a numerical increase in medication use,
without any statistical analysis to support the claim of an actual "elevated proportion." Presenting
this observation without statistical testing is misleading and lacks meaningful interpretation.
Additionally, this sentence should end with a period, not a comma.
5. Figure 2 presents a perplexing finding: individuals with hypertension but high medication
adherence exhibit significantly higher cognitive function than those with normal blood pressure.
This raises concerns about potential reverse causality. Is it possible that individuals with higher
cognitive function are simply more likely to adhere to their medication regimens? This could
create the observed association without a true causal link between adherence and improved
cognition.
6. Are there other variables (e.g., education level, socioeconomic status, access to healthcare)
that could explain both higher adherence and better cognitive outcomes? The authors should
address potential confounders in their analysis.
7. The second paragraph of the discussion feels unfocused and lacks conciseness. It primarily
lists other studies without effectively comparing and contrasting their findings with the results
of the current study. This approach diminishes the impact and clarity of the discussion.
8. The "Strengths" section would be more compelling if it focused on how the study's design and
findings contribute new knowledge or challenge existing understandings. Currently, the listed
strengths, while valid, don't fully highlight the study's unique value.
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Title: Anti-hypertensive medication adherence, socioeconomic status, and cognitive aging in
the Chinese community-dwelling middle-aged and older adults # 45 years: a population-based
longitudinal study
Version: 0 Date: 03 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Please see the comments file.
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Title: Anti-hypertensive medication adherence, socioeconomic status, and cognitive aging in
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longitudinal study
Version: 0 Date: 03 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Please see the comments file.
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Title: Anti-hypertensive medication adherence, socioeconomic status, and cognitive aging in
the Chinese community-dwelling middle-aged and older adults # 45 years: a population-based
longitudinal study
Version: 0 Date: 14 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the invitation. This paper is generally well written. I have the following comments
to the authors.
1. In the abstract section please provide more concrete data and also the P-value. The conclusion
should be consistent with the main file.
2. In the introduction section, please make the flow more fluently and also state the knowledge
gap clearly.
3. In the method section, some important parts for example participants enrollment and data
collection should be described clearly. How to define the outcomes and the method used to
analyze should be improved.
4. In the result sections, please provide important findings and also use more figures to illustrate
the differences between groups.
5. In the discussion, authors should compare their findings with prior reports and also explain
why similar or different. The implications should be specified.
6. Limitations should be expanded.
7. The statement of the conclusion should be toned down.
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Title: Anti-hypertensive medication adherence, socioeconomic status, and cognitive aging in
the Chinese community-dwelling middle-aged and older adults # 45 years: a population-based
longitudinal study
Version: 0 Date: 14 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the invitation. This paper is generally well written. I have the following comments
to the authors.
1. In the abstract section please provide more concrete data and also the P-value. The conclusion
should be consistent with the main file.
2. In the introduction section, please make the flow more fluently and also state the knowledge
gap clearly.
3. In the method section, some important parts for example participants enrollment and data
collection should be described clearly. How to define the outcomes and the method used to
analyze should be improved.
4. In the result sections, please provide important findings and also use more figures to illustrate
the differences between groups.
5. In the discussion, authors should compare their findings with prior reports and also explain
why similar or different. The implications should be specified.
6. Limitations should be expanded.
7. The statement of the conclusion should be toned down.
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longitudinal study
Version: 1 Date: 03 Jan 2025
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Thank you for your revisions. All the issues have been fully addressed.
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Title: Sensitivity to thyroid hormones in children developing acute kidney injury at the onset
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Version: 0 Date: 20 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Giorgio Radetti
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I read with interest the paper by Guarino et al, concerning the relationship between thyroid
Hormones, the metabolic derangement at the onset of Type 1 diabetes mellitus and renal
function. The study has been well performed and paper is well written. Most of the results are in
agreement with what has been previously reported on the influence of euthyroid sick syndrome
on thyroid hormones, but other aspects are new, such as the increased sensitivity of the pituitary/
hypothalamus to thyroid hormones, which is the opposite of what has been previously reported.
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milieu of cytokines, compared to other diseases, might explain this difference. Cytokines are
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Version: 0 Date: 20 Nov 2024
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I read with interest the paper by Guarino et al, concerning the relationship between thyroid
Hormones, the metabolic derangement at the onset of Type 1 diabetes mellitus and renal
function. The study has been well performed and paper is well written. Most of the results are in
agreement with what has been previously reported on the influence of euthyroid sick syndrome
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hypothalamus to thyroid hormones, which is the opposite of what has been previously reported.
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Title: Forecasting total and cause-specific health expenditures for 116 health conditions in
Norway, 2022-2050
Version: 0 Date: 11 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Brendan Collins
Reviewer's report:
Forecasting total and cause-specific health expenditures for 116 health conditions in Norway,
2022-2050
Review by Dr Brendan Collins
Overall this is a good study will be useful for health economic modellers and policy analysts
going forward. I really like the methods and not sure if I have seen them used before- maybe
this is the typical method used by IHME GBD.
Seems a little big random to have chiropractor activity and not something else like mental health
worker activity. Is it a cultural difference that lots of people in Norway see a chiropractor?
I wasn’t sure what ‘well care’ is - is it like primary prevention ? Also what ‘impairments’ is
specifically- as lots of different diseases and problems cause impairments. Would be good to
explain these a little bit more.
I am not sure I understand the rationale for the assumption that income elasticity will move
towards 1 and residual growth towards zero by 2050 – I am not saying it is incorrect but it might
be good to explain this a bit more and why it is chosen as the central scenario and not say the
‘cost pressures’ scenario.
In the discussion it might be good to mention something about changes in multimorbidity and
how this might affect future costs, as combinations or clusters of diseases may have different
costs than the current sum of individual diseases.
A few specific comments:
Figure 2, some of the legend text goes over the coloured bit ‘GDP and residual growth’
Typo figure 3 legend, think it should say ‘Impairments’
Typo on figure 3 footnote – should say ‘calculating’
Overall a very nice paper.
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Version: 0 Date: 11 Dec 2024
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Reviewer's report:
Forecasting total and cause-specific health expenditures for 116 health conditions in Norway,
2022-2050
Review by Dr Brendan Collins
Overall this is a good study will be useful for health economic modellers and policy analysts
going forward. I really like the methods and not sure if I have seen them used before- maybe
this is the typical method used by IHME GBD.
Seems a little big random to have chiropractor activity and not something else like mental health
worker activity. Is it a cultural difference that lots of people in Norway see a chiropractor?
I wasn’t sure what ‘well care’ is - is it like primary prevention ? Also what ‘impairments’ is
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explain these a little bit more.
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towards 1 and residual growth towards zero by 2050 – I am not saying it is incorrect but it might
be good to explain this a bit more and why it is chosen as the central scenario and not say the
‘cost pressures’ scenario.
In the discussion it might be good to mention something about changes in multimorbidity and
how this might affect future costs, as combinations or clusters of diseases may have different
costs than the current sum of individual diseases.
A few specific comments:
Figure 2, some of the legend text goes over the coloured bit ‘GDP and residual growth’
Typo figure 3 legend, think it should say ‘Impairments’
Typo on figure 3 footnote – should say ‘calculating’
Overall a very nice paper.
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Title: Forecasting total and cause-specific health expenditures for 116 health conditions in
Norway, 2022-2050
Version: 0 Date: 15 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Tony Blakely
Reviewer's report:
Re: Kinge et al. Forecasting total and cause-specific health expenditures for 116 health
conditions in Norway, 2022-2050
This is a fascinating and outstanding paper. It takes GBD historic and forecast disease rates
for Norway, merges that with highly detailed disease expenditure from Norway, and forecasts
future health spending for a base scenario and alternative scenarios – with drivers of change
(increase) in expenditure decomposed into population size, aging, disease/epidemiological, and
residual cost per case (assumed as price inflation per unit/prevalent case due to technology
and other factors). Both health care and long-term care (e.g. aged care) are included in the
concept of health spending (an important point, as exactly what is and is not considered health
spending differs between countries and available data). The authors find substantial increases
in total health spending, driven by all three of aging, population size and cost per case. (Slightly
improving disease rates see disease projections slightly saving spending.)
Whilst I think the paper is high quality and useful, there are a number of issues I found that in
my view either need clarification or correction.
My most important concerns are about the use of GDP.
First, equations 1 and 2 in the main paper have GDP as covariates. It is not completely clear,
but from the Supplement it appears this is GROSS GDP, not GDP per capita. Therefore, this
is GDP per capita multiplied by population size. Which would mean this variable is capturing
BOTH changes in population size and income (as reflected by GDP per capita), which would
surely violate the assumptions of the method. (As the coefficient would be capturing population
growth in Norway (about 1% per year) as a predictor of cost per prevalent case, which would (I
think) UNDERESTIMATE the true impact of income (i.e. GDP per capita) on cost per prevalent
case – yes?) Whether Gross GDP or GDP per capita is used in equations 1 and 2 needs clarifying,
and if it is the former isn’t that erroneous?
Second is the GDP forecasts for Norway. Whilst these are an important input to the method,
the authors do not present these forecasts in the main paper or Appendix; they need to be. So
I went back to the source cited (https://ghdx.healthdata.org/record/ihme-data/global-gdp-per-
capita-1960-2050), the IHME forecasts. This is what I found for the GBD forecast for Norway:
Which is odd indeed (i.e. no forecast increase in GPD per capita). So I checked Sweden:
Which seems more plausible.
Back to Norway, something is amiss here. Either the IHME tool I looked GDP per capita up is
incorrect (and there truly is a forecast increase in GDP per capita data used in this paper), or the
results for cost per case in the paper (e.g. last column of ‘unit cost’ in Table 2) are purely driven
by ‘residual’ trend represented by #_2^HCE and not actually by GDP per capita. (Although
if my concerns above about GROSS GDP being used in equations 1 and 2 is correct, then the
validity of the coefficients is in question in the first place.)
Thes above two concerns together, if correct, would affect interpretation throughout the Results
and Discussion.
A third concern I have about GDP is its assumption of being EXOGENOUS to predicting health
care spending. In another GBD paper in the Lancet in 2024, that on fertility, they cite various
studies about per capita income growth, including this one 1 that points to population growth
being more likely to see negative GDP per capita growth than natural resource limits. Hard to
know what it means in the current Norwegian study, but the validity of future GDP per capita
increases being slowed by population growth may require mention. This might be viewed as
similar to the ‘Baumols effect’ described in the supplement .
Other issues I noted include:
In addition to comparing the future growth rates of health spending in this study with previous
studies as a cross-validation, was a back-validation undertaken where the equations in inputs
were used to estimate past total health expenditure and this compared to national health
accounts?
Lines 166 to 169. The inclusion of X_(c,t)^' in equation 1 and 2 makes sense. But does this
mean the forecasting needs to also include the confounding compositional variables as well?
If not, then am I correct in assuming the future health spending estimates in this study assume
the compositional variables as at 2023 continue? (This is not a major issue – perhaps for the
Supplement.)
Lines 239-40. For unfamiliar readers, I would spell out what these elasticity coefficients actually
mean, i.e. “for each 1 percent increase in GDP per capita, a 0.554% (95% UI 0.4XX to 0.7XX)
spending per prevalent case was estimated.”
Lines 246 to 247. The % of GDP spent on health is quite sensitive to the GPD forecasts – yes?
(And note above for my concerns about Norwegian per Capita GDP used.) Would it pay to
given some sensitivity analyses for (say) 50% less and 50% more GPD growth over the forecast
period? Where this not only effects the denominator in these lines of text, but also the input
to the whole method? (Or include generous uncertainty about GDP growth in the Monet Carlo
simulations, and back out with a tornado plot (or similar) how much the uncertainty in GDP per
capita growth drives uncertainty in the final “% of GDP” estimates.)
Lines 312 to 314. It is not clear to me “how the government allocates it resources” is pivotal.
Are the authors getting at the fact the model forecasts based on historic relationships. But future
Governments can cap allocation in salaries, or secondary care, etc, and therefore the equations
become ‘redundant’ because future policy alters what happens? Or something else? I think this
paragraph could be expanded.
Lines 319 to 323 are similar to above. So essentially, the authors are saying “we can change
the relationships of the past (and equations we used in this study) through policy”. Which is
important, in explicitly recognizing that the equations used in this study (whilst really useful)
are not an immutable force of nature – we can alter it. Yes?
Lines 335 to 339. This is not an issue specific to Norway. It is certainly the case in Australia,
and I think many other countries. That generality might warrant emphasis.
Line 355 to 358. The point is well made, and critical. The Results of the paper ‘just’ give
health spending in aggregate, without considering the size of the population. If the working age
population is proportionately increased by some policy, it may REDUCE per capita health care
spending (especially if using the working age population as the denominator, as they will be the
ones paying the income tax to support the aging population).
Lines 364 to 367. In high-level terms, this covers some of my above comments – I do wonder,
though, whether more expansion is necessary.
Table 2. If this paper uses GDP per capita forecasts that have no increases in GDP per capita,
then the reader needs to be alerted to the Unit Costs in last column only arising from the residual
trend (i.e. GDP per capita increases absent). If the forecast I found in IHME data is incorrect,
and the forecast used in this paper indeed has increasing GDP per capita:
It would be useful for the reader to have that increase in cost per case disaggregated by per capita
GDP driver and residual increase in trend.
And perhaps the sensitivity analyses above about variation in future GDP per capita forecasts.
Figure 3 right hand panel invites more questions than it answers. For example, are the negative
contributions (i.e. below the horizontal) due to increasing population size and age? Surely they
are. Then I flick back to Figure 2, and carefully compare C with A and D with B. I need some
help interpreting Figure 2 more; I suggest the authors need some more text on Figure 2 in their
Results. For example, why does cost per case for LTC go up from the reference to reduced risk
scenario? I cannot make sense of this. Some assistance in the text would help.
Tony Blakely
1. Mino K, Sasaki H. Long-run consequences of population decline in an economy with
exhaustible resources. Economic Modelling 2023;121. DOI: 10.1016/j.econmod.2023.106212.
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Title: Forecasting total and cause-specific health expenditures for 116 health conditions in
Norway, 2022-2050
Version: 0 Date: 15 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Tony Blakely
Reviewer's report:
Re: Kinge et al. Forecasting total and cause-specific health expenditures for 116 health
conditions in Norway, 2022-2050
This is a fascinating and outstanding paper. It takes GBD historic and forecast disease rates
for Norway, merges that with highly detailed disease expenditure from Norway, and forecasts
future health spending for a base scenario and alternative scenarios – with drivers of change
(increase) in expenditure decomposed into population size, aging, disease/epidemiological, and
residual cost per case (assumed as price inflation per unit/prevalent case due to technology
and other factors). Both health care and long-term care (e.g. aged care) are included in the
concept of health spending (an important point, as exactly what is and is not considered health
spending differs between countries and available data). The authors find substantial increases
in total health spending, driven by all three of aging, population size and cost per case. (Slightly
improving disease rates see disease projections slightly saving spending.)
Whilst I think the paper is high quality and useful, there are a number of issues I found that in
my view either need clarification or correction.
My most important concerns are about the use of GDP.
First, equations 1 and 2 in the main paper have GDP as covariates. It is not completely clear,
but from the Supplement it appears this is GROSS GDP, not GDP per capita. Therefore, this
is GDP per capita multiplied by population size. Which would mean this variable is capturing
BOTH changes in population size and income (as reflected by GDP per capita), which would
surely violate the assumptions of the method. (As the coefficient would be capturing population
growth in Norway (about 1% per year) as a predictor of cost per prevalent case, which would (I
think) UNDERESTIMATE the true impact of income (i.e. GDP per capita) on cost per prevalent
case – yes?) Whether Gross GDP or GDP per capita is used in equations 1 and 2 needs clarifying,
and if it is the former isn’t that erroneous?
Second is the GDP forecasts for Norway. Whilst these are an important input to the method,
the authors do not present these forecasts in the main paper or Appendix; they need to be. So
I went back to the source cited (https://ghdx.healthdata.org/record/ihme-data/global-gdp-per-
capita-1960-2050), the IHME forecasts. This is what I found for the GBD forecast for Norway:
Which is odd indeed (i.e. no forecast increase in GPD per capita). So I checked Sweden:
Which seems more plausible.
Back to Norway, something is amiss here. Either the IHME tool I looked GDP per capita up is
incorrect (and there truly is a forecast increase in GDP per capita data used in this paper), or the
results for cost per case in the paper (e.g. last column of ‘unit cost’ in Table 2) are purely driven
by ‘residual’ trend represented by #_2^HCE and not actually by GDP per capita. (Although
if my concerns above about GROSS GDP being used in equations 1 and 2 is correct, then the
validity of the coefficients is in question in the first place.)
Thes above two concerns together, if correct, would affect interpretation throughout the Results
and Discussion.
A third concern I have about GDP is its assumption of being EXOGENOUS to predicting health
care spending. In another GBD paper in the Lancet in 2024, that on fertility, they cite various
studies about per capita income growth, including this one 1 that points to population growth
being more likely to see negative GDP per capita growth than natural resource limits. Hard to
know what it means in the current Norwegian study, but the validity of future GDP per capita
increases being slowed by population growth may require mention. This might be viewed as
similar to the ‘Baumols effect’ described in the supplement .
Other issues I noted include:
In addition to comparing the future growth rates of health spending in this study with previous
studies as a cross-validation, was a back-validation undertaken where the equations in inputs
were used to estimate past total health expenditure and this compared to national health
accounts?
Lines 166 to 169. The inclusion of X_(c,t)^' in equation 1 and 2 makes sense. But does this
mean the forecasting needs to also include the confounding compositional variables as well?
If not, then am I correct in assuming the future health spending estimates in this study assume
the compositional variables as at 2023 continue? (This is not a major issue – perhaps for the
Supplement.)
Lines 239-40. For unfamiliar readers, I would spell out what these elasticity coefficients actually
mean, i.e. “for each 1 percent increase in GDP per capita, a 0.554% (95% UI 0.4XX to 0.7XX)
spending per prevalent case was estimated.”
Lines 246 to 247. The % of GDP spent on health is quite sensitive to the GPD forecasts – yes?
(And note above for my concerns about Norwegian per Capita GDP used.) Would it pay to
given some sensitivity analyses for (say) 50% less and 50% more GPD growth over the forecast
period? Where this not only effects the denominator in these lines of text, but also the input
to the whole method? (Or include generous uncertainty about GDP growth in the Monet Carlo
simulations, and back out with a tornado plot (or similar) how much the uncertainty in GDP per
capita growth drives uncertainty in the final “% of GDP” estimates.)
Lines 312 to 314. It is not clear to me “how the government allocates it resources” is pivotal.
Are the authors getting at the fact the model forecasts based on historic relationships. But future
Governments can cap allocation in salaries, or secondary care, etc, and therefore the equations
become ‘redundant’ because future policy alters what happens? Or something else? I think this
paragraph could be expanded.
Lines 319 to 323 are similar to above. So essentially, the authors are saying “we can change
the relationships of the past (and equations we used in this study) through policy”. Which is
important, in explicitly recognizing that the equations used in this study (whilst really useful)
are not an immutable force of nature – we can alter it. Yes?
Lines 335 to 339. This is not an issue specific to Norway. It is certainly the case in Australia,
and I think many other countries. That generality might warrant emphasis.
Line 355 to 358. The point is well made, and critical. The Results of the paper ‘just’ give
health spending in aggregate, without considering the size of the population. If the working age
population is proportionately increased by some policy, it may REDUCE per capita health care
spending (especially if using the working age population as the denominator, as they will be the
ones paying the income tax to support the aging population).
Lines 364 to 367. In high-level terms, this covers some of my above comments – I do wonder,
though, whether more expansion is necessary.
Table 2. If this paper uses GDP per capita forecasts that have no increases in GDP per capita,
then the reader needs to be alerted to the Unit Costs in last column only arising from the residual
trend (i.e. GDP per capita increases absent). If the forecast I found in IHME data is incorrect,
and the forecast used in this paper indeed has increasing GDP per capita:
It would be useful for the reader to have that increase in cost per case disaggregated by per capita
GDP driver and residual increase in trend.
And perhaps the sensitivity analyses above about variation in future GDP per capita forecasts.
Figure 3 right hand panel invites more questions than it answers. For example, are the negative
contributions (i.e. below the horizontal) due to increasing population size and age? Surely they
are. Then I flick back to Figure 2, and carefully compare C with A and D with B. I need some
help interpreting Figure 2 more; I suggest the authors need some more text on Figure 2 in their
Results. For example, why does cost per case for LTC go up from the reference to reduced risk
scenario? I cannot make sense of this. Some assistance in the text would help.
Tony Blakely
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Both health care and long-term care (e.g. aged care) are included in the\nconcept of health spending (an important point, as exactly what is and is not considered health\nspending differs between countries and available data). The authors find substantial increases\nin total health spending, driven by all three of aging, population size and cost per case. (Slightly\nimproving disease rates see disease projections slightly saving spending.)\nWhilst I think the paper is high quality and useful, there are a number of issues I found that in\nmy view either need clarification or correction.\nMy most important concerns are about the use of GDP.\nFirst, equations 1 and 2 in the main paper have GDP as covariates. It is not completely clear,\nbut from the Supplement it appears this is GROSS GDP, not GDP per capita. Therefore, this\nis GDP per capita multiplied by population size. Which would mean this variable is capturing\nBOTH changes in population size and income (as reflected by GDP per capita), which would\nsurely violate the assumptions of the method. (As the coefficient would be capturing population\ngrowth in Norway (about 1% per year) as a predictor of cost per prevalent case, which would (I\nthink) UNDERESTIMATE the true impact of income (i.e. GDP per capita) on cost per prevalent\ncase – yes?) Whether Gross GDP or GDP per capita is used in equations 1 and 2 needs clarifying,\nand if it is the former isn’t that erroneous?\nSecond is the GDP forecasts for Norway. Whilst these are an important input to the method,\nthe authors do not present these forecasts in the main paper or Appendix; they need to be. So\nI went back to the source cited (https://ghdx.healthdata.org/record/ihme-data/global-gdp-per-\ncapita-1960-2050), the IHME forecasts. This is what I found for the GBD forecast for Norway:\nWhich is odd indeed (i.e. no forecast increase in GPD per capita). So I checked Sweden:\nWhich seems more plausible.\nBack to Norway, something is amiss here. Either the IHME tool I looked GDP per capita up is\nincorrect (and there truly is a forecast increase in GDP per capita data used in this paper), or the\nresults for cost per case in the paper (e.g. last column of ‘unit cost’ in Table 2) are purely driven\nby ‘residual’ trend represented by #_2^HCE and not actually by GDP per capita. (Although\nif my concerns above about GROSS GDP being used in equations 1 and 2 is correct, then the\nvalidity of the coefficients is in question in the first place.)\nThes above two concerns together, if correct, would affect interpretation throughout the Results\nand Discussion.\nA third concern I have about GDP is its assumption of being EXOGENOUS to predicting health\ncare spending. In another GBD paper in the Lancet in 2024, that on fertility, they cite various\nstudies about per capita income growth, including this one 1 that points to population growth\nbeing more likely to see negative GDP per capita growth than natural resource limits. Hard to\nknow what it means in the current Norwegian study, but the validity of future GDP per capita\nincreases being slowed by population growth may require mention. This might be viewed as\nsimilar to the ‘Baumols effect’ described in the supplement .\nOther issues I noted include:\nIn addition to comparing the future growth rates of health spending in this study with previous\nstudies as a cross-validation, was a back-validation undertaken where the equations in inputs\nwere used to estimate past total health expenditure and this compared to national health\naccounts?\nLines 166 to 169. The inclusion of X_(c,t)^' in equation 1 and 2 makes sense. But does this\nmean the forecasting needs to also include the confounding compositional variables as well?\nIf not, then am I correct in assuming the future health spending estimates in this study assume\nthe compositional variables as at 2023 continue? (This is not a major issue – perhaps for the\nSupplement.)\nLines 239-40. For unfamiliar readers, I would spell out what these elasticity coefficients actually\nmean, i.e. “for each 1 percent increase in GDP per capita, a 0.554% (95% UI 0.4XX to 0.7XX)\nspending per prevalent case was estimated.”\nLines 246 to 247. The % of GDP spent on health is quite sensitive to the GPD forecasts – yes?\n(And note above for my concerns about Norwegian per Capita GDP used.) Would it pay to\ngiven some sensitivity analyses for (say) 50% less and 50% more GPD growth over the forecast\nperiod? Where this not only effects the denominator in these lines of text, but also the input\nto the whole method? 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Title: Forecasting total and cause-specific health expenditures for 116 health conditions in
Norway, 2022-2050
Version: 1 Date: 16 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Brendan Collins
Reviewer's report:
Happy with all of the responses and changes made.
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Title: Forecasting total and cause-specific health expenditures for 116 health conditions in
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Version: 1 Date: 16 Jan 2025
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Version: 1 Date: 17 Jan 2025
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Title: Plant-based, Fast-food, Western-contemporary, and Animal-based Dietary Patterns and
Risk of Premature Aging in Adult Survivors of Childhood Cancer: a cross-sectional study
Version: 0 Date: 26 Jun 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors described the link between dietary patterns and premature aging. It is well-written
and with a strong methodology. The use of the DAI is a good proxy of premature aging. Working
on diet patterns in this specific population is novel and confirms the usefulness of plant-based
diet patterns found in other populations. The results are consistent with previous literature.
My specific comments are as follows:
Methods:
L70: How were the extreme energy intakes identified? Several methods exist (basal metabolic
rate as estimated by the Henry equation, for example).
L90: The way the dietary patterns are identified is crucial for this study. Thus, a complete
description of the method could be added to the supplementary materials.
L118: “(female and male).” there should be a comma instead of the period.
A description of the statistical software and its version is needed.
Results:
Table 1: were lsmeans used for group-by-group comparisons? If not, it could be interesting to
confirm the significant differences.
Supplementary Table 1: SD should be added to understand the variation in the food intake.
Comparison between food patterns could also be done.
L142: “All dietary patterns were associated with the DAI.” I am not sure what you meant by
this sentence. If you are talking about correlations between DAI and dietary patterns, it is not
shown in Supplementary Table 3.
Table 2: the total number of individuals in the study should be stated in the title.
L151-152: this sentence is not very clear and could be simplified.
Figure 1: the total number of individuals in the study should be stated in the title. What is the
purpose of panel D? If I understand correctly, it is the opposite of panel A and thus should be
in supplementary figure 1.
Discussion:
L199-206: to complete the discussion, it should be interesting to discuss the level of protein
consumption, which is highly above the recommendation in Western diets (Mariotti and
Gardner, 2019)
L218: highest diet quality score or the best diet quality
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Title: Plant-based, Fast-food, Western-contemporary, and Animal-based Dietary Patterns and
Risk of Premature Aging in Adult Survivors of Childhood Cancer: a cross-sectional study
Version: 0 Date: 26 Jun 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors described the link between dietary patterns and premature aging. It is well-written
and with a strong methodology. The use of the DAI is a good proxy of premature aging. Working
on diet patterns in this specific population is novel and confirms the usefulness of plant-based
diet patterns found in other populations. The results are consistent with previous literature.
My specific comments are as follows:
Methods:
L70: How were the extreme energy intakes identified? Several methods exist (basal metabolic
rate as estimated by the Henry equation, for example).
L90: The way the dietary patterns are identified is crucial for this study. Thus, a complete
description of the method could be added to the supplementary materials.
L118: “(female and male).” there should be a comma instead of the period.
A description of the statistical software and its version is needed.
Results:
Table 1: were lsmeans used for group-by-group comparisons? If not, it could be interesting to
confirm the significant differences.
Supplementary Table 1: SD should be added to understand the variation in the food intake.
Comparison between food patterns could also be done.
L142: “All dietary patterns were associated with the DAI.” I am not sure what you meant by
this sentence. If you are talking about correlations between DAI and dietary patterns, it is not
shown in Supplementary Table 3.
Table 2: the total number of individuals in the study should be stated in the title.
L151-152: this sentence is not very clear and could be simplified.
Figure 1: the total number of individuals in the study should be stated in the title. What is the
purpose of panel D? If I understand correctly, it is the opposite of panel A and thus should be
in supplementary figure 1.
Discussion:
L199-206: to complete the discussion, it should be interesting to discuss the level of protein
consumption, which is highly above the recommendation in Western diets (Mariotti and
Gardner, 2019)
L218: highest diet quality score or the best diet quality
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Title: Plant-based, Fast-food, Western-contemporary, and Animal-based Dietary Patterns and
Risk of Premature Aging in Adult Survivors of Childhood Cancer: a cross-sectional study
Version: 0 Date: 27 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
To the authors,
The authors are providing an important overview of the effect of dietary patterns and aging on
adult survivors of childhood cancer. A diet rich in fibre and micronutrients can improve health
in general. It is interesting how the identified dietary patterns are distributed by sex, educational
level and socioeconomical status. The results seem to be consistent for the studied population
and supported by previous findings.
However, there are few minor observations:
-In the abstract, the methods section, the last sentence should be improved to clearly state the
outcome.
-Introduction, second paragraph: “However, the role of diet in aging in adult survivors of
childhood cancer, whose cancer treatments may already have a detrimental impact on aging
is not known”. This statement is important, would you provide a reference. And, in the same
paragraph, review the next sentence, it seems incomplete.
-For the adjustments would be interesting to have a specific physical activity indicator for the
adjustments. Is it available? And if so, is it possible to add it.
-I found interesting the results of smoking (never) in the multivariable models, but they are not
commented in the discussion. Any chance to know if some of them are exposed to second hand
smoking?
-Regardless the dietary pattern, alcohol intake might influence the proposed outcome. It might
be useful to run a sensitivity analysis either adjusting for or excluding alcohol from the equation.
-To strength your results and potential recommendations, you should consider to add a
substitutional analysis, to check how the DAI could improve by substituting a % of the other
diets with the % of plant-based diet.
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Title: Plant-based, Fast-food, Western-contemporary, and Animal-based Dietary Patterns and
Risk of Premature Aging in Adult Survivors of Childhood Cancer: a cross-sectional study
Version: 0 Date: 27 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
To the authors,
The authors are providing an important overview of the effect of dietary patterns and aging on
adult survivors of childhood cancer. A diet rich in fibre and micronutrients can improve health
in general. It is interesting how the identified dietary patterns are distributed by sex, educational
level and socioeconomical status. The results seem to be consistent for the studied population
and supported by previous findings.
However, there are few minor observations:
-In the abstract, the methods section, the last sentence should be improved to clearly state the
outcome.
-Introduction, second paragraph: “However, the role of diet in aging in adult survivors of
childhood cancer, whose cancer treatments may already have a detrimental impact on aging
is not known”. This statement is important, would you provide a reference. And, in the same
paragraph, review the next sentence, it seems incomplete.
-For the adjustments would be interesting to have a specific physical activity indicator for the
adjustments. Is it available? And if so, is it possible to add it.
-I found interesting the results of smoking (never) in the multivariable models, but they are not
commented in the discussion. Any chance to know if some of them are exposed to second hand
smoking?
-Regardless the dietary pattern, alcohol intake might influence the proposed outcome. It might
be useful to run a sensitivity analysis either adjusting for or excluding alcohol from the equation.
-To strength your results and potential recommendations, you should consider to add a
substitutional analysis, to check how the DAI could improve by substituting a % of the other
diets with the % of plant-based diet.
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Title: Plant-based, Fast-food, Western-contemporary, and Animal-based Dietary Patterns and
Risk of Premature Aging in Adult Survivors of Childhood Cancer: a cross-sectional study
Version: 0 Date: 27 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
A good manuscript.
General
Please add line numbers to help in reviewing.
Methods
Page 6: Other Risk Factor Assessment
1) Body weight and height: How were they assessed?
2) Area deprivation index: Provide a brief description.
3) Was physical activity and/or sedentary behavior assessed?
Page 7: Statistical analysis
1) Confounders: Was physical activity considered?
2) For the stratified analyses, explain the criteria for age and cancer diagnosis cut-points.
Results
Page 9: Survivors consuming a Western contemporary diet are reported as tending to be non-
Hispanic White and obese. However, data on BMI are missing in Table 1.
Discussion
Page 9: After the summary of findings, explain upfront what is unique about this study.
Page 10: For the sentence “In previous studies, higher protein intake was associated with a lower
premature aging risk, in particular, physical frailty, overall frailty, and cognitive decline in older
adults.33-35”, specify/clarify the type of protein – plant? animal? both?
Tables
Table 1
1) Include data on BMI.
2) Race/Ethnicity: Footnote races/ethnicities in the “Others” category.
3) Education: Footnote the types of education in the Other” category.
4) Cancer treatment: Footnote the types of treatment in the “Other Chemotherapy” category.
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Title: Plant-based, Fast-food, Western-contemporary, and Animal-based Dietary Patterns and
Risk of Premature Aging in Adult Survivors of Childhood Cancer: a cross-sectional study
Version: 0 Date: 27 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
A good manuscript.
General
Please add line numbers to help in reviewing.
Methods
Page 6: Other Risk Factor Assessment
1) Body weight and height: How were they assessed?
2) Area deprivation index: Provide a brief description.
3) Was physical activity and/or sedentary behavior assessed?
Page 7: Statistical analysis
1) Confounders: Was physical activity considered?
2) For the stratified analyses, explain the criteria for age and cancer diagnosis cut-points.
Results
Page 9: Survivors consuming a Western contemporary diet are reported as tending to be non-
Hispanic White and obese. However, data on BMI are missing in Table 1.
Discussion
Page 9: After the summary of findings, explain upfront what is unique about this study.
Page 10: For the sentence “In previous studies, higher protein intake was associated with a lower
premature aging risk, in particular, physical frailty, overall frailty, and cognitive decline in older
adults.33-35”, specify/clarify the type of protein – plant? animal? both?
Tables
Table 1
1) Include data on BMI.
2) Race/Ethnicity: Footnote races/ethnicities in the “Others” category.
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Risk of Premature Aging in Adult Survivors of Childhood Cancer: a cross-sectional study
Version: 1 Date: 09 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors answered all observations. I did not find other modifications or clarifications needed.
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Reviewer's report:
Since this analysis focuses on diet and aging it is acceptable not to adjust for physical activity.
However, the questionnaire to construct the DAI score is not designed to evaluate physical
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Since this analysis focuses on diet and aging it is acceptable not to adjust for physical activity.
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Title: Plant-based, Fast-food, Western-contemporary, and Animal-based Dietary Patterns and
Risk of Premature Aging in Adult Survivors of Childhood Cancer: a cross-sectional study
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Title: Plant-based, Fast-food, Western-contemporary, and Animal-based Dietary Patterns and
Risk of Premature Aging in Adult Survivors of Childhood Cancer: a cross-sectional study
Version: 2 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
No further modification or clarifications are needed.
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Title: Minimum and optimal combined variations in sleep, physical activity, and nutrition in
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Title: Minimum and optimal combined variations in sleep, physical activity, and nutrition in
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Version: 1 Date: 07 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
Stamatakis et al conducted a very innovative analysis unraveling the triangulation of combined
effect of sleep, physical activity, and nutrition, and their association with all-cause mortality.
The authors have already addressed the comments from previous reviewers which I also share.
In addition, I have few more comments.
Title
What does the minimum and optimal variations imply here?
Background
-What is the rationale of focusing on sleep, PA, and nutrition, because other lifestyle factors,
including alcohol consumption, sedentary time, and smoking are also interacting with those
three and are often patterned together with the three.
Methods
-How valid is the FFQ used in this study?
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validity and rationale behind the minimum variations of lifestyle factors on the outcome while
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Version: 1 Date: 07 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
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effect of sleep, physical activity, and nutrition, and their association with all-cause mortality.
The authors have already addressed the comments from previous reviewers which I also share.
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Title
What does the minimum and optimal variations imply here?
Background
-What is the rationale of focusing on sleep, PA, and nutrition, because other lifestyle factors,
including alcohol consumption, sedentary time, and smoking are also interacting with those
three and are often patterned together with the three.
Methods
-How valid is the FFQ used in this study?
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validity and rationale behind the minimum variations of lifestyle factors on the outcome while
the lifestyle factors might have potential changed minimally with time as well.
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-The authors mentioned holistic approach of lifestyle intervention for policy and practice, maybe
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that it is not entirely new in health promotion field.
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Reviewer's report:
- It is unclear who is the intended audience - researchers or clinicians. The authors switch
between describing mechanisms and factors that clinicians cannot routinely assess in every
single long covid patient. It is also not practical to patients to complete the many questionnaires
recommended across many social and biological systems.
- Authors provide mainly recommendations for inventories that are normed for adults and not
children. Authors should clarify up front in the paper that the recommendations are specific to
adults.
-Likewise, if the intended audience are researchers, then some of the very abbreviated
instruments the authors suggested is not very informative to capture the domain. Moreover, I
find it is too simplistic (and professionally inappropriate) to screen for certain areas with mainly
questionnaires. For example, brain fog is a non-specific cognitive description and many patients
experience it as slow speed of processing, mental fogginess, attention problems, concentration
issues, word finding difficulty, and/or forgetfulness. Providing the patient a test of attention
or attention symptom screeners is not sufficiently comprehensive to capture multiple cognitive
domains that may be represented by "brain fog".
-Page 10 "To deal with chronic and systemic disease conditions such as post-COVID-19
condition, a multi-professional approach is necessary, bringing together the progress of
biomedical research in identifying and understanding pathophysiological changes in post-
COVID-19 condition (2,14) with thorough psychosocial evaluation, enabling a holistic
explanatory model and leading to multimodal treatment approaches (5,15). " multiprofessional
may be better captured by "interdisciplinary"
-Authors need to clarify who is in the consensus group who determined these recommendations,
and how do they come into agreement to finalize guidelines (e.g., majority vote?) They also do
not specify the expertise of the participant members who made these guidelines (e.g., was there
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-Given the extensive research on the clinical features of long covid now, domains and subgroups
should be scientifically driven (e.g., if they are recommending select outcome measures, then
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- Authors noted "The goal was to recommend psychosocial and psychobiological core domains
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- Authors transition from describing brain fog and cognitive difficulties to functional disorders
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of brain fog can impact or be affected by anxiety, low mood and ADHD.
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condition, a multi-professional approach is necessary, bringing together the progress of
biomedical research in identifying and understanding pathophysiological changes in post-
COVID-19 condition (2,14) with thorough psychosocial evaluation, enabling a holistic
explanatory model and leading to multimodal treatment approaches (5,15). " multiprofessional
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Version: 1 Date: 06 Dec 2024
Reviewer: gemma Parramon
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Dear Dr Salzmann,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the revisions and clarifications you have made
to the article. After reviewing the updated version, I find all the changes and explanations to
be thoroughly addressed.
Your efforts to enhance the clarity and precision of the work are greatly appreciated, and I
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Thank you once again for your dedication and attention to detail. Please let me know if there
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Dear Dr Salzmann,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the revisions and clarifications you have made
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Version: 1 Date: 11 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for thoroughly considering and responding to my feedback. It is clear the authors
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more targeted and more clinically useful. While I think there are still some areas that are not
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Reviewer's report:
The manuscript, Assessment of Psychosocial Aspects in Adults in post-COVID-19 condition:
The EURONET-SOMA Recommendations on Core Outcome Domains for Clinical and
Research Use, outlines recommendations for core outcome domains and measures for clinical
research and practice. In the revision, the authors do a nice job clarifying their consensus
approach and providing a “core” set of outcome measures now, which is somewhat better than
the extensive list of measures before in the original submission. However, I still find the paper
extremely lengthy with some areas redundant and some measures questionable as a “clinical
outcome”. I find the authors approach to broaden the target audience to both clinicians and
researchers (rather choosing a clinical audience or research audience and abbreviating their
paper), makes the paper even harder to read as it is unclear which measures are more practically
useful for a clinical visit vs a research study design. For example, I would not expect a general
clinician (e.g., primary care) to provide a SCID to screen a person for psychopathology, and
rather a GAD or something similar may be more feasible. Yet, a PHQ-4 with just 4 inventory
items do not strike as having strong discriminant or diagnostic sensitivity for a research design. In
brief, the paper appears to share so many measures its not clear which ones are clinically practical
vs comprehensive enough for research use, as the nature of abbreviated clinical appointments
makes the selection of inventories different than that of a study design. Overall, I find the authors
need to significantly tighten their paper while at the same time be more direct at which tools are
they suggesting for a clinical outcome vs research outcome. They should also consider narrowing
down their variables as some are not actually patient outcomes I would practically expect a
clinician to track as part of clinical surveillance given the patient load they have to manage (e.g,
suggestions to monitor/measure healthcare utilization).
Other specific comments:
- Abstract: Consider changing sentence structure to “...the European Network (EURONET-
SOMA) developed psychosocial core outcome domains and assessments regarding post-
COVID-19 condition in efforts to improve diagnostic, treatment, and healthcare for patients with
persistent somatic symptoms “
- Introduction: “Commonly reported symptoms include fatigue, observed in approximately
28% of cases, and neurocognitive issues such as memory difficulties, dizziness and brain fog,
affecting around 28% of patients.” - Needs citation
- In the section “Psychopathological status and mental comorbidities “, authors need to be clear
that screeners for anxiety and mood should focus on inventories separate from somatic symptoms
that may overlap with physical symptoms of postcovid conditions
-Under PTSD section, “However, PTSD may also be relevant for ICU caregivers who worked
under extraordinary circumstances during the pandemic” – this seems irrelevant. The authors
are writing about patient outcomes not their family outcomes. Again, I suggest authors review
all their variables and measures and be selective at what are actually clinical outcomes related
to the patient and clinical features.
- Under PTSD section, PTSD can also manifest in individuals with COVID conditions who also
witness family/friends with COVID complications.
- Also under “Psychopathological status and mental comorbidities”, authors note these
structured interviews like SCID and DIPS require expertise and training….but MINI and PRIME
MD also requires training.
- Under “Neurocognitive symptoms”, like noted in my last review, I disagree with including
functional cognitive disorders under this section. Authors should consider that many different
functional disorders like functional neurologic, functional pain, functional GI and so on also can
manifest in post covid conditions. If they would like to note this, they should have a section on
screening for functional disorders broadly rather than only emphasize cognitive symptoms may
reflect a functional disorder.
-Overall, I question if all domains covered in this paper are pertinent to clinical outcomes (e.g.,
healthcare costs and utilization). Providers who sees patients for a limited appointment likely
do not have time to provide all these screeners + some frankly some measures that may be
interesting as a research measure but are questionably a clinical outcome measure. The mixture
of measures that are geared towards CLINICAL OUTCOME for clinical surveillance vs research
tracking makes these recommendations less effective, useful and clear.
- The section “Affective Components” – some of this reads redundant to the Psychopathological
Status section. Eg. PANS is another structured interview that could have been noted above with
SCID.
-Risk factors section(s) – The authors should really clarify what the paper is for. If they are
providing suggestions on clinical outcome measures (i.e., measures to identify change in health,
quality of life, functional change); OR , variables of interest for COVID-related research.
-ACES and early child adversities can also fit under Psychopathology section.
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Title: Assessment of Psychosocial Aspects in Adults in post-COVID-19 condition: The
EURONET-SOMA Recommendations on Core Outcome Domains for Clinical and Research
Use
Version: 1 Date: 11 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript, Assessment of Psychosocial Aspects in Adults in post-COVID-19 condition:
The EURONET-SOMA Recommendations on Core Outcome Domains for Clinical and
Research Use, outlines recommendations for core outcome domains and measures for clinical
research and practice. In the revision, the authors do a nice job clarifying their consensus
approach and providing a “core” set of outcome measures now, which is somewhat better than
the extensive list of measures before in the original submission. However, I still find the paper
extremely lengthy with some areas redundant and some measures questionable as a “clinical
outcome”. I find the authors approach to broaden the target audience to both clinicians and
researchers (rather choosing a clinical audience or research audience and abbreviating their
paper), makes the paper even harder to read as it is unclear which measures are more practically
useful for a clinical visit vs a research study design. For example, I would not expect a general
clinician (e.g., primary care) to provide a SCID to screen a person for psychopathology, and
rather a GAD or something similar may be more feasible. Yet, a PHQ-4 with just 4 inventory
items do not strike as having strong discriminant or diagnostic sensitivity for a research design. In
brief, the paper appears to share so many measures its not clear which ones are clinically practical
vs comprehensive enough for research use, as the nature of abbreviated clinical appointments
makes the selection of inventories different than that of a study design. Overall, I find the authors
need to significantly tighten their paper while at the same time be more direct at which tools are
they suggesting for a clinical outcome vs research outcome. They should also consider narrowing
down their variables as some are not actually patient outcomes I would practically expect a
clinician to track as part of clinical surveillance given the patient load they have to manage (e.g,
suggestions to monitor/measure healthcare utilization).
Other specific comments:
- Abstract: Consider changing sentence structure to “...the European Network (EURONET-
SOMA) developed psychosocial core outcome domains and assessments regarding post-
COVID-19 condition in efforts to improve diagnostic, treatment, and healthcare for patients with
persistent somatic symptoms “
- Introduction: “Commonly reported symptoms include fatigue, observed in approximately
28% of cases, and neurocognitive issues such as memory difficulties, dizziness and brain fog,
affecting around 28% of patients.” - Needs citation
- In the section “Psychopathological status and mental comorbidities “, authors need to be clear
that screeners for anxiety and mood should focus on inventories separate from somatic symptoms
that may overlap with physical symptoms of postcovid conditions
-Under PTSD section, “However, PTSD may also be relevant for ICU caregivers who worked
under extraordinary circumstances during the pandemic” – this seems irrelevant. The authors
are writing about patient outcomes not their family outcomes. Again, I suggest authors review
all their variables and measures and be selective at what are actually clinical outcomes related
to the patient and clinical features.
- Under PTSD section, PTSD can also manifest in individuals with COVID conditions who also
witness family/friends with COVID complications.
- Also under “Psychopathological status and mental comorbidities”, authors note these
structured interviews like SCID and DIPS require expertise and training….but MINI and PRIME
MD also requires training.
- Under “Neurocognitive symptoms”, like noted in my last review, I disagree with including
functional cognitive disorders under this section. Authors should consider that many different
functional disorders like functional neurologic, functional pain, functional GI and so on also can
manifest in post covid conditions. If they would like to note this, they should have a section on
screening for functional disorders broadly rather than only emphasize cognitive symptoms may
reflect a functional disorder.
-Overall, I question if all domains covered in this paper are pertinent to clinical outcomes (e.g.,
healthcare costs and utilization). Providers who sees patients for a limited appointment likely
do not have time to provide all these screeners + some frankly some measures that may be
interesting as a research measure but are questionably a clinical outcome measure. The mixture
of measures that are geared towards CLINICAL OUTCOME for clinical surveillance vs research
tracking makes these recommendations less effective, useful and clear.
- The section “Affective Components” – some of this reads redundant to the Psychopathological
Status section. Eg. PANS is another structured interview that could have been noted above with
SCID.
-Risk factors section(s) – The authors should really clarify what the paper is for. If they are
providing suggestions on clinical outcome measures (i.e., measures to identify change in health,
quality of life, functional change); OR , variables of interest for COVID-related research.
-ACES and early child adversities can also fit under Psychopathology section.
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Title: Assessment of Psychosocial Aspects in Adults in post-COVID-19 condition: The
EURONET-SOMA Recommendations on Core Outcome Domains for Clinical and Research
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Version: 2 Date: 17 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to review the revised manuscript. I believe the authors addressed
my concerns as best as they can and have no further comments
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Title: Assessment of Psychosocial Aspects in Adults in post-COVID-19 condition: The
EURONET-SOMA Recommendations on Core Outcome Domains for Clinical and Research
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Version: 2 Date: 17 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to review the revised manuscript. I believe the authors addressed
my concerns as best as they can and have no further comments
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
from Australia
Version: 0 Date: 28 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Joanna Didkowska
Reviewer's report:
I found the paper extremely interesting and necessary. The authors have demonstrated excellent
statistical skills and have done a gigantic job.
However, I have a few questions for the Authors:
Wouldn't the obtained estimate be more accurate if using pack-years of smoking?
I don't understand the idea of additionally adjusting for fruit intake, vegetable intake, red meat
intake, and processed meat intake, due to self-reporting of values of these variables - the risk of
forgetting or intentionally indicating higher/lower values.
Figure 4 (Smoking-attributable fractions for current and past smoking by age group and sex in
Australia) remains incomprehensible to me and is not described in detail (perhaps redundant?).
The figure shows that current smoking status is more important in the younger cohort (45-74),
while past smoking is more important in the older cohort, which is intuitive, but perhaps worth
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
from Australia
Version: 0 Date: 28 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Joanna Didkowska
Reviewer's report:
I found the paper extremely interesting and necessary. The authors have demonstrated excellent
statistical skills and have done a gigantic job.
However, I have a few questions for the Authors:
Wouldn't the obtained estimate be more accurate if using pack-years of smoking?
I don't understand the idea of additionally adjusting for fruit intake, vegetable intake, red meat
intake, and processed meat intake, due to self-reporting of values of these variables - the risk of
forgetting or intentionally indicating higher/lower values.
Figure 4 (Smoking-attributable fractions for current and past smoking by age group and sex in
Australia) remains incomprehensible to me and is not described in detail (perhaps redundant?).
The figure shows that current smoking status is more important in the younger cohort (45-74),
while past smoking is more important in the older cohort, which is intuitive, but perhaps worth
highlighting?
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
from Australia
Version: 0 Date: 29 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors estimated tobacco smoking attributable mortality in Australia. The topic is of
importance. The manuscript is well-written. I only have some comments below:
Methods: Smoking status was from a 3-year-follow-up survey, has smoking status changed over
time? How could this affect the estimates? Do the authors assume that the smoking prevalence
remains unchanged in recent years? Smoking prevalence in the 2000s is likely much higher than
the recent one.
Results: In this study, 8% were current smokers and 34% were former smokers. Were these
prevalence rates similar to the national statistics in Australia?
Results: Do the authors consider a median follow-up of 9.32 years long enough to capture
mortality? Please discuss.
Results: What does “15 alcoholic drinks/week” mean? Do you mean 15 units? Please add a
description of it.
Results: The cut points of BMI “15-19.9” ”30-50” look confusing to me. I’d like to know why
the authors chose not to use cut points representing overweight and obese.
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
from Australia
Version: 0 Date: 29 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors estimated tobacco smoking attributable mortality in Australia. The topic is of
importance. The manuscript is well-written. I only have some comments below:
Methods: Smoking status was from a 3-year-follow-up survey, has smoking status changed over
time? How could this affect the estimates? Do the authors assume that the smoking prevalence
remains unchanged in recent years? Smoking prevalence in the 2000s is likely much higher than
the recent one.
Results: In this study, 8% were current smokers and 34% were former smokers. Were these
prevalence rates similar to the national statistics in Australia?
Results: Do the authors consider a median follow-up of 9.32 years long enough to capture
mortality? Please discuss.
Results: What does “15 alcoholic drinks/week” mean? Do you mean 15 units? Please add a
description of it.
Results: The cut points of BMI “15-19.9” ”30-50” look confusing to me. I’d like to know why
the authors chose not to use cut points representing overweight and obese.
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
from Australia
Version: 0 Date: 30 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Philippe Autier
Reviewer's report:
The paper of G Joshy and colleagues is about the risk of various conditions and of death
associated with tobacco smoking in a large cohort in Australia. The study is highly relevant
because it assesses risks in a country that has done much on tobacco control, and where the
prevalence of smoking has much decreased. Nonetheless the health impact of smoking is still
dramatic.
I have no special comment to do on the method, which meets usual requirements of this type of
study. The statistical analysis is fine. Study limitations acknowledged.
The Discussion should stress that the study left out prevalent cases of patients with diseases that
could have been caused by smoking during years preceding inclusion in the cohort (eg, CVD).
Therefore attributable fractions should be considered as lower figure estimates.
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
from Australia
Version: 0 Date: 30 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Philippe Autier
Reviewer's report:
The paper of G Joshy and colleagues is about the risk of various conditions and of death
associated with tobacco smoking in a large cohort in Australia. The study is highly relevant
because it assesses risks in a country that has done much on tobacco control, and where the
prevalence of smoking has much decreased. Nonetheless the health impact of smoking is still
dramatic.
I have no special comment to do on the method, which meets usual requirements of this type of
study. The statistical analysis is fine. Study limitations acknowledged.
The Discussion should stress that the study left out prevalent cases of patients with diseases that
could have been caused by smoking during years preceding inclusion in the cohort (eg, CVD).
Therefore attributable fractions should be considered as lower figure estimates.
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
from Australia
Version: 0 Date: 04 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for inviting me to review the manuscript titled “Relationship of Tobacco Smoking to
Cause-Specific Mortality: Contemporary Estimates from Australia.” The paper is well-written
and thoroughly addresses a significant public health issue.
I have a few comments that need to be addressed.
Abstract:
Lines 42-43: The authors stated that the follow-up period ended in November 2017. However,
the methods section references death data from the NSW Registry of Births, Deaths and
Marriages (January 1, 2006, to March 31, 2019) and the Australian Bureau of Statistics (ABS)
(January 1, 2006, to November 30, 2017).
The NSW Cancer Registry is linked to the NSW Registry of Births, Deaths and Marriages and
the AIHW to obtain vital status information. It is not clear to me why the authors chose not to
use cause-specific data from the NSW Cancer Registry (Mar 2019) and instead opted for the
ABS mortality data (Nov 2017). If the ABS data was only used to determine vital status, what
was the purpose of mentioning the NSW Cancer Registry death data?
It appears that the authors used National Death Index data as well, as mentioned in lines 119-120.
Please ensure clarity and consistency between your abstract and method section.
Methods:
Line 106: It is unclear which socio-demographic factors and health behaviours were collected.
Please specify them in brackets, for example, demographic factors (income, education, etc.)
Lines 126-128: A standard pack contains 20 cigarettes. Please explain the rationale behind
selecting these specific cut-offs (#14, 15-24, and #25 cigarettes/day).
Statistical methods:
Lines 169-173: Please use more precise terminology than saying models were adjusted for x, y,
and z. It is better to state that Model 1 included x, y, and z, while Model 2 incorporated additional
confounding variables or covariates.
In Model 2, the authors included covariates that do not confound the association between
smoking and mortality, as they act as mediators in the causal pathway. For instance, what is the
rationale for adjusting for private health insurance and all the variables listed in Table S4 (such
as dietary intake, aspirin, PSA testing, hormonal factors, etc)? They are not confounders.
A similar issue arises in the sensitivity analysis (lines 193-194) with adjustments for BMI and
physical activity. Smoking affects BMI and BMI affects mortality; therefore, BMI is a mediator,
and physical activity is a mediator-outcome confounder.
The authors should provide a causal diagram (directed acyclic graph) to identify confounding
variables and mediators. Comparing models with and without adjustments for mediators is a
standard practice in traditional epidemiology and should be avoided. Adjusting for mediators
can introduce bias.
Discussion:
Please relocate the strengths and limitations of your study (lines 328-353) to follow immediately
after the first paragraph (lines 273-277).
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
from Australia
Version: 0 Date: 04 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for inviting me to review the manuscript titled “Relationship of Tobacco Smoking to
Cause-Specific Mortality: Contemporary Estimates from Australia.” The paper is well-written
and thoroughly addresses a significant public health issue.
I have a few comments that need to be addressed.
Abstract:
Lines 42-43: The authors stated that the follow-up period ended in November 2017. However,
the methods section references death data from the NSW Registry of Births, Deaths and
Marriages (January 1, 2006, to March 31, 2019) and the Australian Bureau of Statistics (ABS)
(January 1, 2006, to November 30, 2017).
The NSW Cancer Registry is linked to the NSW Registry of Births, Deaths and Marriages and
the AIHW to obtain vital status information. It is not clear to me why the authors chose not to
use cause-specific data from the NSW Cancer Registry (Mar 2019) and instead opted for the
ABS mortality data (Nov 2017). If the ABS data was only used to determine vital status, what
was the purpose of mentioning the NSW Cancer Registry death data?
It appears that the authors used National Death Index data as well, as mentioned in lines 119-120.
Please ensure clarity and consistency between your abstract and method section.
Methods:
Line 106: It is unclear which socio-demographic factors and health behaviours were collected.
Please specify them in brackets, for example, demographic factors (income, education, etc.)
Lines 126-128: A standard pack contains 20 cigarettes. Please explain the rationale behind
selecting these specific cut-offs (#14, 15-24, and #25 cigarettes/day).
Statistical methods:
Lines 169-173: Please use more precise terminology than saying models were adjusted for x, y,
and z. It is better to state that Model 1 included x, y, and z, while Model 2 incorporated additional
confounding variables or covariates.
In Model 2, the authors included covariates that do not confound the association between
smoking and mortality, as they act as mediators in the causal pathway. For instance, what is the
rationale for adjusting for private health insurance and all the variables listed in Table S4 (such
as dietary intake, aspirin, PSA testing, hormonal factors, etc)? They are not confounders.
A similar issue arises in the sensitivity analysis (lines 193-194) with adjustments for BMI and
physical activity. Smoking affects BMI and BMI affects mortality; therefore, BMI is a mediator,
and physical activity is a mediator-outcome confounder.
The authors should provide a causal diagram (directed acyclic graph) to identify confounding
variables and mediators. Comparing models with and without adjustments for mediators is a
standard practice in traditional epidemiology and should be avoided. Adjusting for mediators
can introduce bias.
Discussion:
Please relocate the strengths and limitations of your study (lines 328-353) to follow immediately
after the first paragraph (lines 273-277).
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
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Version: 1 Date: 30 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors answered my comments appropriately. I have no further questions.
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Version: 1 Date: 30 Nov 2024
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Title: Relationship of tobacco smoking to cause-specific mortality: Contemporary estimates
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Reviewer: Philippe Autier
Reviewer's report:
Authors have provided satisfactory answers to my comments.
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Title: Long-term outcomes in patients with acute coronary syndrome undergoing percutaneous
coronary intervention without standard modifiable cardiovascular risk factors: findings from the
OPT-CAD cohort
Version: 0 Date: 03 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript titled "Long-term outcomes in patients
with acute coronary syndrome (ACS) undergoing percutaneous coronary intervention (PCI)
without traditional modifiable cardiovascular risk factors: findings from the OPT-CAD cohort."
In this article, the authors explore the long-term outcomes and identify independent prognostic
factors associated with adverse clinical outcomes in patients with ACS undergoing PCI without
traditional modifiable cardiovascular risk factors (CVRFs). As a result, ACS patients without
CVRFs undergoing PCI had a similar risk of recurrent cardiovascular events compared to those
with one or more CVRFs at 5 years. My evaluation is that the paper is publishable with major
scientific revisions.
1. What does NACE represent as a Secondary Endpoint? This is not mentioned in the manuscript
or the supplemental materials. Please provide a clear explanation of the abbreviation and its
definition.
2. There are too many tables in comparison to the study content. What is the purpose of
comparing patient backgrounds with and without MACCE?
3. If the authors are performing the comparison between "with MACCE" and "without
MACCE," this should be clearly explained in the Methods section. The sudden introduction of
these new groups makes the manuscript difficult for the reader to follow.
4. In the Limitations section, the authors mention the lack of information on lipid-lowering drugs
prior to hospitalization. However, dyslipidemia is defined in the study as including the "use of
lipid-lowering drugs." Shouldn't this inconsistency be addressed?
5. The sudden appearance of Definitions I and II in the manuscript should be better explained
within the main body rather than relegated to the supplemental materials.
6. When presenting results, it is important to include actual values alongside your findings.
Given the number of tables in this study, it is inconvenient for the reader to have to constantly
refer back to them. Please consider including key numbers directly in the text.
7. Regarding the multivariate Cox regression analysis, the authors mention results for two
factors. Was the analysis conducted only on these two factors, or were other factors included,
with only these two being significant? Please clarify.
8. Thrombus lesion is identified as a significant factor influencing the results, but its definition
is not provided. This is an important element, and its definition should be clearly explained in
the Methods section.
9. The mention of clonal hematopoiesis of indeterminate potential (CHIP) in the Discussion
seems like a significant leap based on the study results. It would be better to reconsider the
relevance of this point.
10. The authors mentioned the low usage rate of ACE-i/ARB, but it is a reasonable decision
not to prescribe these agents in cases without hypertension or reduced left ventricular ejection
fraction, as they are not essential for secondary prevention after ACS. This point might also
warrant revision.
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Title: Long-term outcomes in patients with acute coronary syndrome undergoing percutaneous
coronary intervention without standard modifiable cardiovascular risk factors: findings from the
OPT-CAD cohort
Version: 0 Date: 03 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript titled "Long-term outcomes in patients
with acute coronary syndrome (ACS) undergoing percutaneous coronary intervention (PCI)
without traditional modifiable cardiovascular risk factors: findings from the OPT-CAD cohort."
In this article, the authors explore the long-term outcomes and identify independent prognostic
factors associated with adverse clinical outcomes in patients with ACS undergoing PCI without
traditional modifiable cardiovascular risk factors (CVRFs). As a result, ACS patients without
CVRFs undergoing PCI had a similar risk of recurrent cardiovascular events compared to those
with one or more CVRFs at 5 years. My evaluation is that the paper is publishable with major
scientific revisions.
1. What does NACE represent as a Secondary Endpoint? This is not mentioned in the manuscript
or the supplemental materials. Please provide a clear explanation of the abbreviation and its
definition.
2. There are too many tables in comparison to the study content. What is the purpose of
comparing patient backgrounds with and without MACCE?
3. If the authors are performing the comparison between "with MACCE" and "without
MACCE," this should be clearly explained in the Methods section. The sudden introduction of
these new groups makes the manuscript difficult for the reader to follow.
4. In the Limitations section, the authors mention the lack of information on lipid-lowering drugs
prior to hospitalization. However, dyslipidemia is defined in the study as including the "use of
lipid-lowering drugs." Shouldn't this inconsistency be addressed?
5. The sudden appearance of Definitions I and II in the manuscript should be better explained
within the main body rather than relegated to the supplemental materials.
6. When presenting results, it is important to include actual values alongside your findings.
Given the number of tables in this study, it is inconvenient for the reader to have to constantly
refer back to them. Please consider including key numbers directly in the text.
7. Regarding the multivariate Cox regression analysis, the authors mention results for two
factors. Was the analysis conducted only on these two factors, or were other factors included,
with only these two being significant? Please clarify.
8. Thrombus lesion is identified as a significant factor influencing the results, but its definition
is not provided. This is an important element, and its definition should be clearly explained in
the Methods section.
9. The mention of clonal hematopoiesis of indeterminate potential (CHIP) in the Discussion
seems like a significant leap based on the study results. It would be better to reconsider the
relevance of this point.
10. The authors mentioned the low usage rate of ACE-i/ARB, but it is a reasonable decision
not to prescribe these agents in cases without hypertension or reduced left ventricular ejection
fraction, as they are not essential for secondary prevention after ACS. This point might also
warrant revision.
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Title: Long-term outcomes in patients with acute coronary syndrome undergoing percutaneous
coronary intervention without standard modifiable cardiovascular risk factors: findings from the
OPT-CAD cohort
Version: 0 Date: 07 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
I think this is an important study, as it clarifies the differences in outcomes following intervention
between patients without cardiovascular risk factors (CVRFs) and those with them. I have a few
questions for the authors:
1. For patients with CVRFs, there is a higher prevalence of issues such as hypertension, diabetes,
and smoking. However, as shown in Table 1, there does not appear to be a higher incidence of
renal dysfunction or decreased cardiac output compared to patients without CVRFs. Could you
provide some insight into the possible reasons for this?
2. There seems to be no significant difference in total cholesterol and LDL-C levels between
patients with and without CVRFs. Could you explain why this might be the case?
3. This study included approximately 40% of patients with STEMI, yet the vascular complexity
only indicates around 2% occlusion and 10% thrombus lesions. This seems somewhat
inconsistent. Could you elaborate on this?
4. Medication therapy is also crucial for these patients without CVRFs, and understanding which
medications impact their prognosis seems particularly important. For this group, I feel that
providing a subgroup analysis on medication effects and outcomes could increase reader interest.
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Title: Long-term outcomes in patients with acute coronary syndrome undergoing percutaneous
coronary intervention without standard modifiable cardiovascular risk factors: findings from the
OPT-CAD cohort
Version: 0 Date: 07 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
I think this is an important study, as it clarifies the differences in outcomes following intervention
between patients without cardiovascular risk factors (CVRFs) and those with them. I have a few
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1. For patients with CVRFs, there is a higher prevalence of issues such as hypertension, diabetes,
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2. There seems to be no significant difference in total cholesterol and LDL-C levels between
patients with and without CVRFs. Could you explain why this might be the case?
3. This study included approximately 40% of patients with STEMI, yet the vascular complexity
only indicates around 2% occlusion and 10% thrombus lesions. This seems somewhat
inconsistent. Could you elaborate on this?
4. Medication therapy is also crucial for these patients without CVRFs, and understanding which
medications impact their prognosis seems particularly important. For this group, I feel that
providing a subgroup analysis on medication effects and outcomes could increase reader interest.
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Title: Long-term outcomes in patients with acute coronary syndrome undergoing percutaneous
coronary intervention without standard modifiable cardiovascular risk factors: findings from the
OPT-CAD cohort
Version: 0 Date: 16 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors should be congratulated for this interesting and well-conducted study. The
study investigators assessed the long-term outcomes of patients without traditional modifiable
cardiovascular risk factors (CVRF) and undergoing PCI for ACS, using data from the OPT-
CAD registry. They found no differences in the rates of MACCE between CVRFs-absent and
CVRFs-present patients over five years, with age and thrombus lesions identified as independent
predictors of adverse outcomes in CVRFs-absent individuals. The findings highlight the need
for improved risk assessment models and targeted interventions for this unique patient subgroup.
Few comments/edits to improve the current manuscript:
Introduction
- I recommend using the term SMuRF (standard modifiable risk factors), in line with recently
published studies.
- A large number of papers from different registries across the world addressing the same
research question has been published over past few years. Authors should clarify in the intro
section how the present study is different as well as its added value.
Methods:
- Definitions on how SMuRF were defined should be reported in the main manuscript text.
- The cutoff for SBP and DBP in patients with CKD or diabetes should be 130 mmHg and 80
mmHg, respectively.
- When were the BP measurements collected? On presentation to the ED/cath lab or in clinic?
- Were patients with missing data on risk factors excluded? Please clarify exclusion criteria and
report rate of missing data.
- Please report the list of adjustment variables in the main manuscript text. Were results
adjusted according to the different institutions where patients were treated? I would recommend
performing a multivariable analysis using a mixed model with institutions as a random-effects
model and patient baseline characteristics as a fixed-effects model.
- Define NACE
- Define ACS as inclusion criteria (cardiac biomarkers?)
- Include a statement regarding study approval, informed consent, and other ethical
considerations.
- I recommend excluding patients with unstable angina, or at least performing a sensitivity
analysis excluding patients with unstable angina.
Results:
- Any data on in-hospital complications and events?
- Figure 2, KM curve, although no differences in MACCE on the long-term, can you provide
sensitivity analysis at 2 and 3 years and explain the difference in MACCE rates between the
two groups.
Discussion:
- Authors should discuss and compare their findings in comparison to the recently published
papers on the same topic.
Conclusions:
- The term ‘recurrent’ is misleading. The authors did not perform any analysis for recurrent
events as far as we know from the main manuscript text.
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Title: Long-term outcomes in patients with acute coronary syndrome undergoing percutaneous
coronary intervention without standard modifiable cardiovascular risk factors: findings from the
OPT-CAD cohort
Version: 0 Date: 16 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors should be congratulated for this interesting and well-conducted study. The
study investigators assessed the long-term outcomes of patients without traditional modifiable
cardiovascular risk factors (CVRF) and undergoing PCI for ACS, using data from the OPT-
CAD registry. They found no differences in the rates of MACCE between CVRFs-absent and
CVRFs-present patients over five years, with age and thrombus lesions identified as independent
predictors of adverse outcomes in CVRFs-absent individuals. The findings highlight the need
for improved risk assessment models and targeted interventions for this unique patient subgroup.
Few comments/edits to improve the current manuscript:
Introduction
- I recommend using the term SMuRF (standard modifiable risk factors), in line with recently
published studies.
- A large number of papers from different registries across the world addressing the same
research question has been published over past few years. Authors should clarify in the intro
section how the present study is different as well as its added value.
Methods:
- Definitions on how SMuRF were defined should be reported in the main manuscript text.
- The cutoff for SBP and DBP in patients with CKD or diabetes should be 130 mmHg and 80
mmHg, respectively.
- When were the BP measurements collected? On presentation to the ED/cath lab or in clinic?
- Were patients with missing data on risk factors excluded? Please clarify exclusion criteria and
report rate of missing data.
- Please report the list of adjustment variables in the main manuscript text. Were results
adjusted according to the different institutions where patients were treated? I would recommend
performing a multivariable analysis using a mixed model with institutions as a random-effects
model and patient baseline characteristics as a fixed-effects model.
- Define NACE
- Define ACS as inclusion criteria (cardiac biomarkers?)
- Include a statement regarding study approval, informed consent, and other ethical
considerations.
- I recommend excluding patients with unstable angina, or at least performing a sensitivity
analysis excluding patients with unstable angina.
Results:
- Any data on in-hospital complications and events?
- Figure 2, KM curve, although no differences in MACCE on the long-term, can you provide
sensitivity analysis at 2 and 3 years and explain the difference in MACCE rates between the
two groups.
Discussion:
- Authors should discuss and compare their findings in comparison to the recently published
papers on the same topic.
Conclusions:
- The term ‘recurrent’ is misleading. The authors did not perform any analysis for recurrent
events as far as we know from the main manuscript text.
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Title: Long-term outcomes in patients with acute coronary syndrome undergoing percutaneous
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OPT-CAD cohort
Version: 1 Date: 11 Dec 2024
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Version: 1 Date: 13 Dec 2024
Reviewer's report:
I think the current version of the article has been revised very well, and I have no additional
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Title: Long-term outcomes in patients with acute coronary syndrome undergoing percutaneous
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OPT-CAD cohort
Version: 1 Date: 02 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
We have reviewed the revised manuscript. The authors' responses to the points raised by me
and other reviewers were appropriate. All comments are taken seriously and are well written.
I believe the manuscript is acceptable.
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OPT-CAD cohort
Version: 1 Date: 02 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
We have reviewed the revised manuscript. The authors' responses to the points raised by me
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I believe the manuscript is acceptable.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 0 Date: 03 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
I have reviewed the manuscript you provided. Below is a constructive critique with three areas
for improvement and a positive comment on the work.
Positive Comments
The article presents an innovative and well-grounded approach to assessing nutritional and
inflammatory risk in patients with non-small cell lung cancer (NSCLC) undergoing video-
assisted lobectomy. The introduction of the Systemic Nutrition-Inflammation Index (SNII) as a
predictive tool for perioperative management is particularly valuable. The study’s structure is
solid, and the validation of the SNII in independent cohorts strengthens the robustness of the
findings. The use of multivariable analyses and the focus on specific subgroups add depth to the
study, suggesting that the SNII could be a useful tool in clinical practice.
Areas for Improvement
Clarity in the Presentation of Statistical Results:
Although the results are well-founded, certain sections, such as Table 3, might be confusing
for readers due to the complexity of the multivariable analyses. Simplifying the presentation
or providing additional explanations on the interpretation of the adjusted models (Models 1, 2,
and 3) would make it easier for readers to understand how each model contributes to the overall
analysis.
Discussion on the Generalization of SNII:
The article mentions the need to validate the SNII in additional clinical settings, but it could
expand on the limitations of its applicability in different populations and cancer types. A more
detailed discussion on how variations in population characteristics or surgical protocols might
impact the efficacy of the SNII and what additional steps could be taken to adapt or validate the
index in these scenarios would be beneficial.
Integration of Psychosocial Factors and Comorbidities:
While the article effectively addresses nutritional and inflammatory aspects, it does not go
into detail on other important factors that could influence perioperative outcomes, such as the
patients’ psychosocial status or the presence of additional comorbidities. Including a discussion
on how these factors might interact with the SNII would enhance the clinical relevance of the
study.
Overall, the article is a valuable contribution to the field of thoracic oncology and has
great potential to improve the perioperative management of NSCLC patients. With some
minor improvements in clarity and discussion, the manuscript would be even more ready for
publication.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 0 Date: 03 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
I have reviewed the manuscript you provided. Below is a constructive critique with three areas
for improvement and a positive comment on the work.
Positive Comments
The article presents an innovative and well-grounded approach to assessing nutritional and
inflammatory risk in patients with non-small cell lung cancer (NSCLC) undergoing video-
assisted lobectomy. The introduction of the Systemic Nutrition-Inflammation Index (SNII) as a
predictive tool for perioperative management is particularly valuable. The study’s structure is
solid, and the validation of the SNII in independent cohorts strengthens the robustness of the
findings. The use of multivariable analyses and the focus on specific subgroups add depth to the
study, suggesting that the SNII could be a useful tool in clinical practice.
Areas for Improvement
Clarity in the Presentation of Statistical Results:
Although the results are well-founded, certain sections, such as Table 3, might be confusing
for readers due to the complexity of the multivariable analyses. Simplifying the presentation
or providing additional explanations on the interpretation of the adjusted models (Models 1, 2,
and 3) would make it easier for readers to understand how each model contributes to the overall
analysis.
Discussion on the Generalization of SNII:
The article mentions the need to validate the SNII in additional clinical settings, but it could
expand on the limitations of its applicability in different populations and cancer types. A more
detailed discussion on how variations in population characteristics or surgical protocols might
impact the efficacy of the SNII and what additional steps could be taken to adapt or validate the
index in these scenarios would be beneficial.
Integration of Psychosocial Factors and Comorbidities:
While the article effectively addresses nutritional and inflammatory aspects, it does not go
into detail on other important factors that could influence perioperative outcomes, such as the
patients’ psychosocial status or the presence of additional comorbidities. Including a discussion
on how these factors might interact with the SNII would enhance the clinical relevance of the
study.
Overall, the article is a valuable contribution to the field of thoracic oncology and has
great potential to improve the perioperative management of NSCLC patients. With some
minor improvements in clarity and discussion, the manuscript would be even more ready for
publication.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 0 Date: 09 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Taro Okayama
Reviewer's report:
The authors developed a new nutritional and inflammatory status index, the SNII, and
investigated its validity in non-small cell lung cancer patients undergoing VATS thoracoscopic
lobectomy. As the authors stated in the “Background”, many studies have shown the impact of
pre-treatment nutritional and inflammatory status on long-term prognosis but with less emphasis
on short-term perioperative outcomes. The authors should state more why they developed the
new index in more detail.
Minor comments
(1) The authors should give the sufficient rationale why a new single tertile indicator had to
be developed this time. The shortcomings of current nutritional and inflammatory assessments
described in Supplement 1 in predicting perioperative outcomes should be stated too.
(2) In the "Nutrition/inflammation risk assessment" section of Materials and Methods, the
authors simply state "Based on the predictive performance of these indicators for postoperative
endpoints in the development cohort (Table 1), we established a new index, the SNII, defined as
total cholesterol × total lymphocytes / total monocytes". The authors should state here the reason
why SNII is selected among many possible candidates including other composite biochemical
indicators.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 0 Date: 09 Sep 2024
Reviewer: Taro Okayama
Reviewer's report:
The authors developed a new nutritional and inflammatory status index, the SNII, and
investigated its validity in non-small cell lung cancer patients undergoing VATS thoracoscopic
lobectomy. As the authors stated in the “Background”, many studies have shown the impact of
pre-treatment nutritional and inflammatory status on long-term prognosis but with less emphasis
on short-term perioperative outcomes. The authors should state more why they developed the
new index in more detail.
Minor comments
(1) The authors should give the sufficient rationale why a new single tertile indicator had to
be developed this time. The shortcomings of current nutritional and inflammatory assessments
described in Supplement 1 in predicting perioperative outcomes should be stated too.
(2) In the "Nutrition/inflammation risk assessment" section of Materials and Methods, the
authors simply state "Based on the predictive performance of these indicators for postoperative
endpoints in the development cohort (Table 1), we established a new index, the SNII, defined as
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 0 Date: 23 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Peiyu Wang et al developed and validated the SNII as a tool for identifying systemic nutrition
and inflammation risk, which can enhance perioperative managements in NSCLC patients.
This study is very informative and uses appropriate statistics.
But I think that there are several concerns.
Major comments
1) The value of SNII is unclear.
Currently, there are a lot of biomarkers of nutrition and inflammation that have sufficient clinical
significance, like the supplementary Table 1.
In fact, table 1 showed that Total cholesterol, COUNT, LMR, and SIRI had mild predictive
capability for postoperative complication (AUC: 0.43 to 0.58, p: <0.01).
However, newly developed SNII had low predictive capability (AUC: 0.39, p: <0.001).
What is the value of SNII for predicting postoperative complications, compared with other useful
biomarkers of nutrition and inflammation?
You have to indicate the more clinical advantages of SNII than other biomarkers, for example,
predictive capability for all specific or severe complications, re-admission rate, or survival.
2) The methodology for the determination of SNII is unclear.
Methodology for the determination of SNII is unclear, which means arbitrary.
Why did you use Total cholesterol and LMR only for SNII? Why without COUNT and SIRI?
What is this methodology?
The detailed methodology to determine domains (Total cholesterol, LMR, etc.) and to develop
a formula for SNII must be completely clear in the methods section.
Minor comment
3) Inappropriate statement
In the method section, you stated, "Based on the predictive performance of these indicators for
postoperative endpoints in the development cohort (Table 1), we established a new index, the
SNII, defined as total cholesterol × total lymphocytes / total monocytes. The SNII classification
system, with tertiles of patient values as cutoffs, categorized nutrition/inflammation risk into
low (>23.14), moderate (15.62-23.14), and high (<15.62). The predictive efficacy of the SNII
classification system for perioperative endpoints was validated in the external cohort."
This statement must be in the results section because these are obvious results.
You have to write the methodology of cutoff definition, group definition, determination of
domains, and development of a formula for SNII. You must not write results.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 0 Date: 23 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
Peiyu Wang et al developed and validated the SNII as a tool for identifying systemic nutrition
and inflammation risk, which can enhance perioperative managements in NSCLC patients.
This study is very informative and uses appropriate statistics.
But I think that there are several concerns.
Major comments
1) The value of SNII is unclear.
Currently, there are a lot of biomarkers of nutrition and inflammation that have sufficient clinical
significance, like the supplementary Table 1.
In fact, table 1 showed that Total cholesterol, COUNT, LMR, and SIRI had mild predictive
capability for postoperative complication (AUC: 0.43 to 0.58, p: <0.01).
However, newly developed SNII had low predictive capability (AUC: 0.39, p: <0.001).
What is the value of SNII for predicting postoperative complications, compared with other useful
biomarkers of nutrition and inflammation?
You have to indicate the more clinical advantages of SNII than other biomarkers, for example,
predictive capability for all specific or severe complications, re-admission rate, or survival.
2) The methodology for the determination of SNII is unclear.
Methodology for the determination of SNII is unclear, which means arbitrary.
Why did you use Total cholesterol and LMR only for SNII? Why without COUNT and SIRI?
What is this methodology?
The detailed methodology to determine domains (Total cholesterol, LMR, etc.) and to develop
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Minor comment
3) Inappropriate statement
In the method section, you stated, "Based on the predictive performance of these indicators for
postoperative endpoints in the development cohort (Table 1), we established a new index, the
SNII, defined as total cholesterol × total lymphocytes / total monocytes. The SNII classification
system, with tertiles of patient values as cutoffs, categorized nutrition/inflammation risk into
low (>23.14), moderate (15.62-23.14), and high (<15.62). The predictive efficacy of the SNII
classification system for perioperative endpoints was validated in the external cohort."
This statement must be in the results section because these are obvious results.
You have to write the methodology of cutoff definition, group definition, determination of
domains, and development of a formula for SNII. You must not write results.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 1 Date: 24 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Taro Okayama
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors,
In this revision, the authors have responded well to the previous critique. This is a markedly
improved manuscript which merits publication. Thank you for all your efforts.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 1 Date: 24 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Taro Okayama
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors,
In this revision, the authors have responded well to the previous critique. This is a markedly
improved manuscript which merits publication. Thank you for all your efforts.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 1 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The revised manuscript demonstrates significant improvements and successfully addresses the
previous feedback. The study is well-structured, and the methodology, results, and discussion
are clearly presented. The addition of subgroup analyses and the emphasis on the clinical
applicability of SNII are valuable contributions that enhance the manuscript’s impact.
Before final submission, a few minor edits are recommended:
Ensure consistent use of decimals across numerical data, such as SNII values and percentages.
Reintroduce abbreviations like SNII and CCI when they first appear in new sections for clarity.
Review table and figure titles to ensure they are clear and descriptive enough to stand alone.
Address minor typographical edits, including punctuation in the discussion section.
Verify that references follow the journal’s required format, particularly DOI links and author
names.
These minor adjustments will help polish the manuscript further. Overall, the study is of high
quality and a valuable contribution to the field.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 1 Date: 13 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The revised manuscript demonstrates significant improvements and successfully addresses the
previous feedback. The study is well-structured, and the methodology, results, and discussion
are clearly presented. The addition of subgroup analyses and the emphasis on the clinical
applicability of SNII are valuable contributions that enhance the manuscript’s impact.
Before final submission, a few minor edits are recommended:
Ensure consistent use of decimals across numerical data, such as SNII values and percentages.
Reintroduce abbreviations like SNII and CCI when they first appear in new sections for clarity.
Review table and figure titles to ensure they are clear and descriptive enough to stand alone.
Address minor typographical edits, including punctuation in the discussion section.
Verify that references follow the journal’s required format, particularly DOI links and author
names.
These minor adjustments will help polish the manuscript further. Overall, the study is of high
quality and a valuable contribution to the field.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 1 Date: 15 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The author's work was perfect.
This manuscript was more improved as valuable for medical science and clinical practice.
I have no additional comments.
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Title: Development and validation of the systemic nutrition/inflammation index for improving
perioperative management of non-small cell lung cancer
Version: 1 Date: 15 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
The author's work was perfect.
This manuscript was more improved as valuable for medical science and clinical practice.
I have no additional comments.
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Title: Antidepressant use and cognitive decline in patients with dementia: a national cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 20 Jul 2024
Reviewer's report:
This national cohort study investigates the impact of antidepressants on cognitive decline in
dementia patients, including the risks of severe dementia, fractures, and death. Analyzing data
from 18,740 patients in the Swedish Registry for Cognitive/Dementia Disorders (SveDem), the
study found that 22.8% of patients used antidepressants, with SSRIs being the most common.
Antidepressant use, particularly SSRIs, was linked to faster cognitive decline and higher risks
of severe dementia, fractures, and mortality. The study highlights a dose-response relationship,
suggesting higher doses of SSRIs correlate with increased adverse outcomes. It remains unclear
if these effects stem from antidepressants or underlying psychiatric conditions.
However, there are several concerns in this study.
There are 79705 patients in the database; however, We found there is only 18740 patients were
included in the final analysis. The authors should discuss generalability or representativeness.
We found that around 30% of patients have an MMSE score of 25 or more. Is it possible to
include patients with mild cognitive impairment or those with pseudodementia? Is there any
study validation study for the accuracy of clinical diagnosis?
This study may be biased by therapeutic indication. Antidepressants were prescribed not only
for depression but also for anxiety and other behavioral syndromes associated with dementia.
Therefore, the subgroup analysis for patients without depression may not fully eliminate the
possibility of confounding by indication. I believe the authors have discussed these issues in the
limitations section. However, the conclusions in the main text should be more conservative.
The methods for evaluating modifying effects should be rigorously tested statistically and
detailed in the statistical analysis section. In the results section, it remains unclear whether only
sex and the use of anxiolytics exhibited significant modification effects. Could the authors please
clarify these points?
Regarding the analysis, when using non-use as a reference, cognitive decline appeared more
pronounced with citalopram than with sertraline. However, when using sertraline as the
reference, citalopram seemed less likely to induce cognitive decline. Could the authors explain
this discrepancy?
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Title: Antidepressant use and cognitive decline in patients with dementia: a national cohort study
Version: 0 Date: 20 Jul 2024
Reviewer's report:
This national cohort study investigates the impact of antidepressants on cognitive decline in
dementia patients, including the risks of severe dementia, fractures, and death. Analyzing data
from 18,740 patients in the Swedish Registry for Cognitive/Dementia Disorders (SveDem), the
study found that 22.8% of patients used antidepressants, with SSRIs being the most common.
Antidepressant use, particularly SSRIs, was linked to faster cognitive decline and higher risks
of severe dementia, fractures, and mortality. The study highlights a dose-response relationship,
suggesting higher doses of SSRIs correlate with increased adverse outcomes. It remains unclear
if these effects stem from antidepressants or underlying psychiatric conditions.
However, there are several concerns in this study.
There are 79705 patients in the database; however, We found there is only 18740 patients were
included in the final analysis. The authors should discuss generalability or representativeness.
We found that around 30% of patients have an MMSE score of 25 or more. Is it possible to
include patients with mild cognitive impairment or those with pseudodementia? Is there any
study validation study for the accuracy of clinical diagnosis?
This study may be biased by therapeutic indication. Antidepressants were prescribed not only
for depression but also for anxiety and other behavioral syndromes associated with dementia.
Therefore, the subgroup analysis for patients without depression may not fully eliminate the
possibility of confounding by indication. I believe the authors have discussed these issues in the
limitations section. However, the conclusions in the main text should be more conservative.
The methods for evaluating modifying effects should be rigorously tested statistically and
detailed in the statistical analysis section. In the results section, it remains unclear whether only
sex and the use of anxiolytics exhibited significant modification effects. Could the authors please
clarify these points?
Regarding the analysis, when using non-use as a reference, cognitive decline appeared more
pronounced with citalopram than with sertraline. However, when using sertraline as the
reference, citalopram seemed less likely to induce cognitive decline. Could the authors explain
this discrepancy?
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Version: 0 Date: 20 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
I have provided my comments in the uploaded document.
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Title: Antidepressant use and cognitive decline in patients with dementia: a national cohort study
Version: 1 Date: 15 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
The authors have addressed all my concerns; I have no further comments.
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Title: Cost-Effectiveness of Nirsevimab and Maternal RSVpreF Vaccination for Preventing
Respiratory Syncytial Virus Disease in Infants Across Canada
Version: 0 Date: 18 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Nathaniel Hendrix
Reviewer's report:
Thanks for the opportunity to review this interesting and highly relevant manuscript on RSV
prevention strategies in Canada. My overall impression is that it’s clearly-written and represents
a well-executed analysis. I especially like the depth of analysis represented in Figure 3 and
in the analysis of waning effectiveness. The focus on heterogeneity within Canada is also
commendable. Below are a few suggestions that I hope you might consider to further improve
the manuscript.
- Abstract: This is a very thorough analysis, and it’s difficult to include all its findings in
the abstract. Still, I think it would be helpful to include some cost-effectiveness ratios with
uncertainty measures in the results section of the abstract. To make room, you might consider
dropping or abbreviating your discussion of Abrysvo-nirsevimab combination therapy, which
raises a lot of questions without having the space to answer them.
- Methods: I’m not clear on whether there are any regional differences in outcomes of
hospitalization. Whether because of limited medical resources or because of treatment delays
attributable to the medical evacuation, it seems plausible that outcomes may vary even with
hospitalization. Would it be possible to include these differences (if any) in the analysis?
- Methods: Does the one-year time horizon really allow for inclusion of the full impacts of
mortality? An infant’s death causes a lot of lost years of life, while recovering from RSV
has minimal if any impact on quality of life after recovery. I think a lifetime time horizon is
potentially feasible and worth considering for this reason, although I recognize that there are
trade-offs.
- Methods: In cases where nirsevimab uptake/availability is sub-optimal, do you assume 100%
uptake/availability of Abrysvo?
- Out of curiosity, why wasn’t Yukon Territory included? It’s more populous than the other
northern regions and seems to have many of the same challenges.
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Title: Cost-Effectiveness of Nirsevimab and Maternal RSVpreF Vaccination for Preventing
Respiratory Syncytial Virus Disease in Infants Across Canada
Version: 0 Date: 18 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Nathaniel Hendrix
Reviewer's report:
Thanks for the opportunity to review this interesting and highly relevant manuscript on RSV
prevention strategies in Canada. My overall impression is that it’s clearly-written and represents
a well-executed analysis. I especially like the depth of analysis represented in Figure 3 and
in the analysis of waning effectiveness. The focus on heterogeneity within Canada is also
commendable. Below are a few suggestions that I hope you might consider to further improve
the manuscript.
- Abstract: This is a very thorough analysis, and it’s difficult to include all its findings in
the abstract. Still, I think it would be helpful to include some cost-effectiveness ratios with
uncertainty measures in the results section of the abstract. To make room, you might consider
dropping or abbreviating your discussion of Abrysvo-nirsevimab combination therapy, which
raises a lot of questions without having the space to answer them.
- Methods: I’m not clear on whether there are any regional differences in outcomes of
hospitalization. Whether because of limited medical resources or because of treatment delays
attributable to the medical evacuation, it seems plausible that outcomes may vary even with
hospitalization. Would it be possible to include these differences (if any) in the analysis?
- Methods: Does the one-year time horizon really allow for inclusion of the full impacts of
mortality? An infant’s death causes a lot of lost years of life, while recovering from RSV
has minimal if any impact on quality of life after recovery. I think a lifetime time horizon is
potentially feasible and worth considering for this reason, although I recognize that there are
trade-offs.
- Methods: In cases where nirsevimab uptake/availability is sub-optimal, do you assume 100%
uptake/availability of Abrysvo?
- Out of curiosity, why wasn’t Yukon Territory included? It’s more populous than the other
northern regions and seems to have many of the same challenges.
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Title: Cost-Effectiveness of Nirsevimab and Maternal RSVpreF Vaccination for Preventing
Respiratory Syncytial Virus Disease in Infants Across Canada
Version: 0 Date: 25 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to revise the manuscript draft entitled "Cost-effectiveness of
Nirsevimab and Abrysvo for Preventing Respiratory Syncytial Virus Disease in Infants Across
Canada." I reviewed this manuscript with great interest and provided below my suggestions for
revision. Overall, the manuscript was difficult to follow as its analysis included heterogeneous
patient population across different regions in Canada and for multiple treatment strategies. The
model included three (3) comparators, nine (9) strategies, and four (4) regions. This seems overly
ambitious for a decision tree model with numerous implied assumptions.
While I applaud the efforts to expand RSV prevention, I would like suggest limiting the scope
of work and adding more methodological rigor.
--Comments--
1. Please provide justification for limiting the analysis to a 12-month time horizon when RSV
is the primary cause of LRTI in children under five and vaccines can confer immunity for more
than 12 months.
This might be related to the author's consideration to efficacy waning based on half-life of
nirsevimab, palivizumab, and Abrysvo. Some treatments are concentration dependent while
others are not. For vaccines, many are designed to elicit long-lasting immune response. What
are the justifications for this assumption? Also, please note that the vaccine efficacy varies over
different populations. Please see Tables 8-12 in Abrysvo's package insert.
2. Not just vaccine efficacy, all model inputs should be specific to different regions and
populations of interests included in this analysis. Importantly, please provide information on
how efficacy and update of nirsevimab, abrysvo, and palivizumab varies across different regions
and patient groups (e.g., high-risk) and when used in a combination (e.g.,abrysvo+nirsevimab).
If inputs are assumed to be the same in different populations and regions, please provide
justification.
3. On a related note, please provide comparative effectiveness data on abrysvo, nirsevimab
versus palivizumab in general infant population and high-risk infants. The study argues that
abrysvo and nirsevimab can expand prevention efforts in high-risk infants and beyond. This
implies that they are perfect substitutes for each other. Is that a true reflection of clinical practice?
4. I believe Abrysvo needs be referred as a maternal RSV vaccine as some journals may prohibit
the use of branded names. Please check.
5. Please provide information on whether % of high-risk patients can vary by region in Canada.
This could explain different hospitalization rates and is an important consideration for the
analysis by region.
6. In Table 1, please use the same strategy as the reference case to avoid confusion. South had
NIRS HR as the reference case and Northwest Territories NIR HR + MR.
It would also be helpful to show a breakdown of the total cost; it would be helpful to see if the
cost of vaccines offset the cost of hospitalizations and other healthcare resource utilization.
Importantly, it is not a conventional practice to report the total cost or QALY per 1000 patients.
It does not affect the ICER calculation but can give a misleading sense of the total cost. Please
provide an average cost per patient, not 1,000 patients.
Also, if the authors choose to present the numbers per patient, instead of 1,000 patients, the delta
QALY can be extremely close to zero. The difference can be so small that the study's conclusion
can change in both magnitude and direction by a small change in a model input. Please provide
justifications for how such a small difference can be robust in sensitivity analysis.
Please add abbreviations in all the tables and figures.
8. The authors borrowed the drug costs from the US for nirsevimab and Abrysvo. Was it WAC,
AWP, or something else? Also, please provide justification for this assumption. We all know
that drug prices are much cheaper in Canada. How are the prices of other vaccines compare
between Canada and the US?
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Title: Cost-Effectiveness of Nirsevimab and Maternal RSVpreF Vaccination for Preventing
Respiratory Syncytial Virus Disease in Infants Across Canada
Version: 0 Date: 25 Nov 2024
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for the opportunity to revise the manuscript draft entitled "Cost-effectiveness of
Nirsevimab and Abrysvo for Preventing Respiratory Syncytial Virus Disease in Infants Across
Canada." I reviewed this manuscript with great interest and provided below my suggestions for
revision. Overall, the manuscript was difficult to follow as its analysis included heterogeneous
patient population across different regions in Canada and for multiple treatment strategies. The
model included three (3) comparators, nine (9) strategies, and four (4) regions. This seems overly
ambitious for a decision tree model with numerous implied assumptions.
While I applaud the efforts to expand RSV prevention, I would like suggest limiting the scope
of work and adding more methodological rigor.
--Comments--
1. Please provide justification for limiting the analysis to a 12-month time horizon when RSV
is the primary cause of LRTI in children under five and vaccines can confer immunity for more
than 12 months.
This might be related to the author's consideration to efficacy waning based on half-life of
nirsevimab, palivizumab, and Abrysvo. Some treatments are concentration dependent while
others are not. For vaccines, many are designed to elicit long-lasting immune response. What
are the justifications for this assumption? Also, please note that the vaccine efficacy varies over
different populations. Please see Tables 8-12 in Abrysvo's package insert.
2. Not just vaccine efficacy, all model inputs should be specific to different regions and
populations of interests included in this analysis. Importantly, please provide information on
how efficacy and update of nirsevimab, abrysvo, and palivizumab varies across different regions
and patient groups (e.g., high-risk) and when used in a combination (e.g.,abrysvo+nirsevimab).
If inputs are assumed to be the same in different populations and regions, please provide
justification.
3. On a related note, please provide comparative effectiveness data on abrysvo, nirsevimab
versus palivizumab in general infant population and high-risk infants. The study argues that
abrysvo and nirsevimab can expand prevention efforts in high-risk infants and beyond. This
implies that they are perfect substitutes for each other. Is that a true reflection of clinical practice?
4. I believe Abrysvo needs be referred as a maternal RSV vaccine as some journals may prohibit
the use of branded names. Please check.
5. Please provide information on whether % of high-risk patients can vary by region in Canada.
This could explain different hospitalization rates and is an important consideration for the
analysis by region.
6. In Table 1, please use the same strategy as the reference case to avoid confusion. South had
NIRS HR as the reference case and Northwest Territories NIR HR + MR.
It would also be helpful to show a breakdown of the total cost; it would be helpful to see if the
cost of vaccines offset the cost of hospitalizations and other healthcare resource utilization.
Importantly, it is not a conventional practice to report the total cost or QALY per 1000 patients.
It does not affect the ICER calculation but can give a misleading sense of the total cost. Please
provide an average cost per patient, not 1,000 patients.
Also, if the authors choose to present the numbers per patient, instead of 1,000 patients, the delta
QALY can be extremely close to zero. The difference can be so small that the study's conclusion
can change in both magnitude and direction by a small change in a model input. Please provide
justifications for how such a small difference can be robust in sensitivity analysis.
Please add abbreviations in all the tables and figures.
8. The authors borrowed the drug costs from the US for nirsevimab and Abrysvo. Was it WAC,
AWP, or something else? Also, please provide justification for this assumption. We all know
that drug prices are much cheaper in Canada. How are the prices of other vaccines compare
between Canada and the US?
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Title: Cost-Effectiveness of Nirsevimab and Maternal RSVpreF Vaccination for Preventing
Respiratory Syncytial Virus Disease in Infants Across Canada
Version: 1 Date: 16 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for address my comments. The revised manuscript looks great.
One last item that I hope authors and the editor can address is the presentation of ICER and
QALYs. I am still perplexed that the authors chose to present costs and QALYs for 1000 infants.
In all the other economic studies, ICERS, costs and QALYs are presented per person or per
patient.
Presenting costs and QALYs per 1000 infants is equivalent to multiplying the same size by
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Title: Cost-Effectiveness of Nirsevimab and Maternal RSVpreF Vaccination for Preventing
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Version: 1 Date: 16 Jan 2025
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for address my comments. The revised manuscript looks great.
One last item that I hope authors and the editor can address is the presentation of ICER and
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In all the other economic studies, ICERS, costs and QALYs are presented per person or per
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Title: Cost-Effectiveness of Nirsevimab and Maternal RSVpreF Vaccination for Preventing
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Version: 1 Date: 22 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Nathaniel Hendrix
Reviewer's report:
Excellent work on the updates. This is fascinating work and you've executed it well! I'm happy
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Title: Ultra-Processed Food Consumption in the Central Division of Fiji
Version: 0 Date: 22 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Catherine Leclercq
Reviewer's report:
The paper deals with an important nutrition issue at global level i.e. the high consumption
of Highly Processed Foods which has been put in relation with the increased level of non
communicable diseases. The paper illustrates the results of a study in a low income country in
its nutrition transition phase.
The methodology used to answer the research question is appropriate and the results are clearly
described. However, the paper needs to be significantly revised to increase its scientific rigor.
1) More rigor is needed in the choice of papers/studies which are cited, in the way they are cited
and in the interpretation given to their results.
a) The paper would benefit from introducing first the issue of processed foods and then
that of Ultra Processed Foods, based on systematic reviews or documents from International
organizations rather than to single studies. One possibility could be to make reference to the
“FAO Guidelines on the collection of information on food processing through food consumption
surveys” p.2, paragraphs 2 and 3 https://openknowledge.fao.org/server/api/core/bitstreams/
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b) More specific papers should be cited. Thus, the very first paper cited is titled “The role
of trade in pacific food security and nutrition.”which does not appear appropriate to be
quoted to support the following statement: “In the Pacific Island region, non-communicable
diseases (NCDs) account for 70-75% of deaths and are considered an epidemic.”. More
recent data in terms of death and more specific data on premature death are made available
by WHO (https://www.who.int/westernpacific/news/item/17-10-2024-despite-health-gains--
urgent-action-needed-to-meet-health-related-sustainable-development-goals-in-the-western-
pacific-region )
c) Many citations appear to be secondary citations (indirect references) without being reported
as such. Authors may wish to mention the original author and year followed by “as cited
in” before the reference of the paper listed in the bibliography. For example the definition of
Ultra-processed foods (“UPF are manufactured products that consist of natural food substances,
additives, and industrially produced ingredients”) is quoted from the paper “Nutritional Quality
of Pre-Packaged Foods in China under Various Nutrient Profile Models” and not to original
papers written ro define UPFs.
d) Some statements appear to over interpretate the results of the study but also of studies reported
in the bibliography. This could easily be tacked by editing the wording.
- Thus, the last sentence of the abstract reads ““This study identified that UPFs are ……, and
that efforts to reduce UPF consumption would also reduce intake of harmful nutrients such as
sodium, fat, and sugar, crucial to reducing the diet related burden of disease” could read “UPF
appear to be a large contributor to energy,sodium, fat, and sugar intake in adults in the central
division of Fiji. A reduction of UPF consumption in Fiji might lead to a reduction of intake these
nutrients and, thus, to the the diet related burden of disease.” Indeed it is likely but can not take
for granted that UPF would be subtsituted by foods with a lower fat, sugar and sodium content.
-
2) Authors may wish to further implement the “limitations” section of the paper with a further
issue. :
a) 24 h recalls do not allow to capture discretionary use of salt (cooking salt used at household
level and table salt) but only salt present in processed foods. This potentially leads to a significant
under estimate of total salt intake. The proportion of UPF to total salt intake may therefore be
significantly overestimated. The proportion of discretionary salt may vary between population
groups depending on the frequency of eating out and of household coking. As a consequence,
the difference in proportion of sodium from UPF between groups may in part derive a a lower/
higher frequence of home cooking.
3) Minor issues
a) In line 78 it is not clear what was certified by senior researchers (the translation?) and based
on which methodology.
b) All over the paper and tables, as appropriate, authors may wish to substitute “minimally
processed” by “unprocessed or minimally processed” as defined in the background section
c) Line 251, could the authors specify which aspect of “quality” of UPFs increased in the
Pacific ? Is it their food safety?
d) Line 279. Authors may wish to mention some traditional foods which could be used in food aid
e) Authors may wish to make clear at the very beginning of the method section that the reference
8 is to a previous paper written on the same study
f) The title of Table 1 may mention that the table is related to the “assignment to NOVA groups”
g) Table 2 lacks the unit of measurements
h) Authors use the term “salt” and “sodium” indifferently. One of the two shoul be chosen or
else they should be defined.
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Title: Ultra-Processed Food Consumption in the Central Division of Fiji
Version: 0 Date: 22 Oct 2024
Reviewer: Catherine Leclercq
Reviewer's report:
The paper deals with an important nutrition issue at global level i.e. the high consumption
of Highly Processed Foods which has been put in relation with the increased level of non
communicable diseases. The paper illustrates the results of a study in a low income country in
its nutrition transition phase.
The methodology used to answer the research question is appropriate and the results are clearly
described. However, the paper needs to be significantly revised to increase its scientific rigor.
1) More rigor is needed in the choice of papers/studies which are cited, in the way they are cited
and in the interpretation given to their results.
a) The paper would benefit from introducing first the issue of processed foods and then
that of Ultra Processed Foods, based on systematic reviews or documents from International
organizations rather than to single studies. One possibility could be to make reference to the
“FAO Guidelines on the collection of information on food processing through food consumption
surveys” p.2, paragraphs 2 and 3 https://openknowledge.fao.org/server/api/core/bitstreams/
e9ce3172-8eb5-4f40-a494-dd5c9b39edd3/content
b) More specific papers should be cited. Thus, the very first paper cited is titled “The role
of trade in pacific food security and nutrition.”which does not appear appropriate to be
quoted to support the following statement: “In the Pacific Island region, non-communicable
diseases (NCDs) account for 70-75% of deaths and are considered an epidemic.”. More
recent data in terms of death and more specific data on premature death are made available
by WHO (https://www.who.int/westernpacific/news/item/17-10-2024-despite-health-gains--
urgent-action-needed-to-meet-health-related-sustainable-development-goals-in-the-western-
pacific-region )
c) Many citations appear to be secondary citations (indirect references) without being reported
as such. Authors may wish to mention the original author and year followed by “as cited
in” before the reference of the paper listed in the bibliography. For example the definition of
Ultra-processed foods (“UPF are manufactured products that consist of natural food substances,
additives, and industrially produced ingredients”) is quoted from the paper “Nutritional Quality
of Pre-Packaged Foods in China under Various Nutrient Profile Models” and not to original
papers written ro define UPFs.
d) Some statements appear to over interpretate the results of the study but also of studies reported
in the bibliography. This could easily be tacked by editing the wording.
- Thus, the last sentence of the abstract reads ““This study identified that UPFs are ……, and
that efforts to reduce UPF consumption would also reduce intake of harmful nutrients such as
sodium, fat, and sugar, crucial to reducing the diet related burden of disease” could read “UPF
appear to be a large contributor to energy,sodium, fat, and sugar intake in adults in the central
division of Fiji. A reduction of UPF consumption in Fiji might lead to a reduction of intake these
nutrients and, thus, to the the diet related burden of disease.” Indeed it is likely but can not take
for granted that UPF would be subtsituted by foods with a lower fat, sugar and sodium content.
-
2) Authors may wish to further implement the “limitations” section of the paper with a further
issue. :
a) 24 h recalls do not allow to capture discretionary use of salt (cooking salt used at household
level and table salt) but only salt present in processed foods. This potentially leads to a significant
under estimate of total salt intake. The proportion of UPF to total salt intake may therefore be
significantly overestimated. The proportion of discretionary salt may vary between population
groups depending on the frequency of eating out and of household coking. As a consequence,
the difference in proportion of sodium from UPF between groups may in part derive a a lower/
higher frequence of home cooking.
3) Minor issues
a) In line 78 it is not clear what was certified by senior researchers (the translation?) and based
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b) All over the paper and tables, as appropriate, authors may wish to substitute “minimally
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c) Line 251, could the authors specify which aspect of “quality” of UPFs increased in the
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d) Line 279. Authors may wish to mention some traditional foods which could be used in food aid
e) Authors may wish to make clear at the very beginning of the method section that the reference
8 is to a previous paper written on the same study
f) The title of Table 1 may mention that the table is related to the “assignment to NOVA groups”
g) Table 2 lacks the unit of measurements
h) Authors use the term “salt” and “sodium” indifferently. One of the two shoul be chosen or
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Title: Ultra-Processed Food Consumption in the Central Division of Fiji
Version: 0 Date: 04 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Paul Eze Eme
Reviewer's report:
This is an interesting well-written paper. Just a couple of issues to be considered:
1. The authors reported that a household listing was conducted from Oct to Dec 2021 but how
the sample size was calculated from the household listing was not provided. Who was the target
member of the household that was intended to participate? I think the authors can provided in
this paper the inclusion and exclusion criteria of the selection of households and participants
(members of the households)
2. Participants’ anthropometrics were collected- of what use is this information to this paper?
3. How was Table 3 developed? Why do food groups for each category add up to 100? What
message is intended to be transmitted using Table 3?
4. I suggest the authors should add to this paper “what is already know on this topic’ and What
this study adds’.
5. The title of Table 2 can be misleading- ‘Ultra-processed foods contribution to energy and
nutrient intake …..’ In my opinion, the title can be changed to mention only the nutrients
determined which are fats and sodium and not generalise. The level of significance should be
added to Table 2 and 3. The term ‘convenience foods’ as found in Table 3 must be defined.
Also, I would be interested to know:
i. what percentage of the 24-hour dietary recall assessment of the subjects are minimally
processed, processed and ultra processed.
ii. Why was the classification in this paper limited to 3 groups and not 4 groups as per NOVA
classification?
iii. What considerations were made to minimise the bias or errors since the level of processing
from the food composition data from the United Kingdom, New Zealand and Intake24 could be
significantly different from what is obtainable in Fiji?
iv. How was traditional Fiji foods with no nutrient composition information in the databases
used assessed?
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Title: Ultra-Processed Food Consumption in the Central Division of Fiji
Version: 0 Date: 04 Nov 2024
Reviewer: Paul Eze Eme
Reviewer's report:
This is an interesting well-written paper. Just a couple of issues to be considered:
1. The authors reported that a household listing was conducted from Oct to Dec 2021 but how
the sample size was calculated from the household listing was not provided. Who was the target
member of the household that was intended to participate? I think the authors can provided in
this paper the inclusion and exclusion criteria of the selection of households and participants
(members of the households)
2. Participants’ anthropometrics were collected- of what use is this information to this paper?
3. How was Table 3 developed? Why do food groups for each category add up to 100? What
message is intended to be transmitted using Table 3?
4. I suggest the authors should add to this paper “what is already know on this topic’ and What
this study adds’.
5. The title of Table 2 can be misleading- ‘Ultra-processed foods contribution to energy and
nutrient intake …..’ In my opinion, the title can be changed to mention only the nutrients
determined which are fats and sodium and not generalise. The level of significance should be
added to Table 2 and 3. The term ‘convenience foods’ as found in Table 3 must be defined.
Also, I would be interested to know:
i. what percentage of the 24-hour dietary recall assessment of the subjects are minimally
processed, processed and ultra processed.
ii. Why was the classification in this paper limited to 3 groups and not 4 groups as per NOVA
classification?
iii. What considerations were made to minimise the bias or errors since the level of processing
from the food composition data from the United Kingdom, New Zealand and Intake24 could be
significantly different from what is obtainable in Fiji?
iv. How was traditional Fiji foods with no nutrient composition information in the databases
used assessed?
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Title: Ultra-Processed Food Consumption in the Central Division of Fiji
Version: 1 Date: 13 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Paul Eze Eme
Reviewer's report:
The paper has been well revised and significantly improved. Kudos to the authors for doing the
wonderful job.
|
Title: Ultra-Processed Food Consumption in the Central Division of Fiji
Version: 1 Date: 13 Dec 2024
Reviewer: Paul Eze Eme
Reviewer's report:
The paper has been well revised and significantly improved. Kudos to the authors for doing the
wonderful job.
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Title: Ultra-Processed Food Consumption in the Central Division of Fiji
Version: 1 Date: 01 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Catherine Leclercq
Reviewer's report:
In the revised version of the manuscript, the authors have dealt with all the issues that I had
raised in my referee report and made corrections/integrations based on the suggestions they
received. I noted they also dealt with the issues raised by referees 2 and 3. I congratulate the
authors for the quality of this revised paper.
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Title: Ultra-Processed Food Consumption in the Central Division of Fiji
Version: 1 Date: 01 Jan 2025
Reviewer: Catherine Leclercq
Reviewer's report:
In the revised version of the manuscript, the authors have dealt with all the issues that I had
raised in my referee report and made corrections/integrations based on the suggestions they
received. I noted they also dealt with the issues raised by referees 2 and 3. I congratulate the
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